Jupiter Jet Issue One Page 11 - Script to Page Comparison (Patreon)

PANEL 1

It’s late evening now, Gabriel stands on the street between Chuck and Jacky. His cowboy hat on Chuck’s head as they watch Bruno Bramante speeding off in his car.

1. SFX: VROOOOM

PANEL 2

Close on Gabriel’s face. He looks down at the kids. 

1. GABRIEL: Now, I need you jitterbugs to listen and I need you to listen closely. Mr. Bramante is a very bad man and your daddy owed him a lot of money. That means you two now owe Mr. Bramante a lot of money. 

PANEL 3

We see the three of them as a family. Gabriel with arms on both of them as he points to the shop. 

1. GABRIEL: But, this shop has been in the Johnson family for three generations and it’s your home. 

2. GABRIEL (LINKED BALLOON): So, I put up my farm as collateral. Insurance for the scratch that’s owed Bramante. 

PANEL 4 

From Gabriel’s POV looking down at Jacky and Chuck. Jacky has tears in her eyes on the left, but Chuck isn’t that impressed on the right. Their faces are upturned and looking at him. 

1. JACKY: That was -- that was --

2. CHUCK: Coo coo crazy is what that is. 

3. JACKY: Chuck!

PANEL 5

Wide shot. The sun is beginning to set. Feel free to draw them as silhouettes if you like. 

Gabriel lifts Chuck up as all three of them begin to walk away from camera and the shop. 

1. GABRIEL: Now c’mon you monkeys, how about you buy your uncle a slice of pie before he loses his farm. 

2. JACKY/CHUCK: PIE!!!