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[A/N: I did a very, very light polish of the last chapter and posted it just now with an updated ePub. Just an FYI, no need to go back and read unless you like to re-read to get in the mood and prolong the experience anyway. There aren't any plot changes. I just happened to be going over the chapter a few times anyway while I was planning out forthcoming scenes and since I was there, I went ahead and tidied it up in a few places.  And since it existed in its new slightly better state, it seemed wrong not to post it here for those who wanted it. ]


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The bus was less than half full on the way back to campus, so Alden had taken two seats. The lights were off, and he was letting himself sprawl, watching the city pass by as they approached the north shore of F and the Span.

Anesidora is starting to look familiar in a lot of places.

A motorcycle zipped through traffic, its rider accelerating to pass the bus before they reached the long bridge, and a police drone up ahead flared yellow in warning.

And some of it’s still crazy.

Behind Alden, Haoyu was leaning out of his seat to talk to Kon. “Jeffy’s standing in the parking lot with Reinhard right now. They’ve been looking for the bus.”

Kon turned his head toward the front, where Instructor Klein was sitting in the driver’s seat, monitoring the road. There was a touchscreen and a wheel if he needed to take over as the vehicle’s operator. “I feel kind of bad for them, but he did warn us not to be late.”

They were both whispering. Beside Kon, Everly had already fallen asleep. Her head was against the window, pillowed by one of her silver buns, and her mouth was hanging open.

The bus doors had closed at 12:05 AM. Alden was pretty sure Klein had timed their departure down to the second.

“They were having too much fun racing some boys from Reinhard’s old middle school on the slide and lost track of time,” Haoyu said. “Then they accidentally followed signs to the parking garage instead of the lot where the bus was.”

“What a shock,” Lexi murmured.

“Astrid was late, too,” said Maricel from a couple of rows in front of him. She was sitting by Tuyet. “She went back in to get a pair of pants she saw in a commercial on the way out the door.”

Alden hadn’t bought anything. He’d tried to find something for Stuart, but he wanted a gift that somehow said, “Thank you for the learning cushion and also good luck with that irrevocable life choice you’re about to make.”

Scented candles and lamps with bugs in them felt way too shallow.

[The Filipino food was great,] Alden texted Maricel. [I’m still stuffed.]

That seemed better than reminding her about the day’s troubles. He assumed she would’ve updated him if she’d heard anything over the past hours.

Near the front of the bus, Marsha was drinking a can of strawberry milk and occasionally bothering Ignacio with questions about his knives. She and Mehdi were the only members of their team who’d stayed to ride the bus back to campus. Even Vandy had left as soon as dinner finished.

Alden thought it was a fifty-fifty split between her being embarrassed about her team’s performance and her being unwilling to compromise her personal schedule and stay out late.

While everyone continued to murmur around him, he started mentally drafting a letter to Kibby. It would make a nice addition to his usual video messages, and taking the time to translate it into logograms for her would be good practice. Plus he didn’t want to fall asleep like Everly.

Having a nightmare on the bus would be unfortunate.

They were coming less often, but the last one had bothered him enough that he was more worried about a repeat than usual.

He’d been on Thegund, wearing his coat, trying to make it to the lab on the first day of the disaster. He’d heard the whistle, and he’d run as fast as he could to the car to get her, only to find she wasn’t there. It was just the bodies of her father and sister.

The sound of the whistle had called to him again from the endless plain, and he’d chased it for what fell like hours, with the tall grass withering around him and turning to dirt as if its death had been put on fast forward.

Then the last blades had rotted away and he’d stood there alone.

Just him and the chaos. No more whistling.

And he realized he was going to have to go through the whole thing again, without her. Without another living soul.

“Thank you! I’m going to wear mine on Monday,” Haoyu said.

Alden refocused and realized Njeri was passing around temporary laurel wreath tattoos. She’d bought them for their team at the mall in celebration of their victory.

He took the small square of paper from her with a thanks.

“They’re supposed to last a week,” she told him. “So make sure you stick it somewhere you like it.”

She went back to her seat, and he smiled at the little circle of dark green leaves for a second before he tucked it into his bag.

Instructor Kivb-ee, he typed on his interface with a thought, I’d like to tell you about the team I worked with this week and what we accomplished together. I’m also including some video of my skill in use, so you can see what I’ve learned…

A minute later, the bus bumped slightly beneath them as they hit the bridge.

Apex and what would hopefully be a good night’s sleep were just a few miles away.


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Riley cried out and dropped the lantern she’d been holding aloft. Jacob leaped back.

The girl who had just appeared between them and the door to the cabin waved her arms. “Don’t be afraid! Don’t be afraid of me!”

“Where did you come from?!” Jacob shouted.

She looked strangely familiar to him, though. Her sudden presence was somehow startling and not at the same time in a way that made him feel disoriented.

“I’m sorry! I’m so sorry! Ijustdidn’twanttogetthrownofftheship!” She was still flapping. “But something’s wrong and I can’t open the door and I can’t target the captain anymore and I think something bad is going on and I can’t fix it by myself!”

“Who the hell are you?” Riley demanded. “And what in the name of Boomtown’s Backside are you doing here?”

“Mina,” said the girl, taking a step toward them both. “I’m Mina. But listen to me. It doesn’t matter who I am. The System’s not here. Where did it go? And the door to the cabin is locked. Why aren’t the people inside talking anymore? The blinds on the windows shut themselves all of a sudden. I think that Object Shaper I have trouble controlling did it. Something’s not right. It’s not right at all.”

“You—!” Riley exclaimed.

“Are you listening to me?!” Mina’s voice was so high it was piercing. “The System’s GONE!”

She sounds crazy, thought Jacob. But a moment later, he realized that she wasn’t.

He hadn’t been doing anything with his interface while he listened to Riley talk about Superhumans At Large, but there were supposed to be a couple of surreptitious lights in the corner of his vision that he could gesture toward to call it back up since he hadn’t mastered a mental command. Those lights had disappeared.

He waved his hand in the area they should’ve been in, feeling odd.

This is what everything used to look like.

The last System notification had been the warning.

“Is it just because we crossed the blockade? Is that what happened? Isthatnormal? Doyouknow?”

Riley was staring at the space in front of her own nose with a perturbed expression.

“And I was only a little worried when it first went away, but I’ve got a bad feeling now,” Mina said. “Like something’s out there in the water watching over my shoulder. We have to get out of here.”

“Out of here is two miles below the Pacific Ocean,” said Jacob slowly. “So…where did you come from?”

“Are you a Sway?” Riley hissed, stalking toward Mina threateningly. “Are you doing all of this to us? Give me my interface back!”

Mina staggered away from her until she smacked into the wall of the cabin. “ET!” she shouted. “System, ET me! Emergency Teleport. I would like to be teleported immediately! Please! Please!”

Nothing happened; Mina kept babbling.

Jacob realized he was starting to breathe heavily. His heart was pounding. “I don’t understand why the System is gone. How can it just be gone?”

Nobody had an answer for Mina. So of course there wasn’t one for him either.

Maybe I should call for an ET, too. Maybe I should. It might still hear me

Riley had frozen in the act of reaching for the terrified girl. Changing her mind, she suddenly spun toward the cabin door. She grabbed the handle and pulled.

Nothing happened. The handle wasn’t even budging; it was like it had been cemented in place.

“Hey!” she shouted, slapping the door with the palm of her hand. “Hey! Let us in! Captain Adi! Mr. Belasco! Will!”

No reply.

“Jacob, do you have any Wright gear that can open doors or—?”

A huff of laughter escaped from him even though none of this was funny. “I took talents to help me make detector flashlights. I’m useless.”

“You know what?” Riley said. “Fuck this. I’m a Brute. It’s just a door.”

She took a step back, lifted her leg, and kicked the handle hard. There was a popping sound, and the handle flew off.

“Ha!” she said.

But when she threw herself at the door, it still didn’t open.

Pressed to the wall nearby, Mina said, “I told you it’s theObjectShaper! He’sprobablystabilizingthedoorandwindowsfromtheinside—”

Jacob jumped as Riley reached over and slapped the other girl lightly on the cheek.

“Talk like a normal person!” she commanded. “We are members of Superhumans At Large. We aren’t going to panic. This is not a time for us to panic.”

Mina held a hand to her cheek. “I think…I think…”

Spit it out at a normal speed!”

“I think everyone in there is dead except for that man Will!” Mina yelled. “I think he killed the captain and the other one! I think he’s trying to kill all of us!”

It’s not true, thought Jacob, shaking his head. It’s not going this way.

“I am a Sway, okay?” Mina’s lips trembled. “But I’ve only been hiding until I could decide if I should reveal myself! I was reaching out to relax everyone some more because I really wanted to get some sleep and it would’ve been nice if you all went to bed. But then when I tried to target the captain again, I couldn’t. So I tried the robber, and I couldn’t target him either. It’s like they’re…they’re gone. That Will person is still in there, but my relaxation alter does almost nothing to him. I think he’s a high rank. Is he?”

“An A I think,” said Riley, glaring at her. “You nasty little…never mind. He wouldn’t kill the captain. They’re friends. We’re all trying to escape together. And the System is only down because of Matadero. Probably. Maybe it shuts off around the island.”

For a second, her words hung there comfortingly. Jacob wanted to believe them. But…

“You just told me the System always warns people over and over until they crash into the real restricted area. It’s not warning us anymore. We only got the first one.”

Mina was wringing the hem of her polka-dotted sweatshirt between her hands.

Riley grabbed a fistful of her own curly hair and stared around them.

“Listen,” she said. “Listen. This is a lot of panic for nothing. Maybe they’re doing something private in there. Probably it’s because they realized we had a stowaway on board, and they’re trying to think of what to do about you.”

She was nodding along with her own guesses. “And if the System isn’t here…well, the Submerger could’ve started interfering with it. It’s powerful magic, right? Everyone keeps saying so. Works in oceans on all kinds of planets! That’s completely wild! Our interfaces will come back again as soon as we reach the surface and shut the device off.

“Or, if that’s not the problem…then Matadero’s different now for some reason. Maybe tonight is go night for the big guys, and they’re punching a demon’s lights out. The System might take a break for that? It’ll come back on when they get finished. Or we’ll just pass out of the blockade zone and find Earth’s Contract waiting for us on the other side.”

“You don’t really believe any of that!” Mina exclaimed.

“You—!” Riley took a deep breath. “Look. I’m happy to help you to freedom even if you are a mind violator. But stop freaking out. We’re fine. Look around. It’s calm. Nothing’s changed for hours.”

She motioned at the darkness.

Jacob was already staring out at it, harder than he had been. As if staring is going to make me see more clearly.

“How would we know?” he asked quietly.

Both girls looked at him.

“What do you mean?” Riley was favoring one foot after her kick to the door.

“How would we know if anything had changed out there?” Jacob could hear his voice tightening with every word. “Do you have any idea how fast we’re going? Or what direction we’re headed in? It’s not like we can feel ourselves moving or hear the water rushing past from in here. How would we tell if someone turned us around or sped us up? We could be shooting toward the patrols on the surface right now. Or toward Anesidora. Or the sea floor.”

He stared into Mina’s pale eyes. “You can’t target the captain? You’re sure you’re not just making a mistake with your powers?”

She nodded. “I learned mental targeting as fast as I could. To impress schools. I was trying to get into hero programs.”

Riley walked toward the boarding platform where she’d been spending so much time leaning back against the magic that protected them. She stepped down onto it, closed her eyes, and leaned again. Her hair drifted up around her.

“What are you doing?” Jacob protested. “Just ignoring the problem won’t—”

Shut up. I’m focusing. I thought…” Her forehead wrinkled as she concentrated. “I thought it was softer earlier. The magic envelope. There was more of a floaty feeling? I assumed I was just getting used to it, but maybe it really changed. It’s like it’s firmed up.”

“How long ago?” Mina asked.

“Right after we got the message?” Riley opened her eyes. “That was only a few minutes ago. It’s not like we could have gone too far off course in a few minutes.”

“How far is the edge of the blockade from Matadero?” Mina asked. “The timing… and if he has taken control of the Submerger because he wanted to change our direction, that’s…that’s the main thing out here. Right?”

Riley swallowed.

Jacob swore. “It doesn’t matter how far anything is from anything, you two! Like I said, we don’t know how fast we’re going. We could be flying toward the place where they kill the demons like a bullet! We have to break into that cabin. Now.” He stared at Riley. “Now.”

For a few seconds, the decision stood there with them like a question. Then she straightened up. “Let’s do it. You—Mina—sway the hell out of Will. I don’t care what you hit him with. Give us an opening! Jacob, you—”

He nodded. His fists clenched.

They ran at the door together.



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Here are the things they thought. As they tried. As they realized. That something had gone wrong. That something had ended. That something was about to end.

Riley Lin thought about how when she was a little girl, she’d had a recurring dream about running so fast through the streets of Anesidora that she created a river of wind in her wake. All the litter on the island tumbled through the air after her. And when she stopped at the northern edge of the Apex crescent, it all blew past her and out to sea.

At the end of the dream, she always turned around to see that everyone was astounded by her. Lightning Riley. Cleaning up their home for them every time she went for a jog.

She’d been really young.

Mina Nowak thought about how she’d never been that serious about coming along with these people. It was only a tantrum. A childish misbehavior to prove to herself that she was strong enough and smart enough to misbehave in a major way and not get caught at it.

She hadn’t meant it. She really hadn’t. Deep down, she’d known all along that she would ET back home within a day or two.

Next week, she would be sixteen. Her father had already bought the ingredients for her birthday dinner. She’d seen them in the fridge last night.

She couldn’t remember why she hadn’t appreciated them.

Jacob Moore thought about how his mom would wonder why he’d lied to her in the last text message. In so many of them over the past months.

Would she be upset he hadn’t confided in her? Would she wonder if he hadn’t trusted her?

He thought about how his dad had always said the System only chose people who were mentally weak. If you have a spine, he’d said, why would it pick you? The Avowed are all desperate for it on some level no matter what they whine about. Damaged. They’ve got a need to be controlled. Why would the Artonans give real power to someone like me who can think for himself?

A couple of years ago, Jacob had decided those words were crap. He was sure he had forced them out of himself. He was sure they weren’t still inside him, shaping who he was.

Riley thought, I’m going to bust this fucking door down and I’m going to save this fucking ship and I’m going to make it to my friends fighting for our rights.

I’m going to do things in this fucking world no matter what my rank is.

Mina thought, Relaxrelaxrelaxrelax. Why won’t the Object Shaper relax? I know it’s not my strongest alter, but it should work. Did I use it too much hiding from them all? Am I out of magic?

Jacob thought, Not here. Not like this. I don’t know what I want. I’ve never known what I wanted. But I want something different than this.

Riley thought, Kick it harder. More. I’m an Avowed. I’ve got power. Use it all.

Mina thought, If my mind control isn’t working, I’ll punch the door, too. I’ve got stats. He’s only an A. He’s only an A, and he’s trying to close off the whole cabin. There are three of us.

Jacob thought, I’m so glad I couldn’t talk anyone else into coming on this trip with me. They were all right when they told me I was going too far.

There was blood on the door.



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Inside the facility the humans called a slaughterhouse—Humorous? Serious? The grivecks would be delighted by the name, but they might take it as an invitation—Esh-erdi was watching the battle group below him with both eyes.

He stood on one of the transparent barriers that sealed the top of the containment area. The entity the fighters dealt with now was dangerous enough that Esh would not relax or trade banter with Lind, who stood beside him. But the demon was also simple enough in form and ability that he wouldn’t interfere unless one of the humans needed him.

The two dozen Avowed approached the fight with one of the methods they had decided on days ago. Six at a time, using their abilities against it in waves. The demon was about the size of the riding terackerin Esh had recently given his nieces. The humans kept shouting “centipede” at it.

The Contract had withdrawn from this one small patch of Earth for now, so Esh and his partner wore translation devices in their ears. The equipment defined the word well enough, but he wasn’t sure why the humans had all named the demon so swiftly and surely based on nothing but its outward appearance. If it shifted its shape, would they start calling it something else? He almost wanted to ask one of the non-combatants who stood on the second barrier above him for an explanation, but his curiosity could wait. Being close to the battle, even as witnesses, was an educational experience for them, too. He should not interfere with their learning.

I wonder how they perceive it?

During his time here, he had heard the ones with some experience describe weak incursives like this to their newer members, but the descriptions still left him uncertain about the depth of their understanding.

Did they have some sense of what this creature was? Did they feel the becoming and unbecoming? The chaos oozed around it as it struggled against them and the richness of this world they lived in.

It had broken through in the spot where such things should break through if they were going to, and it would be gone soon.

The Avowed had been training together. They were dedicated to the task. And the way they used their skills was…workmanlike.

His partner made a pointed noise in the back of her throat. Perhaps his last thought had been gleaned. Or she had anticipated it.

“He is interesting,” she said softly.

She did not indicate the man with a gesture, but he knew which one she meant. The cheerful one who did less damage than most of the others but who did not tire. Avowed Zhang-Demir had a highly self-defensive fighting style, and there was a unity of purpose to the choices he had made for himself since being bound.

His path was simple. Strong. And he was proud of being those things, Esh imagined. Or selfishly hoped.

It was a path that would protect the one who walked it as he followed it so that he lived long enough to see it widen before him.

Now that is truly a hope.

Esh-erdi worried about humans a little more than he wanted to. So many of them. So few Avowed among them.

So similar to us.

What a fearful marvel Earth was.

And what a terrible responsibility.



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On the boat, they were screaming—words, profanities, pain. The sounds battered the door in time with their fists and feet; they disappeared without echoes into the magic that held back the weight of the sea.

Fuck this door, thought Riley.

It doesn’t matter if it hurts, thought Jacob. Keep going. Get in there so you can get out of here.

RELAX DAMN YOU, thought Mina, slamming her shoulder into the door, imagining herself reaching out to scream the word into the face of the man inside.

And then…

the door broke open.

They fell through it.



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Several miles from Anesidora aboard a ship that served as a low-security housing facility for Avowed who were best kept away from the larger population, a dark-haired man sat alone in a billiards room. He was curled up in a chair, a quilt wrapped around him, and the lights were off save for the one over the large table. A few balls had been left behind on the baize from an unfinished game.

A woman poked her head into the room. “You’re up late, too!” she said. “Do you want to come on a walk around the deck with me?”

He didn’t seem to hear her. His mouth was moving quietly. The word “relax” was the only one loud enough for her to make out.

“Bad night?” the woman said. “You haven’t had one in a while. Do you want some coffee? I don’t make it as well as you.”

She waited for a reply that didn’t come, then said, “I’ll make us both a cup.”



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The captain was dead, blood from a large head wound saturating the bunk below him. He’d died fast enough that his paperback was still resting on his stomach. The thief’s body lay in the kitchenette, where blood spray stained the cabinets and a red pool spread out to cover some of the stickers left on the floor.

“Ohnononono.” Mina turned and ran. Her feet pounded the teak deck behind Jacob, then stopped.

Nowhere to go. Nowhere to hide. It was a small boat.

His own mind was nearly blank.

Will squatted on the floor beside the Submerger. He was holding the holographic cube sticker he’d picked up earlier in one hand, and with the other, he was pressing the stylus to one of the logograms on the Submerger’s control dial. The metal bead in the tank was sunken still, but it was no longer in the center of the device. Instead it was battering itself against one of the glass walls of its container, like a tiny fish trying to break free of the aquarium that protected it.

“Sorry,” said Will, his eyes looking right through the teens. “You can’t feel it, can you? I can feel it. It’s right there, scratching and scratching at the door. Why does everyone on Earth pretend it isn’t there?”

“Okay,” said Riley, her voice remarkably calm as blood dripped from her hands onto the floor. “Sir. Will. We’re all friends. We all want the same thing. Give me the Submerger. Let’s talk about this.”

He blinked at her for a few seconds, then the stylus that controlled the device lifted into the air and snapped cleanly in two with a tinkling sound. The Shaper didn’t even have to use a gesture to do it.

“No!” Riley shouted.

Just outside the door, Mina let out a sob.

“We’re almost there,” Will said, dropping back onto his butt and staring down at the sticker in his hand. “Almost there. Sorry. Sorry about the trip. I changed my mind.”

He picked up something from the floor that Jacob hadn’t noticed because of all the other horrific things there were to notice in the cabin. It was a potion injector, probably taken from the supplies the dead thief had stolen.

Will pressed it to his own neck. He spoke a word in Artonan then slumped to the floor. Unconscious or dead. Did it really matter?

Riley ran over to the Submerger and tried to lift it, but the control dial came with it. “Help me!” she said, fumbling with the broken stylus. “Do something to help me!”

There’s nothing I can do, thought Jacob.

But he found himself dragging his getaway bag out of the corner where he’d stashed it. He reached inside and pulled out one of the few things he’d made as a Wright.

Some components, a spell impression that had to be cast a ridiculous number of times on the lens, a skill that fed it power if the battery ran out—a weak detector flashlight.

Jacob preferred the open complexity of wires, pipes, and circuits. Magically created items functioned in ways he didn’t understand, even if he’d made them himself. So he’d chosen the talents needed to make a magical gadget that might help him inspect nonmagical ones.

Some nonmagical ones anyway. His detector flashlight only worked on objects, and parts of objects, that had been crafted by hand or by spell. It didn’t help at all with mass-produced, machine-made parts.

I doubt the Submerger came from a robotic assembly line.

Jacob held his finger against the switch and pointed the dull red beam at the Submerger. He was surprised his heart could sink further, but it did.

“What is it?” Riley said. “What do you see?”

“Nothing.” The detector was supposed to show you places that were “disordered” on crafted objects. Loose screws, broken enchantments, malfunctions—they were supposed to turn hot pink under the light. “There’s nothing.”

And the detector was working fine; the snapped stylus was shining brightly. When Jacob swept the beam around the room, he could see all kinds of flaws. Even the thing under the tarp—the thing he was sure was some kind of a Wrightmade bomb—was giving off a small pink glow.

But the Submerger…

“That thing is really well made,” he said. “If it’s got weak points, they’re too small for me to see them. It’ll keep…it’ll keep doing whatever he told it to do. I guess we could try breaking it. But…”

But then we’ll die. If we break it, we die. If he’s set it to crash into Matadero, we die.

“We’ve got powers,” Riley said in a faint voice. “We’ve got powers. There must be something we can do.”

Mina stumbled into the room. She was pressing her hand to the front of her sweatshirt, right over her heart. “He said it would be soon. He said we were almost there. Did that mean a minute? Two? An hour?”

Neither of them answered her.

She stared at Will’s body. “He wouldn’t have knocked himself out would he? If it wasn’t reallyreallysoon.” She took three breaths so fast that the air whistled between her lips, then she smashed her hand over her chest even harder, her fingers sinking into the thick fabric. “Ihopethisistherightthing. Activate Fragile Atmosphere!”

“Oh my god,” said Riley. Her voice was shaking. “This…this is really happening.”

She pressed a hand to her own chest. “Activate…activate Fragile Atmosphere.”

They both looked at Jacob. There was a layer of something like silver glitter covering their skin.

So that’s what it looks like, Jacob thought. It looks like that when you use your once-in-a-lifetime Contract signing bonus.

“Did you…?” Riley asked.

“I took a device identification offering.” Jacob’s voice sounded distant in his own ears. “Everyone said it was so much more useful. For a Wright.”



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A gasp from above drew a portion of Esh-erdi’s attention. He glanced up with one eye. The sound had come from the messenger.

Her only function in this place, at this time, was to maintain a mental connection with another Avowed who still stood under the Contract’s shelter. A much surer form of communication in this environment than technology.

“What is it?” he asked.

“A message,” she said in one of the human languages.

A message when no word is expected, he thought while he watched her face and the demon below him at the same time. The news is never good.



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“Relax, damn you?”

The quietly whispered phrase caught Alden’s attention. The words didn’t really go with the questioning tone, and swearing sounded odd coming out of Tuyet’s mouth.

“Tuyet?” Maricel asked.

“Sorry! I’m not talking to you. I just got a message from my brother. The oldest one. He’s a Sway, and he’s not…completely well. He lives on a residential ship. Sometimes he does strange things. He must be having a difficult time right now. Let me text him back.”

The bus was halfway across the bridge. The traffic was surprisingly heavy for the hour, but it was a Friday night.

“If Lute’s in the tub when we get home,” Lexi was saying to Haoyu, “then I think we should—”

An ear-splitting wail filled the air.

Alden was out of his seat in an instant, ready to move without any clue where or why he should move. And he wasn’t the only one. The siren was hideously loud. Everly, startled from her sleep, screamed and shoved Kon away from her like she thought she was under attack.

He staggered sideways a step and didn’t say anything about it. His eyes were fixed on Lexi, who was standing up in front of his seat, too.

At the front of the bus, Instructor Klein had also risen.

“What’s the siren for?” Kon asked.

<<That’s not the chaos siren is it?>> Ignacio asked from the front of the bus.

“We have a chaos siren?” Alden demanded.

“Nobody lose your heads,” Klein said. “Notices should be coming in any second. Stay calm.”

Notices appeared. Alden’s nerves were suddenly so bad he could barely make sense of the words the System was sending him even though he could read them fine.


[Disaster Alert: Attack on Matadero]

[Disaster Alert: Low Probability of Chaos Exposure]


Nobody had time to say anything about the two shocking “Disaster Alerts” before a third arrived:


[Disaster Alert: Oceanic Anomalies - Imminent

Avoid seawater. Seek high ground. Beware of possible tsunami.]


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Comments

Malcolm Haynes

First?! First! Check off one item on my bucket list. TFTC!

Anonymous

second I hope this is a jeffy backstory the name being ripples makes sense

JustMe

Thank you for the soup

hmDrake

Thanks!

mo zzz

Thank u!!!

IV08004

Thank you

Anonymous

Thank you!

Blorcyn

For me? Mid-week? Oh Sleyca, you shouldn’t have. It’s too much! Well, one little bite won’t hurt…

Super Super Supportive Supporter

Ripples gonna ripple Btw r/rational seems to be taking note of Sleyca’s success (two threads with a relatively large number of comments for that sub in a week iirc), I am curious how people would react to her saying something there

Anonymous

Thanks for the chapter! I wonder what the "Ocean anomalies" are; maybe demons causing high waves?

Cyrus McEnnis

Cthulhu can you imagine being stuck underwater in the darkness with something going wrong - just something you don't understand between you and the water and it's failing in ways you can't possibly comprehend. If any of them make it through this Alden might be the only one of their peers to have an idea of the existential horror that's befallen them.

cafenacet

Poor Jacob :( Mina and Riley might make it out (swimming up several km though...maybe an Aqua Brute can find them), but I think Jacob is done for.

Anonymous

Sleyca pls post next chapter

Lucia A

That tsunami alert added with the imminent disaster reminded me of Leviathan in Worm. I hope this ends better than that

Diana Lee

Jeffy got left behind and a tsunami is coming for Anesidora - my man is going to save everybody and everything will be alright 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

Matthew Lester

It’s Chaos Godzilla time

John D Jones

Oh, no, Sunday is really far away now...

CasualCheese

That's some dang good soup. Any guesses on Will's plan? Suicide bombing Matadero? The prison ship? Was the wright made bomb meant to attack the demon ceremony? And how'd they even know? Who leaked it?

glow

Sleyca you've done it again! The wait until the next chapter is going to be so tough!

Twara Sandeep

Thanks for the chapter! I.. don't know what to say. I'm so stressed out, a ball of excitement and nervousness. First, the earlier release and the crisis! And then the cliffhanger! This is crazy, in a good way! I may need a nap, though, to get rid of my jitters

hmDrake

Oh wow, this is about to get wild.

fonn

1. no my heart that nightmare alden had T_T 2. godddd the way you build the tension is so so so good. (there was blood on the door). 3. oh no jacob doesnt have fragile atmosphere 4. holy shit i thought it would build up until the boat trip but the whole island is getting the alert? theres no damn way theyre going on the trip now, if alden gets involved it'd probably be through official channels now right? unless the disaster is That Bad.

Anonymous

I am as desperate, confused, and panicked as the characters. I have no idea what’s happening and am stressed in the best way possible. Great writing, Sleyca! Sunday needs to hurry up 😭

Scrigast

I’m very stressed out by this and I need to know what happens next… I should have waited til the next chapter was available 😭

Faiir

Wonder how Boe will match Alden's heroics in this arc

Christine

Sleyca was not kidding around about cliffhangers! Lol and we were all preoccupied making predictions about a boat disaster! This is so much better.

Rados

Oh noooooo. But also hell yes. Love the development, but poor alden.

Mistfate

Oh dear

SkySeeker (definitely not Lauren K in a mask)

Oh, no. No, no, no. I am kind of hyped to see where this goes, but I feel like this hit Alden like a punch to the gut. Time to step up and bear some more burdens!

Desidia

Here we go...

Anonymous

“He is interesting,” she said softly. This is some dangerous flags its a good thing alden was already planning on getting Ro-Den's chaos coat again.

John Anastacio

Thanks for the chapter Sleyca. Confused about a lot of things for now but maybe I'll understand more after some rereadings. So Sways are for comms in a chaos environment? Is the manipulator path of the Sway class for transmission and the reader path for reception, with no simple unified telepathy talents? A very nice description of Haoyu's father. I guess Haoyu got his personality from his dad. Esh's views on humans are very interesting. It implies humans are more interesting to the Artonans than other species.

Carl Earl

Yay soup! Tftc! After Reading: Ho-lyyyy EXPLITIVE! Well, I guess the group who has been campaigning for disruption of the demon purging and chaos event on Anesidora had it right. Wow, what a chapter. Is it Sunday yet?

Steffen

Sunday cannot come quickly enough!

Tori, Writher #1 Fan

This is a scary chapter. No system means no system teleports in or out of Matadero, but didn't we just hear about a brute that has a teleport skill? Can she carry someone? Or a bomb?

Anonymous

You just stirred a hornets' nest. Thank you for the chapter!

Enkelados

Oh wow. They sent a underwater nuke to matadero. But why? Are there chaos worshipers? Just "to stick it to the man? Or just destabilizing the government so more supers can fly under the radar?

Billy Corcoran

I feel a little scammed coz the reason Jeffy was too stupid to catch the bus was actually just a contrivance so he wouldn't be there to save everyone on the bus from the tsunami. He could have been such a hero! Ugh, I'm so keen for the next chapter. Good twist.

John D Jones

If nothing else Alden is pretty much the only human who's had recent experience in living for a lengthy time without a System.

