Home
Artists
Search Recent Random
Posts
Search DMs Popular Hash Lookup Tags Random
Importer
Import FAQ
Register
Partychan Telegram ThePornDude
Home Artists Posts Import Register

Chapter 96: Contract (Patreon)

Published:
2019-02-18 02:25:19
Imported:
2022-02

Content

https://www.fictionpress.com/s/2961893/96/Mother-of-Learning

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/21220/mother-of-learning/chapter/335040/96-contract

I'm a little late (as usual), but the new chapter is finally here! And I didn't delay it by a week, either! This chapter has some long awaited reveals; I hope they sound as sensible to my readers as they did to me.

Enjoy.

Comments

Matthew M

Love it; error in the angel's speech. "On the contrary," the angel disagreed. "You were thebest choice. That is why we settled on you in the end."

Matthew M

Ah, forgot to mention in the last comment, perhaps the description of the angel's appearance was a little unclear? I think it doesn't matter so much with human characters, but being some strange unknown, the description of its crosses and positioning of boughs had me re-read it a couple times.

Anonymous

Definitely sensible. Bit confused why Zorian was so certain, but the identity itself is not coming out of nowhere. I like how every character and even non-present characters show themselves to be actual characters instead of caricatures. Angels are annoying sure, but they have a goal and are willing to be reasonable about accomplishing it.

Anonymous

Typo/error: "Plus, if Zach was compelled to go to a rampage or something" / should be go ON a rampage ""If Zorian began the month in Cyoria, would be also be a candidate?" Zach asked." / should be: would he also be "mister Kazinski here saw though it immediately" should be through Great chapter!

Andrew

Thank you!!

Corwin Amber

'allowing him to live him life freely from that' sentence needs correction

Corwin Amber

'As Red Robe had noted in his brief letting to them' letting should be letter?

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter

nobody103
>>19998782

Corrections added to the editing list. I'll tackle them when I find the time (and after I collect enough of them from various sites).

Anonymous
>>19977051

My question is this: Zorian read Jornak's mind several times and yet found no connection to the Cult. And yet Jornak says, "I was never seriously loyal to [the cult], even before the time loop," suggesting Jornak was part of the Cult. I'm completely shocked Zorian not pick up on it . . .

Grond (James)

Who the heck is Oganj??

Adrien Matricon

Reporting a typo: "So if I never find out that you had your memory read or never see your attacker" => if [you] never