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Hey everyone,

I hate to have to charge in advance, but I haven't had any money incoming for a long time and my finances are getting pretty dire.

As you can see, I've been making great progress catching up with the chapters, so I'm hoping we'll be fully caught up in April. I've written a big chunk of 168 already and the rest of the battle scenes have all been planned out, I just need to flesh the rest of them out.

Anyway apologies for the placeholder.

Kind regards,

Tefler

Comments

Antoine Scrivener

With kenn leuzinger all the way. Five stars for that comment alone!

GH

Where is place for 168?

Michael56Smith

-- Tef's last / previous payday was, the placeholder for chapter #168 was dropped on 31 July 2023, .... ;-) ttfn

Larry Thurman

There have been 12 placeholders payed, you are 4 behind do not rewrite what has been written. Get on with the story and catch up.

David Kepler

"Tomorrow." He keeps using that word, but I do not think it means what he thinks it does.

Michael56Smith

.121: remember way back to chapter #120, .... on page 7 (Literotica.com) we find this remark by Faye, "Faye desperately wanted to talk to John about something she'd seen on the security cameras, but he'd been busy all evening and she hadn't had an opportunity.". .... --- Then ole Larn'kelnar's Dreadnaught aimed a very powerful energy beam into the Invictus, and vaporized Faye's server, killing the perky purple Fairy, ... (no back-up) ... her death was accidental, wrong place, etc, ... so, it was too late for Faye to pass the message on to John, ... -- Perhaps if / when Daphne is scanning the old / archived camera feeds, before they get deleted, she'll see the something that Faye wanted to speak with John over? or something else triggers a data search that turns it up, .... -- maybe Tef will get around to this loose thread eventually, ... ;-) ttfn

Michael56Smith

So. what might Faye have seen? some crewmember being in two places at once (an imposter? or a time traveler? or a shapeshifter?), .... And what was being done that Faye felt it could wait on for a good time to mention it, ... thoughts? ... '-) ttfn

2ndAndrocentric

1- the shadow of Mad Jonah or one of the other few Kyth'faren that survived Xar's destruction. This explains the very first "coincidence" of the story: the timely tip about tyrenium that brought John to Karron at precisely the right time to pick up Alyssa and Sparks. Those 2 "Karron orphans" are the most powerful and important part of John's girls, I believe. There's a constant reminder that repeated "coincidences" are not in this story so I WANT MY JONAH MOMENT! 2- the tracking device that reports the location of the Invictus to Larn's dreadnaught, BORING BUT POSSIBLE. 3- what has been reported several times, that a section of the Invictus Crystal Alyssium was left glowing after lovemaking. It may be that the strongest of all material requires feelings of love to make and that would be the secret to Mael's white metal. So the despair and hatred that makes the Progenitor black material strong by torturing thralls to death can be exceeded by "torturing" wards to orgasms; especially with Helene as a human focusing crystal.