DayZ Critique - Combining parts 1-9 into a whole #5 (Patreon)

I'm going to split up this update into a couple of posts to make it easier to comment on. Bear with me :)

So its the start of the 4th week of January. And so it's probably best if I put the DayZ side project down for a little bit and focus on a video for public release. Since it has been a full month since the last one.

It's been nice and productive though! At the start of the year I had mostly draftish video versions with quite a lot of rework and only a vague plan for part 10 of the video.

Now though, most of the chapters are finished and ready to be combined (with a few minor corrections, thanks for the spots, folks) and the script for part 10 is looking really good. I'll probably do a bit of voice recording steadily over the next few weeks (exploiting the night time hours where there's less city noise). But I expect I'll do one video then get right back on it for another push towards it's completion. As it's almost done and I'm keen to have it all finished.

Also, between the part 10 script writing I was able to re-work part 03/10 - Activities in DayZ. About a third of it needed revoicing in order to tighten my points and I was able to redo some of the diagrams in After Effects, which look much nicer

You can watch it here if you're curious - https://youtu.be/z92TgzegCpY