MeYouIt

Wow, what a claustrophobic chapter. Well done! Really exiting to see the fallout of this! As someone with recurring nightmares from ptsd, I can really relate to Alden here. They mess up my sleep, not only because they wake me up, but also in that they make me reluctant to go to sleep in general because I'm anticipating them. I'm taking meds now that helps, hopefully Alden can find something that works for him. Tftc!

blinkmouse

Can I pay for the next tier patreon? Thanks for the chapter!!

cafenacet

I don't think that's the only thing Sways are used for, but it's certainly one use. Yeah, Esh's thoughts are pretty interesting. It's entirely possible this is the first time a new race has been introduced to the Triplanets during his life. The proportion of Avowed (and thus the proportion of people capable of fighting chaos) must feel very low to him.

luxrus

NOOOOOOOO

5haun

I was on the edge of my seat from the start of the chapter to the end. This was insanely good and I cannot wait for Sunday The little bit of insight into (poor) Jacob’s Wright powers was also very cool! Thank you for the chapter!!!!

Anonymous

CRAZY!! ty for chapter

Jeff

CHAOS WHEN I FIND YOU WHEN I FIND YOU CHAOS

Anonymous

Hoo hooo hooo whata chapter

Anonymous

Wow! The weaving of this chapter, with chapter breaks and POV changes, all along the same time/second, really created some fantastic immersion. My heart raced with Riley, Mina, and Jacob and then Alden and Co back on the bus. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Anonymous

I suspected it a bit last chapter, when Riley mentioned fighting chaos being the real thing. But this just confirms it dead on that the Super People group's purpose is to open all Avowed and normal people's eyes to chaos and that Avowed are better cause they need to fight it. This whole thing was, if not the group's plan, at least a zealot of it.

Lidja

I wonder if the destruction of the Span was somehow predicted magically and this is why the Artonans chose an S rank Bridge Wright.

Anonymous

Was Fragile Atmosphere introduced before now? I can’t remember. Also, does Sleyca have a discord?

Darth Xaim

No...... Next Chapter When???? Anyways, I'm confused. Is Matadero the place where they bait chaos to come there so they can fight it without collateral damage? So how did the Submerger breach it? or was there always chaos contained inside the ocean there, and Matedero is the place where the "valve" is so they can fight off the excess?

Blorcyn

Oh. Oh no. So. So… that was, is, and will be horrid. Intensity levels were palpably raised. The scratching. The scratching. Is Will and maybe others in SAL, do they have a burgeoning awareness of their affixations? Are they the others not in the race. Or, are we about to learn a new facet of demonhood and Chaos. As this falls apart, whatever disaster happens next. I wish the knights wouldn’t keep calling these horrors low grade. Terrifying implications. Also, Sleyca, the three POV horror section with greater POV distance and more omniscience landed so well. Fantastic technique.

Anonymous

this was some tasty fucking soup

Clara

Very early chapters, it's one of the possible sign up bonuses that gives you an emergency magic spacesuit basically

GryphonKnight

ENGLISH Unlike the Chaos moon, most of this is in English and I am still confused ( I have faith it will eventually make sense ) WRITE UP The incident write up is going to be a monster headache GRANDWITCH Grandwitch is having the luckiest year, and the unluckiest year, at the same time Which is somehow appropriate 🔲

JustMe

Crazy chapter. Good soup. Amazing soup. Need more soup

Master Program

I believe it was one of the options for a signing bonus which was a one use item that would enclose you in a protective atmosphere. Alden decided to take the free soul enchantment for additional stats instead.

David Bailey

Haoyu's Dad and maybe the Artonans are gonna be the only survivors, aren't they... 🫥

Maddy Weller

Oh wow, this is good. I really hope Haoyu’s dad being noticed isn’t a bad sign of something going to happen to him. And I wonder what is happening with Mina and Tuyet’s brother, it seems like he was getting hit by her ability? I don’t know, and I don’t know what’s happening with possible chaos in the water, but I can’t wait to find out!

Kim Enteiu

I was very worried for a minute there, but the contract withdrawing make a “safe” place for a chaos incursion to punch through made so much—ah, that would be the false sense of security. I wonder if that’s what the roof to roof magicoaster feels like.

Metal(Liz)ard

i wonder if the crazy guy was feeling the chaos and went cuckoo from it

Austin

Based on the knights perspective, that's the location where creation is weakest on earth and chaos is most likely to manifest. Based on the disaster warnings, the submerger might explode and cause the tsunami and disrupt their fight with the chaos creature, allowing more chaos to affect reality.

John D

Now THAT is a cliffhanger. Great chapter, can't wait to read the rest of this subplot.

Moby Duck

TFTC! You know Sleyca, when you said there would be cliffhangers I wasn't expecting 2 in a row - my heart can't take much more of this D: The knights << Honeymoon >> is clearly ruined now, and I supposed it's a good thing that Alden didn't tell Haoyu about how easy Matadero was. As much as I don't want this to be the case, I think that Haoyu's Dad and possible Vandy's parent (can't remember which one it was) are gonna die. Also I feel like some people in the class are gonna die to raise the tension, but at the same time I like all of the people in the class for the dynamics ( as much as I dislike Winston, he's a good antag). Jeffy will live, because he's Jeffy.

David Bailey

There's a really active fan discord, but no official one https://discord.com/invite/ChVhBnDG

John Scott

Relax damn you being sent by Mina and to Tuyet cannot be a coincidence, but I would swear based on the rest that her brother is the one on the non submerged ship. Maybe he picked up Mina’s panicked broadcast? Great chapter

Anonymous

Some other comment mentioned that it might be to show the public the dangers of chaos. An foe only avowed can fight. This could lead to Avowed supremacy just like Super People’s activist group wants.

Uroš

Oh snap. What an intense chapter. I wonder if Alden will get to meet the knights. And poor Jacob. He's stuck deep with no ET and no fragile atmosphere.

Mikołaj

Chaos starts to give distincly Warp (Immaterium) feeling. I wonder if there is a danger of chaos irradiated seawater or just chaos pollution in the air?

Partha Peddi

Cant believe checking on comments every hr can lead to the surprise early chapter. Many thanks Sleyca :)

Cambria Layton

Goosebumps! I’ve got chills again, Sleyca! Yet another banger of a chapter!!

Second Raddish

But... but the boat trip....

Jonty

Thanks Slay-ca 😁

Brett Peterson

Oof, Dao of the Cliff strikes again, harder than anticipated. Well done, Sleyca!

Amelgar

It's a good thing Alden didn't go to sleep then. He'd have gotten a new trauma about sleeping in buses!

Blorcyn

The bomb I hope. Don’t keep Jeffy at the mall and be throwing aqua demons at the bridge. No thank you.

GryphonKnight

KNIGHT SKILLS? Does that mean Dura Brute ( Avowed Zhang-Demir ) is one of the 300 knight skills? And did his son, Haoyu, take the same one? NOTES It was a path that would protect the one who walked it as he followed it so that he lived long enough to see it widen before him. Now that is truly a hope 🔲

Robert Armstrong

Woo! Another day saved thanks to soup!

Bryan Thew

Jeffy will go full in on flood / rescue in the disaster. "Land Moves"

Second Raddish

Oh shit they are on the bridge

Enkelados

I would guess the bomb that was mentioned multiple times was doing bomb things.

Andrew Khitry

Like “I got to catspace one time and your head count in three-digits. Challenge accepted”

Rae

Wow what a cliff hanger! Super excited for this next arc and to see how Alden deals with this disaster.

Blorcyn

When you affix you get a one off magic bonus, iirc.

BeautifulBusinessBoi

The situation is getting worse so much faster than I expected! So many questions abound this chapter: Does Will have a fledgling authority sense that connects him to the chaos? Do oceanic anomalies mean sea creatures or the changed avowed? And will Jeffy finally understand the importance of water moves with a Tsunami incoming?

Robert Lethiecq

Whatever explosion the bomb made was significant enough to trigger a tsunami warning. It is possible that Alden is the only Knight on earth at the moment.

Gregory

I wonder why Tuyet’s brother was getting the words from Mina. Is he an empath able to read someone shouting mentally far under the water? Or is he actually connected to Will in some way - maybe a redirection or protection skill which explains why Mina couldn’t control Will despite her rank advantage. And of course we have the question of Will’s motivation. Seems like he’s very sensitive to… something. Chaos? But this seems like an odd reaction to that.

Cyrus McEnnis

Oh man, I just realised - Jeffy, Astrid, and Reinhard have been left behind when a tsunami alert has been given. Jeffy will probably be fine, and I can assume that there's a public shelter at the mall, but man that's going to be a stressor for all involved - Alden, sure but I'm wondering what Klein's reaction is going to be

John D

I could be wrong, but I think it's more like chaos builds periodically on Earth, and they turn off the Contract around Earth's oceanic pole of inaccessibility (Point Nemo) to encourage the chaos to manifest there; as far away from civilians as possible. It's also that chaos builds more near the concentration of Avowed who live on Anesidora.

John Anastacio

The Contract withdrawing from the spot where the demon poked through is very good information for us. It implies the demon incursion is mostly just for training and education. Well, maybe it's also to relieve the pressure on the Contract. It would help if we knew if established worlds like the Triplanets also have their own Demon Day. Two dozen Avowed fighting the demon is a much smaller number than I expected. I believe there was a mention in a much earlier chapter of hundreds of Avowed. Maybe that was just a misconception due to Alden's ignorance.

Gregory

Formation seems like the best possible attribute to have vs chaos exposure, since it enforces you being you.

Robert Lethiecq

I wonder if Klein can give Alden the bus while they are in it. If he can support it by resisting the pressure of outside forces trying to crush it.

John D

I don't like to speculate, but it seems like a chaos event is a good excuse for Alden to obtain one of those Knight outfits from the Wardrobe that the Artona I system offered him.

UpgrayeDD

What exactly is Fragil Atmosphere??? From Chapter 24 Rabbit "Under Privileges, he found his signing gift. He was allowed to choose among three options: three stat points to spend in foundation, a tool called The Fragile Atmosphere, and the Rabbit class spell Wardrobe Change. The Fragile Atmosphere was offered as a signing bonus to almost every class. It was a single-use life support device that would give you around six minutes of Earth air, gravity, and atmospheric pressure. It was a great “oh shit” button in all kinds of situations, but single-use was hard to swallow."

cafenacet

My theory is Will wants to demonstrate how dangerous Chaos really is, since he thinks human Avowed aren't taking it seriously enough.

Kim Enteiu

As soon as he drops back down from an intensity 99, maybe to a 97 or 94, are we going to see a return of the Hot Lab Coat? Can he get the system to order one for everybody on the bus? I know it was on his list of things to get before he ever has a chance to be summoned into a chaos event…

Gregory

Humans are probably generally interesting to Artonans because they are really, really similar in a very unlikely way. Minor color and bone structure differences, a more bifurcated brain, and innate authority sense seem to be pretty much it from what we’ve seen.

Wheels of Terror

Well shit... Hopefully no one with Alden dies this time or it could destroy him.

David Bailey

They're going to pan away from Jeffy and come back to him being a total tsunami hero

Gregory

I think the alerts are going out because the bomb has done bombs things and is no longer possible to carry.

Neil H

From Ch. 24: "Under Privileges, he found his signing gift. He was allowed to choose among three options: three stat points to spend in foundation, a tool called The Fragile Atmosphere, and the Rabbit class spell Wardrobe Change. The Fragile Atmosphere was offered as a signing bonus to almost every class. It was a single-use life support device that would give you around six minutes of Earth air, gravity, and atmospheric pressure. It was a great “oh shit” button in all kinds of situations, but single-use was hard to swallow."

Gregory

Jeffy making poor decisions isn’t a contrivance when it fits his character so completely.

Mani

honestly i think he'd survive. He's lost too many people in his life already for another one to be the breaking point

Kim Enteiu

On the upside I am suddenly much, much less worried about instructor Morrison… I really hope that isn’t a new false sense of security.

Gregory

Earth air, gravity, and atmospheric pressure doesn’t sound like “immune to explosions”.

UpgrayeDD

Probably a good idea right about now to buy a Worli Ro-Den chaos lab coat with "Just right now!" delivery option......

Josef Blumers

thanks god there are 2 overpowered knights on honeymoon

YeetimusMaximus

I dont think ive ever been more hyped for things to go wrong in a series. We havent seen real supers handle problems yet, and i bet itll be awesome

Meowgrr

So, does everyone remember "curry friend"? I think we could use them again!

Felix

I think that the part of the chapter that shows all their thoughts is from his perspective. He saw what was happening and that's why he is trying to contact and warn Tuyet.

JT

Touching those generates a requisition record. The artonan bureaucracy would then know there's a a new knight.

vy

IS THERE ANOTHER HIGHER TIER PATREON SUB PLEASEEE I CANT DO THIS

Matt

Minaaaaaaaaa 😭 At least two of them have Fragile Atmosphere. RIP Jacob. And since I had to look it up: > The Fragile Atmosphere was offered as a signing bonus to almost every class. It was a single-use life support device that would give you around six minutes of Earth air, gravity, and atmospheric pressure. It was a great “oh shit” button in all kinds of situations, but single-use was hard to swallow.

Felix

Damn. Things are going way crazier then what people were expecting. Seems like the chaos may spill over to Anesidora proper.

Nait02

Ripples my ass... it's a tsunami, not some ripples xD

WanderingArchitect

Earlier than expected! Thanks! "And so it begins..." /Theoden

Nait02

I figured he is Tuyets Brother and felt the Teens on the submerged boat.

vy

THIS STORY NEEDS TO BE INJECTED INTO MY VEINS

Zenopath (AEV)

Yeah he's probably a sway that can't help but pick up strong emotions or something, picked up Mina broadcast.

Pete

I hope Mina makes it, I am curious about her.

Master Program

So I wanted to articulate something that has been bothering me for a while. From what we've seen, there are a number of Artonans like Joe, Alis'art and Stu'art that view avowed as people and treat them as friends and acquaintances. There are also many Artonans who view them as existential threats or just useful tools. Given all that, its strange how hands off the system is in managing a resource that is both useful and dangerous. It doesn't force you to train and we learn many avowed never level at all. It will allow you to injure and kill yourself or other avowed with your powers which seems counterproductive if you want to keep your tools intact. Kon was even worried that Lexi would drown if he wasn't conscious to ET which should be a bizarre concern when the system is omnipresent unless it somehow costs extra resources to rescue someone without permission? I know Artonans have strong beliefs regarding obligation, permission and free will but its still odd considering they are essentially turning children into walking tactical weapons with no restrictions and little guidance.

Pete

I think it is just one guy having a mental breakdown because chaos is influencing him somehow

Cyrus McEnnis

That far out in the ocean, with no continental shelf to break the wave? Ripples is a pretty good description. Fast moving mind you, and I don't know enough about it to say what the amplitude is gonna be like on those ripples, but technically a tsunami hitting an artificial island _shouldn't_ be more than ripples. Now, the damage that fast moving ripples at that scale might do to an artificial island? Yeah, the forces involved might be way worse than a wave breaking over Anesidora.

Llainway

Great start to the morning! Thanks Sleyca!

Ruriva

Good thing Jeffry is there with the other students that got left behind

Andrew Khitry

We’ll hit 2k comments by Sunday

Radha Patel

Woah. The Slice of Life chapters really make the disaster chapters have a huge emotional impact. I'm looking forward to/dreading Thegund 2.0

Justin

Thanks for the chapter. This is going to be awesome!

Kate Yen

Hi, I'll have whatever Will's having. Calculate the dosage so I wake up on Sunday. Thanks!

John D Jones

Remember what Joe told Alden. There are four general factions. One sees Avowed as holy gifts from the universe. One sees them as children in need of instruction. One sees them as beasts of burden. One sees them as existential threats. And ALL of those factions got their ways in a ginormous, confusing compromise that became the Systems.

John Anastacio

It's the fearful marvel and terrible responsibility parts that make me so curious. Also are very few Avowed a good thing or a bad thing for humans? What about for the Artonans?

Austin

He can't claim one on earth. Only if he's on one of the artonan planets.

John D Jones

Mina's kind of adorable. I kind of 'ship her and Vandy for some reason.

Anonymous

Wow. I thought Alden would have to prove himself to Klein in some sort of way. But not like this...

Austin

I viewed it kinda like a pressure valve being let off. Like the contract suppresses chaos but it costs more and more as it builds up so they allow it through in one area each year.

Calvin

Wait can anyone explain why Will decided to suicide bomb the matedero? Was that always his plan and he just tricked the rest of the crew into coming?

Bryan Thew

and maybe offer the deal around if shit goes *really* bad. Bright red is perfect for S&R. Coat for a boat is a fine trade to me.

Anonymous

The writing is so good in this one, oh my god. The boat atmosphere was chilling, I could really feel the uncertainty and fear. Amazing job on the chapter!

varun

AAAAAAAHHH! These last two chapters were incredibly well executed in rapidly ratcheting the tension up. I joined the Patreon to get to the end of the Moon Thegund arc, so I'm both looking forward to and dreading reading whatever is coming week to week.

Tori, Writher #1 Fan

It seems like he can feel the dimensional rift or the demon or whatever chaos anomaly makes Matadero the place the demons spawn, and he can't ignore it. Or maybe Riley's SAL propaganda stickers have propaganda magic, and when he looked at the Matadero sticker he had uncontrollable extremist feelings that went in a different direction than Riley intended.

SkySeeker (definitely not Lauren K in a mask)

That scene filled me with existential dread. As soon as Mina pointed out that they were without the System, my eyes went wide and my stress level rose. They didn't know what that could mean, but we as the readers have seen this before. Then, there was the darkness, the desperation, and the claustrophobia as they pounded on the door in vain. This really hit hard.

Blind

I'm sure this will just be a minor kerfuffle, no need to worry.

Gregory

Fragile atmosphere doesn’t say anything about helping with collisions or explosions so… I think this sub will have 0 survivors.

Pranay

Such a dense, tense and well-written chapter! Amazing job Sleyca! Alden's nightmare is cruel. Sets the tone immediately and then maybe partly because of recalling it, Alden is extra-panicky at the mention of chaos at the end (as our we). The section with the thoughts of Jacob, Riley and Mina in succession is just chef's kiss—so perfectly capturing the desperation and hopelessness of wailing against death with the image of them beating their hands bloody trying to open an unmoving door. I started panicking irl reading this. I'm so intrigued by what role Tuyet's brother is gonna play here. What scratching did Will hear? And why is Earth a terrible responsibility?? And Jacob doesn't have Fragile Atmosphere. Are Riley and Mina just going to try to float back to the surface and leave him there? Alden and his class are on a bus on a bridge in the middle of traffic, with 3 classmates back the mall. And more than the tsunami, like Alden I'm more worried about the chaos exposure. Do any non-avowed who get exposed just die like the scientists on Thegund? Do any avowed who are not strong enough to withstand it get turned into chaos demons themselves? The class is probably safe from chaos but I'm getting whiplash from the stakes just going to intensity lvl very high instantly. What a crazy chapter, the wait for Sunday has never been more brutal.

Tenmosu

This has not gone the way I expected and I'm very happy with that. This is going to need a re-read when this event is done. So many thing to take note of and such a long time until the end of this chaos. Rip Riley, Mina, Jacob and maybe many other...

Daedalus

I wonder what exactly is causing the tsunami. It can't just be the bomb, any bomb that's as or less powerful than the Tsar Bomba itself going off that deep underwater would have its shockwaves so wholly absorbed by the waters that it couldn't be called a 'tsunami,' more just some particularly large storm surges. Perhaps it's the Submerger interacting with the chaos fields in some way, or a massive kaiju-esque creature surfacing?

SkySeeker (definitely not Lauren K in a mask)

EXPLITIVE is right! This is quickly building up to a wild ride. Right now it feels like one of those rolercoasters that takes you right to the edge of the first big drop, starts to tip you over it, and then stops. Where's Sunday when you need it?!

Tori, Writher #1 Fan

Pretty sure Astrid hung back on purpose to get some time with him, and could be Jeffy did it on purpose as well. Just an ol' farmboy trick to "accidentally" have to hang out with a girl past midnight, and now he might just have an opportunity to make some land moves.

Flying Goat

The captain and thief were murdered, and the object shaper seemed less than stable, so I don't think there's a "they" here, aside from whatever is influencing the shaper, perhaps.

Anonymous

There were a lot of allusions to it. Riley mentioned that there was a strong sentiment that avowed were not appreciated because they're the only people protecting all of the citizens of earth from chaos. So maybe SAL decided to 9/11 matadero, completely change the paradigm for better or worse and really emphasise that avowed are protectors against chaos.

Zenty

Oh shit, I remember that in the comments of the last chapter, people were guessing what would go wrong... Could Sleyca have decided to go with every choice?

Gregory

He did say “sorry about the trip. I changed my mind” so maybe you his wasn’t the original plan.

John D Jones

Honestly Alden just not losing his shit and trying to calm the others will likely be proof enough for Klein, but I doubt it stops there. What if Alden uses his "Mother" privilege to call the 'art'hs for help?

Anonymous

Maybe...Its a bit of a mystery. Why else would you bring a bomb on board if you weren't strongly thinking of doing it?

Super Super Supportive Supporter

Hahahaha I’ve never been so excited to be so wrong I guess my guesses were like… quarter-right? I thought they were stockpiling submergers for a big coordinated invasion of Matadero in the future, definitely not immediately. But wow yeah, if the submerger can make things move at high speed, zipping a bomb straight at Matadero seems like the way to go for maximum damage It sounds like a lot of people are gonna die, man that’s one hell of an escalation

ElisebethT

Fantastic cliff hanger! I'm not a fan of them all the time, but it is nice for some tension to simmer for a bit here and there. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Kate Yen

That was back when Sleyca had a backlog. These days, there aren't just chapters waiting under a hot lamp for Sleyca to serve. The soup is now cooked to order, nice and fresh

Dominick Ruiz

This cliffhanger should be illegal. Can't wait for Sunday

Jeff Scott

I'm pretty sure "Will" was just a puppet being controlled by an Artonan terrorist, hence why he killed "himself" once he finished the plan, he was done with that puppet. Oceanic anomalies are probably everything in the ocean being converted to chaos like the bugs of Thegund, and they're going to get carried by the waves onto shore.

Calvin

I assumed the bomb was for the leadership of SAL to decide to use somewhere else

Super Super Supportive Supporter

I think if you’re next to a wrightmade bomb crashing into a demon facility at however many miles per hour, you’re not really gonna get to float back up to the surface I’m getting whiplash too, such a good chapter

Flying Goat

I do wonder about the chaos before Artonans made the Contract with humanity. Does the system itself bring about chaos events somehow? Humans presumably had no way to handle such things before the contract, and yet seemed to manage well enough.

Jeff Scott

I imagine it's just a dozen Avowed in the actual front line combat group as any more would (ironically) make fighting more chaotic. They probably have stand-by groups, support personnel, etc. that brings that number up to the hundreds.

Anonymous

I forgot, did he become a knoght while talking to the Mother?

SnuggleCat

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! So intense!!!

FruitsPunchSamurai

I Hope you’re right. The chapter was exciting but now it looks like Alden and the students might not need to get directly involved. Well, if they do get involved, the incident would be extremely bad.

Anonymous

It doesn't feel right for the character for Klein to be impressed by Alden's connections. He was pretty disatisfied that Alden wasn't properly assessed because all the higher ups made the decision before the assessment. It feels like it would be fitting with the character if he saw Alden acquit himself unusually well in chaos and finally approve of Alden in his own eyes.

Jeff Scott

Thegund 2.0: Homecoming. It's like Jurassic Park 2 when they brought the T-Rex to New York.

Markus

Also six minutes of atmosphere and pressure at the bottom of the ocean sounds like a terrible way to die. You try to get up as fast as possible but you know you will not make it. You have no idea much time is left and if this breath is your last. If your next breath you will be crushed by the merciless pressure from the ocean.

Duncan Lester

Maybe its a dimensional-bomb? Causes a BIG chaos event that some high rank knights come fix? Blows open the dimensional tap and something(somebody??) gets through that is definitively not a "weak incursive"

Cyrus McEnnis

The other question is this - once this is all over and they start playing "Pin the blame on the Avowed", are the Velra family in general and Orpheus in particular going to get hammered for selling a submerger to SHAL? Because that would have interestong implications for Operation Odins Rewenge & for Hazel's banishment which could be suspicious as hell given her "relationship" to Jacob

Lidja

Non-avowed would probably die like the scientists on Thugund if they aren’t in a chaos shelter. The problem is that most of the children on Anseiodora are pre-avowed not non-Avowed. They are likely to turn into demons with chaos exposure. Alden’s biggest problem is the fact they are in the middle of a bridge with a tsunami coming. Everyone on the bus is Avowed so the chaos won’t kill them immediately.

John Anastacio

If it were a regular explosive-type bomb wouldn't Alden hear a great big boom? Matadero isn't that far away; the sound would have reached him quickly enough.

Daedalus

I don't think that wrights would be able to make some kind of dimensional-bomb. Both because they don't have the proper grounding in theory, and because there is no shot that the System would have any talents which have the goal of *causing* chaos. Remember how all (non U-class at minimum) superhuman abilities are designed by committee including one faction who views avowed as an existential threat?

Michael Blue

When I first read that Alden recently had a nightmare about the chaos field, I thought maybe him rescuing Søren hit him harder than I initially thought. Then towards the end of the chapter I thought “that wasn’t trauma, it was foreshadowing.” But it was probably both.

Jeff Scott

Since he described being able to feel the chaos like Wizards can, and him referring to Earth as if he's not from here, I assumed he was being mind controlled by an Artonan terrorist, which would also explain why the Sway's weaker mind control did nothing. For the actual why I don't think we have enough clues yet, we haven't been introduced to any universal factions on the side of chaos.

SkySeeker (definitely not Lauren K in a mask)

You know, I somehow missed right up until I read this comment that Torsten Klein *just so happens* to be the one driving the bus when the crisis hits and Alden potentially may have to step up and show his ability to handle the situation. This may well be an inflection point in their relationship within the story going forward.

FruitsPunchSamurai

Alright now I gotta research what the hell a nuke at 2 miles below sealevel would cause

Neal Mayne

He alludes to being able to feel the chaos at Matadoro. My assumption was that he'd been affected by the chaos in some way.

Tori, Writher #1 Fan

Huh. I'm not much of a shipper in general but for some reason Vandy/Mina makes sense to me too. I like Mina and seems like she could use a steadying and sure presence like Vandy in her life, and Vandy could use someone with the emotional sensitivity she lacks.

Neal Mayne

Next chapter Jeffy underwater rescue anyone.

Pranay

They only have fragile atmosphere for 6 minutes. Is there an obvious course of action they should take or is it a gamble that they crash within that time and hope to survive the aftermath? Swimming away from the ship seems like better chances imo. Maybe take something with them for a shield like the broken door.

Poiuy

Well damn.

AFK37115

FUCK!! OH MY GOD I DIDN'T SEE THAT COMING, I HOPE EVERYONE SURVIVE SOMEHOW I FEEL SO BAD FOR JACOB AND HIS BAD DECISIONS! OH MY GOD THEY'RE ON THE BRIDGE THE WATER IS AROUND THEM!!

Tori, Writher #1 Fan

It's been mentioned a few times that interfering with people's autonomy has a huge cost to systems, though it hasn't been made clear what kind of cost or how it works. A lot of the mechanics of the magic we have seen involve intention, targeting, fair exchange, and other authority-ish factors. I think it's more than just an Artonan belief that prevents System interference.

Anonymous

Interesting chapter. Was Will being himself there? Or was he being controlled by Tuyet's brother? It would explain how he managed to resist Mina. An A-rank object shaper shouldn't resist an S-rank sway for long. But a powerful sway can resist her. And it would also explain why he heard and repeated to himself the word: "relax". I am thinking this because of what Will said: “You can’t feel it, can you? I can feel it. It’s right there, scratching and scratching at the door. Why does everyone on Earth pretend it isn’t there?” What is the thing that he is hearing? And what does he want to do with it? My theory is that it looks like he wants to "open the door" to this being. He is bothered by the constant sound of scratching and probably wants it to end. Or maybe he thinks the thing being held back by the door is "suffering" somehow, and he wants to save it. The thing is probably the demon on Matadero. So when he says opening the door, he means letting the chaos out into the world. Does he hear the mind of the demon with his sway powers? Does he hear demon door scratching sounds everytime they come to Matadero? If this is true, I think hearing demons may have corrupted his mind, and that is why he is in this state.

Anonymous

Alden hasn’t paid off the debt to his wordchain yet, which is bad

thaughton2

It might be related to a civilization's "intensity" for lack of a better word. The depth of the mark they make on existence draws the response of Chaos. The Artonans approach with the offer of a contract when a world is reaching that point, and assist in creating controlled break points. Alternatively, the Artonans did it and they're even worse than their current methods already make them seem. But I'm leaning towards something like the first idea for now.

Mack

Tuyets brother is a sway, and Mina, an S-rsnk sway, was doing the equivalent of screaming "Relax!" into the void trying to affect Will. I think Tuyets bro just "heard" it from his location in that general vicinity.

Saaski

Alden fully exhausted his skill earlier. …… All I can picture right now is a tsunami hitting the bus. But Alden probably isn’t even fully recovered. Not to mention he hasn’t managed to hold anything without physically picking it up yet.. Let alone something as big as a bus half full of people. How long does he need to recover from skill exhaustion again? It was mentioned I think in the chapter in intake. Where one of the girls (is it Hadiza who has the beautification ability? I can’t remember) exhausted herself trying to beautify Alden’s bag… I’ll need to look that up. And, and, arghggh!!!! It’s probably not gonna be that right? Holding a bus and people safe against a tsunami is too much for level ten? Right? Tell me I’m right? Please!?

Richard

Congrats to Mr. Zhang-Demir on attaining DILF status with the Artonans! (Dad I'd Love to Fight with)

Anonymous

He is an unofficial Knight. He meets all of the requirements as set forth by Mother, so they granted him Knight privileges like access to the Knight wardrobe using system admin powers.

FruitsPunchSamurai

He’s also probably dead. The fragile atmosphere thingy only lasts 6 minutes. The logical thing for Mina and Riley would be to destroy the device and let the ship implode. They need to use those 6 minutes to try to reach the surface

Mack

Knights are both avowed and wizards with authority sense -- Alden met those reqs on accident, and qualifies to take a uniform. He does want to because of how that would ramp up the intensity of his life well past where he wants it to be.

Super Super Supportive Supporter

More like you’re halfway through the big drop and it stops and the operator comes up to you and says ‘hey, the drop will continue on Sunday, see you in 4 days’ But like, in a good way

Rob

What if the bomb causes something like vaporizing a large area around the bomb rather than a typical explosion? If it displaces enough water, that could cause a tsunami, yeah?

sebsebs

Oh man, this is not going to help Alden's nightmares :( Thanks for the chapter though, as always

Vega

I’ve never really thought of chaos as lovecraftian till wills mentioned hearing them scratching on the walls(?) and then killed himself. Put it is definitly a thought in my head now.

wd40bomber7

Wait... what was WIll talking about? Was he affected by chaos or something? What is he moving towards and how did he cause this disaster? Fuuuck I hope Alden breaks out the Wizard Powerssssss

hercule pyro

Time to buy a snazzy new red coat!

