This Romantic World Page 78 (Patreon)

I think I wrote and re-wrote the dialog on this page more than any other page of the comic so far. I imagine there are many who would give a good hard "scoff" at the idea that I might be struggling with the writing for a porn comic, but I really wanted to get this conversation right, and I ended up obsessing to a perhaps unhealthy degree. (This wasn't helped by the dreaded "character on the right has to speak first" scenario that I found unavoidable in panel one. Still not sure if I handled those bubbles correctly.)

Since Abbey's scene, I've gotten a fair amount of comments about her and how Casey appears to have blown her off. I hope this page makes it perfectly clear why Casey's been reluctant to show up for that particular sleepover. But as always, I'd love to hear what you all think of the page, especially the dialog. I'm not afraid to make tweaks tomorrow morning if need be.