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[A/N: Hi, everyone! Character notes are at the bottom. Quite a few of them.]

“You’re laaaate.”

“And he’s not in his uniform.”

“I thought maybe he was going to skip class.”

“He was just scared to face me in battle!” Astrid announced to the other girls milling around in the corridor in front of the MPE building’s locker rooms. She sprang toward Alden and punched the air with a vicious expression that was undermined by her cotton candy pink lipstick and eyeshadow.

Actually that might not be makeup. That might be a new morph.

“I’m not late yet.” Alden dodged around her. His duffel bag full of gym supplies was over his shoulder, and his face felt chapped from his high speed flight here aboard the nonagon. It had been waiting for him at Matadero’s helipad, and a message from Esh-erdi telling him to use it if he wanted had appeared as soon as Alden arrived in the cube’s teleportation area. 

“I can dress in three minutes!”

“But you only have two minutes and fifteen seconds,” Vandy told him.

He rushed by the girls so fast that he was already a couple of steps inside the locker room by the time he realized Astrid’s teeth had been pointy.

“Nice teeth!” he called as the door shut behind him.

“All the better to beat you with!”

There weren’t that many guys lingering inside. They were all in their suits already.

“No, I never met him,” Finlay was saying to Kon. “I did hear about him in intake a couple of times, right before I left. But that was all.”

“Alden! Was that Astrid you were yelling with?” Kon asked. He was tousling his hair while he observed himself in one of the mirrors. “What’s she done to her teeth?”

The weird emphasis on some of the words made Alden suspect he was still having trouble with pronunciation. 

“They’re sharp now,” Alden answered.

“Where have you been?” Lexi was waiting for Haoyu to finish tying his shoes. He had Writher in his hand, and the end was twitching toward Ignacio. Alden was sure it was innocent enough, but it did make Lexi look like he was planning terrible things for the other Meister, who was staring at his knife collection while he put on his wrist cuffs.

“Hello, Lexi,” said Alden as he dove into a shower. “I missed you, too. Your warm smile, your whip, your tone of suspicion.”

“You got your foot fixed?” Haoyu called.

Alden stripped off his shirt. “I got permission to take the boot off. And a lecture about my diet and my badness as a patient. And the healer sent the school a note saying I could come to class if the gym suit was set to punish me for running and jumping with that leg.” 

It had been about two hours since he’d teleported from Rapport I to Matadero. He still wasn’t quite over the shock of transitioning from an informative, calm, and very adult-feeling conversation with Stuart about his options for mind healing and how the appointments could be handled, to Porti-loth. The wizard had been waiting to catch Alden as soon he arrived and check that he’d behaved himself while he was away.

“Punished?” asked Haoyu. 

<<You’ll have a movement restriction?>> Ignacio asked in Spanish.

Alden was surprised he was diving into the conversation. 

<<I was going to duel against you differently, but if you can’t run…>>

Alden actually wasn’t sure what Porti-loth had meant. He’d just griped a lot about the fact that Alden was unable to follow a simple instruction to eat the foods native to Earth.

“But I ate an Earth-based lunch the day I left,” had not been a good enough excuse. Nor had, “I honestly forgot. So much was going on.”

“Yeah,” he said, reaching for his gym suit. “A movement restriction is probably the penalty he had in mind.”

By the time he exited the stall, the room was empty. He hurried out and ended up entering the gym a step behind Tuyet, who was looking tired.

“If we duel each other, do you have another bandage for me?” Alden asked. He didn’t know her well enough to think of a joke about anything else.

“Alden,” she said. “Did you know him, too?”

“Know who?”

She frowned at him. “The SAL member who Orpheus Velra gave the Submerger to. The one Maricel left class to warn SkySea Guard about.”

Alden’s thoughts had to run a marathon before those two sentences made sense. By the time he got to the finish line, the [FLOOR ON] warning was flashing on his interface, and the two of them were headed for their classmates and instructors.

It was only Klein, Marion, and Wu today.

“No,” he managed to say in the second before class officially began. “I didn’t know the guy.” 

“All right!” Instructor Klein said. “I hope you all did your homework.”

Alden looked around at all the faces. Everyone had managed to make it to class except for Maricel. 

So she’s the student who’s taking time off. And the guy she asked me to talk to when we were standing outside the mall, the runaway who took a boat that night, crashed the Sinker Sender into Matadero? 

He wondered how he ought to feel about that.

Really sorry for Maricel.

Nothing personal beyond that, I suppose.

Having a few less degrees of separation from a guilty party than he would have expected was unsettling, but he was already roommates with Lutewing van Nutmeg. 

There aren’t that many human Avowed. Most of us are probably only a friend of a friend away from any crazy thing that happens with another one of us.

He’d watch the news later, figure out what he’d missed, and stop by to check on Maricel.

Class first. 

One-on-ones were conceptually simple. Everyone was supposed to stand in their assigned dueling block and complete an objective before the timer ran out. The objectives this time would be the two most basic. Both duelists would be told to fight head to head until one was incapacitated, or they’d be assigned to play a very simplified version of a territory claiming game.

Opponents would be completely randomized at first, and then the instructors would be adjusting the pairings to make sure that nobody was fighting the exact same class or rank every time. 

Mehdi raised his hand. “Are we going to have a duels scoreboard like the other classes? One point per win?”

“Yes!” said Heloísa.

“No,” Klein said. “Not in this course.”

“But—”

“Realism is set to movement restriction only for today and Friday,” Klein went on.