Chris

With chaos exposure a possibility, hope Alden buys a new Hot Lab Coat to equip pronto.

hercule pyro

3 hours and no, the 16 year old with very slightly increased strength cannot carry a bus

Anonymous

Amazing writing. We expect things to go wrong but we expect that it will go wrong the next day when Alden will go on a boat trip. Excellent misdirection but everything makes sense.

Tori, Writher #1 Fan

"...I’ve got a bad feeling now,” Mina said. “Like something’s out there in the water watching over my shoulder..." I think maybe she sensed Will's sway skill looking their way. Whether it was used to control Will or not, I don't know.

Steve Park

Poor freaking Jacob man. I hope he's ok, but if not...Sleyca in the future please put less care and depth into minor MINOR character deaths! I can't live life like this!

Chris

Hah, same idea, but you beat me by a minute!

Silver21

Omg, hadn't thought of that. After the disaster some people are totally going to think this happened because of Gloss's blowback

ewie

The triplanets are using Earth (and the rest of the resource worlds) as dumps for the chaos that they're responsible for creating.

Morgwath

Poor Jacob, he was an idiot but didnt deserve to die like that. I wonder what Tuyets brother has to do with the bombing. It looks like he controlled Will from his prison boat but what does he gain out of it, how could he orchastrated such an attack.

Tori, Writher #1 Fan

He's said his skill refreshes quickly, and it's been many hours, so I think he's pretty full up. His skill wasn't completely drained, just mostly drained and he pretended to be out to hide he's over his stated level. Soooo "Klein, give me the bus"

Pranay

Omg I totally forgot about Alden's exhausted skill and everyone else's various levels of exhaustion with their skills (except Maricel). And no Alden probably doesn't have to hold the bus because surely in the country of Avowed a lot of stronger ones are already on their way to help. And the hero hopefuls will probably not want to hunker down in a bus while all the other vehicles on the bridge get blown away.

Hydrabogen

Peak swayception

BeheadedMouse

I imagine if Jacob makes it out, Alden's"talk" with him is going to be wayyy more dramatic and and probably sink in better than anyone could hope for.

Tori, Writher #1 Fan

I thought maybe the communication sway on Matadero got a warning from Will, or the authorities got a warning from Elias's system, or any other of a number of safeguard systems detected the incoming threat, and it hadn't actually blown up yet.

BeheadedMouse

@Gregory Do you remember how long those fragile atmospheres were supposed to last?

John Anastacio

Wouldn't everyone hear the explosion if it went off even underwater, or is that not going to happen? I never bothered to study the physics of underwater explosions.

Super Super Supportive Supporter

My initial thoughts were that I didn’t really like the ‘Here are their thoughts’ way of presenting it, it was slightly jarring But wow it actually really worked, I’ve literally never seen that style of storytelling before (insert ‘You’ve outdone yourself’ meme here)

Duncan Lester

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Underwater_explosion#:~:text=Unless%20it%20breaks%20the%20water,2%2C000%20ft%20(610%20m). Some research makes me think we don't know enough about the bomb, explosion depth, and how far matadero is from Anesidora to tell yet. The System Warnings think a tsunami is possible, and the article suggests some waves from slightly underwater explosions. Deeper explosions wouldn't be nearly as dramatic, and the terrorist was aiming for matadero anyway? Idk how fragile the dimensional barrier is (isn't?). The bomb characteristics (yield, magic ness, rank and specialty of Wright Creator) matter a lot here too. I'm betting the blast kills some of the 24 avowed, but not either knight or Haoyu's dad, who was just remarked in as durable

Daedalus

No. Tsunamis are *crazily* large. Like, billions of pounds of water large. Plus, the US experimented with explosions trying to create tsunamis, and found that the kind of shockwave generated by a bomb is pretty much directly at odds with the kinds of waves needed for a tsunami. Sure, it's possible to get big waves from explosions... in shallow water, at close range. But not that deep, that far out.

Daniel

Why did Will suicide-bomb Matadero? The three big candidates are mind control, chaos infection, and terrorism. Each explanation has something missing. 1. Mind control: Tuyet's brother was puppeting Will. Problem: Tuyet's brother isn't walking around the island; he's an institutionalized Sway. So if he seized an SAL agent on purpose, that means he remotely scanned mind after mind until he found Will. But he's not under high security, so he doesn't have government-threatening godlike power, and we know regular Sways aren't that strong. Boe and others say the key privacy problem is Informant-type video and audio, not mind-reading. The Velras aren't scared Hazel will be mind-read for the family secrets if she's alone in a park. In the story so far, Sways aren't incessantly scanning everyone's deep secrets --like whether you’re an SAL agent about to flee. We could say Tuyet's brother didn't specially pick Will, so he didn't have to snoop a whole crowd of islanders' darkest secrets. We could say he just accidentally picked Will, the SAL agent, out of millions of islanders. But that's an awfully big coincidence. 2. Chaos infection: Will was driven mad by the chaos aura of the demon. Problem: why was nobody in charge worried about demonic mental effects? The captain wasn't worried, or he wouldn't have gone close to Matadero; the knights aren't worried, or they'd be thinking about people's mental integrity and not just whether "centipede" is an acceptable name for a shapechanging monster. 3. Terrorism: Will was asked to blow up Matadero by extremists within SAL. Problem: why did the extremists risk the precious Submerger and loyal agent Will just to bomb Matadero, instead of sending a regular unmanned boat or drone in with the bomb on a timer? More important, why haven't we heard at all about this kind of terrorism before now, if the extremists do things like this, things much more dangerous than the "dissidents" and "battle theater" we've heard about? Or is this some brand new terrorist campaign, where the extremists blow right past all lesser terrorism to deliberately release a demon as their *first* big political violence? 4. Conclusion: ??? I don't know what to make of the chapter. I can't tell which events I'm supposed to take as unprecedented or coincidental, and which are showing us truths about the world that Alden hasn't yet been forced to notice.

BeheadedMouse

I would shit myself! It's times like this that I really wished I would have stayed pace with RoyalRoad, that way I could buy the patreon and be able to read more lol

Duncan Lester

Also, what kinda dickhead wrights are building magic bombs when they all live on an island?!?!?!!

David Burchfield

@Beheaded Mouse, ~6 minutes according to chapter 24, since it maintains atmospheric pressure it "might" actually help with explosions. "The Fragile Atmosphere was offered as a signing bonus to almost every class. It was a single-use life support device that would give you around six minutes of Earth air, gravity, and atmospheric pressure. It was a great “oh shit” button in all kinds of situations, but single-use was hard to swallow."

Duncan Lester

I think maybe they are both receiving messages / hearing the Eldritch Things scratching at Reality. I could see a sway attempting to specialize as a radar/ receiver to not get shunned as a mind violator. I didn't really get the sense that Tuyets Brother was doing any driving of the incident... But maybe??

Partha Peddi

The chaos exposure, and tsunami are totally unexpected outcomes. No point in guessing what happens next. Whatever we come up with, will be blind speculation at this point. Did the Artonan's survive on the island? Will priority 1-5 people get evacuated? Alden is priority 6.. so must be other students. How will Alden respond? Will he immediately purchase the red lab coat? Assuming high priority people are evacuated, will Alden have to protect his friends on the bus from chaos? Will Alden be emergency summoned to the island as he survived the moon Thegund incident? Did Matadero survive the attack? What happened to the Avoved fighting the chaos monster? Will the tsunami wipe out infrastructure on Apex and F City? Will the bridge be safe? All are unknown for now till the next chapter comes out... and I cant wait till Monday morning to read it all.

BeheadedMouse

I would agree... But I know I don't have anywhere NEAR that kind of willpower 😅

Longoo

TFTC. Oh man Jacob is going to have to pull off some Dr. Who level bullshit to survive a LOT of deadly threats back to back. Does anybody think Alden is getting messages from Earth's Contract in that last dream?

BeheadedMouse

Hahaha comes out of catspace "WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU SAVED THE WHOLE ISLAND!?" Lol

BeheadedMouse

Well they are, currently, on a big bridge over what i assume is ocean. There's still a chance!

Garrett

Only when it’s not being used to hurt us! …Ok, *sometimes* it’s still good when it’s hurting us.

Garrett

“Relax, damn you!” was the message Mina was sending at Will. If it was getting redirected at the brother instead, that means he was either inside Will’s head when he got hit with the mind blast, or he’s somehow able to sense a targeted skill independently.

BeheadedMouse

I bet you Jeffy is right where he's needed the most and will show off just how much of a bad ass he is! I'm way too stoked for these next few chapters!

Flying Goat

There's speculation further up, with some pretty sound reasoning, that Will was under the influence of a Sway. Explains his resistance to a Sway, and the mention of feeling like they were being watched. Also the guy on the prison boat (Everly's brother?) repeating what Mina was trying to do to Will's mind. (I claim no credit for any of that very logical reasoning). Edit: Oops, meant to respond to the post above yours. Guess all the "Wills" made me respond to the wrong one. :)

Saaski

Tori, “Klein, give me the bus” is exactly the line that keeps echoing in my head. 😭

Daniel

Most Wrights likely make weapons for heroes to use against villains and demons. Some of those weapons will be bombs. For all we know the Chaos Bomb actually has a very short range and only works against very particular magic fields. I'm sure the Bomb Wright expected it to be bought by a government at some point, not to have it stolen by SAL or SAL-T.

Vega

I thought of it as less real life mental illness and more lovecraftian esque madness. Which could also be wrong. Alden has theorized that part of the reason people are chosen is because they have “high chaos potential” what if will hijacked a more sensible terroist plot after being driven insane by chaos? Edit; I don’t mean to say terroist plots are ever “sensible” but tearing a hole in space to a place that is inciminal to life/existence seems a touch out there

David Burchfield

Its funny I have been waiting and waiting for the next disaster arc, even anticipated something sort of like this happening... and now that its here... as important and enjoyable as it is there is this part of me that just wants it and dread to be over (exactly how I felt during the Thegund Arc). Well done, this story has so much Weight to it. Events that might seem minor in other stories really matter because of the realism, stakes, and investment tied into them, and after the last disaster Arc I don't think anyone doubts that Sleyca is not shy about killing characters if it is warranted. Now back to twitching as I wait for Sunday. How could someone make me eager for the weekend to be over.

Ali Yang

WOW!!! What a chapter. I am way more hyped for this arc than I expected. Even more hyped than the man on the moon arc. I think one of the reasons I'm so excited about this arc is that the foreshadowing in leading up to it was pretty clear but I have no idea how it'll end. So it looks like there are people that witness the demon exorcising. Who? My best guess is politicians maybe. The quick look inside of the minds of the 3 boat dwellers was so well done too! Also I guess perception on how you gain/use your powers also affects its growth? Maybe just Artonan bias on how magic should be used. That line about how humans are so similar to Artonans... I wonder if the first wizard that initiated contact with Earth was like "did I end up on a long lost colony of Artonans? Why do they all look so weird? lol" And holy crap Tuyet's brother must be pretty damn strong if he was able to pick up on Mina from miles away. Probably how the system knew something was wrong when it read his thoughts. He probably helped Mina defeat Will too possibly.

Mack

Don't forget he hasn't paid off his word chain debt yet either.

AFK37115

I can't believe S rank Bridge Wright had a noble immediate purpose, we were too blind to see...

Cantamen

I've said it before and I'll say it again: I crave soupy merchandise. Pls let me give you more money Sleyca

David Burchfield

One thing I have thought about ever since we got the Explanation of Chaos Potential during the Thegund Arc... Anisidora has all these High Chaos Potential children that haven't been stabilized by the system yet... What happens if they are exposed to Chaos... This is a dark thought.

Mack

Yuuup -- not gonna be as worried about his land moves after this!

Garrett

I’m pretty sure the brother was controlling Will. Mina’s skill wasn’t effective on him because it was getting redirected at the brother via the mind link and Will changed his mind when the brother finally succumbed to Mina’s influence and he was able to recognize what he’d been doing. That’s why the brother was repeating her, “Relax, damn you!” command. In effect, that ship *was* an unmanned drone. It was just being manned by a puppet rather than a computer or spell.

Saaski

Hercule pyro, thanks for the time check, it’s probably been that long. And I don’t mean his physical strength. I was referring to the fact that Alden has been trying to learn to lift things telekinetically with his skill.

Jeff Petkau

I think the Artonans are to blame for chaos somehow, which is why it wasn't a thing on Earth before they arrived and why Gordon wants revenge for something.

FreakShow

So can someone help me understand what Jacob did with the silver sparkles? It’s obvious (to me) that the attack on matadero and tsunami are both the result of the magical bomb going off 2 miles underwater, so how would the sparkles help Jacob? Additionally is Tuyet’s brother an SAL sympathizer/operative or were Mina’s mental manipulations being telephoned somewhere else so that will would be unaffected and tuyets brother was a convenient manipulation sump? Waiting for sundays chapter is gonna be a challenge on this one folks.

Anonymous

Yes...I'm so excited for this part of the narrative to unfold.

David Burchfield

Dang just Reread and I do think Tuyet's brother may have been controlling Will (my initial read was that he was just super sensitive picking up the Relax). However his act to use to potion to knock himself out really makes a lot more sense from that perspective. And an S rank sway who is basically imprisoned on a boat would have ample motivation to want to shake things up even if they were sort of out of it.

Jeremy Goldberg

If the six minute bubble of normal earth pressure acts like an actual bubble at the bottom of the ocean, then maybe Riley and Mina will be ok? The bubble would have to rise two miles in six minutes, so around 20 miles per hour? That feels plausible for a bubble rising to the surface. Depending on how far out the bubbles extend, maybe Riley and Mina can grab Jacob and carry him up? Edit: There was just a thin layer of silver around their skin. Probably not enough to share with Jacob to keep him from being smushed into oblivion from the pressure. It will probably happen too fast for him to suffer at least. Hopefully it will be enough to drag them to the surface. I wonder how fast Riley can swim?

William Jackson

Is it just me or does a tsunami not seem like that MAJOR of an issue to Anseidora? There have to be a least a few S-rank Water/Air shapers around that could theoretically mitigate an oncoming tsunami

Saaski

Mack, That’s true, although I’m much less concerned about that. Alden never had any worries casting and paying back word chains the last time he was stuck in chaos. I don’t think word chains are system dependent. In fact, we know that they are a very old type of magic. Now that I think about it. I wonder if they predate the large system-contacts all together. 🤔

David Burchfield

The Silver Sparkles are the Fragile Atmosphere getting activated (by the two girls). It provides "It was a single-use life support device that would give you around six minutes of Earth air, gravity, and atmospheric pressure." Depending on the specifics it might give them a chance at survival (most bombs cause pressure waves no idea if it would help with that or not). Not sure on Tuyet's brother, I think he may have been controlling Will and setting this whole thing off hence the reason he was picking up Mina's Relax, and why Will knocked himself out after he had everything set in motion.

Michael

I really hope Hayou's dad survives. I don't even want to consider how it would wreck Hayou if he didn't.

Saaski

Oh yeah! They have that shield. But then why were they warned to get to high ground? Just in case?

KB

I want Jacob to live! Your comment made me think of the scene in the animated Mulan where the grandma blindly crosses a crowded road with her lucky cricket. I would love to see a totally convoluted and unbelievable sequence of lucky events conspire to get Jacob out of this.

David Burchfield

Also note that once "Will" makes everything impossible to fix he knocks himself out, that is evidence for the being "swayed" theory.

Duncan Lester

I think Tuyet's bro just has sensitive ears for Mina's S rank sway screams. I didn't get the impression that he was dangerous in a terrorist way. He seemed very traumatized and not amazingly present. IDK if that screams sophisticated bomb plot to me.

Kserand

I wonder, if situation is dire enough, will the System allow Alden to be summoned to preserve the wounded or whatnot, even if he's on down time? If he gets another lab coat - it bumps him up on qualification list to respond to the emergency, doesn’t it? Can’t seem to remember if Artonans can summon avowed without system help.

BeheadedMouse

Two death flags cancel each other out right!??? Someone go back and count the flags! Lol

Anonymous

Does this matter? We saw on Thegund that chaos exposure won't force it to snap back on him. And I doubt its one of the fragile chains that has to be payed back really soon, I don't think Lute would have permission to be teaching it to a trainee if it were.

Tzeneth

I'm slightly mixed on this chapter but that's more I've been enjoying the slice of life and this is interrupting that with sudden dangerous plot.

BeheadedMouse

I think chaos actually injures the system in some way. They might have to turn it off around the demon site to keep the whole system from getting hurt.

Flopmind

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa sleyca whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Anyways, great chapter, thanks as always. Also I appreciate the little vote of confidence on today's RR chapter! Discord: https://discord.gg/PRyweNZmBW

BeheadedMouse

I mentioned it in another comment somewhere, but I think chaos actually hurts the system when they come in contact with each other. Like permanent damage. That's why they shut the system off there.

BeheadedMouse

My current running theory is that chaos actually damages the system in a permanent fashion. So they shut it off to protect it.

Saaski

Why am I not surprised that the US would be dumb enough to try to create a tsunami? 😩

John Anastacio

I have some doubts about Tuyet's brother being the one behind all this. He lives on a boat. I'm not sure what happens to boats when a tsunami hits but I figure the boat could capsize and kill him. I guess he could just be suicidal, though, or not thinking about consequences.

BeheadedMouse

I think he's missing one requirement to be a knight, if I'm not mistaken... I don't think it was ever disclosed what that was, Mother just said he's missing one.

Hailhound

Yeah, you see this in the real world too. Skyscrapers are built to survive earthquakes, but emergency warning systems still tell people to get to open spaces. Redundancy is the name of the game. Much better to inconvenience people than for your safeguards to fail and a bunch of people die because they didn’t feel the need to take basic precautions

BeheadedMouse

Bless you sir and or madam for putting in the work! I was looking for exactly how long atmosphere lasted

Meowgrr

Is the artificial island floating? Bridges, ships and things like floating islands would be almost completely unaffected by a tsunami in deep water. The waves only build up and become dangerous when they transition from deep to shallow water. Even a massive underwater explosion would just produce a swell that would pass rather invisibly from the perspective of those far from shore (and would rarely produce a tsunami). We see this fairly frequently with underwater volcanic eruptions. I bring this up because this story is awesome, so to spare my suspension of disbelief, please make it some kind of "magic" tsunami instead of a science-based one ;)

skewness7

Nooooooooooooooo, so slow!!!!!! I want moaaaar So Alden Thorn is getting an optional, non mandatory, but highly rewarded system quest to... preserve a submerger? All of that accompanied by his biggest fan instructor Klein. I do not get how the system allow the submerger in the dangerous zone? moments before retreating from the chaotic area? and it did not teleport all the hazards away? seems very irresponsible.

John Anastacio

I feel the song Relax by the late great George Michael is appropriate for this chapter. Relax don't do it When you want to go to it Relax don't do it When you want to come In the movie Zoolander the song Relax was the trigger for the brainwashed assassination. Maybe Alden can pull off a Magnum? After all he's really really ridiculously good looking.

Jeff Petkau

I think Lute said the snap back time was around three weeks for My Body Becomes My Assistant.

Hailhound

The system alert did say attack on Matadero. And we know there was a bomb on the sub, and Will preemptively knocked himself out/committed suicide. Any bomb powerful enough to knock out the quarantine shields around matadero is probably strong enough to break the bubbles. So I think unfortunately they’re all really really dead.

BeheadedMouse

Well, looks like that letter to kibv'ee will be a bit more exciting now... Show her your land moves Alden!!!!

Zero

Well yeh I was kinda right about demons, but completely wrong about what was happening on the Sub. Oh boy I have a feeling Alden is going to be swept up on this crisis again. I’m just hoping He and His friends survive and thrive. Thanks for the chapter. I’m looking forward to what comes next.

Super Super Supportive Supporter

I haven’t decided if Tuyet’s brother was controlling the object shaper (from several miles away?), redirecting Mina’s attack, or just reading the thoughts from far away, which is why Mina’s shouted thoughts were the main ones he picked up on I think the third is most likely, but he’s a criminal so maybe one of the first two?

Flying Goat

Avowed are able to fight chaos creatures, so their powers aren't completely ineffective against chaos, presumably, though certainly possible they're less effective.

Joel Wells

I know the system is super hands off. But I would think that a group attacking the chaos point on earth where demons are fought would be a breach of the contract. If that is the case, whoever launched that attack should be screwed in more ways than one.

redhandedjill

I did not realize that rational fiction was a category - or that there was a Reddit dedicated to it. Neat!

D375

I'd love to see Alden use his auriad to save his friends during the chaos event. The reactions from everyone would be incredible.

Andrew Simpson

I actually think he was the one avowed that got called out because he is specifically going to survive. I don't have high hopes for the rest of the combat team.

Temp One

Awesome chapter, really hoping Alden breaks out Joe's explosives lab suit. Something that offers Chaos protection but isn't quite Intensity Level 99.9. More like Intensity Level 30-40.

David Burchfield

It is definitely speculative. Tsunamis normally don't crest till they get near land, boats that far out often just roll with the swell though again motivation is somewhat iffy.

Andrew Simpson

It's a tsunami, so they can just like... Go to the second floor of the mall. It'll be scary for them, but they should survive just fine. Malls aren't the kind of building that would collapse from the flow, and the second floor should be fine. If chaos spawn start crawling out of the water, that's another question.

Jeff Petkau

If this whole situation does get resolved and the facts come out, SAL is going to be blamed for a massive terror incident, which will probably lead to a crackdown on non-Anesidoran avowed. Which in turn might make Boe's life much harder. I read someone's analysis the other day about why this story is so addictive. There's this seemingly stable situation with a huge amount of instability under the surface (human/Avowed politics, Alden's many secrets, Kibby's secrets, Boe in hiding, the Velra stuff, Boater stuff, etc etc) so any nudge can bring things crashing down, and it creates a great tension that doesn't feel "cheap" like in some stories. And here comes a crash.

Chris

Uh, you should reread chapter 59 when Mother is teasing Alden (being "mean"). He has the last requirement (one of the first 300 skills).

Acoga

The System has withdrawn from that area. The first it knew of the attack was from a huge explosion

Acoga

He might have a power like the opposite of Mina, making someone more anxious. If he’s an S, it would explain why she couldn’t calm the object shaper. It would also explain why he’s kept isolated.

John Anastacio

The System isn't stupid, though, is it? We know it can read minds. If it can't deduce what a crazy and possibly mind controlled person approaching Matadero with a bomb would do and the consequences thereof, it would have to be truly unintellilgent. Maybe the bomb and the lives of millions just aren't that important in the greater scheme of things.

Pedro Henrique

We can assume since he is Tuyet's (an S-rank) brother that he is a S-rank Sway. We can then presume then that since he is in a holding facility for being mentally ill, that either his mental illness atunes him to chaos , or more probably that he picked a skill that increases his receptiveness to both chaos and skill use or magic in general and THAT is what makes him mentally unstable and able to detect Mina swaying from miles away.

Jeremy Goldberg

Next Time On Soup — Esh-erdi watched sadly as the tsunami’s swell sped toward the island where the humans kept their avowed. Then he turned his gaze toward its cause. The humans had already named this demon too, he noted. But what in the world is a “godzilla?”

BeheadedMouse

What do you wanna bet that Joe's already made some "modifications" to the lab suit design? I bet we're in for a treat

GryphonKnight

"Defending the universe is all about having that one useful, well-designed, infinitely expandable skill to funnel all of your power into. As long as you don’t choose one of those, nobody will be interested in—” She paused and then gasped dramatically. “You’re making fun of me,” said Alden, astonished to find himself saying something like that in this situation. “You’re a mean System. I didn’t even know Systems could be mean.” A monocle appeared in her free hand and she held it up to a pink eye to exam him. “Avowed skill number one hundred and twelve" 🔲

Robert Lethiecq

Let’s argue that the attack hasn’t happened yet. Bomb hasn’t gone off yet. Everyone is bracing for it. Suddenly an emergency teleport arrives in time. The bomb goes into stasis. A rabbit sits there holding a device meant to destroy thousands and unleash an existential threat that is meant to shatter the status quo on Earth. The precog on the little low security prison ship for sways got the message out in time and the catastrophe is subverted.

Qaysed

He's got to be connected to it at least bc he was getting Mina's something of Mina's effect, and this certainly seems like the best explanation

SkySeeker (definitely not Lauren K in a mask)

Given that this user made a misogynistic comment about how women are naturally hardwired to lie and break promises during a comment thread talking about Sleyca on a previous post, I am pretty sure it is male.

Robert Lethiecq

We have seen nothing to suggest a floating island. Likely a manufactured island through magic and earth shaping, but not a floating island.

Pedro Henrique

Probably educational, there are very few human avowed and they are comparatively weaker to both, so if the Artonans want earth to be able to help against chaos they need their training montage.

Joel Wells

Plus it obviously knows the place is being attacked. It just warned everyone. It wouldn’t take much effort to track down everyone involved especially since it is connected to all the avowed.

GryphonKnight

We think demons create Chaos fields and Chaos fields crash Systems ( looking at you Chaos moon ) So removing the System from contact with the incoming demon is like moving cardboard boxes off the floor before you mop or using a coaster for cold drinks on a humid day 🔲

Anonymous

If the anomaly oceanic anomalies where caused by the submerger (which given the evidence they probably were). The shield would have to not only contend with thousands of pounds of water but also an authority conflict with the submerger. And we know from their discussions that the submerger is an extremely powerful and illegal item so even it alone might give the shield some trouble.

Andrew Tobin

I was thinking he was picking up the signal from Mina, but rather hoping he was trying to help instead of be the baddie.

David

Six minutes, if they crashed immediately. Imagine standing there with the timer ticking down, desperate for the crash to happen…

Duncan Lester

I don't think he can -- all of Alden's TP so far has been system assisted or expensive, slow ritual. As kickass as that would show our boy, Idk if there is a way to get him there in time.

Kim Enteiu

Oh, the perfect timing of RR to Patreon strikes again 💖 *** He lifted his hands. “I just don’t know what to do with myself when you’re hiding on roofs and there are no disasters in progress. I thought if there was someone very interesting who wasn’t already here we might ask them to stop by.” “Come over. Enjoy the chaos miasma with us.” Her tone was wry.

Andrew Tobin

I wonder if there was something on the sticker set to trigger Will? It seems a bit convoluted for a plan.

Pedro Henrique

The Mother said Alden's skill is "old magic" and "derives power from the concepts of sacrifice and servitude" , and would actually be weaker without its restrictions(has to bear the burden alone, etc). The teachers in super school see the need for a "entruster" as a "pointless restriction on a fairly harmless power", when in fact it helps make the skill better. We can assume then that the Contract being similar "old magic" it has "restrictions" placed in it to allow it exert greater power where it counts. The NEED to maintain good faith with the contracted people and not just lead them around the nose or order them around probably helps strengthen The Contract in other areas , like protecting the planet from chaos. And presumably each time The Contract has to lie or force someone to take a skill at random it saps its own "strength", making it an expensive action to take.

Super Super Supportive Supporter

IIRC it started out as sort-of-nerdy fics with an emphasis on game theory and ‘smart’ antagonists that specifically don’t do ‘idiot ball’ tropes like the villain telling the hero their plans while there’s still time to stop them (HPMoR) Then it turned out there weren’t that many high quality stories like that and now it’s basically synonymous with ‘very fleshed out backstory and worldbuilding with no or few idiot balls’ (WtC, Worm etc) so this story falls under that umbrella

Zenopath (AEV)

Did it mention if there's a bomb on board the boat? I mean they are taking magic supplies, just a random assortment of potions when smashed together at high speeds probably do not react well. Also, if they are moving as fast as a bullet, given the mass of the typical small ocean-capable boat, that would be a hefty impact. I'm just wondering where the tsunami warning is coming from. Are they assuming this is a planned suicide attack with explosive, or have they scanned the contents? I guess the informants AI would be able to calculate what will happen when that boat hits by figuring out the manifest.

GryphonKnight

"detector was working fine; the snapped stylus was shining brightly. When Jacob swept the beam around the room, he could see all kinds of flaws. Even the thing under the tarp—the thing he was sure was some kind of a Wrightmade bomb—was giving off a small pink glow." I find it helps to view the post on with a web browser and use the "find on page" feature

Zaeron

Whew this is a really interesting chapter. It's frantic and really hard to follow. That's both.. good, and bad. I'm pretty sure it evokes exactly the feeling Sleyca was trying to evoke, but it was also surprisingly hard to parse. I think Jacob dying (presumably) hit a little weird because I didn't remember Fragile Atmosphere at all, so I didn't understand what they were doing until like 30 seconds later and a re-read. I'm not quite sure what the workaround there is, but it feels like it's been too long since we last heard about Fragile Atmosphere for it to be immediately obvious they're putting on space suits and Jacob is admitting he doesn't have a space suit.

Zenopath (AEV)

Ah must have missed that detail have only read once, lol. time to reread. The fact that the guy had brought a bomb aboard does sort of imply he planned this all along though, regardless of the chaos messing with his head. Unless he had some other reason to bring a massive tsunami causing bomb onboard? Maybe the plan was to drop off the passangers and then come back and bomb the island? I guess we will never know.

Robert Lethiecq

The battle group always has an S rank chainer at matadero for the mass bestowal. If most everyone dies that’s there then I expect Lute will have someone from his family die. I’d bet the S rank that married in but I don’t know. That will have some ripples in Velra family politics.

Benji

Oh boy, that is certainly a switchup from Slice of Life Hero School XD Thanks for the chapter!

Charlie

Probably not if it went off underwater - which would case a tsunami.

Shain Oleson

I believe that Frankie Goes to Hollywood had the hit Relax not George Michael.

Andrew Tobin

Yeah, it's an interesting thought - does the system withdraw its stability to allow the chaos an opportunity to come thru, or does the system withdraw so the chaos won't damage it. Both are possible, and it could be both.

John Anastacio

Thanks Shain. Apparently I'm even dumber when it comes to music than I thought.

Andrew Tobin

tbf, Jeffy is currently on land, so he can share off the best of both worlds - Land moves when on land, Water moves when the land is suddenly water.

Billy Corcoran

Having a bridge be in danger is such a classic superhero problem lol. The only question is who will spiderman have to choose between. The bus full of school children, or the love interest?

Charlie

I think the only things Alden can actually do are help the injured and assist in rebuilding. He's not strong enough or on site to help with the bigger problems.

