Upload Notes: Handed Down Part II (Patreon)

This part wraps up the commission project~ I hope everyone enjoyed how this little story played out! I look back at it now and I'm kind of surprised at how, uh, long/short it is? On one hand, it feels like a lot is packed into this story in total, on the other, everything happens pretty quick. Overall, I think the pace was pretty good here, and it helped a lot that I could evenly divide things between Zoe and Andrea to create some sense of balance.

So Andrea turns out to be just as bad as Zoe, just about~ That was the plan! Andrea wasn't meant to fall far from the tree, but I did want to establish some decent differences between her and her mom. I tried thinking first of what kind of woman Zoe really is outside this one encounter, and then used that to paint a picture of a daughter raised by her. Definitely a spoiled environment, hah, where both women always got what they wanted. I thought them both being dances was appropriate, feels like something Zoe would force onto Andrea. Dare I say that Zoe is, by definition, a boomer...

I hope this was a fun wrap-up to the first half~ I'm sure some folks would've wished for more Zoe or more Andrea, but that's why I love those inconclusive endings. You can imagine the next scenario between them however you'd like! Maybe Zoe comes back and steals Piper away at some point, or perhaps Piper really is just suck with Andrea forever. In any case, sucks to be the protagonist in a cruel size erotica. Hang in there, Piper. And on that note, is there any more pathetic of a name for a tiny than Piper? It sounds so... diminutive.

Anyway, thanks for reading!