Thoughts? (Patreon)

Monica's very first scene/intro in the re-do (including our new house).  What is everyone's first impression?  Overall, we are happy with it but.... (I'll give a hint...there is one thing we need to fix).  Let me know your thoughts...

P.S.  We have a LOT more done, other than first image. :)  But just wanted to get inputs on this one. Kudos for anyone that notices what we plan on tweaking.

And just for some fun, here's the original....