Charlie

Formation is probably the most useful against enormous explosions.

Andrew Tobin

Alden better save the bus and then Lute-Jane (and Natalie-Jane, and...)

Calico C

Cliffhangers need to be illegal. They need to be illegal now. I know you warned us last chapter, but oh my god. 0.0 I was not expecting Worm level disaster scenarios.

Calico C

Riley made tge sticker, so I don’t think so. I think it has to do with Riley’s swaying, similar to how Manon’s backfired. He said he changed his mind, so he may have been fretting over a plan, and Mina’s “relax” sway made it so that he no longer thought the plan was bad

Charlie Staner

Yeah. I don’t think rescuing Søren was a blip on Alden’s radar even though it would be for basically anyone else. He has way bigger FISH to fry. 😂

Pedro Henrique

For an early antagonist that was taken care of almost immediately Bakuda caused the most damage out of any one villain in Worm, even if only indirectly.

Sashani

I took it as Tuyet's sway brother was mind controlling him. He got Mina's 'Relax dammit' through Will.

Robert Lethiecq

Relying on real life tsunami science as it relates to conventional munitions or even nuclear seems to be very limiting. Taking into account the magical nature of a wright made bomb it seems like arguing against an effect of this kind because real life bomb science isn’t up to the task is short sighted. Just a quick think on how a magical version of things might work in relation to what we know about the story so far it’s not too difficult to imagine that a gravity bomb could have an outsized effect on the ocean. Waves are very impacted by gravity in the real world. A magical gravity effect could cause substantial effects such as the rogue waves we are thinking about. As an added plus, the single use effect the two girls used might counteract the effects as it impacts them allowing them to survive where Jacob doesn’t at ground zero.

Charlie

Assuming a bomb did go off, Haoyu's dad stands the best chance of surviving long enough for the Artonans to handle the demon. He would be less affected by the explosion and would take longer for the demon to kill.

Anonymous

Off-topic but have been rereading some earlier chapters: how is Alden keeping his handicap-breath-mint preserved during gym class?Can he target multiple people at once? Or is he not doing any retargeting at all during gym since he's locked himself into using only the rope? I feel like he must be doing retargeting because he was using it on different water balloons during rescue session with Fragment. But then later in the same session he retargeted to Big Snake to do his catching and it mentioned his rope and mint losing its preservation instantly. So how had he been retargeting earlier for rescue?

Charlie

out of nowhere I think he's a U-type spell sponge and any sway abilities cast in the vicinity target him instead.

Matt

Jacob's only hope is a combination of MacGyver magic from his Wright skills plus two human shields who might be able to share oxygen with him. And/or a really, really fast rescue from outside help. I'd still give him lower odds than the system gave Alden on Thegund, but there's a chance. Maybe Mina can Sway him into ignoring death.

Alan Miller

The contract as a construct may be even less resistant to chaos than avowed. Withdrawal could be to avoid risk of it going the way of the Moon Thegund contract.

Super Super Supportive Supporter

Oops I misread - he’s not a criminal, it’s just housing for people that should be kept away from the general population. Something like Boe except for thoughts instead of emotions?

sketerpot

The US didn’t try to create a tsunami, for the record. They did the math first, and figured out that there was no way the amount of energy from a nuke was going to do more than make bubbles at the top of the water, given the distance from the blast and the density of water. And the water itself would act as excellent radiation shielding, which is a nice bonus.

GryphonKnight

Sway Mina was having trouble controlling Shaper Will, so Will was likely being controlled by a rival Sway I just finished rereading _Lock In_ by John Scalzi and definitely feeling deja vu ( looking at you research lab bombing ) 🔲

AFK37115

Another point to the "Tuyet's brother has been controlling Will" tally, Will was exploring the stuff in the boat intensely and randomly, like someone who was piloting him was exploring through him, and when the captain said that he does that because he is nervous, Will denied it, saying that it is very small in here. While that behavior and interaction might just be how Will is, another posibility is that the sway imprisoned on that boat has been using him as a puppet to see the world and decided to see the bigger world through this trip but changed his mind, it sounds like he has been hearing the chaos trying to enter reality or something and it caused him much trauma and crazy, and when he saw Riley's stickers about the demons (he was holding one along with the sumerger) he was like, no I would rather they hear and see what I hear than puppet this guy anymore, then he killed Will. I suspect everyone he has communicated with (ever or recently) got /heared the words 'Relax' and 'Relax, damn you' similar to how Alden accidentally sent messages to Stu instead of Lute in ch 103, because Mina is an S rank too and was trying her best to affect him, her skill seem to imprint the words to their brains and they obey it? like the sentence 'there is no fifth passager' maybe I didn't believe that Tuyet's brother must be the mastermind because I thought he got Mina's message through broadcast Boe-style, but Mina's skill isn't like natural emotions, she targets the mind and therefore Tuyet's brother's mind is connected to Will. that is damning, although, he is on a boat too and in danger probably, mass suicide chaos bomber? Reminder that Aulia and Jessica and Orpheus probably also live on a boat. funny, Hazel is the safest human character right now (and Neha and the rejuve healer probably) , off planet but not fighting demons like Morrison.

UpgrayeDD

Pretty good! I was indeed laughing at you in Thai. 5 is pronounced as “ha” in Thailand. One ladies misogyny is another culture’s SOP. You made it sound like what I said was extraordinary. 75% of the world’s population believe it true and factual and 50% codify it into law. Imposing your opinion on the world is racism, don’t you think?

GryphonKnight

Just realized the bridge is very long Now I am picturing the Key West scene is _True Lies_ Harry: Well, you see, this is the problem with terrorists. They're really inconsiderate when it comes to people's schedules 🔲

Meridun

6 minutes of magically enforced standard atmospheric pressures = explosion proof. And decompression proof. And maybe super-buoyant, depending on how it interacts with the surroundings. 2 miles (assuming they’re still at that depth) is about 350 atmospheres which would push their one atmosphere bubble up really fast

SkySeeker (definitely not Lauren K in a mask)

This chapter was phenomenal. It really captured the surreal feeling of the disaster. There is this sense that all these things that went wrong weren't *supposed* to go wrong. It really drew me into the panic of the characters. I don't know how Sleyca does it, time and time again.

Elle

I agree. Plus, why would he text Tuyet if he was the one behind everything.

Anonymous

The fact that Will is A-rank and holding off against Mina, an S-rank Sway suggests that Mina is vying for control of Will against another S-rank Sway. Tuyet is S-rank, so it's likely that her brother is also S-rank.

Anonymous

Will we see the return of No-Longer-Distinguished Joe's Marvellous Red Coat Of Blast Resistance And Questionable Fashion Sense?

Saaski

Honestly, I had forgotten about it too. But I just figured from context that it was something that would protect them and carried on reading.

Anonymous

Is there concern that eleven discarded radishes will be exposed to chaos and become Demon Radishes seeking revenge?

Memoryofgold

Oh dear. I thought I would be prepared but I stand corrected. When that moment in the previous chapter where Alden was wishing for this respite to continue a while longer, I was like "damn how bad is it gonna get next chapter?" 😭😭. Also, I really loved the use of POV switches here, and I really liked that moment of "final" reflections the trio had on the submarine, I'm really starting to get invested in them. And I really like characters like Riley tbh I really wanna see how she changes (or stays the same 😅).

Marlkaz

Really glad to see this! My suspension of disbelief enormously prefers this to Alden randomly ending up at another disaster's critical point via unlucky boating trip. Maybe the boating trip plan was an intentional red herring? If so, well done! It could also be that Jacob survives with chaos wounds and can't be teleported due to chaos risk, so he calls Maricel and the group brings the boat to save him with Alden's power. I was more confused by Will's actions. I can buy the why - he seemed messed up in the head before, and could've been demonized or just aggravated by the chaos (he seemed to be sensitive to it like an itch) or even remote-controlled by Tuyet's comparably messed up relative. But I'm not sure what he expected his submerger manipulation to accomplish, and it seemed very intentional (he killed its protectors, reprogrammed it, and broke the controller).

JJ Hunter

I mean, we're absolutely getting a boat disaster here. Just not the boat most people were expecting to have the disaster - that was a deft slight of hand in cuing expectations.

Memoryofgold

Another thing, its really cool to see the inner thoughts of the knight that gives some idea of their view of being Avowed. There is such a philosophical bent to it versus the Anesidoran view that sort of sees it as something to be gamed. Also, that was neat seeing Jacob's father's view of being Avowed, its different perspective and I think it hints at a deeper meaning on authority and chaos potential! That and the Knight's description of "perceiving" the demon. Very cool nugget of detail!

Emily Gurnavage

Dang, what a good one. Really drug me in. I might have to somehow resist the urge when the next one comes out and let 2 or 3 build first. I prolly won't have the willpower for that but I may try, lol.

Cyrus McEnnis

Just to put a line in the sand - I don't think Will's being influenced by Tuyet's brother. I think Will's broadcasting his actions hard enough for a Sway of a particular bent to pick them up. Will had a scab on his hand that he was picking at - I wonder if that's a sign he's been exposed to Chaos already and is being influenced to increase the local entropy.

Andrew Khitry

He’ll call his knight uniform with “Halo of Mother Planet” augmentation

BeheadedMouse

I feel like what I thought was an innocuous and only slightly humorous comment was instead the equivalent of bomb with a middle finger painted on it ( I'm still pretty new, so I'm not privy to all the juicy drama...but I'll certainly get there lol)

Charlie

The System is also a result of a contract signed between Humans and Artonans. Humans may not have agreed to Avowed being forced to train non-stop and other limitations placed on them.

The butler did it

I think he just preserved a new mint off page. He would have needed to get someone to hand him the rope after preserving the last of the balloons, and in a short break during gym class I doubt they'd pay close enough attention to notice a mint tucked into the coils of his rope.

Charlie

It means, however, that the wordchain is less likely to land on him if he casts it again.

PatienceHoney

If I remember my lesson on tsunamis from a grad school class correctly, at the starting point (location of an underwater earthquake) the tsunami is very small (a ripple on the surface) but as the energy from the earthquake "lifting the water above it" propagates out it remains a "ripple" until it comes in contact with land (continental shelf, rising ocean floor around an island) this energy pulls the shallow water out to sea to maintain the energy of the original "lift" minus some energy dissipation until the wave height grows and overwhelms the landform it is coming in contact with... It has been 18 years since I was in grad school, so my memory/understanding could be off. But, how I think this works in Soup is if the "bomb" was a "ground" raising device and Will directed the boat/submersible straight down to create the "lift" required to imitate an earthquake and start a tsunami.

TheDivinePotato

It's about time Alden's life plans went completely off the rails again, it feels like he hasn't had his world tipped entirely on its head since he got stuck on moon Thegund

JJ Hunter

Whew, I've been wondering for a while why so many Sway assignments keep coming from Earth's contract when there's so much human cultural resistance to most of those skill sets. Do chaos incursions have their own ability to sway - alter? - vulnerable people into assisting their entry? Are Sways needed to counteract such influences on others or override them in emergencies? It's already suggestive that Mina's intended short range messaging could be detected by Tuyet's brother from several miles' distance away, which he then texted to Tuyet - a neat potential parallel to the chosen messenger at Matadero receiving long distance communication from their counterpart back in the Contract's protection. Meanwhile, confined in a bus stuck in heavy traffic on a bridge right when literally everyone is getting the same disaster alerts to evacuate sounds like potential stampede territory. Wish they had someone with Mina's relaxation alter abilities on the bridge to help take the edge off the panic and counteract its very human potential contagion so people get moving cooperatively instead of getting in each other's way or accidentally harming each other. Bridge is terrible territory for both Alden and Maricel - no ground to work with. Tuyet, Ignacio, and Marsha all have distance attack options; there may be need to dart, shred, or spear some of those oncoming oceanic anomalies. Alden, Haoyu, and Lexi already have a working synergy; anyone else from their obstacle team who might be present on the bus could be brought into that relatively easily. I'm tensely excited to see if some of the less stellar collaborators like Marsha and Mehdi will step up and cooperate with the rest of them to respond effectively to current emergency, or whether the consequences of them failing to do so come home with grim reality. I'm afraid Alden's chapter 128 thoughts about what Marsha needs to fix her attitude ("Marsha’s some kind of battle freak. They need to turn the gym’s realism settings all the way up and see if that sobers her ass.") may not be realized in a safe gym setting after all. This is a real disaster; there's no more time to practice.

BeheadedMouse

Ugh, I feel like I should change my name to "I have shit reading comprehension skills and a worse memory"... I feel like I'd get bullied less for having shit reading comprehension and a worse memory

Anonymous

Reading this chapter just kept making me anxious. Really well written Sleyca.

Anonymous

Remember when everyone was calling Big’n’little Snake’s budding relationship before he left a death flag? I now hope he has a super boring summoning that goes way smoother than expected, and he gets to come back to earth in the aftermath of these unfolding events and just be dumbfounded. A full Texas accent ‘wot in tarnation have y’all been doing while I was gone?’

BeheadedMouse

Ah, I wasn't implying y'all were bullying me by the way, it was a poor choice of words.

SkySeeker (definitely not Lauren K in a mask)

@Beheaded Mouse, sorry you got drawn into this. Frankly, I kind of feel like I am the only one who remembers the comment this guy made a few posts ago, and it annoys me. Against my better judgment, I decided it was worthwhile to call attention to it. I'm no dyed-in-the-wool, fourth wave feminist, far from it, but I still have my pride! That comment was the first time I had seen someone actually say something so blatantly misogynistic in a context that I could be pretty sure he wasn't trolling. I feel like for anyone who doesn't share his views, he kind of dug his own grave well enough that I don't need to say anything else on the matter. You didn't deserve the blowback though, so for what it's worth, I am sorry.

Anonymous

Damn... I was expecting the scene to just flip to Jacob, Mina, and Riley all dead mysteriously, but somehow what's happening seems so much worse. What's the alert for? Is the ship going so fast towards the island that it brought a tsunami with it?? Is that even possible??? EDIT: DID THE DEMON FIGHTING ISLAND AND CHAOS EXPLODE???!!!

Clay Smith

So I’m curious what impact this actually has. You would figure an island full of superheros would be able to mitigate the damage caused by a tsunami. The bigger thing would the low chaos exposure. Only people with high tolerance like Alden would be able to out and about. This could also lead to a general showing up and making a big deal about his commendation.

Anonymous

It was a little unclear to me that both Mina and Riley had the Fragile Atmosphere... thing, until I read the comments. Poor, dead Jacob.

Dino

"no weekend boat trip" - inb4 wrong again and they have to take the boat out on a rescue mission

Dino

yeah I'm also team "Artonans are to blame for chaos"

Anonymous

I think you might be vastly underestimating the total volume of water moving in a tsunami compared to the total number of S ranked water and air shapers that are on anseidora and will not be working in unison. There are about 70,000 S class avowed. at most I would estimate 10% are shapers. Of those at most 20% would be air and water based. That leaves us with only about 1400 people in total throughout the world. Factor in the fact that S are more likely to be summoned and killed and that many S that are the highest level probably do not live on anseidora due to being heroes. I think any reasonable sized Tsunami would be a massive threat.

Not Real

I think another part of the sway things is that there might not be a true telepathy. Telepathy is thoughts appearing in your head, that is not really different than mind control.

Anon.

His absence might mean the most experienced superhero for the situation isn't available.

5haun

Honestly my first read of that was just that Tuyet’s* brother picked up Mina’s mental voice because she was shouting so loudly, but I’m now pretty convinced he had taken control of Will. If he has the ability to do that, he probably could use that power to determine when the chaos attack would occur. And manipulating the SAL captain to go on that night. Honestly the implications are terrifying if he has that kind of range Based on Will saying he could feel the chaos around them, I’m assuming Tuyet’s brother is the one who really feels it - the way he said it made me think it’s possible he can also feel his authority, but unlike Alden, he has no idea what it is. So he’s probably just constantly in pain from his affixation without knowing why 😬 If Tuyets brother really was in control, my theory is he wants to increase/release the chaos at Matedero on the island, so that maybe someone else could feel it too. This does not bode well for Alden, specifically, as well as the whole island of course. I’m probably wrong haha but I can’t wait to see how this shakes out

Tori, Writher #1 Fan

I've concluded that the cost to the system of interfering to prevent this level of catastrophe must be a worse catastrophe. We've seen what happens when a system fails... I wonder if we'll ever learn more about what led to the Thegund failure. Did Thegund interfere too much?

Jeremy Goldberg

I’m willing to bet that Alden will be forced to demonstrate some level of weird wizardry-ness in front of Klein. Otherwise, why is Klein there? His opinion of Alden won’t change if Alden just demonstrates courage, level-headedness, intelligence, etc. Klein is already willing to stipulate that Alden possesses those qualities. His issue with Alden specifically is the viability of his class. Klein is already well aware of Alden’s non wizard capabilities. He’s seen them in gym. I think for their relationship to develop, Klein will need to learn that Alden has extra ordinary capabilities.

Neil H

I think the only other mention of Tuyet's brother is this line from Maricel, back in chapter 80: "“It’s all the other things. I think word is spreading around. I haven’t talked about you. And Tuyet probably wouldn’t share rumors with just anyone, but I think she does tell her sisters and brother everything. She seems really close to them.”"

The butler did it

All I could think when the Submerger turned out to be the key to someone's diabolical plan was how this will all eventually blow back on Lute's irresponsible cousin as the supplier. Estranged or not, I wonder how the Velra's will handle that.

Cyrus McEnnis

It's easy to miss, but Jacob mentions that he thinks the object under the tarp is a wright-made bomb.

Tarim Shahab

If he wasn't controlling Nick, why is he in this chapter at all. What's the point of that scene do you think? Just to show that Mina's power.

Cyrus McEnnis

I took it as Jacob's father expressing an opinion as to why he wasn't chosen. "of course I didn't get chosen, I'm too sure of myself" is a level of projection that you normally only see in a drive-in cinema with daddy issues.

Tori, Writher #1 Fan

Oh interesting idea on that maybe Will is just spam messaging everyone "relax damn you", because maybe Mina's instructions actually are getting through, rather than that they aren't and are getting subverted. I assumed Will was the other S rank that Elias mentioned, and that Riley's guess he's A rank is wrong.

Tarim Shahab

I still don't get how powerful high level S are. Hope many S ranks do you need. How much more powerful do they get compared to the students.

Tori, Writher #1 Fan

Maybe his sway powers have led to him unintentionally feel how the local wizards feel, and gain a sympathetic understanding of authority sense? But in a way that is very dissociated and chaotic?

Stylemys

So Jeffy, Astrid, and Reinheart are stranded at the mall right as a potential tsunami is coming in. Methinks Jeffy is about to learn just how important his Aqua Brute class can be.

Mack

Okay but there's no need to develop that relationship on either end, really. Neither of them are extra super invested in becoming more than teacher/student. I mean I wouldn't mind but Alden wants to keep his abilities quiet. He'd definitely show them in front of Klein though if no choice.

Mack

Good point about how he was exploring the area.

Mack

Thought it was implied that he used the submerger to set the ship/bomb on a collision course with Matadero.

Memoryofgold

@Cyrus McEnnis totally, to me its both cope but also a good question. The system does choose a particular kind of person after all, otherwise why would the Anesidora elites try so hard with their eugenics program? (well, just the Velras as we know, we haven't seen other big faction dynamics that deeply yet)

fonn

sleyca, the way you wrote alden's nightmare crawled into my brain and possessed me. i offer you this fanart: https://www.tumblr.com/terafonne/742364638884331520/super-supportive-sleyca-ch-131-aldens?source=share

Jeremy Goldberg

That’s fair - I could be overthinking it. Maybe Klein’s there to die horribly to drive home the danger everyone is in, or maybe Klein monsters out and becomes a chaos demon that the kids have to fight for real. Or maybe he was just there to drive the damn bus :)

Kettle

@Lauren, but no wait. It’s okay, because almost everyone is a misogynist. So it’s racist for you to be offended. (please tell me the sarcasm here is super obvious)

Charlie

Both the Artonans who consider Earth a fearful Marvel and Gorgon who considers it a paradise have intimated that there's something special about the planet itself that they find appealing. Does anyone know what it is? Is it just a generally low level of chaos?

5haun

Oh wow for sure Tori, and if that’s right I just had a scary thought. If he has crazy Sway range and part of his power is feeling what his target does, all he’d need is to target someone with an authority sense to have his eyes opened to authority. I doubt the Artonan wizards would allow him to target them, but if Tuyet’s brother targeted Alden… that would be a very chaotic way to feel authority*, especially compared to how Alden got his authority sense. Basically, Alden is already causing ripples with his authority sense 😬 This is all wild speculation of course but this “what if” is so interesting!!

Temp One

I'm actually wondering if Tuyet's brother was mind controlling Will. And the reason he was whispering 'Relax' was because Mina was indirectly shouting at his real (and mind vacant?) body when she was trying to calm down the body puppet that was Will. If that's the case, and based off what we know of Tuyet's brother (possibly in an Anesidorian asylum of sorts, mentally unwell) and how Will was acting. I'm guessing Tuyet's brother has a severe case of paranoid schizophrenia ("I can feel it. It’s right there, scratching and scratching at the door. Why does everyone on Earth pretend it isn’t there?”). Which is terrifying to imagine in a Sway.

Jeremy Goldberg

I wonder if Artonans dream? If Alden told Kibby or Stuart about his nightmare, would they understand him?

Temp One

They probably have measures to mitigate tsunamis, but I imagine it's something that takes time to setup with at least half an hours warning and is resource intensive.

5haun

This is spot on. The authorities will definitely look into the Submerger source and hopefully find Orpheus. If they look into Orpheus, it’s not a big leap to also look into his recently planet-departed sister, Hazel, who was publicly seen with Jacob shortly before she went off planet.

Riking

Yeah I'm pretty sure he had the stylus jammed on the Faster button

Stylemys

The fact that S-rank Mina couldn’t sway Will implies to me that he was already under the influence of a more powerful mental effect. Mina was trying to steal a car someone else had already driven off with.

SkySeeker (definitely not Lauren K in a mask)

@Kettle, any form of "you disagree with me/you disagree with members of X group, therefore you are a racist," really galls me. Frankly, the only reason I didn't address it when Pablo made that argument earlier is that it is so blindingly obvious to anyone who doesn't already agree with him that such a statement doesn't hold water, it wasn't worth dignifying with a response. I know that the internet is not the right place to try to convince someone of a principle they disagree with, but it feels wrong to just let things stand sometimes.

Stylemys

It’s quite telling that BOTH of the natives took the single-use lifesaving device as their sign on bonus. Even more so, they seemed to think he’d obviously have one too.

Anonymous

I hope he doesn't die, but now that you mention it I can see it as a definite possibility 😔.

Luck

Basically all Avowed have some resistance to chaos exposure, it’s the kids who are in trouble

Sheltron5000

Or if the thibg scratching at the door is a demon. Mentally unwell people being sensitive to chaos and other dimensions is a common trope. What if he's sending a bomb to a weak point trying to prevent a chaos incursion but it actually opens a crack for the demons. To be clear, i thinkbthe foreshadowing is great because it hints at something, but there's enough ambiguity that we're really all guessing.

Mack

Or he could be there to tell them what to do -- go here, do this, etc. They have no idea how best to help or proceed, and didn't even know what the siren was for. I could see Klein setting in motion whatever comes next because the kids just don't know. Or yeah. Everything you all said!

Baines

I need my Chaos fix, now suffer Alden suffer for my plot needs

fonn

they did specify speed brutes get "short-range" teleportation, I'm assuming it wouldn't cover nearly enough distance even if she could carry someone

Temp One

Magic is on the table, so it's definitely impossible to rule out everything. I guess it depends on what's more likely: Tuyet's brother has a sense for chaos that heretofore we haven't seen before. Making him an extraordinarily rare individual in the vein of Alden. Or he's having a schizophrenic breakdown in the vein of all those videos online. That depict people who are convinced they can feel the government stealing their thoughts, and that everyone they know is out to get them. I just think that line from Will (Tuyet's brother) talking about how "everyone is pretending they can't feel the scratching at the door" is the real canary in the coal mine. This is someone deeply mentally unwell, who has likely been convinced the restricted Matadero area is the source of their mental disturbances; and somehow found an opportunity to get close via a SAL escape attempt. Wouldn't be surprised if the escape attempt was timed by SAL and designed to go throught the Matadero area when the chaos demon event was going on. As it looks like during that time the System goes offline in the surrounding area and creates a massive blind spot without communication for Anesidorian authorities.

Matt

You're all welcome! As other comments have mentioned, that quote is from way back on chapter 24. There was a more recent reference on chapter 73: I only got twelve and a half foundation points to start with. And that was with the signing bonus…which…damn. What a scam that is if it actually used my own authority. I don't think they can just gift you more...can they? And getting points early isn’t that great. Unless you’re someone who plans on it taking you years to level. I should definitely have taken The Fragile Atmosphere tool. Or maybe not. If his body was just a little weaker, if his affixation was just a little smaller, he might not have made it out with Kibby. His free authority might have overbalanced too quickly. He might not have survived the teleport. It was hard to say what the value of taking those few measly points had been.

Anonymous

I appreciate you bringing. I bet it's uncomfortable to do but shit like that is important

Matt

The discussion of signing bonuses is revisited again in chapter 105 (you've grown) when Alden learns that the signing bonuses are not just molding the avowed recipient's authority. Fragile Atmosphere isn't specifically mentioned at that time though.

Temp One

Full of *sexy* hairless apes, you mean. Come on. We've seen how hedonistic those upper crust Artonans can be.

fonn

To add a bit more context, Fragile Atmosphere is one of the optional rewards you can pick for signing the Contract when you first affix. Jacob picked a different reward, so he doesn't actually have a Fragile Atmosphere, unlike the two girls.

Brell

I think the goal here is to destroy Anesidora. Not to kill the Avowed there, but to render the island uninhabitable due to Chaos contamination. As we've seen, non-Avowed are extremely susceptible to this. The casualties would be horrific.

Jumping Flounder

well at least alden isn’t alone for this chaos outbreak. i wonder if we’re gonna see him teach a few of the others to become wizards like him.

Stylemys

That was my thought up until this chapter. But her dad wouldn’t be on the island too if she was a globie.

fonn

there's a decent chance that someone will be dying in the next few chapters, at the same time RR gets the Manon Incident lmao

Chris

I can think of three options that the two Artonan Knights on Matadero might take that could accidentally reveal one (or more) of Alden's secrets. Intensity 99, served piping hot! NOTE: These options would require for Alden to get summoned despite having five to six more months of break left (a disaster might allow for that.) 1. System Alert: All nearby wizards will be emergency summoned to Matadero to help contain chaos in 5... (Wizards don't use the system and spells still work in chaos zones.) 2. System Alert: All commended avowed will be emergency summoned to Matadero to help contain chaos in 5... (Lute's understanding of commendations was that people got them for fighting chaos. And one of the knights was already looking up commended humans to pass the time in an earlier chapter.) 3. Both of the above. - TLDR - Knights might emergency summon nearby wizards, commended avowed, or both to Matadero, accidentally revealing at least one of Alden's secrets...potentially both.

Andrew Tobin

I don't think he can - he knew there were special circumstances with Gorgon that allowed him to be able to be taught. That said, it's worth a go. I do think the hints to Lute's special skill, and Hayou's father's skill being referenced by the Artonans in the way it is gives me hope. It would be a bit strange if two of his roommates qualified for being Knights though.

Andrew Tobin

Especially if the commendation in some way implies that he's more stable to chaos.

Box Jellyfish

So the death flags for Lexi's boat were red herrings; Alden doesn't have to go anywhere, the disaster is coming to him. One thing that puzzles me is the timing. Assuming all the viewpoints are running in parallel then why is the chaos warning coming well after the demon fight started? The bomb is still ticking on the sub so what triggered the tsunami warning? What does a tsunami look like on an artificial island with no continental shelf? I'm not giving up on Jacob and Mina just yet. At some point soon I think we see our holidaying Knights show the Avowed just how stupidly powerful affixed wizards can be, and plucking some stranded kids off the bottom of the Pacific seems like a good opener before the chaos gets going.

Mason Bially

If Alden ends up interacting with the knights it's possible Klein would get a front row display of them mentioning "highest commended human" offhandedly around him. Since one part of Klein's issue is distrusting the commendation. It would be small movement on the relationship not a big step, but it could be why Sleyca picked him to be bus driver.

Andrew Tobin

Good news, I've travelled back in time from the future MAJOR NOT A SPOILER: It turns out that Alden is not a rabbit at all, and is a human boy!

Anonymous

I would argue Klein is there to take the classmates away when Alden inevitably decides to try and do something about the situation. I can see him taking the Knight uniform out of the Wardrobe to trigger that alarm Mother mentioned and get some extra Knights disptched to Earth.

David Burchfield

Also I think the submerged was originally on the Libra. Depending on how he stole it Aulia may be implicated or blamed as well (even if she had no idea) which could put Lute in an awkward position of having to defend her from the one untrue allegation.

Mason Bially

He also doesn't do it all class. Only half of it. So he can aim for the sessions where a single entruster of both items is possible.

Sal

"If she didn’t have some nasty talent lurking on her profile, she’d have shared it. And if she’s got a nasty talent, she’s an idiot. Everyone knows if you’re going for the next-gen-nice kind of Sway you don’t pick things that will scare other people off.” Alden was guessing that was something island kids knew. He’d never lived the kind of life where he had to think about it himself. But it did make sense. We all assumed this meant she wasn't an island kid, but it turns out she is one. Maybe if she survives we'll find out why she picked scary talents.

Heather White

If Jacob makes it out alive, I doubt he’ll need the talk anymore. No more running away.

Andrew Tobin

Pan camera to Jeffy staring at the oncoming tsunami, suddenly grabs Reinhard and starts smooching. Astrid standing at the side annoyed.

Obran

Would like to point out that Lute’s mother and Grandwitch live on a boat, and moored in a harbor is not a good place to be during a tsunami

Andrew Tobin

It's all good BM, everyone has those things they miss or misremember. We either get reminded of them, or we move on in blissful ignorance ;)

Cyrus McEnnis

Astrid likely texting her super-sisters saying "water kiss whoosh racoons!"

NonuvfOorbiz

> for what fell like hours -> for what felt like hours

Cyrus McEnnis

Against that, Anesidora is an artificial island system. Depending how it's constructed, the harbour might be abyssal in depth, which would tend to mitigate things. If it's shallow though, yeah you're not wrong.

Chris

I'm personally rooting for the Intensity 99 option of Alden's wizardness being revealed to the public during the disaster. Because Stu already knows about the commendation, but news of Alden being a wizard getting out to the public before getting summoned to The Rapports would be mwah /chefskiss

5haun

I totally forgot about that. The investigation will inevitably lead to Jacob’s connection to Hazel, and therefore the Velra Submerger. That may also reveal the Manon murder if cops are looking into the Velda’s after a disaster. This arc and its implications are going to be wiiiiild

Heather White

Whew! Thank goodness. I was starting to worry that something really bad might be happening.

