How shall I post the Commission series? (Patreon)

I have some old commissions that the client said they were comfortable with me sharing after making a few edits to them.

I can post them pretty much as they are now, but I kind of want to go through them again, edit them for clarity, and basically add a lot more detail since word count isn't something I am so concerned about this time around.

Also I am a criminal when it comes to writing partly in first person and partly in 3rd person and I want to be more consistent with that kind of thing.  Trying to be my best self in the world of writing, you see.

 But I also know the thirst for new content is real, neverending, and burns deep within.  So I am at an impasse here, my friends.  And thus I throw it to you to weight in and help me make a decision.