Faith, Draft 1, 1 5, outline, CH 13 (Patreon)

Faith in the Family, Commentary, CH 13

The Mid-terms are over, and Sigma Theta Gamma celebrates with a party like only they can pull off.

Very little to say about this, I mixed characters up, which, amusingly enough, is usually something Ben does. And he did miss a detail I was going for, to imply some of the things going on in the frat.

And I’m realizing that might be problem. Not him missing it, but how long the story is going on without any over use of Society magic, and there isn’t going to be any for a while still. Because this is a new series, I suspect my editor will point that out as being an issue. It might affect how the story if promoted, which I don’t mind. That aspect will depend a lot on how Ben views the story.

So that’s it on the comments, I hope you enjoy the file.

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