Saaski

The fight starts, the boat sinks. Fight ongoing, the drama on the boat is happening. Cut to Alden, [Warning! Intensity level rising!!] Was the sequence as I took it

Saaski

I like the thought of the kids getting saved like that!

Chris

what doesn't work on earth? Intensity 99 to Alden isn't just the Knight wardrobe Tab option (that is disabled on Earth) if that's what you were referring to.

Aspiring Moth

there are only 4 S rank chainers velras. they need to be an s rank chainer for mass bestowal. if one of them died it would be Hikari or Orpheus presumably. I can't see Aulia dying and it definitely isn't Lute. Orpheus isn't responsible enough for this so probably Hikari

Furfande

Not how this works. It's less likely to land when stacked, not when used in succession.

Heather White

“It had broken through in the spot where such things should break through if they were going to” So, is ‘the spot where such things should break through’ something created/induced by the Artonans for demons to come through for the battle exercise, or was it always there? Because I’m wondering if that spot where things break through is where the scratching sounds Will mentioned are coming from.

ImNotHere

Jacob is done for except a miracle, he does not have Fragile Atmosphere Last word from the boat : So that’s what it looks like, Jacob thought. It looks like that when you use your once-in-a-lifetime Contract signing bonus. “Did you…?” Riley asked. “I took a device identification offering.” Jacob’s voice sounded distant in his own ears. “Everyone said it was so much more useful. For a Wright.”

Temp One

I'll be interested to see if Alden's commendation has any bearing on how the system treats him in this disaster. Like, yes, he does have serious chops for surviving a low chaos zone for over half a year. But at the end of the day, he's still a 16 year old kid recovering from a traumatic experience on a strange new island without much understanding of their safety protocols. Given he didn't recognize what the Chaos Siren was. Like maybe Klein will point him out as a cool head in a crisis, and task him with helping organize the students out of there. But given Alden's trauma and the schools apparent worry he's still not 100%, Klein could just as easily sideline him as someone who could potentially snap. The most I really expect is that if the situation goes pear shaped, Alden will rise to the occasion.

Tungsten

daaaaaaamn!

David Burchfield

So... I just took a nap and had a crazy dream. Worries about the Unavowed and Children on Anisidora being exposed to Chaos were fresh in my mind. Disaster is unfolding in Cinematic Glory as "For the Damaged Coda" builds sinister dread in the background, an explanation of the third law of thermodynamics and its connection to the Chaos Problem drones a mashup of actual memories and a Cheerful Lecture Delivered by Joe with a mocking undertone. Alden buys another Red Lab Coat explaining how it is also for works in Chaos Labs and the information quickly goes viral through Anisidora the background music gradually shifts to the hopeful strains of "Star Sky" as fabulously wealthy Rabbits buy the coat en masse to shield vulnerable as sea of brilliant red covers Anisidora (not unlike the invasive lily pads in the the famous illustration of exponential growth). Cut to the aftermath, yes there was Chaos and Destruction but nowhere near as bad as it could be, the opening(and only the opening) to "100 Anos De Solidad" by Subze plays. Meanwhile on Artona III Joe notices a massive spike in his Argold Holdings and begins Plotting on how to regain his "Distinguished" Title and confused but happy smile on his face. Then somehow after actually reaching a good break point I wake up with the irresistible urge to put all this down and share it before the dream fades, all the while dreading if any of it will make sense once I fully wake up and reread it tomorrow morning.

Anonymous

If you have warning you can take the boat out to sea, where tsunamis are largely a non-issue. Depends on how far off the island is I guess.

Chris

I really, REALLY love the idea of the Hot Lab Coats going viral and selling like crazy, if Alden explains them having unlisted chaos resistance AND being waterproof! (and Joe getting a lot of funds out of nowhere haha)

Obbu

Wonder if he can ask the system to make it blue :P guess it depends on whether they're rapidly fabricated, since they match the exact sizing and all that. But yeah, if they're sitting in a warehouse somewhere, he's probably stuck with red.

Terrestrial_Biped

I kind of wonder if there *is* a meaningful plan. Will said that he changed his mind. And he gave us some real nice crazy talk about things scratching at the door nobody else could feel. I wonder if he got whammied either by the demon, or by the chaos itself? And this is the result.

Kim Enteiu

That could be the in-world explanation for why that region was always a dead zone, it was the place chaos tried to reach through & all natural life evolved to avoid it. Except humans. Then again humans are the same species that said poison pain peppers? How do we make them hotter so we can eat them to hurt ourselves when we want to feel something.

Obbu

As a counterpoint: For me, fragile atmosphere was definitely stuck in my head from when it first mentioned, because I considered it an implication of upcoming adventures in space, for Alden, and at the time it seemed like an important lore drop. Wasn't expecting underwater :P But yeah - I had no issue recalling it (or the other option - wardrobe change spell - either, for that matter). It's definitely been a while since we've seen mention of it, though.

Temp One

I think the sequence shown in the story is the actual sequence. SAL likely timed their escape to coincide precisely with the fight at Matadero, and had their escape route go through the area with full knowledge that the system would go down and create a huge blind spot for Amesidorian authorities. Given that the timing of the fight is a closely guarded secret, it seems clear that SAL has friends on, or near, the Anesidorian high council. Additionally, given how Jacob procured a Submerger ridiculously easily from the Velras. All while being chauffeured by the Velras. I suspect Aulia could be that high ranking SAL sympathizer. If not actually part of the leadership. Coming back to the timeline though. While I think the events in the story happen more or less in sequence, I suspect they don't happen immediately back-to-back. When the Siren goes off, I suspect the boat at that point had breached the shield holding back the chaos. And the bomb on the boat exploded. The system could likely have made that notice message when the chaos had spread out from Matadero into regions outside where the system was still active. Along with tidal wave waters from the magical explosion.

Obbu

I've been thinking about Jeffy's underwater rapid ascent/descent power thingy for a few chapters - and considering the overall flavour of where the story is going underwater and such: I do kind of hope that Sleyca has a familiarity with how "the bends" occurs, or at least has something attached to the power that protects folks that Jeffy rescues in that fashion from being adversely affected by rapid pressure changes, pressure injuries and decompression sickness. I'm not a diver myself, but might be relevant, depending on what he ends up doing during this crisis.

Zenopath (AEV)

It says beware of possible Tsunami, which implies that the system or the government is aware of bomb, but that it hasn't detonated yet, because if it had, the Tsunami would be confirmed. Just a thought, but is anyone on Earth better at preventing a bomb detonation than Alden? Could be that system (or the knights) will ask him to volunteer, teleport him on to boat and grab that bomb. Possibly also help teleport everyone off the boat, as they are in a chaos zone and they might need to be preserved before they can be safely teleported. Holding a bomb and three people should be possible for Alden. Also speculation, but I bet turning on Fragile Atmosphere was what allowed the system to detect exactly where the boat is. Either that or the system needed orders from the knights before taking action, so them receiving that message triggered the system to start looking for the boat. Also also, if Alden does grab the bomb he will probably have to be teleported somewhere far from civilians and near people who can help... Like Matadore Island.

glow

Alden cannot take the knight uniform out while he's on Earth. It's only available on Artona iirc.

Guus van der Borg

@Gregory Yeah, humans seem to be the most 'artonan' aliens they have ever encountered. I wouldn't be surprised if humans instantly shot up way high in the 'favorite aliens' poll as soon as they encountered us. I bet Artonans are going to invest heavily in humans just because our physiology and culture aligns so much.

TexNox

If the system was down for those on the boat how did they activate fragile atmosphere. You can use skills without a system, Alden showed that on Thegund but it required effort to metaphysically reach inside his affixion and manually activate them.

Andrew Tobin

Ooh, I wonder how good Gloom’s weather control could work on this? Maybe we’ll get to see her in action?

Ilia Ciolac

There are classes that probably do things on natural level, like Manon for example. I doubt that she will lose her ability to analyse people if there will be no system. I am pretty sure she won’t lose any of her abilities.

Andrew Tobin

To give Alden a bit more of a warning via Tuyet, so he has a hint where this warning is coming from maybe?

Andrew Tobin

Given Joes taste in friends, he probably already knows some of Lute’s family.

ImNotHere

At 1 million $ a pop (without the express delivery), I doubt he could buy it for everybody. Except if Ro-den losing his title reduced the value of the coat ch 25 : "Finally, he was left with his finger hovering over a possible third purchase. It was one of the million dollar pieces. "

Zenopath (AEV)

Possibly the system can reach into the temporary system free zone. The moon Thegund had a broken system. The Artorians there initially thought the system had simply withdrawn from the area, which would have been like a temporary power outage, and were upset to learn the system actually broken down, (power plant explosion). They are two different scenarios.

Kim Enteiu

The door shakes and buckles silently. Again. Again. Cue Duality by Slipnot and they finally break in. The whole scene plays out like a silent movie, black & white except for splashes of red & the submerger. The death. The submerger shifting forwards. The stylus breaking. The injection and his body hitting the floor. The panic in the background as the camera spins to Will’s perspective as he pulls out his detector and focuses on every broken thing coming back to the stylus 3 separate times. Empathic gesturing in the background. His hands making sharp gestures. Someone points at the injector and the unconscious form. Stillness. A hand slaps the middle of a chest and silver sparkles as fragile atmosphere activates. Then another. Camera pans back to Will, he looks at the detector in his hands, back to the girls, his lips move, he shrugs.

James Townsend

God damn I love the story.

Solarnis

Interesting to see all the theories. I also think Tuyet's brother swayed Will but my theory was more of a mind swap. Her brother swapped with Will so he could go out and see the world but went nuts due to feeling the chaos rift(?) forming. After setting the boat on course, he needed to fall unconscious to swap back to his owm body. Mina's targetting hit Will while he was in the other body which causes the message to Tuyet but it'll be swapped back her real brother around when she calls. Potentially, part of the system or authority was affected by the swap? I'm thinking the purpose of Sways are to help knights so swapping with a knight after affixation could help if there were other supporting skills. Bit far fetched now that I've typed it all out but that's one of the things I like about this story, some crazy theories sound almost plausible.

Ilia Ciolac

Too much my hero academia in this comment. Hope we won’t have outcome like this 🤒

Terrestrial_Biped

@Sashani: If Tuyet's brother was prone to puppeteering people, I don't think he'd be in a low-security facility.

Terrestrial_Biped

I think if Tuyet's brother was prone to puppeteering people, he wouldn't be in a low-security facility snuggled under a quilt. Nor, if he was actively controlling someone, would he be randomly texting Tuyet in what may have been an incoherent warning.

Desidia

I think some demons have Sway powers and that's why there are Sway Avowed, to fight psychic demons.

Terrestrial_Biped

I think if Tuyet's brother was prone to puppeteering people, he wouldn't be in a low-security facility snuggled under a quilt. Nor, if he was fully in control, would he be randomly texting Tuyet in what may have been an incoherent warning. I think he's just a sensitive. Someone with an ability like Boe's, but he hears thoughts instead of emotions. Either it broke him, or he was injured some other way and now he can't control it properly. And he was in range to overhear three teens mentally screaming for their lives - one louder than the others.

Terrestrial_Biped

I think if Tuyet's brother was prone to puppeteering people, he wouldn't be in a low-security facility snuggled under a quilt. Nor, if he was fully in control, would he be randomly texting Tuyet what was probably an incoherent attempted warning. I think he's just a sensitive. Someone with an ability like Boe's, but he hears thoughts instead of emotions. Either it broke him, or he was injured some other way and now he can't control it properly. And he was in range to overhear three teens mentally screaming for their lives - one louder than the others.

Desidia

I'm worried that his clumsy wordchain debt is going to hit him out of nowhere. It's not exactly the most stable of wordchains.

David Burchfield

I could be misunderstanding, but I think one of the preconditions for the bends is absorbing extra nitrogen over time when breathing specialized air while under pressure from being at deep depths in Scuba diving. I am not sure it would even apply if someone was just holding their breath or using magic to breath.

David Burchfield

It would give an excellent reason why the Artonans insist on it being a class. Reader powers might be really useful for communication in a Chaos Zone, or predicting where Demons could bust through.

maledei

I don't think his skills required more effort. He used his BOAB skill just fine without the system. I fact he was preserving the girls right as the system went down, and there was no problem with him doing that. The metaphysical effort was in going beyond his skills

Terrestrial_Biped

The "somebody watching" feeling actually echoes something Alden said about *his* experiences in the chaos field on Thegund. From ch. 41: |||Alden tried to come up with a metaphor for the sensation of the trait’s activation so that he could make it sensible and repeatable, but the best description he could manage for himself was that it was the opposite of a feeling he’d had before. That creeping sensation when you walked down a dark alley and felt like someone was watching you…activating the trait himself was somehow giving him the opposite of that.||| As for Tuyet's brother, if he was prone to puppeteering people, he wouldn't be in a low-security facility snuggled under a quilt. Nor, if he was fully in control of himself, would he be randomly texting Tuyet what was probably an incoherent attempted warning.

Terrestrial_Biped

I think if Tuyet's brother was prone to puppeteering people, he wouldn't be in a low-security facility snuggled under a quilt. Nor, if he was fully in control, would he be randomly texting Tuyet what was probably an incoherent attempted warning. I think he's just a sensitive. Someone with an ability like Boe's, but he hears thoughts instead of emotions. Either it broke him, or he was injured some other way and now he can't control it properly. And he was in range to overhear three teens mentally screaming for their lives - one louder than the others.

Terrestrial_Biped

I think if Tuyet's brother was prone to puppeteering people, he wouldn't be in a low-security facility snuggled under a quilt. Nor, if he was fully in control, would he be randomly texting Tuyet what was probably an incoherent attempted warning. I think he's just a sensitive. Someone with an ability like Boe's, but he hears thoughts instead of emotions. Either it broke him, or he was injured some other way and now he can't control it properly. And he was in range to overhear three teens mentally screaming for their lives - one louder than the others. @Tarim - could be a lot of things. He could be how the System got warning of events from beyond its borders. He could be a precog instead of a mind reader. He might be important later, and this is just our first introduction to him. He could be a grim prophecy of what might happen to Boe. My current best guess is that he's the sole surviving witness to what happened below the waves.

Terrestrial_Biped

I think millions of Avowed are plenty enough to move the System. And that a chaos outbreak in its front yard is exactly what it exists to counter. I think that the most likely explanation is that this plan only entered Will's mind when he entered the chaos field. Note how imbalanced he seemed; he was talking about scratching at the door that no one else could feel. He even said that he "changed his mind"; I wonder if something else changed it for him. I think he was originally on that boat only for his stated purpose: to escape Anesidora.

Curtis

Alden started vomiting at the mere thought of having to affix again in the next year. I put the chances of him EVER teaching an avowed how to sense authority at approximately zero.

Terrestrial_Biped

I think that the most likely explanation is that this plan only entered Will's mind when he entered the chaos field. Note how imbalanced he seemed; he was talking about scratching at the door that no one else could feel. He even said that he "changed his mind"; I wonder if something else changed it for him. I think he was originally on that boat only for his stated purpose: to escape Anesidora.

CentaureHeart

@John Anastacio : Few Avowed means not enough to protect the whole population, I would think. And since it's 0.7% for humans. Whereas Artonians have a 20% capable of doing Magic.

Aron Lehofer

I am 100% sure they dream, it’s been said multiple times how scarily similar humans are to Artonans.

Gregory

It’s a good point that they must have friends in high places if they intended to match the Matadero timing but I really doubt it’s Aulia. We have a pretty good idea of her goal, probably, and it requires stability.

skewness7

Being realistic, it is too soon in the story, and in the development of Alden, for him to preserve a wright bomb for a sizable period of time, some seconds maybe. That is the main problem I see but the setting, and the powers introduced, are flexible enough that they could reach there in time: Jacob stressed a couple times their lack of info, they do not know where they are or how long it will be until they reach somewhere; there is a shield around matadero that we do not know how it works; a few chapters ago a speedster (curiously a friend of Haoyu's parents) was introduced with short range teleportation, we do not know how much she could spam it, or if there are even stronger speedters (it is mentioned she is not a hyperbole) with better teleports.

John Anastacio

CentaureHeart - Possible. I gather the number and the percentage of Avowed are growing, though, so I don't know what the Artonans have to worry or complain about.

Gregory

It is an extremely expensive magic boat. But it’s possible that part of its price and defenses was, say, a submerger which has gone mysteriously missing…

Aron Lehofer

Being stuck in traffic on a huge bridge seems like a bad place to be AND the bridge probably doesn’t count as ground, so Alden’s in trouble lol. Get that Red Coat my man, you’ll need it.

Terrestrial_Biped

Mina had perfectly reasonable explanations for why she had trouble controlling Will. He's an A-rank (higher rank Avowed are harder to effect), her relaxation power wasn't the strongest, she'd already used it a bunch and it might be worn out. I don't think we need a rival Sway to make sense of this. The bomb was probably for SAL and intended for some other purpose. Which does not speak well of them, but still; the boat was full of all kinds of precious supplies. Weapons, potions, spell ingredients, stickers. I think that the most likely explanation is that this plan only entered Will's mind when he entered the chaos field. Note how imbalanced he seemed; he was talking about scratching at the door that no one else could feel. He even said that he "changed his mind"; I wonder if the demon or the chaos itself changed it for him. I think he was originally on that boat only for his stated purpose: to escape Anesidora.

CentaureHeart

Goddamn, stress level 100%. Amazing chapter. There has to be a connection between Tuyet's brother and Will messing with the ship. It might be a terrorist attack to prove the importance of Avowed but if that were the case an attack on the general population would be much more "useful". Kinda glad that Klein is with the students, guess he'll see that Alden has what ir takes now. Thanks for the chapter!

Gregory

If it’s genuinely a chaos event then Alden is one of the only ways we have seen to protect non-avowed from the effects. Maybe this is weaker than Thegund, maybe other avowed have powers that protect from chaos in different ways, maybe some very wealthy rabbit starts pulling chaos resistant lab coats out of thin air (but only Alden really knows it’s chaos resistant).

Gremlin

Did I miss it or are we guessing who brought the bomb on board and for what? For all I know the captain planned to place the bomb and Will tried to stop him.

Terrestrial_Biped

Will is an A-rank with about twenty years more experience than Mina the baby S-rank. It's entirely plausible that he has enough authority of his own to hold out against her a good long while.

Gregory

When Earth was telling Alden about the affixation bonuses it mentioned that two of them were less reliable than claimed - the bonus attributes broke down under the chaos strain and the wardrobe spell requires the system. That implies that the third option was more reliable - fragile atmosphere seems like something which would be most important during system issues (especially since emergency teleports exist).

CentaureHeart

I don't know for magic but you can get the bends from free diving, just need to get deep enough or if you dive a lot of times with no breaks in between dives.

Gregory

Alden knows how long wordchain debt takes to kick in. He’s good about paying things back before there’s danger of them snapping. He tracks this wordchain in his book and shares it with Lute. Seems very unlikely for it to suddenly kick in without a Hazel (or a wizard) helping.

ImNotHere

He was exhausted (but not like in the lab) at the end of the course That was before they departed from campus at 8 that was itself before the dinner and the mall (the busses door closed at 12:05 + drive) Alden skill should be fully rested but Alden would indeed have to lift the bus

Terrestrial_Biped

Will is an A-rank with about twenty years more experience than Mina the baby S-rank. It's entirely plausible that he has enough authority of his own to hold out against her a good long while. I think that the most likely explanation is that this plan only entered Will's mind when he entered the chaos field. Note how imbalanced he seemed; he was talking about scratching at the door that no one else could feel. He even said that he "changed his mind"; I wonder if the demon or the chaos itself changed it for him. I think he was originally on that boat only for his stated purpose: to escape Anesidora. Also note, if Will had a plausible plan that was likely to kill two Knights together with dozens of high-ranked decorated Avowed, cause a chaos outbreak, and endanger millions more, the System probably would have stepped in with a timely word in the right ears. It can mind read; we don't know how much it does that, but it can, and it could have noticed the plot. For all that it's "costly" to break privacy rules, this probably would have been worth it.

Obbu

Again I'm not a diver: so my understanding is a bit sketchy :P And I assume none of us have magic :D My basic understanding is to do with breathing while you're down there, before ascending rapidly, and the compressed gases in your lungs/blood are suddenly under less pressure, so they cause problems. My cursory googling on the bends has people saying that there's a number of contributing factors like ascending too fast, diving too often in a short period, long duration dives and deeper dives. There's also other forms of 'barotrauma', due to the air in lungs/sinus/ears expanding rapidly. Regarding rapid descent, there's apparently a potential issue with sinus/ear pressure regulation, ruptured eardrums etc, but not so much the bends. I think that whether or not it applies to Jeffy using his ability on someone will probably depend on the circumstances (as well as the magic shenanigans going on with something like in the case of the submerger, regarding pressure etc). Or if Jeffy's ability just also protects the target from decompression, then that works too :P But yeah, I literally don't know anything about what I'm talking about - just thought it was a relevant subject :D

Terrestrial_Biped

I think if Tuyet's brother was prone to puppeteering people, he wouldn't be in a low-security facility snuggled under a quilt. Nor, if he was fully in control, would he be randomly texting Tuyet what was probably an incoherent attempted warning. I think he's just a sensitive. Someone with an ability like Boe's, but he hears thoughts instead of emotions. Either it broke him, or he was injured some other way and now he can't control it properly. And he was in range to overhear three teens mentally screaming for their lives - one louder than the others. Will, though. Will was IN the chaos field. I think it got to him.

Mack

I think it's too soon for the pacing on this but maybe maybe!

Terrestrial_Biped

And we have precedence for magic bombs being amplified by the right combination of nearby ingredients. Remember what Kibby made out of Joe's "remodeling" bomb?

Mack

I'm with you Ciolac-- I feel like so many commenters are stuck on always seeing epic shonen style reveals when that hasn't been this story.

Benjamin Collins

So maybe all sways can feel chaos?

CentaureHeart

I hope we see Jeff at work but I doubt he's going to be the focus of the next few chapters

Wiggles1

If Joe has a controlling share in the company still, Alden could make an emergency call about the PR value of a "99% off sale"

Bbyh

To be fair, our brains release happy juice when it thinks our body's on fire. Granted, I'm not sure that's better

GryphonKnight

Quote Now that is truly a hope. Esh-erdi worried about humans a little more than he wanted to. So many of them. So few Avowed among them. So similar to us. End quote After rereading, I think "us" is specifically the Knights Quote What a fearful marvel Earth was. And what a terrible responsibility. End quote The "terrible responsibility" could be anything but it seems to be a teacher providing instructions to students We know Kibby's teacher took her responsibility very seriously and only provided Joe with video lessons because everyone owes the old, and powerful, Joe favors 🔲

CentaureHeart

I would actually think that it's the reverse of what Jacob's father says that actually happen. Authority is the self, what you are. A person sure of what they are would have more Authority in my opinion. Of course, this is not all that it is, and there seems to be some genetic factor (which I wonder how Jacob's father explains).

Slightly Morbid

Maybe the plan was to bomb the heroes that contained the chaos field, causing it to be enlarged and forcing the evacuation of Anesidora. Classic terrorism to achieve political goals.

Desidia

I guess, after the sirens, the people on the bus will calmly go into shelters or something. It's not like Alden's going to be in prolonged combat for days rights now. But... I guessing, he's going to sleep in his red labcoat tonight.

Fabian

Someone has to built it. That makes at least two people.

Slightly Morbid

Been some years since I did diving and only have about fifty dives or so, but your summary is about correct. Other factors are that you shouldn't dive after having been flying or mountain hiking as it would have an effect on the difference of air pressure. And when diving, you need to constantly equalise the pressure on the way down in the same way some need to do when sitting in a descending plane. Jeffy's lifejacket spell would need to be able to handle factors that a too fast ascend would under normal circumstances need a decompression chamber. His sink and surface would have to be able to handle that for him too. Under normal circumstances you shouldn't ascend or descend too quickly and you have a divers watch to help you with the calculations and give warning when you don't follow the safety protocols.

GryphonKnight

Fragile atmosphere is most likely a one use enchantment Any part of your affixation can be used without the System For a signing bonus, Alden chose a larger foundation point enchantment instead of fragile atmosphere 🔲

Fabian

Didn't we have two Knights literally talking in the chapter?

GryphonKnight

WIZARD / KNIGHT INSTRUCTOR ALDEN Mother already said Alden accidentally becoming a Wizard was so astronomically unlikely, that the next most likely human to become an accidental Wizard was not even worth discussing NOTES Alden glanced down at his auriad. “I’m not…the only human Avowed with an authority sense, am I?” ... “You’re currently running so far ahead of a very small pack that I see no point in you considering the other racers.” He shook his head. “That can’t be right. I’ve only studied magic for a few months.” “Doggedly. In an environment with just the right amount of corruption. With a dedicated training partner. After receiving an ideal boon from a member of the only other species Artonans have ever encountered that could be said to have true natural talent for magic. It’s not even a replicable experiment.” Not sure if the mentioned boon is the BoAB advice, the Gremlin, or both 🔲

GryphonKnight

PROSTATE YOUR SUPERB OWL :-) Word chains are the oldest magic Humans are in the very small group of Avowed that can chain No wonder they prostate to Lute :-) WIZARD BIOLOGY Seriously though, Humans appear to be a small group of currently discovered Resource World with a species similar to the Wizards ( enough to have sex? ) GREMLIN While Gorgon seems to consider the lack of Wizards an improvement ( maybe most Wizards set off the Gremlin ) 🔲

Torauth

Prediction : Can see Tsunami knocking the bus off the bridge into the water and Alden being hero by preserving it against Chaos.

GryphonKnight

Sounds like she has two brothers Quote message from my brother. The oldest one. He’s a Sway, and he’s not…completely well. He lives on a residential ship. Sometimes he does strange things End quote 🔲

GryphonKnight

ENHANCED EXPLOSION Totally forgot about this Kibby mentions too many strong enchantments when she suggests increasing the distance between them and the booby trapped lab Submerger + Wright Bomb = Island defenses breached = loose demon NOTES “Maybe I should not have asked you to add the Literan generators to the main lab yesterday. I felt very angry, though,” Kibby said. ... “We’re pretty far away,” he said. “Didn’t we agree we should be at least in the general area to make it easier for people coming to rescue us to find—” “We should be farther.” “Okay.” No arguing with the bomb maker about the bomb she’d made. 🔲

GryphonKnight

It's possible "Relax damn you" is why Will took a knock out shot Especially if the Chaos field, and missing System, was agitating Will too much to relax without the shot 🔲

