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Vivian is a witch with a dream. A dream to use her evil powers to take over the entire world. But what will happen when she manages to to infuse a potion with her dream of power and tricks her classmate into drinking it? Enjoy this tale of witches and sorcery, taking place in a completely non trademarked magical school as a witch helps another girl embrace her inner desires through some magical corruption.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/u88jpingk6ichfg/A%20Witch%27s%20Dream%20of%20Power.pdf?dl=0

I did my best to try and finish the whole story before the month was done but Vivian just wanted to hog the spotlight and the story kept getting longer and longer. Part 1 clocks in at 8,000 words, and the second half should be about that long as well. I'm working on making part two as hot as possible and should have it as the first update for May.

I'm happy that I managed to get all five stories done for the month, although I was hoping that the last update could be a complete short. I started four different short story ideas and each one fizzled after a thousand or two words, so even though Witch's Dream is long I had a blast writing it and hopefully it'll be fun to read. I'm definitely looking at all of the fun suggestions everyone made in the last post and I'm going to do short writing practices to get back into writing one off stories. I'll be sure to post what I come up with either on here or tumblr, but I'm excited by all the ideas everyone submitted.

So here's to making May an even more successful month for my writing. Hope you all enjoy!

Comments

Dyamonde

OMG, another one of those evil cliffhangers. Can't wait to read the rest of this.

Hypnotic

Love this one! I'm a big fan of corruption stories. Can't wait to see this one continue!

Abby Gail

Very well done indeed.... Kudos!!

John

Very well written. certainly didn't read like a long story. in fact over all too quickly. I am starting to love corruption stories too. The idea that one person can turn another into whatever they want them to be. That someone can take another person's personality and mindset and change it and that person so completely. break them down and remake them. love it. GO VIVIAN!!!! Enslave them all, my dear!!!!

larqven

First, some errors that I found:

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Part 1 Errors: For month's [months] now the evil witch Vivian Foxheart considered her greatest accomplishment (page 2) waiting for her crooked smile to lose it's [its] evil edges (page 4) It's [Its] bright red glow flowed out over the room and Viv winced. (page 18) her wand floating up off the float [floor] and back into her hand. (page 30) Cute set up in a magical school. My first thought was that to have been able to get through the door, Viv might not be *really-truly* evil. I have to say that it probably reminded me a bit more of "Winx" than "Harry Potter". LOL Viv, playing around with her potions, and her magic addition to her dorm room, also reminds me of Urd from the manga "Ah, My Goddess". Love Viv's--vivid--imagination for what she would like to happen to her fellow students. Tempered by the suspicion that reality will play out rather differently. I have wonder if the love-struck blonde Kalista will prove to be trouble. She gave hints as being almost as manipulative as Vivian--and her name is Kalista! There's got to be some darkness there? Vivian might have done better to have tried to corrupt Kalista to get to Juliet? Well, we shall see. As it is, the potion seems like it might be a masterwork, but is untried. And even if it works as it is supposed to--that doesn't mean that its use is wise. As it was, I kept expecting Juliet to leap to the conclusion that Viv was trying to whammy her with a love potion! Which isn't too far from the truth, but the truth makes 'school love potion 101 seem relatively laughable. I liked how Viv had to be sneaky, while possessing power, Juliet being dangerous and capable in her own right, every bit Viv's equal and superior in spell-slinging. Indeed, many or most of the girls could be expected to have spells and other abilities of their own. You might do well with a 'super hero team' sort of story?

Emily Bostic

Oh goddess, that is hot!