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The first 400++ members should have the long-long chapter which shouldn't be named in their mailbox or in a matter of minutes somewhere-somewhere.

For the others, it will be sent tomorrow.

The betaed-chapter of this is most likely going to arrive around the end of October.

Bests,

Comments

Silver Wolf

Thank you and the betas for your hard work

Stormstar1995

Thank you for hard work and god speed to the betas, I am going to reply to this email with potential ideas as I haven’t had time to reply to the 31000 post.

Gabriel Meadow

Thank you for your hard work Antony. At a certain point though, we're going to run out of circumlocutions and ways to allude to this story.

Anonymous

So many surprises, wounderfull story.

Antony444

Now, now...(evil grin), I hope it's not pessimism in the ranks of the God-Emperor's servants...

Red Bard

This was just amazing... just everything, i can't wait for the next one.

Mordart

I have to admit I Was disappointed by the last parts fo this chapter. The quality just wasn't there in the last two fights Taylor participated in. The first, eh, I could forgive that to an extent. The last fight though is simply absurd. It's one of the most important fights in the story so far; it reads like the back of a tourist postcard. Details, man, details! If this story is devolving into that type of quality, compared to the Naga fight, you have a serious problem upcomiing with the rest of the tale.

Aaron Kay

Love it, but would have liked more detail for that last fight. Still awesome though.

Anonymous

Two swords... can she dual-wield? I'm getting dark-elf vibes here.... ;0

Anonymous

As those above me pointed out, the last fight Taylor has was a bit disappointing. I hope it may be rewritten because there wasn't really much impact to it when I read it. It was a bit weird to see that there weren't paragraphs to describe what was happening in exact detail.

Mordred

While I loved the rest of the chapter and the reveal I do have to agree the fight at the end was really kind of underwhelming especially compared to the Naga fight.