Anonymous

Phew, Jesus Christ. Faster than you can say “demonic invasion”, slice-of-life has turned into sliced-up-by-a-nightmare. Thoughts: 1. Astrid, Reinhard and Jeffy being left behind: I think all three of them are at risk in this chaos situation. Jeffy is of course well positioned as an Aqua Brute to survive / assist people in a tsunami, but I could easy see him trying to rescue Astrid and one or more of them dying, which would be particularly tragic given their burgeoning romance. 2. Finlay: while we’re on topic, I think Finlay is also at risk (presumably on the bus). Ever since it was revealed everything worked out for Finlay exactly as he imagined back in C78 (“I’m going to be the hero I always imagined in my head. ‘If you can just run fast enough,’ I used to think, ‘you can save everyone, can’t you?’”), I have had an inkling his death may be used to illustrate Picard’s saying “It is possible to commit no mistakes and still lose.” But of course, these past chapters of gym time have made us hugely invested in at least a dozen of Alden’s schoolmates, all of whom are at risk (Marsha’s death would be poetically impactful as well, given her arrogant attitude of S-rank superiority). Sleyca has invested the time making us invested in them, and so can afford narratively to feed at least a few of them to defeat for maximum tragedy ☹. Wildbow famously rolled dice in the first conflict in Worm with the Endbringers to see who would die…and Sleyca has given herself that option here as well, given the number and quality of the side characters. 3. “Alden hadn’t bought anything. He’d tried to find something for Stuart, but he wanted a gift that somehow said, “Thank you for the learning cushion and also good luck with that irrevocable life choice you’re about to make”: I’ve been thinking about this a bit, but the only impactful gift that I can think of is Alden (perhaps after asking Stu for a triangle of absolute secrecy) offering the gift of trust by telling him about his own knighthood/wizardness and then discussing Stu’s choice openly. 4. “Having a nightmare on the bus would be unfortunate”: so Alden’s insomnia is both related to trauma-nightmares, and affixation pain. Poor dude ☹ 5. “and he’d run as fast as he could to the car to get her, only to find she wasn’t there”: Alden’s nightmare, sheesh. Themes: not getting somewhere in time (*ahem*…Finlay…); loneliness; chaos; death; heroic failure….I’m afraid this dream might be a bit prophetic Alden… 6. “And what in the name of Boomtown’s Backside are you doing here?”: the silly oaths that avowed use will always tickle me. 7. “Something’s not right. It’s not right at all”: so it’s ended up being two different things she’s sensed. (1) that the System is down. This is actually planned due to the demonic incursion happening currently, so ironically shouldn’t be anything to worry about; and (2) Will going on his murderous rampage and killing the thief and the captain. 8. “I’ve got a bad feeling now,” Mina said. “Like something’s out there in the water watching over my shoulder”: so her Sway powers are I think picking up a higher demon lifeform, one that isn’t sort-of mindless like the centipede. With the System gone, looks like Earth is much more vulnerable to demons and chaos in general. She also might be picking up the interference of another Sway (one that’s already been corrupted by chaos?). 9. Sways: the chapter goes into more fascinating detail about this under-represented faction in the story. But it seems as though they are necessary as there are possible mental manipulators amongst demons that Sways need to counter. 10. “I think he killed the captain and the other one! I think he’s trying to kill all of us!”: Will was on my bingo card last chapter as the thing that might be about to cause the disaster and mess with the Submerger, but still shocking exactly how violent things have suddenly become. 11. “An A I think,” said Riley, glaring at her. “You nasty little…”: Sways – treated badly by many and boy there is a reason for it - Mina is so blasé about using all her powers on other people. Surprising however that she is finding it difficult to control Will – I would have thought S-Sway should be able to, as C-rank Manon controlled other Cs and Ds with ease. I think perhaps an indication that something has already happened to Will. Possibly the scab he was picking at previous chapter is actually a corruption wound?! And he has already been influenced by demonic energy or another Sway, making him more resistant to Mina. 12. “then Matadero’s different now for some reason. Maybe tonight is go night for the big guys, and they’re punching a demon’s lights out”: though she doesn’t believe it, tragically, Riley is actually right! 13. “It’s like it’s firmed up….right after we got the message”: I think this is because Will put the setting on maximum speed going towards Matadero, so it’s firmed up because of the intense pressure being put on it. Looks like the message from the System might have been the trigger for Will to crack. 14. “It’s not like we could have gone too far off course in a few minutes”: I’m afraid Riley, that when shit goes down it goes down fast. 15. Thoughts of Riley, Jacob and Mina as they break in: I think this whole section is beautiful and so moving. Three characters fleshed out in just a few lines so their deaths impact on the reader. And for the record, I think all three of them are doomed. They’ll surely either die in the explosion when the boat hits Matadero, or become demons. 16. “Her father had already bought the ingredients for her birthday dinner. She’d seen them in the fridge last night”: like most people, I’d assumed Mina was a globie, and had gotten stuck with Sway or had chosen talents by mistake which were problematic. Actually sounds like she’s the daughter of avowed. But, given her intense shyness and awkwardness around people, choosing Sway abilities to relax people and potentially disappear from their notice makes complete sense. 17. “Why would the Artonans give real power to someone like me who can think for himself?”: whatever helps you sleep at night and stops you being jealous, Jacob’s dad. 18. “Kick it harder. More. I’m an Avowed. I’ve got power.”/”He’s only an A” vs “I’m so glad I couldn’t talk anyone else into coming on this trip with me”: Anesidoran attitudes of arrogance and rankism vs globie Jacob’s sad acknowledgement that things are likely already FUBAR. 19. “Esh-erdi was watching the battle group below him with both eyes”: the fight is important enough for both sides of his consciousness to focus on. 20. “The two dozen Avowed approached the fight with one of the methods they had decided on days ago”: sounds like Matadero is at least in part a training exercise for the avowed facing demons of simple form and ability, before they’re thrown into wider conflicts in the rest of the universe. Makes sense. 21. “two dozen avowed”: but even this weak demon needs 24 high ranking avowed to kill! 22. “The Contract had withdrawn from this one small patch of Earth for now”: I assume because it would be damaged by the chaos, or perhaps because it needs to depart in order for the demon to break through at all. 23. “the descriptions still left him uncertain about the depth of their understanding. Did they have some sense of what this creature was? Did they feel the becoming and unbecoming? The chaos oozed around it as it struggled against them and the richness of this world they lived in.”: my own depth of understanding is still pretty shallow I must admit. Chapter 131 and we still only have tantalising glimpses of the underlying chaotic/demonic world. Sounds like the demon is trying to force its existence into Earth’s dimension, and “richness” of the world is naturally resisting the chaotic energy? It seems as though the avowed just see it superficially – a giant centipede presumably. Esh-erdi sees it as the outward representation of chaos, which presumably by definition is never bound into one form. 24. “It had broken through in the spot where such things should break through if they were going to”: this is interesting. It sounds like the System has created a specific weak spot in Earth for demons. Either just by leaving this area unsystemed for the moment, or by another design. Obviously too coincidental that the weak spot should be just by Anesidora, so it is deliberate. I have a theory that the System both strengthened Earth against demons, but also weakened it here so Matadero acts as a valve to release demonic energy to Earth’s dimension so it puts less pressure on the Artonans’ dimension. 25. “And the way they used their skills was…workmanlike”: eesh, damning with faint praise, hey Esh-erdi? The way humans use their skills isn’t very impressive to an Artonan, and they really don’t have the ability to appreciate how to use them most holistically, moving “ever closer to perfection” as the Artonans would aim for. 26. “He is interesting,” she said softly….there was a unity of purpose to the choices he had made for himself since being bound”: the exception being Haoyu’s dad! It sounds like, due to the focus of his path, aiming for complete mastery and control of his body so it is impossible to change or damage, he has chosen a course that the Artonans approve of. He hasn’t flipped around grabbing showy skills, just moves closer and closer to a perfectly unyielding body. I worry that being specifically called out here is another death flag though ☹ 27. “His path was simple. Strong. And he was proud of being those things, Esh imagined. Or selfishly hoped”: Sounds like Esh, as a bound knight, feels guilty about forcing binding of authority on others. 28. “It was a path that would protect the one who walked it as he followed it so that he lived long enough to see it widen before him”: what is this widening I wonder? The ultimate aim of avowed/wizards/knights – philosophical or magical or both? 29. “Esh-erdi worried about humans a little more than he wanted to. So many of them. So few Avowed among them. So similar to us. What a fearful marvel Earth was. And what a terrible responsibility”: aghh Sleyca, you are so coy! What does all this mean?! Earth is particularly special even amongst the (dozens? Hundreds?) resource worlds in how close physically/genetically/magically they are to Artonans? Do they think it might become the most important resource world? 30. “His mouth was moving quietly. The word “relax” was the only one loud enough for her to make out”: Tuyet’s Sway brother. Others have suggested that he is the one controlling Will, but I don’t buy it. He is presented more as a damaged, over-sensitive Sway who has been in insolation from society because his talents allow him to pick up thoughts/feelings too intensely to say sane. My guess is that his sensitivity is just picking up the powerful mental orders that Mina is sending, rippling out above the surface. The low-security housing for those who can’t deal with their powers is definitely not mentioned in intake, and presumably not by the System either when people are choosing powers that they might end up not being able to deal with… 31. “He was holding the holographic cube sticker….You can’t feel it, can you? I can feel it. It’s right there, scratching and scratching at the door. Why does everyone on Earth pretend it isn’t there?”: the holographic cube is Matadero (described as a clear cube). Very spooky – my guess is that he is feeling the demonic entities from broken dimensions. Perhaps because he has somehow come into contact with chaos (i.e. the the wound on his hand) and is the early stages of demonifying, which upped his sensitivity? 32. “The Shaper didn’t even have to use a gesture to do it”: a highly levelled A-rank shaper? Or his demonifying is giving him extra skills? 33. “Sorry about the trip. I changed my mind”: what changed his mind and why? Was it Mina’s attempts to relax him that made him give in to the demonic impulses or messed with his self control? Unintentional side effect of sloppy uses of mental magic a la Manon leading to unintended disaster! Or was it just the contact with Matadero – if the captain hadn’t steered them into the area where the system had withdrawn from would everything have been fine? 34. Timing: it is of course too much of a coincidence that the submerger has taken this damaged man into the Matadero area on the very night the demon is being killed, Earth’s dimension is weakened and the System has withdrawn from the area. There has to have been some guiding intelligence behind this all. Cui bono? Obviously the demons. Or is there mysterious factions of avowed who are communicating with demons and would like a little demon invasion as an excuse to gather more power and/or break out of Anesidora? Perhaps Orpheus didn’t so much steal the equipment but was given it by Aulia in order to set this all off? 35. “Will pressed it to his own neck. He spoke a word in Artonan then slumped to the floor”: why has he done this I wonder – just so he doesn’t have to be awake for his impending death? Or the guiding Sway/demon made him so he couldn’t change his mind and perhaps use his object skill to fix the stylus? 36. “Even the thing under the tarp—the thing he was sure was some kind of a Wrightmade bomb—was giving off a small pink glow”: called it! I’m assuming Jacob knows because of his Wright identifying powers. The captain must have thought it was for SAL, but the mysterious factions behind this must have always intended it to be driven into Matadero. 37. “Ihopethisistherightthing. Activate Fragile Atmosphere!”: a pay-off…*counts frantically*…107 chapters in the making! Very telling that both Anesidorans got this as their signing bonus and the globie didn’t. presumably Anesidoran parents know that this is the thing that is most likely to save their lives. 38. “A gasp from above drew a portion of Esh-erdi’s attention”: so this happens immediately after the triggering of the fragile atmospheres. This makes me think this is what alerts the Earth System to the impending attack. My guess is that it is enchanted onto the humans so it can still operate without a System, but is somehow still able to alert Earth whenever it’s used. 39. “Her only function in this place, at this time, was to maintain a mental connection with another Avowed who still stood under the Contract’s shelter. A much surer form of communication in this environment than technology”: more reasons for Sways. 40. “The bus was halfway across the bridge. The traffic was surprisingly heavy for the hour”: so they’re right in the middle of the bridge when the sirens go, surrounded by hundreds of cars and people. Bridges tend to be relatively high up above sea level as these things go so they might not be in immediate risk of the tsunami (unless it’s big enough to just sweep the bridge away). But they’ll have an excellent view of any approaching catastrophe and be open to any demonic attack… 41. “Alden was out of his seat in an instant, ready to move without any clue where or why he should move”: he’s not completely inexperienced, he’s alert and prepared for anything. 42. “And he wasn’t the only one.” – Lexi and Klein. The other two adults (or nearly adults) on the bus. 43. “His eyes were fixed on Lexi, who was standing up in front of his seat, too”: I find this deeply moving. He has complete trust in his brother and is utterly ready to follow his lead. 44. ““We have a chaos siren?” Alden demanded”: I’d be pissed too – why has no one told Alden about this?! Seems to be more glaringly annoying than most unspoken “Anesidoran social dynamics”. 45. “Nobody lose your heads,” Klein said. “Notices should be coming in any second. Stay calm”: Klein definitely one of the best people to have on a bus with you in the event of a demon invasion. 46. “[Disaster Alert: Low Probability of Chaos Exposure]”: Chaos exposure. Will this kill any non-avowed on Anesidora very quickly, like on Thegund? Will it demonify any children of avowed with high chaos potential (which they are likely to have)? Will it demonise various animals or sea creatures? I don’t think Alden has prepared his go-bag yet, given he thought he still had months left before summoning. Perhaps he’ll immediately buy another Hot Lab coat to protect himself from chaos? 47. “[Disaster Alert: Oceanic Anomalies – Imminent. Avoid seawater. Seek high ground. Beware of possible tsunami.]”: i expect the anomalies are demons (or at least sea creatures warped by chaos) or perhaps weather changes, tides of polluted water or rotting plantlife ….Lexi’s boat may still be a casualty even if it’s not taken out by the gang onto the open water! I have no idea where the next chapter is going to go – let chaos reign.

GryphonKnight

Preservation is different from entrustment Alden drops preservation all the time to alters his rope Initially, Alden loses entrustment when he stops moving 🔲

Marlkaz

"From the a member of the only other species with natural talent for magic" refers to Gorgon, so it's the gremlin / associated authority upgrade.

GryphonKnight

@Duncan In the Wright shop, you need an explosives license to purchase some supplies just sitting on the shelf :-) Probably next to the spicy jerky with lots of kick :-) 🔲

AC

if there is a widespread disaster it is a golden opportutnity for Manon to return and "die"

Marlkaz

I think the 'crazy person can sense chaos as an itch' thing may be the reason they are crazy - if they have enough authority-realm sense to remotely detect chaos, they may have some sense of their own affixation, which is known to be suicide-inducingly uncomfortable and would be especially confusing / sanity damaging without any explanation. The specific manner of crazy, scratching the back of his hand like he wants to get out of his own skin, makes sense with that.

GryphonKnight

OMNISCIENT NARRATOR Kay Eiffel: Little did he know that this simple, seemingly innocuous act would result in his imminent death - quote from _Stranger Than Fiction_ Which actually works well since Earth S's planetary AI, and Contract, are effectively Omniscient and super intelligent DETECTOR FLASHLIGHT and maybe, the occasional piece of fiction. And we must remember that all these things, the nuances, the anomalies, the subtleties, which we assume only accessorize our days, are in fact here for a much larger and nobler cause. They are here to save our lives. I know the idea seems strange, but I also know that it just so happens to be true. And so it was a wristwatch saved Harold Crick - quote from _Stranger Than Fiction_ Maybe the flashlight saves Jacob? 🔲

Mack

My assumption-- maybe wrong-- was that they were snuggling it off like they were the drugs. You cant easily get wright made equipment like the bomb off the island. Same for the drugs. Hard to get elsewhere but easy on the island.

GryphonKnight

@Steve Maybe Manon can share her copy of _Handbook for the Recently Deceased_ by Handbook for the Recently Deceased Press with Jacob 🔲

Andrew Tobin

Yeah, I agree, but he was searching around for something, and got fixated on the label with the cube hologram… which I guess is of the materoro cube? Maybe that fixation prompted him, even if it wasn’t brainwashing… just the chaos driving him.

Mack

Great commentary! If any kids get demonified I bet you Lexi and Kon freak out. Their kid sister is off the island I think (right?) but I bet this fear was never remotely on their radar.

Ilia Ciolac

I mostly disliked the part where commentators really want to see kids fighting chaos or being in the middle of the dangerous area. All of them at once can’t even touch Klein in training room. Why would they put these basically students in danger, when they are not ready at all. All I expect is that these kids will be send to the evacuation zone as anyone else on the island that is not hero/ powerful avowed. Even if it’s Jeffy(if we forget that he is not the smartest person) , who is aqua brute. Unlike my hero academia where kids are being thrown constantly to fight deadly opponents

GryphonKnight

@Beheaded Sleyca says she put a lot of extra time, and effort, into the Mother chapters Every time I reread those chapters , I discover something new or something that makes sense with info from later chapters Some of Sleyca's best writing 🔲

Anon-Anon

I actually think (and hope) haoyus dad lives because he was the only one mentioned/pointed out.

Anon-Anon

@zenopath kind of reminds me of that one person in worm whatshername cherish(?)

Anon-Anon

@Fruits If the atmospheric pressure works "correctly" or like physics, it being "indestructible" and 100 times less dense than the outside water pressure would in theory send them sailing upwards rapidly (depends on slecya and however they want to write it ig)

Anon-Anon

It's starting to remind me of Magicules in slime regarding the effects on people's "self/authority" (except chaos can't be used to cast magic)

David lance

MAY CHAOS TAKE THE WORLD!

GryphonKnight

@Mack I agree The Wright shop even had supplies sitting on the shelf that needed an explosives license ... ... or was that the Spicy Jerky :-) 🔲

Jason Best

Holy shit. I still have ptsd from the lady chaos incursion. Shit's about to get real.

Alex

Well, so she does have mind control skills. Soothing could be helpful for heroes, but its not worth the drama of having a sway hero in your town. People don't like mind control even if its semi positive. Plus she obviously has no self control and proper decency making people sleepy just so she can have a quieter rest. Thats absolutely irresponsible behavior and should disqualify her from jobs and powers. Like Hazel. She also abused her powers.

Anon-Anon

I think for a tsunami to be caused it'd need to be a 6.5+ magnitude earthquake in scale. To put it in perspective the Tsar bomber (thw worlds largest tested nuke) is 100Mega ton of tnt and it was tested half yield at 50MT. A 6.5 Magnitude earth quake is roughly equal to about 1,657 megatons of TNT

Second Raddish

The healer that took care of Alden had a natural aura that calmed homies in the vicinity. Could there be a sway version with this effect that would be acceptable to use at will?

Anonymous

So while we're all hanging off the edge of a cliff here, anyone got any ideas as to why everyone on the Submerger only got a single blockade warning? That's the only part of the chapter that I can't quite understand, since supposedly there should be multiple warnings the closer they get to the restricted area, but they only got one. I assume the warnings come *before* the area where the system cuts off, but then how is the submerger already in the area with no system?

Anonymous

He loses preservation, not entrustment. It shows up in the mishnen chapter when he preserves Stu-art'h

Ers20

Agreed, I think. But she's also fifteen... Probably a good example of why giving ethically complicated superpowers to semi-randomly selected teenagers isn't ideal!

Elessar Beverly

Aight, no cap Aulia didn’t have a hand in planning this. Or at the very least, Orpheus. With these kinda ramifications I’m not believing he just gave it away for some drugs.

Alex

Sure, she's not an adult, but people use that as an excuse. 15yr olds are totally capable from distinguishing right from wrong. Giving them a little leniency is fine, but excusing the behavior just ends up making them even worse as adults

Mack

Will sent them towards the area where the system is cut off -- they just passed the barrier between system and no system before the second warning arrived, imo.

Blake Noyes

1. I think Jeffy was left behind plot wise just so that Alden’s crew didn’t have an aqua dude present to solve the upcoming problems. I’m not getting the vibe that that group will be in extra danger than anyone else 40. I think the bridge might go tumbling down and the bus go tumbling after

Blake Noyes

Maybe it’s referring to humans having a lot of chaos potential but so few have been turned into avowed, which reduces the risk of

Marlkaz

They were in the area where additional warnings usually come, but the system is temporarily withdrawn because there is a demon fight in progress.

Blorcyn

to point 24 specifically, the alternative is that the Avowed island is there because it's the weak point. We know Sleyca chose point Nemo the most remote area on the planet, with very little life in it. If the richness is stablising, the lack of life (if that's significantly rich) may be why it was all built there. I'm not sure we can conclude which is the reason for the other.

Matt V

I think this all comes down to the timing of their approach. Because the system was pulled down on Matadero at the time of their approach, the area where they'd normally get repeated warnings was devoid of system. The system was only active at the very outer layer where that first warning displays.

cafenacet

I think it's one circle contained within another. The "gives multiple warnings circle" is bigger. Within that is a smaller circle where there's no System. So they're traveling at a speed such that they get one warning and by the time they'd get another they're already within the area with no System.

Swiss Jeez

Yeah, presumably she doesn't tell her unstable sway brother everything. Still fairly close with him though it seems.

John Anastacio

46. I don't know what kind of defenses Anesidora has against chaos. The best safeguard of course would be to teleport all the vulnerable away but that would be extremely expensive I think, and we know the Contracts don't rate human lives as being very valuable. Or maybe I'm misjudging the Artonans and their Contracts. Maybe also teleporting people on the same planet is very cheap.

cafenacet

15/16, this section hits like a truck. Sleyca does an excellent job of writing understated tragedy. I'm thinking back (probably cuz of the nightmare) to the whistle scene, and Alden's talk with Boe about how he considered leaving Kibby. 23: I'm curious if Artonans have other ways of sensing demons. Maybe humans can only see demons with our eyes, while Artonans can feel demons with their authority sense? If you can't feel the demon eroding your affixaiton, I can see why Esh thinks humans only get part of the picture. 26: It sounds like Haoyu's dad is instincively managing the same thing Alden did with the ball catching. Alden intentionally became The Bearer of Burdens; it sounds like Haoyu's dad has intentionally or accidentally created a build that has a strong symbolic resonance and unity of purpose. (Sounds a lot like Icons from Cradle.) 29: This perspective and the hints on Earth are super interesting.

Anonymous

I am not confident in my theory either. I think the theory that he simply heard Mina's "mind shouts" is also a likely explanation. But he could be in a low security facility with puppeteering powers if he has flown under the radar; if nobody knows the true extent of his powers.

Sesharan

God, I can’t wait to see how Alden reacts to those alerts. I keep thinking about it.

AL

No time to rest Alden, it's power levelin time -fate

Janny

Do you think this was the sway that Alden saw at testing that nobody would let use her powers on them? Or was this a different person entirely?

Tori, Writher #1 Fan

@Lauren you're not the only one who remembers that guy. I've never before come across such dramatically displayed misogyny in a patreon comment section.

Alex

Should be the same person. If she didn't have "bad" skills she would've shown her character sheet. And she's the right age. And applying to hero schools.

Anonymous

I think the implication was that Haoyu's dad's path is going to let him survive long enough to get the good stuff. Everyone else is quite squishy. Not necessarily that he has one of the three hundred skills.

Jeremy Goldberg

I’m mostly impatient to see character growth from Alden. I think Alden’s character flaw, from a literary perspective, is his profound desire to fly under the radar. We got a hint of the trauma that caused this during the flashback where he meets Boe for the first time. Often in fiction, the protagonist is forced to confront their flaw by a mentor or sidekick or love interest. I guess I’m eager to see one of those close relationships develop with someone who can challenge Alden and start him along his character arc.

Guus van der Borg

The boat might still bite it offscreen though, I've been told tsunamis are not kind to moored boats. Alternatively, The RoomatesTM going on a quest to save the boat might be the plothook needed to get them near the action.

Duncan Lester

I will say there has been a lot of foreshadowing of Alden needing to preserve a bomb at some point -- carrying one for Joe, talk of the types of rabbit that get the Hot lab coat, a few sus convos with Kibby about bombing the Thegund lab, and the recent speedsters can short range teleport all seem like they're tying up to something.

John D Jones

Klein: Well Alden, you wanted to be a superhero. This is what that means. Alden: Actually I didn't want to be a superhero. Klein: What?! Alden: I just wanted to get the training and leveling to better deal with... stuff like this. I figured that I'd be stuck messing with Chaos for the rest of my probably short life, so I needed to be readier for it.

Kettle

My Super unSupported theory: If no magic is free (word-chains, gremlin, etc) and Artonan magic is based on using your Authority to warp reality, then I wonder if the cost of Artonan magic is that it “weakens reality”, i.e., the barrier between dimensions. So the Artonans start with wordchains and everything is fine. Then they start using magic and eventually weaken the barrier between realities so much that rifts form. These rifts let in incompatible reality that destabilizes things. Eventually demons start coming in from the alternate dimensions and the Artonans realize the need to create a fighting force. Now, the chaos would stop if the Artonans stopped using magic. But they would never do that. So instead, they create a magic contract to enlist other planets to fight for them. But that also spreads the chaos problem to those worlds. So the Artonans severely limit the other world’s magical abilities to slow the creation of rifts. Letting them train and grow until they can handle it themselves. These rifts would naturally form in the location that uses the most magic, which on a low magic planet would be wherever the contract is housed. And on Earth, that place is Matadero.

Partha Peddi

I am guessing that Alden's friends will have a lot of questions for him about chaos field survival, and how to help save others after the tsunami is done. Will they stay on the bridge till the tsunami passes? how long does tsunami take to pass Apex/F city ?

NonuvfOorbiz

Unrelated to this chapter. How is Kon not being constantly summoned? When Artonants break valuable stuff it is very much worth the cost to summon him. And his skill sounds it would be unique or very rare.

Kettle

Klein: “Alden. You have a better chance of getting struck by lightning while cashing in a million argold lottery ticket than ever going to a chaos field again. Listen kid, you’re still hurting because of what happened to you. You shouldn’t be here. You should be taking it easy until you get your head on straight. No one is ever going to make you go to a chaos field again. Why would they? There is nothing special about you. You’re just a B-Rank rabbit.”

Kettle

Kon is not a rabbit so he can’t be insta-summoned and his repair window is only a few minutes, so they might not be able to actually summon him in time to fix anything yet. I’m guessing once Kon’s repair window gets closer to an hour he is going to become super popular.

Aspiring Moth

it is weird, but I'm not sure what the implications are. I thought the spell was the best option, as you would naturally get more points later so the percentage boost to your overall capabilities goes down over time. and the tool being single use ruled it out as a pick. but the natives who live in a rich, peaceful island state think that the tool is the obvious pick even when they have access to things like emergency teleports. I remember mention of evacuation priority numbers being given to everyone (even non avowed visitors), so maybe fear of chaos disasters is constantly at the back of the mind of natives?

Stylemys

My thought was that the Fragile Atmosphere was the one sign on bonus you can’t get yourself. You can train to get more stats and spell impressions. If you’re ever in a situation where you need Fragile Atmosphere though, the only reasonable way you could have gotten it was through the sign on bonus. Not having some stats or a skill is just an inconvenience for most people. Not having Fragile Atmosphere could potentially be deadly.

GryphonKnight

COOL >So the Artonans severely limit the other world’s magical abilities to slow the creation of rifts. Letting them train and grow until they can handle it themselves. >These rifts would naturally form in the location that uses the most magic, which on a low magic planet would be wherever the contract is housed. And on Earth, that place is Matadero That is a cool theory !🧐 ESSAY Sleyca has not given us a lot of info My current essay / rant: ARCHIVE LOCATION ( 2/13/2024, 2:51 PM ) or ( https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/63759/super-supportive/chapter/1307349/sixty-three-home-pt-2?comment=11057667 ) 🔲

GryphonKnight

You can alter embroidery ( Wizards ) Metal studs leave holes in the base material ( Knights) I wonder if metal studs in Knight uniforms represent bound authority pain rough edges ( their magic's constant conflict ) and armor? or just needed for the enchantments? 🔲

Cyrus McEnnis

Having both been, and been friends with addicts - recognising potential consequences for actions taken to feed said addictions is NOT a strength that most of them have. Not saying you're wrong mind you, but combining addictive behaviour with the blow-back from the Gloss? Yeah I can absolutely see Orpheus pawning his grandmother's TV (submerger, but still) for his next hit. Even though he undoubtedly has resources to buy his party favours without going to that extent.

Neil H

Back in chapter 25 the red labcoat was described as "one of the million dollar pieces," so I think even a rich Rabbit would have difficulty buying *too* many of those. Can Alden bear the burden of Lute's credit card remotely and use it for wardrobe purchases? ;)

Neil H

The "Fragile Atmosphere" signing gift is described as giving "around six minutes of Earth air, gravity, and atmospheric pressure", so I think it's safe to assume that tolerating external pressure changes is something the System's capable of giving.

maledei

I also don't think that the brother was controlling Will here, him being isolated because his empathy being to high seems more likely

maledei

Amazing two chapters, I can't wait for Sunday (or Monday in Europe). Will we break the 1000 comments again? Patreon seriously needs to improve their commenting feature, it is absolutely atrocious.

Neil H

TIL what "matadero" means: https://www.collinsdictionary.com/us/dictionary/spanish-english/matadero > slaughterhouse ⧫ abattoir (formal) > killer (informal) ⧫ exhausting task

Terrestrial_Biped

My guess is that the Contract forms a barrier against incursion, and when it deliberately withdrew from Matadero, it was like opening a door to check if anything was prowling around the house trying to get in. This saves you from maybe having it break through your windows later, arriving when you are unprepared and doing a lot of damage with its mere entry. But an alternate explanation might have something to do with the distribution of authority across the planet's surface, current or historic. Point Nemo is an oceanic desert, and humans didn't spent a lot of time there before Anesidora was built. Maybe that lack of present authorities meant reality was less shored up there? If the latter, maybe Artonans requested the facility at Matadero be built, and that gave the humans the original idea for Anesidora.

Charlie

I think it's possible that Mina, without the contract, doesn't know how to use her skills, and instead of trying to use her relaxation skill is just broadcasting "relax" at max power to the wrong person.

Nedardo

I have a few (lowish probability) predictions: 1) Alden will receive a emergency teleport offer, which others on the bus do not get. This will confuse people (Klein?) because in a crisis ET are allocated by priority rank, and by the numbers Alden should be the lowest priority on the bus. 2) Alden will decide/realize that, despite what he promised Boe, he can't live with himself if he abandons his friends when he has a way to help them. This is foreshadowed by his persistent fears of what would have happened if he'd abandoned Kibby. 3) Finlay will use his super speed to save himself (and no one else).

David Burchfield

For 3 I have getting death flags for Finlay since his first appearance, I thinks it's more likely that he dies here either as a true hero saving everyone that he can, or letting his overconfidence get to him and pushing himself past his limits trying to save people.

Temp One

They draw attention to the fact that Tuyet's brother has 'Bad Days', and that what he's doing now apparently looks like one of them. My impression is that this is meant to imply he goes body hopping occasionally, and it's his excuse for why his behavior drastically shifts during these periods.

John D Jones

@ Nedardo I don't see Finlay being that selfish. Winston on the other hand... Meanwhile 4) Vandy sleeps through the whole thing and kicks herself when morning comes.

John D Jones

Alden on Chaos Field Survival: You're all at least A-rank. One of the points of being Avowed is that the System stabilizes you against Chaos. Unless it's an extremely intense field, we'll all be fine in the short term. Our main concern will be in getting as many non-Avowed humans into shelters as quickly as possible.

Nedardo

@John I don't think it has to be Finlay being selfish. He may simply realize that he's not yet able to save everyone. It's an opportunity for growth, and hopefully a way for him to resolve the in-story death flags without, you know, having to actually die.

Sinnohan

1) [“No touching this or casting spells at her,”] [Jacob had no desire at all to touch the Submerger.] I have a feeling they'll be doing something with it next chapter. ----------------------- 2) The captain and thief were both distracted (reading book and watching a movie or something respectively. The thief was on top of the crate of knockout drugs, so Will couldn't quickly take them out non-lethally. [He’d died fast enough that his paperback was still resting on his stomach.] [The thief’s body lay in the kitchenette, where blood spray stained the cabinets] Captain was killed first by a hit to the head, then the thief noticed, ran to the kitchen for a weapon, and died there. 3) [He was holding the holographic cube sticker he’d picked up earlier in one hand] Will's obsession with the sticker is very strange. I don't know what to make of it but something about it is significant. 4) [the door broke open] I feel like he let them in because it was too late for them to prevent him from changing the direction the ship was going in. They are a Wright, C-Rank Stamina Brute, and an S-Rank Sway that he should have forgotten about if her powers were actually affecting him. It is strange that he chose to lock them out until he was almost finished fiddling with the settings rather than killing or disabling them when they reentered the ship. He did have access to the entire crate of knockout drugs at that point. 5) [He blinked at her for a few seconds... The Shaper didn’t even have to use a gesture to do it.] It appears that he uses eye movements, such as blinking as gestures for controlling objects. The staring earlier could have been him targeting objects to use as murder weapons. 7) [the tarp that covered the large object that sat where the dinette had once been] [some kind of a Wrightmade bomb] If it is as large as a table, it's too large for Alden to carry, even if Earth's System was able to E Tele him to the sub in time. 8) [Will pressed it to his own neck.] The fact that he knocked himself out and not them is really weird if Will was in control of himself. You'd think that the person who wants to let Chaos in would want to be awake while they turn into a demon. 9) [Unconscious or dead. Did it really matter?] Yes. Yes it does. Dead people don't turn into demons. If the bomb is more of a chaos bomb than a regular bomb, then it could turn all four of them into demons instead of immediately killing them. ----------------------- 10) [ low-security housing facility for Avowed who were best kept away from the larger population] [The word “relax” was the only one loud enough for her to make out.] [Relax, damn you?”] [“Sorry! I’m not talking to you. I just got a message from my brother. The oldest one. He’s a Sway, and he’s not…completely well.] It seems that Tuyet's brother is like Boe in that he reads thoughts by default and needs to be in an area with few to no people to relax. Having people's thoughts pressing down on you is probably a lot worse than having emotions do so. It is also entirely possible that he was using Will as a puppet and knocked Will out when he was running low on magic. That would be one explanation for why Mina's trying to force Will to relax didn't help. If anything, her 'relaxes' would have made it much easier for a Sway to puppet his body. ----------------------- 11) [It had broken through in the spot where such things should break through if they were going to, and it would be gone soon.] It seems like demons are from a different dimension. Maybe magic, especially healing, weakens reality on a local level and allows them to bring Chaos to Orderly worlds. 12) If anything leads to Avowed dying at Matadero, it would be a terrorist attack allowing a demon(s) much more powerful than Humans are prepared to face to get to Earth. Hopefully, Haoyu's parents and all the other named characters survive, but a bunch of people will probably diehere. ----------------------- 13) [Disaster Alert: Low Probability of Chaos Exposure] [Disaster Alert: Oceanic Anomalies - Imminent Avoid seawater. Seek high ground. Beware of possible tsunami.] I think that the System is going to be able to get someone to mitigate the damage by stopping the sub from getting too close to Matadero, but can't prevent the sub from exploding. Hopefully, Jacob, Mina, and Riley can be evacuated. I don't see any of them surviving an explosion underwater. It has been shown that spells and enchantments can be overpowered and even if they survive the initial explosion, that is many tons of water in an area without emergency teleportation. Of course, they might survive by being mutated into a four headed demon monster, but that would be a fate worse than death.

