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Hey everyone!

Here is the completed release of chapter 143. To those of you who have been waiting to read it all in one go, I hope you enjoy it!

Please let me know if you spot any typos and I'll make the appropriate corrections.

Cheers,

Tefler

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rich ed

Yay

GDay (FMS)

Thank you Tefler it is greatly appreciated.

Evan

Thank you, Tefler, for a hauntingly nice gift!

Tefler Fan 007

Now maybe 144 part 1, pretty please with sugar up top🙏. It will be our Halloween treat for tonight.

Anonymous

Partial coming tonight of something, probably the section of the outer rim with Luce and the Governers

Anonymous

Spoilers comment First Tefler, thank you for writing and for sharing your work. Second….I’m thinking about Mael’nerak’s white metal, and I’m thinking about his hidden sanctuary back on Valadan. While his white metal is incredibly strong, John’s sword chipping it multiple times indicates that Crystal Alyssium can be made to be *harder*. If you don’t already have a plan for our merry adventurers to get in there, one possible way would be for John or Alyssa to craft a many-many-shaped Crystal Alyssium drilling bore bit. Then gently drill their way in. This may be way too mundane for this story line, but thought you may enjoy having something in your back pocket. Thank you again for everything you do!

Austin

Ahhh - joy and horror. Chapter received and chapter read………… I need more. What a fantastic chapter, and what a torturous place to stop. Please follow up soon. Great work!

Bp Hlpt

Thanks, Tefler!

Grimlakin

Fun chapter. Though sparks over doing it and hurting herself might just lead to more power and ability when she comes around. I think the real telling thing will be when jade finally wakes up or snaps out of her trance.

stephen mincher

thanks Tefler, great gripping chapter and no sex!!

Michael56Smith

.15: I would expect there to be plenty of sex in the following chapters,.. they were all just too busy in crisis mode this chapter,.. just as all Tef's girls sashay, you can expect an erotic sci-fi adventure featuring a Demi-god with Psychic cum to have lot's of sex scenes throughout the story, so fear not,.. it's just a matter of time,.. ;-) TTFN

Michael56Smith

.16: Contain the explosion!?? “You want me to create a black hole down here?!” Dana balked, gaping at them both in disbelief. “Are you crazy?!” -- ... I think back to when the girls took over Larn'kelnar's dreadnought, and requisitioned gear from his armory, then Dana unleased a blackhole on it, destroying any weapons that might have been used against them... if that ship wasn't made so tough, with a progenitor black metal superstructure, then the intense gravity would have crushed in that part of the ship, and crushed our girls... Now Dana might have sensed the problem and backed off if they'd been on a weaker ship, maybe... But I say that Dana's learning curve and luck saved the day once again... ;-) TTFN

Bp Hlpt

Chapter 143 They descended in the grav-tube and walked to the door leading into rear loading area. They descended in the grav-tube and walked to the door leading into the rear loading area. -or- They descended in the grav-tube and walked to the door leading to the rear loading area. She nodded giving him a brave smile. She nodded, giving him a brave smile. Should Dana have had to remove her runes before John was able to re-make a wing for the Rapter, or had they effedctively been removed by the damage sustained being bombarded during re-entry? And how about the added strength of the Rapter from 35-times reshaping plus Dana's runes? Did it do any good? It's "improvement" is never mentioned again, so why do it? His crosshairs was still lingering over the thrall’s chest His crosshairs were still lingering over the thrall’s chest He straightened up and turning his attention to the stricken Nymph, He straightened up and turned his attention to the stricken Nymph, “It sounded like it came from behind us?” # --- Hash tag no longer needed? She nodded vigorously. then the tachyon bolts sprayed over the robots torso. then the tachyon bolts sprayed over the robot's torso. with enough force to lift it off the floor, and send it careening across the room. with enough force to lift it off the floor and send it careening across the room. they could see starlight above in the night’s sky, they could see starlight above in the night sky,

2ndAndrocentric

My F5 key broke. I'm sending Tefler a bill so I can replace it and keep hitting F5.

Bp Hlpt (edited)

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2022-08-27 08:13:09 There are several cases of extraneous "white space" in Chapter 143: There is an extra blank line at the end of Chapter 143. There is a "tab" in the blank line after: (1 case) away from the figure shining like a supernova. There are extra spaces within text: (2 cases) into viscous streams. He drew them away -- before 'He' *Yeah, we shouldn’t disturb her until -- before 'we' There is an extraneous space at the start of the paragraph beginning with: (3 cases) The Empath quickly explained “Hahaha!” John slashed the air before him, There are extra spaces at the end of the paragraphs ending with: (164 cases) middle of their first orbital drop. -- (2) she nodded in satisfaction. -- (2) -- There are also 162 cases of one extra space at the end of a paragraph In order to find those "white space" errors, I searched for the following and in all cases I repeated the search until none were found: paragraph end mark followed by paragraph end mark followed by paragraph end mark > paragraph end mark followed by paragraph end mark tab > replace by nothing space followed by space > replace by space paragraph end mark followed by space > replace by paragraph end mark space followed by paragraph end mark > replace by paragraph end mark
2022-04-19 04:04:36 There are several cases of extraneous "white space" in Chapter 143: There is an extra blank line at the end of Chapter 143. There is a "tab" in the blank line after: (1 case) away from the figure shining like a supernova. There are extra spaces within text: (2 cases) into viscous streams. He drew them away -- before 'He' *Yeah, we shouldn’t disturb her until -- before 'we' There is an extraneous space at the start of the paragraph beginning with: (3 cases) The Empath quickly explained “Hahaha!” John slashed the air before him, There are extra spaces at the end of the paragraphs ending with: (164 cases) middle of their first orbital drop. -- (2) she nodded in satisfaction. -- (2) -- There are also 162 cases of one extra space at the end of a paragraph In order to find those "white space" errors, I searched for the following and in all cases I repeated the search until none were found: paragraph end mark followed by paragraph end mark followed by paragraph end mark > paragraph end mark followed by paragraph end mark tab > replace by nothing space followed by space > replace by space paragraph end mark followed by space > replace by paragraph end mark space followed by paragraph end mark > replace by paragraph end mark

There are several cases of extraneous "white space" in Chapter 143: There is an extra blank line at the end of Chapter 143. There is a "tab" in the blank line after: (1 case) away from the figure shining like a supernova. There are extra spaces within text: (2 cases) into viscous streams. He drew them away -- before 'He' *Yeah, we shouldn’t disturb her until -- before 'we' There is an extraneous space at the start of the paragraph beginning with: (3 cases) The Empath quickly explained “Hahaha!” John slashed the air before him, There are extra spaces at the end of the paragraphs ending with: (164 cases) middle of their first orbital drop. -- (2) she nodded in satisfaction. -- (2) -- There are also 162 cases of one extra space at the end of a paragraph In order to find those "white space" errors, I searched for the following and in all cases I repeated the search until none were found: paragraph end mark followed by paragraph end mark followed by paragraph end mark > paragraph end mark followed by paragraph end mark tab > replace by nothing space followed by space > replace by space paragraph end mark followed by space > replace by paragraph end mark space followed by paragraph end mark > replace by paragraph end mark