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Eyon Galaxies - Prologue [Sketch][Comic][Ongoing] (Patreon)

Published:
2020-12-27 15:29:22
Edited:
2021-01-20 01:06:23
Imported:
2021-01

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Hey all. While I'm getting all of my projects underway again into the new year, please let me know what you guys think of this opening.

For two years I've been trying to get my OG sci-fi comic off the ground, but I haven't been able to find a strong start.

I think I may have hit something with this one, but I'd like to get your opinion as I'm getting the concept fleshed out.

And before you ask, yes, Cthulu was heavy inspiration for the main evil force in the first page. (I have hinted he is a recurring villain across a lot of my other works, fanfiction and DBZ Golden Age included).

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Anonymous

I wouldn't star the story putting in the sight the situation... i think a slowly and progressive presentation of scenario, protagonist and moster(or villain)wold be more interesant and immersive. A slowly start can create tension and horror in the late part of the story when the moster start appear for the first time. I just a my idea i hope that can help you. Later and good luck. P.S Nice cover

TheWriteFiction
>>50270960

Thanks. This isn't the actual prologue. You find out later it's just the mother telling her son a story for the full prologue.

TheWriteFiction

I finally finished the main cast picture and... after considering it... I think I've finally found the PERFECT team. There are more characters, yes, but these are the main people travelling on the same space ship, the MCs and the secondary MCs.

Anonymous

You’ve got a lot of talent for this sort of graphic design. It’d be great to see more of your original content.