Wiggles1

I'm betting Mother could have a Knight uniform with his dimensions and appropriate specs sent to him more or less instantly.

John D Jones

@ Desidia Alden has one of the only powers that can protect normal people from Chaos. He's going to be right in the thick of everything, probably at his own reluctant insistence.

Wiggles1

I think his labcoat got more or less melted during the marathon chapters. Could be wrong.

John D Jones

@ GryphonKnight Enough to have sex with the proper PH protection maybe.

Pranay

An interesting facet of this is how Anesidorans react to this notice. Ignacio's comment makes it seem the chaos siren is public knowledge but we have no idea if this is just something the public is aware exists or if they all took Chaos Event 101 and had drills in school. Like do they know that a touch of chaos is death for most of them or that children of avowed need to be put in a bunker immediately? And how practiced is their response? Do they just read about recommended steps in a flyer? It's not like they've had a chaos event before and If they were going to have an island wide drill then it should've been before Matadero. The system will be a great tool to get at least Avowed people to safety (and it can probably hack into any screen?). If it does something like that. Then the next chapter might begin with a notification to head somewhere that everyone follows calmly in neat lines. Or it might with people screaming and running every which way.

Temp One

Now that I'm thinking of it. I think there's actually an incredibly good reason why Alden might get a teleportation request: multiple people suffering from advanced chaos corruption. Treatment would require significant resources and time commitment. And since cases advance quickly, I could imagine there simply not being enough qualified hands present to save everyone. Alden's skill is incredibly unique and well suited for such a situation. And I imagine the Knights present might know exactly how he could be utilized in that scenario. And might immediately call him in once the situation is stabilized enough. If that happens, the only question would be who Alden might be called in to preserve and save. I could see a situation where one of the Knights is in dire need of immediate offworld treatment, and Alden is called in only to spot Haoyu's dad similarly afflicted. But he can only preserve however much he can carry. Edit: Thought the Knights were part of the Art'h family, but they aren't.

David Bailey

They did make a point about how survivable he was... Gonna guess he lives, with *terrible* survivor's guilt, and Tuyet goes through a period of absolutely hating Haoyu (or not, but Haoyu feels like she does)

Curtis

Haoyu definitely doesn't have the same skill as his dad. Hayou himself is an A-rank, but both his parents are S.

Heather White

To my grim amusement, this chapter had me googling “how do tsunamis affect bridges?”. According to the International Tsunami Information Center, “Strong, tsunami-induced currents lead to the erosion of foundations and the collapse of bridges and seawalls.” Unfortunately I can’t google “how strong are the foundations of that bridge Alden’s bus is on?”.

Wiggles1

My interpretation is at least right now, humans have pretty low Authority. But they're unusually similar in psychology as well as appearance, and magic mentorship feels more personal. Like that one kid that feels like your exact clone, and you're extra nervous about raising them. And maybe they also expect humans to rapidly develop magical capacity, and be like subsistence farmers given modern tech. Where unlike your country, they don't have cultural wisdom yet for preventing alcohol abuse and scams and child labor, and the new problems won't be staggered across multiple generations. And it wasn't wrong to start trade- their kids won't starve now, if you can't see it's worth the price you're an innumerate whiner- but you're still really nervous about which prices this place will end up paying.

John D Jones

I don't see the 'art'hs getting involved in this situation unless Alden somehow contacts them and calls them in. Neither an a'rt'h nor Haoyu's dad are likely to suffer from Chaos corruption in this situation. Authority, whether free or bound, helps resist corruption. That's why Kibby resisted it as a Wizard. It's also why Alden was better able to resist it. Every A and S rank on the bus can probably resist Chaos better than Alden can because they still have more total Authority. The people at risk here are not the Avowed or Wizards or Knight-Avowed-Wizards. They're the unavowed normal people of Anesidora who have no resistance to Chaos. If Alden is going to get "drafted" (or volunteer) to help people, those are the ones he's going to help.

Temp One

@John, Depends on what that Wright made bomb does when it goes off under their feet while chaos is in the area. We know at least Anesidora, miles from Matadero, is going to be exposed to low level chaos. Who knows what it's like at the epicenter.

Robert Lethiecq

On Sunday we all get whatever happens next. Simultaneously the RR readers get Party Animals. Hard to guess who will be the most worked up by the results.

Steve Park

Oh man, I remember cackling like a witch during Party Animals. Heady times. Its us for sure.

Robert Lethiecq

The Art’hs are a family name not a title. I don’t think either knights present are a part of that family.

Steve Park

No worries I did it for you. First result is the number for Duval County school buses.

John D Jones

@ cafenacet Close, I think. There's two circles. First is a circle of steadily more emphatic warnings. Then there's a full-on keep-you-the-fuck-out force field. However, because it's Demon Death Day, there's still two circles. It's just that with the System temporarily off, the warning emphasis no longer increases because the System sends those warnings. Presumably the force field is still active.

L. Rattay

I like the Idea. Would be intressting to see how the system handles the situation, because Alden is officially still on vacation, no?

John D Jones

Authority, whether bound or free, helps protect from Chaos. High rank (B and above) Avowed are probably fully protected from low-level Chaos. That said, Alden's Skill is only of the only powers we've see that can protect [i]other people[/i] from Chaos.

Temp One

@Robert, I thought Stewart said they were relatives of his. Hence why he knew they were celebrating their Artonan marriage thing?

Kyle

Yeah some of the comments are wild, like it somehow being an Artonan terrorist plot. Will’s words, plus the fact that he only broke down when they entered the Contract-null zone, plus Tuyet’s brother sending her a warning makes it pretty clear that the Chaos/demon got to Will and Tuyet’s brother overheard it and Mina’s signals to “relax”. Sure, there *could* be another explanation, but there’s basically no textual evidence for anything else.

John Anastacio

Uh I don't think Finlay is anywhere near the bus. He has a license to run at superspeed. Why would he take a bus?

Heather White

Instead, depending on what happens with the bridge, he may be facing a new trauma about sinking in buses.

John Anastacio

Temp One - Nah Stu probably learned of it through knight gossip. That sort of info probably travels freely through all the Rapports.

L. Rattay

I belive in theory the system should have the tools and capacity to guide each avowed to the closest shelter/ safe area. But the question is if it's practically possible to get there in time. There is also the possibility to use emergency teleport / summoning to save someone. Will be interessting to see how much the system can handle, and how much it actually cares/is willing to spend to save "non-anesidorans".

Kserand

Since we see Will aware of chaos this chapter, maybe Orpheus is also influenced by chaos on some level. Maybe that's what sent him spiraling in the first place.

Wiggles1

I really want to see Alden ping Mother for some Intensity 99.9 gifts (instant delivery), then head to shore to fight the demon. Attack: -Rope -Overcharged kinder spells -Free Authority bitch-slap -Gremlin bite Defense: -New lab coat -Enchantments ripped from Knight uniforms (x5, layered) Movement: -Azure Rabbit -All the wordchains -Joe's Ring -9 More Awesome Rings Alden Was Given (“Do you know what the word loan means??”) The Centipede approaches the wreckage of the city. A trickle of water still flows out to sea, not enough to slow it. Its form reaches the sand, but suddenly recoils. An unnervingly solid presence is moving in the distance. The Earth System gathers its Authority to push one function back into alignment. The Avowed hear the silence replaced by anime battle music. The Centipede braces itself as the Final Boss of Anisidora bears down.

Mack

Really really do NOT want this. This level of epicness would be awesome but shallow, I think, and not fit the story so far. Fun to imagine though!

Heather White

JJ - I love your idea of this potentially turning into a real world team event. There’s been a lot of speculation about Alden’s and Jeffy’s potential roles in the crisis, but I think yours is the first I’ve seen to ask whether the kids on the bus are going to have to try to work together. It would absolutely make sense for the team obstacle course to be a lead in for them needing to work together to survive a real world disaster.

Terrestrial_Biped

The Fragile Atmosphere was called a "tool". I've been imagining it to be an actual object with an enchantment. Given the gesture involved in activation, it might be a pendant that can be worn under the clothes? Regardless, an object they carried with them should still be fine outside the System.

Terrestrial_Biped

I don't think TuBro would be in a low-security facility if he were prone to puppeteering people.

Heather White

I’m kind of hoping that Sleyca’s misdirecting again & instead of a bomb it’s some other kind of attack. I’m sure wrights could make a wide variety of highly destructive devices, and Jacob’s just guessing.

Terrestrial_Biped

The timer on Self Mastery is about three weeks. Alden is in no danger of getting hit with snapback at random right now, mere hours after he used the chain.

Wiggles1

Yeah I don't think he's actually at this level yet. This is more like college sophomore Alden.

Terrestrial_Biped

I don't think there was a plan. Will was unstable, talking about "scratching at the door" no one else could feel, possibly because he could feel the chaos. He also said he "changed his mind". I think he got on that boat with no other intention than to escape Anesidora, but his mind got changed for him either by the demon or by the chaos itself.

Heather White

Yes, I got confused when I first read those paragraphs. I thought that when Jacob said there were glittering sparkles on “their” skin that somehow he was included as one of them. I guess I thought it was a spell impression that Mina had invoked & was affecting all of them. And then a few sentences later I finally realized that Jacob was the odd one out.

Heather White

We don’t even know if it’s actually a bomb. That’s just Jacob’s theory.

Andrew Tobin

There was a part of me hoping that the other observers on Matadoro were other Artonans, like new recruits seeing what the danger is like in controlled circumstances before Alden visits them and they become Knights. Unfortunately, due to the knight mentioning he would have asked them for clarification on the centipede name, it appears they’re unavowed earthlings?

Heather White

They might just be the other avowed who are there to train. Only six of the two dozen are fighting at a time. (Edit - Michael, I think you’re right. Rereading that passage, he calls them non-combatants. They’re probably human avowed who’re there in a support capacity for the fighters.)

JJ Hunter

@Jeremy Goldberg - If there is a revelation pending here, I suspect it's more likely Klein revealing more of his character and abilities to Alden and classmates, showing them how much a gap there is between them and what an experienced superhero can do in a disaster like this. We just found out about Klein's past experience dealing with (likely quite intense) protestors "flooding the streets every day for months" during his Berlin assignment - he knows crowds, he's likely dealt with mob mentality and riots and all kinds of difficult situations with competing obligations to protect infrastructure and people where some of those people are being a danger to themselves and others.

JJ Hunter

@Jeremy Goldberg - Curious how you're defining character growth - I feel like I've been gorging on how much Alden has been growing in such varied ways since he returned to Earth. Don't overlook how difficult reintegrating into his Earth peer groups has been for Alden! He's not overtly an unreliable narrator, but he actively works on not dwelling and distracting himself in ways that can make his ongoing challenges less flashy, less overtly in your face than they might be in less deft literary hands than Sleyca's. Alden's doing so much better now compared to just a few weeks ago, but he's still doing a ton of catch up socially on all the normal (and Avowed) Earth teenager stuff he missed out on by getting stuck on a chaos moon for a year and a half doing a deep immersion in Artonan kindergarten culture - most of his recent cultural references are literally alien compared to his Earth peers. His earlier Earth references are more likely to be exotic or unsophisticated 'globie' references to his new Anesidoran-born peers than common ground. Alden keeps tripping on 'Anesidoran social dynamics'; it's not a character flaw that he has to learn them, but it would become one if he refused to try, you know? Well-fleshed characters, like real life people, aren't defined by a single flaw, but how they respond to realizing there are flaws in their actions or beliefs. Do they double down on trying to justify that to themselves, or do they own their issues, act to mitigate negative impacts on others, and work on doing better? A recent example of this in Super Supportive: Lexi made Alden realize the 'flaw' / hypocrisy in calling Lexi out on not being forthcoming about Lute's complicated social situation when Alden was actually sitting on much more explosively complicated social situations himself (Boe, wizardry, etc.). Alden's mature response was not getting super defensive, but stepping up to Lexi's implied challenge and silently vowing to himself that he's going to be an awesome roommate. Alden's been actively following through on that choice ever since, and that's been paying out serious dividends already, and not just in the gym teamwork.

JJ Hunter

30. Your take on Tuyet's brother's situation matches mine! I keep thinking about Boe's wistful dream of being discovered through no fault of his own and eventually getting to hang out on a boat by himself in the vicinity of Anesidora. Sounds like Boe's not the only one with Sway or Sway-adjacent powers who finds having some (considerable) distance from the general population to be a profound relief shading on mental health necessity.

Marlkaz

My question is more "why would he expect bopping Matadero with the submerger to help with the chaos itch he was feeling?" It was a fairly complex action, so I wonder what outcome he wants.

Lidja

I wonder what kind of bridge the Span is. Since the sea floor is 2 miles down,did they build the Span on a raised section of sea floor or is it suspended from pylons on the islands?

Matt DiMeo

the sea floor is 2 miles away somewhere between here and the Philippines. Not right here, where they’re standing on land.

Cyrus McEnnis

I admit I've been waiting for Party Animals & the aftermath to hit RR so I can relive the excitement of Alden just eviscerating his foe vicariously.

Cyrus McEnnis

Has it ever been confirmed that Anesidora has been built on land? Because there's NOTHING at point Nemo closer than the sea floor which is about 2.5 miles down. If you're building an artificial series of islands in a location like that with magic, I don't know of you're going to raise the seabed or just anchor it like the worlds biggest oil rig, magically or otherwise, and leave it as is.

Fabian

Is teleportation technology or magic? Technology like teleportation seems unreliable in chaos situations, like seen on Thegund. You might get there, but not out.

Tarim Shahab

I don't think it's a body swap. The brother is stuck in the middle of the ocean on a boat. My prediction is that he 'lives life' by riding alongside other people that are close-ish to his boat. Not mind-control, just an observer. When Will feels like he's being watched, he's probably feeling Tuyet's brother observing him. BUT the brother isn't supposed to be doing this. Which is why he doesn't notify the authorities, but calls Tuyet when he learns about the bomb and the sub.

DonMc

I've only read a few hundred of the comments, so maybe this has been brought up. I was re-reading the last chapter because of the updates, and something that stood out this time, was Alden seeing a kid using a Nesi card to buy something. Was this in the original version? I was thinking, no. If not, I was wondering if Syleca might of added it for a little bit of foreshadowing. You know...Alden practiced removing enchantments using Nesi cards...the sub has a few enchanted devices...therefore...maybe thats what Alden ends up doing?

Marlkaz

The ones he wants to ask are most likely Super Supportives! (non-combat human avowed). There may also be a couple more wizards in attendance (a chaos researcher like Joe, perhaps), but for a clarification on human naming behavior, the knight likely wanted to ask the humans. It would be unnecessarily dangerous for a non-avowed to be so close to the chaos source. We know that chainers go to Matadero to empower the fighters there with mass bestowal. Beneficial sways, healers, preservers like Alden / Hannah, and wrights who made some special equipment for the defenders and want to see it in action all make sense to bring along too.

Marlkaz

I remember that happening and haven't reread yet, so unless I've hallucinated it was there before the update.

Zenopath (AEV)

I'm convinced Alden will be called on to disarm that bomb. Probably he will be teleported to bomb, pick it up and preserve it and take it so a Wright (maybe Jacob) can look at it and say, "it's too late to disarm it, the enchantment has already started the arming process...". His ability to remove enchantment will then be used, so that boy is probably there just to remind us he has that skill he rarely uses.

John D Jones

@ Zenopath (AEV) Maybe, but it's hard for me to see how Alden will be teleported to the bomb when the System (which is what allows for teleports) is offline where the bomb currently is.

John D Jones

@ Matt DiMeo Maybe not right here, but pretty close to right here. Anesidora is an artificial island. So the land the supports it was dredged up from that 2.5 miles down sea floor. Anesidora down to the sea floor probably looks like a slightly sloping really thick tree trunk.

Polar Sleuth

Capsaicin isn't really a poison, unlike caffine. Capsaicin is a shock protein the plant produces to protect its seeds and fruit from temperature changes. The greater the difference between daytime highs and nighttime lows, the more capsaicin is produced and the hotter the peppers are.

John D Jones

@ Jumping Flounder I don't think there's anyone, even Winston, that Alden would hate enough to inflict that agonizing horror on them.

Tori, Writher #1 Fan

The Algorithm must be a supsup fan because I just got shown this video of giant waves hitting a bridge, replace "structural engineers" with "bridge wrights": https://www.youtube.com/shorts/ETmb2Z0isPA

Jeremy Goldberg

@JJ Hunter - Everything you said was valid! I wasn’t trying to criticize Alden or Sleyca, although I realize upon rereading that my comment could have been taken that way. Maybe a better way of putting it would be that Sleyca has done an amazing job setting up the sources of tension I mentioned above, and I’m really looking forward to the payoffs. Having said that, I do think Alden’s fundamental flaw, in the technical literary sense, is his fear of the spotlight. It’s the aspect of his personality, formed by his traumatic past, that is fundamentally working against his ultimate goal of helping others. As long as he’s ruled by his fear of being singled out, he’ll never be able to reach his full potential, or effectively use the power he’s gaining at such cost to himself. Again, this isn’t a criticism of Alden as a character. The presence of an internal conflict like this makes him really interesting, and I think the fact that his flaw is so charming and relatable is part of what makes him such a sympathetic protagonist.

Neil H

> We know that chainers go to Matadero to empower the fighters there with mass bestowal. I wonder what the odds are that Grandwitch is there to perform mass bestowals.

Matt DiMeo

I think he’s on a boat because peoples’ minds are loud, and Mina was being super loud and he heard her.

Andrew Tobin

Sorry, it was there, I found it a very sweet moment with the holding it in both hands and stuff. What I don’t think was in the original version was Archibald’s surname, so I have to go back and check the discussion on that.

BeheadedMouse

@ John D Jones Can wizards use spells to teleport? I know the system probably makes the math way easier, but technically speaking is it possible? I ask you because I've seen that your reading comprehension is amazing and so is your memory lol

Andrew Tobin

@mack Irina is no longer off the island. Remember, Lexi visited them the Saturday after they returned because Kon went the night before. I’m pretty sure it was the skateboarding in the park/chain teaching/mission weekend.

Aspiring Moth

@beheaded mouse - the name change did make me laugh but really, don't worry about it. just do a full reread at some point. and yes, they can. alis-art'h uses a non system teleport to send Alden to artona 1, and we just heard finlay talking about his favourite speedster brute getting a skill or spell impression for short term teleportation. Alden also briefly mentioned it when he got selected, saying that at B rank he wouldn't be able to choose a teleportation focused class or subclass

Chris

The boy holding the Nesi card was in the original version, I remember pausing in my first read of the chapter because the image that came to my mind was so cute. There's just some details that hit home with me sometimes, and that one was one of them. Like Kibby's squeaky snore.

Josiah

He can't get any of the knight uniforms except on Artona 1 (maybe the other two as well). The Mother just said it was to show him she supports him and would welcome him as a knight with open arms but he won't be able to get them on Earth.

John D Jones

@ MyReading... Presumably they can, assuming they have sufficient Free Authority and know a teleport spell. Neither of those things are likely true for Alden at this point, though.

Partha Peddi

The alert says "low possibility of chaos exposure", but "oceanic anomalies imminent" and "Avoid seawater. Seek high ground. Beware of possible tsunami". This indicates that chaos exposure that far out from Matadero is a lower threat than Oceanic anomalies. This means whatever the submerger is doing is causing the anomalies. Since we already know it is a thick air shell, maybe it is expanding and contracting the air pocket surrounding the boat - under water, causing the tsunami close to Matadero? This will make it a bigger attack than a one time bomb unless it is stopped. Maybe the shaper activated the attack to drown the avowed on Matadero? I am guessing that the tsunami is a bigger threat.

Gorane

This feels like basic marvel / shonen anime, not at all what this series is about

FreakShow

So this might be a idea inconsistent with what we know about magic and the system but could it be that the “useless” sympathy for magic allows the avowed rabbit possessing it to see weak points on demons and the reason nobody knows is because rabbits almost never see demons or live to tell about them??

Zenopath (AEV)

@John D Jones I suspect the system can turn itself back on. I think people are making false comparisons with what happened on Moon Thegund, the system there broke, allowing chaos in. This is a case of the system turning itself off so it could allow chaos in. The system is fine, theres no reason it can't just turn itself back on. I suspect the knights will simply call an end to the training exercise by dispatching the demon in a single blow, reducing the chaos in the area.

GryphonKnight

This is cool, I like this idea But Mother said Wizard / Knights do not need this because they can sense magic ( Alden is an accidental Knight ) Sympathy for Magic is like braille on an elevator control panel to help legally blind people use a skyscraper's glass exterior elevator But legally blind users cannot see the the city outside, the other passengers, the lighted floor indicator, and the annoying video advertising 🔲

Adunk

Mother is a the closest thing we have to a word of god, and she said it was basically useless. She would have considered something like that.

Jason Harpster

He's going to get called to save his roommate's parents. At least as the most obvious choice anyway, followed by dummy jacob, little mrs sway, or possibly supporting oneoff characters 87-493.

Second Raddish

Glass exterior elevator on a skyscraper is still an elevator lol. I'd be pissed if I had impaired vision in that situation and the braille wasn't there.

John D Jones

@ Second Raddish As well you should be. However, the big point is that unlike pretty much every other human, Avowed or not, Alden is [i]not[/i] "legally blind" to magic. So he doesn't need the "Braille."

John D Jones

Wrong type of super-power flex for Alden. Alden's flex would be "uses duct tape and plastic wrap to shield an entire building full of children and other non-Avowed from Chaos."

Catherine

Huh, could Will feel his affixation? Is that why he tried to destroy Matadero and, presumably, kill himself?

Zenopath (AEV)

I suspect the system can turn itself back on. I think you are making false comparisons with what happened on Moon Thegund, the system there broke, allowing chaos in. This is a case of the system turning itself off so it could allow chaos in. The system is fine, theres no reason it can't just turn itself back on. I suspect the knights will simply call an end to the training exercise by dispatching the demon in a single blow, reducing the chaos in the area. Also, as the bomb is a magical bomb, I suspect that Alden's enchantment transfer ability might allow him to actually disarm it rather than just prevent it from exploding temporarily with preservation.

Tori, Writher #1 Fan

It's possible that Mother has no experience that would tell her where sympathy for magic might be useful, despite that logically it's a waste. It's untested, with room for surprises. Maybe directly after affixation it's more comfortable to use sympathy for magic than direct authority sense. Maybe there are skills or chaos circumstances that interfere with free authority sense but the affixed skill is strong enough to get through. Maybe it has more range or more ability to highlight what's brightest without getting overwhelmed by distractions.

Anon.

It's useless for Alden, but it might not be for other combat rabbits, which I guess would be... the Grievecks? Of course no clue if they even have the same stats...

Francis

I think it is a new facet. People with very high choas potential who couldn't be stabilized enough are perhaps closer to chaos and can feel demons?

Francis

Yes, I was also thinking Alden is going to insta-buy that lab coat

Francis

Agreed. I think Alden is going to act fast and help preserve the bus, or ponchos to protect classmates

John D Jones

@ Zenopath (AEV) The problem is that the Knights aren't getting any info about this from the System since the System if offline where they are. Maybe we'll see an emergency boat trip to Matadero from Alden, Lexi, Haoyu and Klein after all. Sad that Vandy will miss the boat in that case.

Francis

Jacob, you shouldn't have worn that red shirt... But seriously, I think he is going to die. SupSup always has been quite believable in its events and character reactions, and there is just no way something like this happens without anyone dying. Those "last" thoughts of the 3 passengers are also very foreboding And the Avowed on Matadero is done for, except for Hayou's father.

Francis

I think 1) is possible, but Alden just won't tell others about it

Marlkaz

It seems plausible, though the contract said it was extremely rare. I'm struggling to generate the connection between "I feel authority and my affixation so I am scratching myself trying to get out of my own skin and Matadero chaos makes me itch" and "therefore enacting specific actions to suicidally bonk Matadero with the submerger is my best path forward." I bet it will make more sense as the situation develops, but for now it's a bit confusing in a "the garbage truck outside woke me up again, better go sneaky-jump into the compactor!" Way.

Francis

I don't think Alden is going to play a bigger role than just helping to preserve the bus and to give some practical advice against chaos exposure (telling classmates that it won't kill Avowed so easily). I think this will finally bring home to Klein and the classmates what Alden had gone through on Thegund.. to a degree. He might also overuse his powers and make Klein suspicious. As for the tsunami and Matadero, I think the two Knights are so much more OP than any human, they will be the heroes of the day. The true fallout from this event is going to be the political ramifications, I'm calling it now. It is going to prick a hole in the balloon which is Anesidora. Things are slowly going to change in the world, lining things up for Alden and Boe to have a SAL arc in 10 years time

Dalton C Vieira

The cliffhanger hurts so good.

Francis

Or what if the Knights want to teleport Alden to them to help out with rescue work? He is much weaker than them but maybe the System would call up all the Avowed with commendations automatically? There was a bit of foreshadowing when the Knights checked the list of commendations a few chapters ago "just in case"

Heather White

Tori - wow, I hope Anesidora’s bridge wrights are as good as whoever built that bridge. 😅

David Burchfield

So after a few days to digest the latest helping of soup I have a few more thoughts. 1. What happens to the Avowed at Matadero. Hayou's father is very defensively built so if things go poorly he is best equipped to survive but don't forget Vandy's mother is in residence there as well (why Vandy was invited for the no doubt cancelled boat trip). 2. Alden's skill is really good for dealing with Bombs, a big Bomb is about to go off, will this come into play somehow? 3. The more I reread the sections with Will the less certain I am about whats going on. There are a couple of possibilities. A) Just crazy and snapped, B) Chaos Infection and snapped, C) Swayed (either by Tuyet's or someone else and he was either trying to help or just super sensitive), D) Controlled or possessed (not just manipulated but actually puppeted, maybe Tuyet's brother can body hop, maybe there is a second demon or the demon has abilities beyond what they are aware of. The more I think about the more I think body hopper or second demon with sway/possession abilities makes sense. I am really fixated on the fact that he either knocked himself out or killed himself to me that signals someone was directly controlling him and didn't want him going off script after they left. 4. With the proverbial excrement hitting the fan the Knights are hopefully about to get involved, can't wait to see what they can do. Despite some hints as to how powerful knights can be we haven't seen any acting decisively in a crisis situation yet and I can't wait for that.

John D Jones

I don't think Alden will preserve the bus. He (and Klein and anyone else with a working brain) will want to get off of the bus because one of the worst places to be in a tsunami would be on a bridge in an easily washed off the bridge vehicle. The Knights will only be the heroes if they know they need to be heroes. The System is off for them so they don't know what's happening. I think Alden's contribution will be getting Lexi to take him and Haoyu to Matadero to warn them.

John D Jones

The Knights were looking at people with Commendations "just in case" it might be fun to invite them to a chaos miasma dinner party. Figure the Knights aren't going to summon a 13 year old (by their measurement) ryeh-b’t child who is still on a summoning moratorium from the horrible stuff he went through a little over three Earth months ago.

Robert Lethiecq

When Alden was in the application process for school he had a meeting with a longsight brute who was worried about drones taking over his job. Alden thought he would still be useful in an urban chaos zone. It wouldn’t surprise me if this comes into play at some point.

Heather White

The knights got that unexpected message, so I think they’ve already been warned. And if there’s already a tsunami incoming then it’s probably too late for any additional warnings. I agree that preserving the bus is highly unlikely, so Alden’s role will need to be something else. As someone suggested above, it seems the most realistic for him and the others on the bus to need work together to survive. A real world test of their ability to cooperate, an extension of the gym obstacle course with life and death stakes. And a chance for Marsha to learn that dueling other S-ranks isn’t actually the most important thing.

Wiggles1

Agree it'd be a character/genre shift for him to attempt it now. Put it this way- due to exponential growth, we should expect Defense Support Knight to eventually surpass human Avowed in pretty much all combat roles. If human strike teams can't take down a demon it may be best for Alden to squish it, even though squishing things is the opposite of his comparative advantage. And that's why Alden's eventual Knight flex should involve him fighting a demon at melee range like he's Siberian but with clothes.

Francis

Oh it was for a party? I thought it was in case of emergency

Wiggles1

Putting the anime daydreams aside- It's really not clear what the rules are with the knight uniforms. I think Mother didn't go into it because she thought the uniforms would not need emergency reconsideration, and "here's what we'll do if a chaos event endangers you before our next meeting" is not something a teen with PTSD needed to hear right then. My guess is it's a loose rule: Mother can choose one for him and arrange for it to be sent to Earth as a gift, whereas Alden can't click "purchase" or even browse the catalogue while on Earth.

Francis

Fair enough, it sounds a bit more likely that Alden will continue in his supportive role.. oh, just imagine Marsha freaks out and is useless in a real crisis!

Neil H

To be fair, Alden has also previously suspected Mother of lying about certain things. Ch. 59: "She grinned. “Don’t worry about it. The Knights of the Mother Planet aren’t currently recruiting humans into their ranks.” For some reason, Alden felt like she was lying. “Why would I lie? The idea hasn’t even crossed their minds. There have been Knights from other species in the past, but it was long before your planet was discovered. And even then, there were a relatively small number of them compared to the number of Artonans. Just having an authority sense and an affixation and swearing to protect the Triplanets doesn’t automatically grant you access to the elite level of ‘demon-fighting club.’ There’s at least one other requirement…even if you ignore significant political factors.”"

Neil H

For reference, from Ch. 119: "“Speaking of curiosities…I asked the local Contract for the profiles of all commended Avowed on this planet.” She turned to him. “Were you going to invite them over for socializing, training, or work?” He lifted his hands. “I just don’t know what to do with myself when you’re hiding on roofs and there are no disasters in progress. I thought if there was someone very interesting who wasn’t already here we might ask them to stop by.” “Come over. Enjoy the chaos miasma with us.” Her tone was wry. “Yes. Something like that. Do you remember that story we heard about Alis-art’h finding a human on Thegund?” he said. “Of course.” “Because of that experience, he has the highest commendation of any human Avowed. A thirteen-year-old Ryeh-b’t boy. Isn’t that interesting?” “It is,” she agreed. “Very interesting. And disturbing. He must be a remarkable child. I do hope he’s resting well now that he’s made it back home.”"

