Jupiter Jet Issue One Page 10 - Script to Page Comparison (Patreon)

PANEL 1 

Tight on Bruno giving his ultimate gangster speech / threat. 

1. BRUNO: As I was saying to your uncle, I have a humongous respect for your repair shop.  And I been real easy on you kids. 

2. BRUNO (LINKED BALLOON): But, in matters of finance, Bruno Bramante don’t let swindlers win. If I don’t get the dough owed me right now, something bad’s gonna happen. 

PANEL 2 

Gabriel slides a torn up brown paper bag across the counter to Bruno. We can see there is money inside that bag. Jacky leans against her uncle, coming to his aid. Giving Bramante the childlike, “feel sorry for me” eyes. 

1. GABRIEL: This is all they have right now. It’s been a rough month for the shop. 

2. JACKY: We tried really hard and it would be real swell if you’d take this as a gesture of goodwill.

PANEL 3

Bruno leans down until his face in front of Chuck’s. The Cat’s hackles are raised and its limbs flail comically as Chuck firmly holds it in place.

1. BRUNO: Doesn’t look like it’s enough. Maybe I’ll take this here kitty cat as collateral. 

2. CHUCK: My cat’s not collateral. But, he is for rent! 

3. CHUCK (LINKED BALLOON): How much ya got?

PANEL 4

Gabriel walks Jacky and Chuck towards the front door past Bruno. Gabriel’s not pleased with these kids and they definitely are fighting to stay inside.

1. GABRIEL: Chuck! Jacky! Enough!

2. GABRIEL (LINKED BALLOON): Mr. Bramante, if you’d give me a minute, we’ll conclude our business. 

**Note: the bottom of this page should be three identical panels in size with the following:

PANEL 5

In the background we can see giant front window of the JOHNSON REPAIR SHOP with the shop’s name on it. Jacky and Chuck are peering through the window at what is going on inside. Gabriel is speaking calmly to Bruno Bramante in the foreground. He has his arms open wide in a gesture of submission. 

1. CHUCK: I was taking care of it, Jacky, honest.

PANEL 6

Jacky and Chuck are shoving each other in the background, vying for more room to look.

Bruno Bramante is wearing a Cheshire Cat grin as he speaks, he shrugs amicably.

1. JACKIE: Don’t give me sass, Chuck. 

PANEL 7

Jacky and Chuck cling to each other for dear life. Gabriel and Bruno Bramante shake hands.

SILENT PANEL.