Slapstick Together Chapter 1 REBOOT (20) (Patreon)

pretty much stuck to the script while cleaning this page up, aside from a few dialogue touch ups!

still absolute LOVE the "filling up your crash landing hole" gag panel, hehehe

BUT, i did add (in the second panel) a little bit of the pick-up line card peeking into the frame to somewhat sneakily imply Magna was trying to use a pick up line on him!

if you've read the sketch pages (spoilers) she brings it up towards the end of the comic!

i just love when little details like that pay off during a story