Neil H

I kind of assumed the "oceanic anomalies" were the potential cause of the chaos exposure.

Partha Peddi

True. If the submerger is a bomb or wave generator, it will push ambient chaos outwards, and chaos mixed ocean water towards Anisidora. It kind of explains the "Avoid seawater" part.

Matt DiMeo

I think the tsunami warning went off when the bomb explosion was detected. Wild guess 1km/min propagation speed, and a tsunami could arrive in just a few minutes from that, no chaos required.

Matt DiMeo

I kinda think authority-sensing and chaos-sensing are distinct. We know some avowed, independent of rank (and therefore authority) are more chaos prone, and Will could be one of those.

Matt DiMeo

My prediction is the bomb already blew, and that’ why the tsunami warning came. Boat crash into island -> attack warning, bomb blows -> tsunami warning.

Matt DiMeo

Rabbits desperately buy labcoats, and dozens immediately summoned to bomb labs.

Partha Peddi

You know, it just occurred to me.. what if Hannah infiltrated SaL leadership? That is one way for Sleyca to get Hannah back into the story to make it interesting.

John D Jones

Unless the bomb is very specifically the somehow-not-actually-physically-explosive-and-also-not-directly-harmful-to-lifeforms kind of bomb it probably has not exploded, because otherwise all the folks on the boat are dead because they were all standing right next to it.

John D Jones

I guess it's possible (anything's possible at this point) but Hannah didn't really strike me as an... undercover operative sort of person.

Zenopath (AEV)

I think if the bomb hard blown up the warning would say "Tsunami incoming". "Possible Tsunami" suggests they know about bomb, and are waiting for it to detonate, at which point they will know for sure if there is a tsunami or not.

SkySeeker (definitely not Lauren K in a mask)

@JJ Hunter, while the substance of your comment was valuable enough that you would have gotten my 'like' anyway, I feel the need to mention that you still would have gotten it for your proper use of a semicolon toward the end. I greatly appreciate good use of that so often ignored piece of useful English grammar.

Cyrus McEnnis

It's also worth pointing out that in order to pickle the bus, Alden needs to be able to bear the burden of it. Even if he tries to just pickle the paint, that's a BIG ask of him at this point. One thing that might make sense - Alden ETing to the Hospital and offering his skill to pickle patients till they can be triaged. The System isn't down for Anesidora as far as I know, so ETing out from the bridge might be the smart option. Of course, that assumes that the teleport system has capacity to cope with everyone hitting the panic button all at once.

Kim Enteiu

I was double-checking the timing & I think we’re due for Stuart’s next video call in the next 12-36 hours… So…that’ll be a very different call than Stuart was expecting after getting Gokoratch music videos.

Calum Donaldson

My leading theory (that I saw someone in the comments say) is that Mina relaxed him enough that he was calm enough to try his matadero bombing plan.

Lidja

Probably closer to 1 in 2 since we know Lute was sneaking around the bathroom in the gym earlier that evening and I doubt they depend on Orpheus to work with other humans. It’s either Aulia or Hikari at Matadero.

John D Jones

It'll be a little longer than that. It's currently 12:15ish AM on Saturday. Stu'art'h is supposed to call Alden on Monday. So, maybe call it 56 hours or so?

John D Jones

A lot of people including me have been speculating as to how Alden will get involved and "save the day." I mean, the protagonist is supposed to help move the plot forward. But what if... he doesn't? Save the day, that is. What if he keeps calm, helps reassure people but otherwise does what Instructor Klein tells him to do, gets to a shelter with the others and rides it out with them? The bomb explodes. The resulting tsunami kills hundreds of people. The chaos kills a few hundred more non-avowed (many of them children) and mutates some others into demons who are eventually eliminated. It's a nasty 9-11 scale disaster. What if the point isn't that Alden moves the plot but that the plot moves Alden? What if Alden sees that Chaos isn't some nasty thing that happens far away, but that it can and will reach out and hurt people he cares about in his home? What if this is what moves Alden to raise his Intensity and truly reach for Knighthood?

John D Jones

A lot of it depends on how much Klein knows (and tells the rest of them) about Maradero protocol. If he knows the System goes down but that the Knights keep someone in reserve who's has contact with the System and is in telepathic contact with them that'll scotch the boat trip. OTOH, if Klein only knows that the System goes down, I can see Alden, Haoyu and Lexi deciding to go for it and warn Matadero. It would turn out that they don't need to be warned, but that might put Alden and crew in a position to deal with the bomb.

5haun

#2! We technically don’t know yet if the bomb has gone off - it would be really cool if they actually do summon all commended Avowed on their list to help with emergency response to the disasters. No way Alden wouldn’t mention how useful his skill is with explosives. I have no idea if we’re actually going to see Alden vaulted into the limelight like that so early in his Avowed career - it would be so cool though IMO lol. Teleporting does appear to be down, but maybe someone with a skill could ‘port people as needed.

WannaBeATree

So, Tuyet's Brother, who is confined to the boat to get him separated from people (Boe vibes). Who suffers from his skills and likely did not level them (which leveled them even faster!), has an episode. Probably mind controlled the guy on the boat, why? If he did, that means he could also very well reach the demon's mind with his skill, or vice versa. Probably the reason for the episode in the first place. The System is down, i guess the sway's boat was inside the radius (miles?). My first though was: "oh, smart, use the time the system is down to do shady stuff so your skills are not logged (criminals have them logged)". But then he messaged his sister, so his skill use should be logged? Jacob's light did paint some stuff on the bomb, so he might be able to do (done?) something to it. Whether he lives or dies, it both works, there certainly are ways how this can go right. Did tuyets brother want to blow up the reason for the scratching? Or was that maybe the plan of the activists all along and not just a reaction to the demon (the captain did seem a bit fanatic AND had Jacob leave the room)? Having a bomb on board does imply that, but the medical stuff would be wastwd then. To lead the Informant astray? It really can go any way. So many set ups. We can spend 10 chapters just getting to the bottom of all that's written in this chapter and this next arc is also an awesome way to shift attention from everything that was subtly hidden.

Zenopath (AEV)

A lot of people ate citing "The system is down" as a reason Alden can't be teleported in to disarm the bomb. 1) The system didn't break, it deliberately withdrew from an area so that demon would force its way into our reality, so that a bunch of avowed could get the Antorian mandated yearly training session in. 2) This happens yearly, and the system always reasserted itself as soon as the scheduled event is done. 3) At no point are we told how long that process is, but it could well be that the knights have to give the order to abort the training, which would explain why there's been a delay. Assuming novel is in chronological order, it looks like it took time before the Avowed government decided to call the knights. They wouldn't have called them if there was nothing the Knights could do to help. 4) Story structure wise I highly doubt Alden is just going to be a bystander. If there was nothing he could do to help except handle aftermath, Sleyca would not have spent so much thing building up tension and setting the stage. Alden could have been chilling on bus when a huge wave appears and the story of him helping the survivors would have been equally impactful. More so even, as it would have been just as shocking to reader as it is to Alden, you could explain how it happened afterwards. But if Alden is tasked with helping prevent a disaster, the writing has to go into detail about the unfolding crisis or it will fall flat, because the reader won't feel like there was ever a real threat unless it was fully explained first. 5) Disarming magic bombs is so clearly within Aldens skillset that it feels a bit like introducing a locked door into a story where the MC is a rouge. Maybe if he hadn't taken the transfer enchantment subskill, there would be room for doubt, but he has a whole skill he's never really used, the story demands he use it meaningfully at some point. 6) There will likely be a few intermediate steps before Alden is called in, he probably won't just be teleported in on his own. Maybe someone else will go in, or water shapers will pull boat out of the sea first. Maybe Jacob will get his redemption shot by explaining the bomb and how it has that pink glow showing its not well made and then they will realize its too unstable to be teleported unless preserved like the other bomb Alden carried... And only then will someone (or the system) think of Alden as a solution and ask him to volunteer. Could be Big Snake, since he's there and knows Alden. They might not expect him to disarm it, rather just preserve. But then, when they realize they can't safely disarm it. Alden will choose to reveal his secret sub-skill to save the day. I'm pretty sure he has to break his secrecy here because what other circumstance would make him do it, other than many lives at stake? Ok the last part was pretty speculative, but my point stands. I don't think Alden will play the role of disaster responder, but rather disaster preventer.

David Burchfield

Thank you to laying this out so clearly. I absolutely agree with the reasoning even though I am still very unsure how things will play out. One of the things I love about web serials is that the authors sometimes don't adhere to standard story telling conventions leading to a truly novel reading experience.

Alan Miller

Alden's role may be in more directly protecting some classmates. "Your stability was especially noteworthy considering how fresh your affixation was. There’s usually a period when a skill works but it’s still in the process of…settling in and becoming. It can be vulnerable to certain kinds of damage. Avowed can’t feel it, but Knights pay attention to that kind of thing."

Zenopath (AEV)

Honestly, my theory is just based on how I would write the outcome given all the setup that is already in place. But Sleyca is a better writer than me, and might have thought up a solution that will be completely different. However, if all the buildup leads to Alden not doing much, then it will feel anticlimactic.

Kahandran

Haha! This WOULD be the chapter where I finally catch up to current. Dang, if only I could have told past me a week ago to wait a few months before starting this book. Thanks Sleyca, you deserve all the moneys

Kim Enteiu

Stu last called Monday night after Alden was heading to bed, then talked to him all day Tuesday. We know the Artonan “week” is about 13 earth days, so depending on it that cuts earlier than 13 or later it should be sometime Saturday through Sunday evening. That assumes Stu doesn’t need to make a “righteous scholarly exit” before then.

Partha Peddi

If a bomb has the capability to cause a tsunami, it should be as powerful as a large nuclear device. You could potentially see a mushroom cloud, and a light flash, which no one experienced on the bridge. I am not aware of how a bomb works under water. If the device was moving towards the island, it is much closer to the surface than deep under water.

Mack

I don't think Alden is going to save the day in an incredibly epic manner. That's not this story. I think you are closer to right with this comment. BUT. I do think he will play a vital role, however small and not epic, that lets him stay off the big radars a little longer. I have no idea what that will be though. But I doubt he will simply be able to ride it out following orders.

Mack

Do we know what the unspoken requirement she means is?

David Bailey

I mean, at least Alden's versions of Mary Jane, Gwen Stacey, Harry Osborne etc all have super powers...

VP

Place your bets, folks, is the next chapter going to be called Waves or Tsunami?

Tori, Writher #1 Fan

Given previous naming conventions, I believe it will be "Ripples, Three" followed by "Ripples 4" and "Ripples: Part V."

GryphonKnight

Trust me, there is no good time to join Even without the cliffhangers it is hard to wait! 😍

GryphonKnight

@Zenopath, Alden is the King of Small Kindness His journey to accidental Knight started with being kind to a demon receptionist 🔲

Sinnohan

I think that the bomb is most likely too large and heavy for Alden to carry. It’s about the size of a dinette.

John D Jones

@ Kim Enteiu By your own statement, Stu(Evul) "last called" Alden on that Tuesday. 13 days from Tuesday would be Monday. Also, Alden has stated (to himself/us the audience) that the call from Stu would be on this coming Monday. I'd assume that prior to ending their previous call, they scheduled the next call in the way that both of them keep times/dates.

Gremlin

I believe you are thinking to small, modern nuclear bombs can cause big waves but nothing compared to the energy needed for what we recognise as tsunamis. For example the energy released in the 2011 Tohuko earthquake tsunami has been estimated at 9320000 megatons tnt.

John D Jones

@ Mack We do know. The unspoken requirement is having one of the 300 unlimited skills. Like, say, number 112, "The Bearer of All Burdens." Scene part from Ch. 55 "Mother, part 1:" [quote] “The other requirement,” he said. “For being a knight. You said there was political stuff. But also one other requirement. I’d like to know what it is.” So I can avoid ever meeting it. “Oh that. They’re wizards sacrificing massive amounts of authority, their lives, and enduring sometimes torturous pain for the sake of others. It’s not like they’re going to go through all of that only to take a bunch of dumb little skills that let them arrange flowers or shoot fireballs or fluff pillows. They can do that nonsense with a spell and a bit more time and effort. And spreading your authority over fifty different itty bitty talents isn’t how you slice something the size of a moon in half, you know?” “I heard it was an eleventh of a moon.” “Thegund is a big moon.” She stretched her legs out in front of her and wiggled her toes at him. “Anyway, most Knights can afford a few supplementary talents for their own convenience, but those aren’t important. Defending the universe is all about having that one useful, well-designed, infinitely expandable skill to funnel all of your power into. As long as you don’t choose one of those, nobody will be interested in—” She paused and then gasped dramatically. “You’re making fun of me,” said Alden, astonished to find himself saying something like that in this situation. “You’re a mean System. I didn’t even know Systems could be mean.” [/quote]

Josiah

If they get dropped in the water when Jeffy ISN'T there I'm gonna riot.

ImNotHere

Esh-erdi from the platform : "It's over demon, I have the high ground" Demon : "you underestimate my powers!"

Partha Peddi

Another way to cause a tsunami is water displacement. Either by a large land mass collapsing, displacing water, implying an explosion causing it, or magical wave generator.

Anon.

It also feels a bit unlikely that he won't end up meeting the knights given how they were introduced, but it feels likely that they'll be saving the day and he will be doing something like medevac --- which a bunch of people will still appreciate.

WannaBeATree

Is the chaoes the reason there aren't any animals on Anesidora? Poor zoo animals in F-city. Would be sad-cool if Aldens next social media update would be a couple demons walking in a straight line. :) Though the animals are probably screened for chaos potential.

Flying Goat

I think it will be Ripples VI, followed by Ripples V - since they'll be going against the tide, they'll start at the oldest ripples and work their way towards the older ones nearer the source. Or maybe we'll switch to "Making Waves 1"

Kim Enteiu

The initial call was Monday night when he was on the bad half of ; the follow-up call, when they talked all day, was Tuesday morning. I don’t think we have an exact measure of how time synchs between Artona III and Earth beyond each day being about 26 hours and their week being about 12 days long. That would put a 2 day weekend at 52 hours (or a little less than that). So if Stu called as early as possible last time (Monday night) then he would call as early as possible this time as well (Sunday night). Alden mentioned that Artona III’s days had 52 segments of time that were each “a little less than half an hour” which would be where the about 13 days comes from. Every thirty seconds less than half an hour in those segments gives us a 5 hour drift less than 13 days, a minute less is about 10 hours difference (12 * 52 = 624), which would be a rounding error up to 13 days instead of 12 days 14 hours. And, again, since last time they talked Stu demonstrated a word in the Artonan language for and mentioned that if his classmates took vengeance out on Joe he wouldn’t be able to blame them, he’s been set up in multiple ways to make an early, inconvenient, call.

Francis

Thanks Neil! Yes, sounds like they didn't have a specific reason, and one of them realised it is a bit disturbing, so she wouldn't want to put pressure on Alden

Francis

Good point John. Haoyu might freak out over his father and perhaps Lexi and Alden go with him

Francis

That's true Alan! However, I still don't think any Avowed should be in danger of being affected by low level chaos after only a short period. I mean, Alden and Kibby could deal with it for months, he can't be *that* much more stable? That is what I'm extrapolating from the Thegund chapters at least

Matt DiMeo

There will always be an “oh crap gotta wait ‘til sunday/wednesday”. You had that first ten chapter patreon binge, and now you’re addicted like the rest of us.

John D Jones

Mostly it's because Anesidora is at Point Nemo AKA 2688 Kilometers from the next nearest land. Teleports/shipping/etc is expensive so no one wants to shell out the time/resources necessary to run an actual zoo. Figure some people probably have pets.

Zenopath (AEV)

He's carried 500kg weights, also he can have someone, like Riley hand it to him if he can't lift it himself.

GryphonKnight

ENGAGING WITH THE UNEXPECTED Assuming accidental Knight Alden is still in super hero school ( maybe tutored by the two honeymoon Knights ) I suspect Engaging with the Unexpected will have a syllabus change going forward TYPO >[Disaster Alert: Oceanic Anomalies - Imminent >Avoid seawater. Seek high ground. Beware of possible tsunami.] If not a typo ( Anomalies ), we have MULTIPLE incoming ( debri, injured Avowed, demons, unstable enchantments, Godzilla, etc. ) CONTRACT RULES @Neil, In my opinion, Mother ( Artona I's Spirit ) is not lying to Alden, but incredibly frustrated Mother has discovered Alden is an accidental Knight but is prevented from telling anyone, including 4th General, by the rules of Contract I So Mother is basically doing everything within her limits ( Knight uniform, Knight spell book, Introduction to [ Knights / 4th General's family / Stuart ] ) to nudge Alden into voluntarily joining the Knights for his own safety NOTES Engaging with the Unexpected I - Wong 6012 🔲

David

The activation procedure for Fragile Atmosphere seems really inconvenient for its use case. What if you don’t have air to recite the incantation? What if you can’t slap your chest for some reason? What if you freeze, melt, or blow up before you get all the words out?

Partha Peddi

Can sunday night come any faster? I have reached Lute's backstory already while re-reading the entire series..

AL

Their app is even worse. Can't keep track of ones own comments.

AL

Not just his fault. I don't think jeffy or Reinhart did either.

ImNotHere

only once? You gotta pump those numbers up. Those are rookie numbers in this racket.

AL

Don't forget the chaos Møøse. It once bit my sister.

AL

They should've wrecked the submerger after using it. Also while sitting on something buoyant.

Partha Peddi

Re-reading the past events gives you a glimpse of Sleyca's vision for the series a little bit in the past. I wondered how far out has she fleshed out the plot points in the series.

Zenopath (AEV)

Kurzgesagt did a youtube video about something simular. Honestly I'm sure Sleyca doesn't realize how hard it would be to cause a Tsunami when she made this plot point, but for suspension of disbelief reasons I haven't questioned it. Realistically if a random Wright civilian can make a bomb with a yield of 9 terra tons of TNT using common parts and magic then the world is probably already doomed.

Anonymous

After thinking over it for a few days, I think, I think I want Alden to be supper involved in this. I know the themes and how the story is like makes this a 50/50 chance of it being resolved and Alden being just either a side piece or not fully involved beyond local impact. But personally I hope this arc will be something that solidifies Alden's resolve to be more then learning just to survive and be prepared for crisis. Either way I'm so exited for shit hitting the fan even if I dread it just as much.

Jeff Petkau

@Zenopath: He's lifted 500kg weights with a lightweight preserved rope. But for a bomb he'd have to preserve the bomb itself, which means being strong enough to carry it physically, so it can't be anywhere near 500kg.

PatienceHoney

Non-Chapter related Question. Why can't globie Anesidorians teleport to consulates? If consulates are "foreign soil" then they wouldn't be breaking the law. I think that consulates should have family suites for use so avowed can visit with their family and friends as needed (holidays, celebrations, and during times of need - sickness etc.) . The whole arbitrary stuck on Ansidora thing feels wrong. Especially when people are called to serve at such a young age. In my mind I also imagine having "mixed" (avowed/non-avowed) couples and families living a hybrid life with an apartment in the consulate and one of them takes a train to work and the other teleports... Maybe it's weird that I am thinking about this, but it is nice to just get it out of my head and share it. Fingers crossed for a time warp to Sunday evening!

PatienceHoney

I agree. It is way too early in the story for Alden to become huge. I think he will do something only he can do that will seem small to him and "just a step in the right direction" - but will wow everyone else, on a similar impact level as his catch/return with BL Snake. I do think he will end up meeting the knights, but I think it will "just" be extending his knight social circle. (Again, something that he sees as normal that others (Lexi et.al.) see as OMG. But, I do like the idea that whatever happens will move Alden (instead of the reverse).

Mag1cM

Because you appear to assume that teleports are free or even remotely affordable on a regular basis. Anesidora has a TC/Summonarium - it's rules for teleportation don't apply to random consulates. Remember back in the early chapter when Hannah offered Alden a one-time teleport to Anesidora and her friends asked her if she was dating a rabbit?

Anon.

Resource-wise it's a win if more than one person is involved: instead of say, teleporting Aunt Connie and Jeremy from Chicago and back you could just teleport Alden to Chicago and back, and save two teleports. And it'd be super efficient for people with large families ... but I don't think the politics work. Consulates are pretty much predicated on having a limited number of diplomatic personnel (some of which are admittedly usually spies) there, and yet are often source of tension when someone involved kills a local drunk driving or something. And that's without superpowers. Would a government want to accept a "diplomat" that's a sway? (Also I am not sure there are Anesidoran consulates, the one we was is Artonan).

Zenopath (AEV)

There's no way they would survive the sudden implosion caused by water rushing in to fill the bubble of air at 2miles deep. Not to mention the sudden and abrupt stop as their fast moving submarine loses its aerodynamic envelope and propulsion.

John D Jones

@ Alan Miller Alden's Authority is noticeably more stable than that of a similarly leveled B-rank Rabbit. But an A-rank still had more total Authority than Alden does. An S-rank has wayyyyy more total Authority than Alden does. Pretty much the only things Alden needs to protect his classmates from is their own panic and poor decision-making. The people who actually [i]need[/i] Alden's protection are the unavowed humans - especially children and most especially younger children. Alden protecting the bus, not needed. Alden somehow using duct tape and plastic wrap to shield an entire maternity ward, kind of needed.

Benjamin Collins

Who says the tsunami is from a bomb? I didn't read that, maybe chaos demon bigger then a blue whale materialized in the water and uses a powerful tail slap to create a tsunami at this point who knows not to mention you guys are thinking of what one huge wave? A tsunami is actually a series of waves that are unusually large not necessarily like a sky scraper or anything even a few that reach the grass just before the sand starts could be considered a small tsunami

Felix

I think Alden will get involved in a substantial manner. Either in the matter with with submerger directly, or with the disaster relief. There is just too much setup for it. Sure, him doing nothing would be unexpected and have interresting repercussions, but would that be exiting or fun? I personally don't think so.

Felix

Not much time has passed since the competition. If for some reason Alden has to use his skill, people will realize that he faked skill exhastion!

AFK37115

I just realized, people on the bridge can still ET to the city, right? the system is fine up there.

John D Jones

@ GryphonKnight One thing to consider is that Alden kind of came at Knighthood ass-backwards. The usual scenario is that a would-be Knight (like, say, Stu'art'h) develops their wizardry to a pretty high degree and then they Affix a Knight Skill. Alden Affixed first and then "accidentally" became a Wizard. Assuming Alden does "come out" as a Knight fairly soon, I could see the Knights wanting to keep him in the human hero program to let him develop his Skill and level with maybe some extra magical theory classes to ground him in the basics of magic. Then maybe switch him to some pretty intense Wizard training at maybe Leafsong or something after her graduates high school. As for Mother (Artona I) I don't think she's frustrated so much as she's being very careful because she thinks she's might have found part of a solution to a festering problem. It's been noted that Humans and Artonans are psychologically and sociologically similar. Humans being stuck in the position of being second class citizens who provide "servants" and "slave soldiers" to the Artonans is not something that is sustainable over the long term. You can't just make Artonans respect humans as equals. That said, a human ryeh-b’t "child" becoming a Knight would be exactly the kind of punch-in-the-mouth wake-up call that Artonan society would need to rethink their relationship with humanity as a whole.

WannaBeATree

Personally I think Mother really likes the idea of a Knight that is not bound (oath) to the triplanet goverment.

Barrett Fogarty

I don't think he has much But he does recover quickly. "Alden let his skill drop. Winston running into had almost fatigued it the rest of the way anyway; Alden had pushed farther than he’d meant to."

Obbu

ET seems to be avowed only, Ch91: “We’re Avowed now. If the boat capsized we could just ET ourselves back.” It's probably one of those magically violent things again, much like the teleport to Thegund - though Alden is no doubt suitable to bypass that issue for one or two subjects at a time. In fact, the more that I think about it - the more I think this might be a plot point in the upcoming chapters :P We know repeated teleports are meant to be taxing, and we know that Alden is unusually resilient to that.

Alan Miller

He's made it clear from the very beginning that he recovers quickly. On the day of the admission trials he told Luna Plim that at the beginning of the morning when she was testing his decapitation line with water missiles.

Alan Miller

Emergency teleports are expensive in an undefined resource way, and IIRC the bridge was noted to be surprisingly busy for the middle of the night. There's a good chance that a bunch of S and A ranked hero school students will be lower on the Anesidora Priority/Squishy list than Squishies.

Matt DiMeo

Luckily it’s after midnight and there shouldn’t be a lot of young kids around, but alden could probably ET with a short stack of children if they got entrusted.

John D Jones

People on the bridge and elsewhere can be ETed by the System... if they can access it. Avowed are intrinsically linked to the System. Other people needs laptops/cell-phones or other device to access it, just like need that stuff to access the internet. That's going to be another issue possibly affecting children who don't necessarily carry System-access equipment.

Anonymous

Congrats on hitting 20k followers on RR Sleyca!

Zenopath (AEV)

He could pull the suitcase trick and preserve the outside to get it into air then preserve the rest. Also I wonder how big a dinette on a ship is exactly. The bomb had to be carried in through a door. The dinette might just have been moved due to a lack of room with all the other crates. Jacob described it as "particularly large" but It can't be that huge or how did they get it to where it is without a crane?

Matt DiMeo

How is it not sustainable? The artonans have had other resource worlds for centuries. If they can keep Grieveks from rebelling, humans shouldn’t be a problem.

Zenopath (AEV)

Well there's a chance that the dimensional barrier between Earth and demon realm is weak and might explode or something if a bomb triggers it. Matadero is an artificial island, maybe there's a weak point that the bomb could hit that would sink it... Might not be the bomb itself that triggers the trusami, but some chain reaction.

Obran

If Merial entrusts Jacob to Alden, can Alden use his skill to find “find” Jacob. maybe find him enough for a Wizard with Teleport to either send someone (or a bomb) to the boat, to stop it from ramming into chaos?

Anonymous

We have seen in the past that one person cannot entrust a different person, since they do not have authority over that person. Alden would have had a lot less trouble on Thegund with Kibby and her sister if you could do that.

BeheadedMouse

Its officially sunday in Colorado! Now just have somewhere between 30 min and 23 and a half hours to wait... 😁

Heather White

“We have a chaos siren?” Alden demanded. It’s like you can hear Alden’s Moon Thegund trauma kicking in and his fantasies of safety on Anesidora/Earth come crashing down. Tomorrow he and his PTSD are marching into the school office to demand wilderness survival courses.

TS

I think 'the submerger' is a smaller word for the actual name of the object. I believe it allows travels in three dimensions and others related to Chaos. In the same way some Andesorian words are difficult to translate, so to iss the 'Submerger'.

AC

It has been shown that the system can act as a sort of training wheels for the skill that is affixed to an awoved, which is why beginners have to call out their skill/spell or use gestures/speech to send messages. As they become more experienced they manage to control alll these aspects by themselves so they no longer need the assistance(though it is unclear if they need to repeat the process for every new skill they affix). All of this to say that Awoved can use their skills without the system and Alden on the moon used his extra perception to more easily use his skill, but it doesn't seem strictly necessary. We do not know which shape the Fragile Atmosphere signing bonus took form, but some kind of soulbound enchantements is likely. A particularly sensitive one if it could be activated in a place without a contract around to help out

Partha Peddi

The Submerger belonged to Aulia Velra, and stolen and traded by 30yr old druggie Orpheus Velra (Ch 101). When that is discovered to be the one attacking Matadero, the grandwitch will be in a boatload (pun intended) of trouble. Since the people investigating the incident already know how deep the escapees are, it is easy to figure out what they are using it to evade detection. The attack link to the Submerger is easily deduced. The sister who takes the pic of Jacob at Orpheus's place must be Ami. Will Lute get info from Ami, but hide it to punish Aulia? Will Aulia or Orpheus skip punishment to the Palace of Unbreaking just like Hazel?

Partha Peddi

The transmission of Tuyet's brother "Relax, damn you" may have been him picking up Mina shouting it before hitting the door. Tuyet's brother might have transmitted the message about the attack to everyone. If Tuyet can receive the transmission, the next one about the attack must have alerted the island or investigators as well.

ClownWhosFeelnDown

"His path was simple. Strong. And he was proud of being those things, Esh imagined. Or selfishly hoped. It was a path that would protect the one who walked it as he followed it so that he lived long enough to see it widen before him. Now that is truly a hope. Esh-erdi worried about humans a little more than he wanted to. So many of them. So few Avowed among them. So similar to us. What a fearful marvel Earth was. And what a terrible responsibility." It seems like comments from past chapters are right. Artonans have human avowed fight demons to help them awaken their authority sense. My guess is the issue with chaos is way bigger and more present than most people realize, so they're trying to get avowed from other species to become knights. Humans have potential, but right now they have to be protected. But, there's also the issue of the consequences. Teaching an avowed to sense authority is essentially tricking the into a lifetime of existential torture that they can't even comprehend until it is too late, so no wizard wants to do it. Joe toed the line a bit, but even he said he would refuse to teach Alden magic

Alan Miller

I think it's more that he's building a durable foundation that will keep him alive, and in the future the widening road will be additional skill options that wouldn't make much sense at low levels. Remember that almost all skills have level caps, and even Brutes are getting skills (eg 'Instant Corners' or the short range teleportation mentioned for a high level speed Brute)

blinkmouse

soup soup soup

Mack

I am actually, literally, making soup from scratch right now. It's in the instant pot and technically finished, but as soon as "soup" drops, my soup stops, and I shall soup while I soup!

Awesomepossum15

See now I kinda wish they hadn't said anything about it being almost ready, because now I'm too excited to just go to bed and read it in the morning like I planned

RinoZ

it's only four in the afternoon in Aus. GWEHEHEHEHEH

Yaboku

So did the older old sway Will or what?

Shawn

“Sorry,” said Will, his eyes looking right through the teens. “You can’t feel it, can you? I can feel it. It’s right there, scratching and scratching at the door. Why does everyone on Earth pretend it isn’t there?” Wow that is a truly horrendous sense for chaos. That's got to be super uncomfortable to feel what is essentially the hold in the world where chaos is allowed to manifest. The big question is was Will working alone or is he working with other people to assault the island/contract (sorry I'm blanking on the name but it starts with an M).

Adam Birch

Some good old fashioned cosmic horror creepin' in on earth.

Rodmin

Damn such an exciting ending. I lovee the school stuff the last chapters but I also love that something chaotic will happen again.