There was a buzz of excitement at that. If nothing hurt at all, then getting thrown across the gym by someone else could be fun. It depended on who the someone else was and how scared you were of their particular method of doing harm.

“Usually we don’t do pain-free duels until the last class of term, as a reward, but this has been a rough week. Don’t use it as an excuse to play around. Instead of pain, you get research. On Monday, you have to turn in a write-up about all of your injuries. Instructions for that are in your inboxes.

“Kon. Søren. You two won’t be dueling this week. You’ve both discovered new features of your powers that you need to figure out in a safe environment.” He paused. “Normally, I would congratulate you on your progress. But in your cases…

“We’re low on faculty, so you’re working on your own today. Søren, you’ll be shaping until you can repeat your accident and understand what caused it. Kon, we’ve modified some tonne weights for you. You’ll be moving them. Without hitting yourself in the face.”

Søren reddened. Kon beamed like he’d been complimented instead of criticized. 

Lexi shook his head.

Alden was privately mourning the loss of two opponents he stood a chance against. 

“We’ll be running five to ten dueling blocks all the time. When you’re not in one, you can use the practice area over there to figure out what went wrong, what went right, and what you might want to try in your next fight.”Instructor Klein gestured to the far end of the gym, where the floor had already been marked off with lines. 

“If you exhaust your body or your main talents during duels, you’ll be out. You can choose to observe from the bleachers or, if you’ve got something that’s still worthy of testing on the floor, you can do that in the practice area. If your temper gets the best of you and you continue attacking another student after the time call, you get to run laps around the track all by yourself until I have time to come and talk to you. Which should be around nine o’clock tonight, after I’ve had my supper.”

Alden looked around, trying to guess if anyone might end up in that unenviable position.

His eyes skimmed past Winston, who was wearing a red sweatband on his head that said, “Need a heeling?” 

What does that mean? Is it like his hero motto? Or is it smack talk just for today?

Marsha’s hand lifted.

When Klein nodded at her, she asked, “Why can’t we do S versus S? And A versus A?”

Haoyu, standing just in front of Alden, turned around and rolled his eyes so dramatically that even Tuyet smiled. 

“Because there’s value in learning from all of your classmates,” said Klein. “We’ll mix things up in future sessions. Now, let’s get started.”

Their first assignments popped up, and the whole class burst into chatter. 

“VANDY!” shouted Haoyu, waving at her excitedly.

“I’ve got Max,” said Lexi.

“It’s me and Olive.” Tuyet was swiping at her interface. “That’s good. She’s nice.”

Olive looked less than thrilled. 

Alden hadn’t been assigned an opponent yet, so he jogged toward the practice area.

“WALK, ALDEN!”

He halted and then waved at Klein in acknowledgment. Marsha passed by him, irritation apparent in her every stride. Her polearm, in glaive mode, was propped on one shoulder, looking as deadly as usual. And Jupiter was trotting beside her, carrying a single, fist-sized cactus in a pot. 

Is she going to fight with that? Alden wondered.

It was a cactus, but it was so petite compared to her usual choices. Maybe it wouldn’t be bad to fight her since she didn’t bring a whole hedge or a tree with her.

“These were almost free because the store flooded,” Jupiter said to Marsha. “I brought forty of them.”

Never mind. She’s planning to be a cactus pitching machine. But that’s not as bad as some of her other options. If she only sent a few at a time…

Marsha turned around to glare back at the pairs who were starting their duels. “It’s not fair. Maybe there’s value in fighting some of the A’s. But for most of them? For this kind of dueling? I might as well chop wood.”

Max and I are so invisible to her she’s not even mentioning our rank. 

Alden wanted to do a Haoyu-style eye roll at her, but he held back the impulse. He needed to focus on what he’d be doing today.

When he reached the practice area, he claimed a spot for himself where he didn’t think he’d be in anyone else’s way, dropped his duffel bag on the floor, and bent to search through it. He was way less prepared than usual. His internal clock was confused, he smelled like one of the soaps he’d bathed with at the cottage, and his combat plans were currently all the same ideas he’d had before the obstacle course last week. 

On top of that, he had no idea who he’d be up against.

I’m allowed to have string or rope, something to weight the ends, the elemental bags if I want them, and my temper spheres. 

Too bad he was fighting Avowed instead of Jatontan pests. 

With a restriction on running, and if it’s just me versus one of them…

Today, the dueling blocks were going to be empty rooms of varying sizes. No obstacles of any kind for him to work with or hide behind.  

Alden started examining the other students in the class one by one. I can’t plan something that would be good versus everyone. Maybe I should just guess and plan with one of them in mind? Hope whatever I come up with transfers to the others?

Heloísa. 

Jupiter.

Reinhard.

Reinhard? 

Okay. Him. 

I owe him back for combat assessment anyway. Let’s figure out a way to beat Reinhard. I’ll boldly feed him to victory, instead of going for a tie. 

Nothing in Alden’s bag of supplies was really screaming victory, though.

Not dying did seem doable. Partly because of Reinhard’s personality. His strongest shot would burst Alden’s shield, but he probably wouldn’t fire it at Alden. The power built up in his bow every time he hit his target and then he sacrificed that strength all in one go for the big shot.

But he would be conservative with the big ones because he wanted to shoot the most powerful members of the class with them. Not the Rabbit. If he killed Alden that way and then got assigned to duel one of the S’s immediately afterward, he wouldn’t be happy.

He would absolutely take a draw against me and use me to build up steam so that he could try to beat someone he respected more.

Snatching an arrow out of the air with his skill then firing it back at Reinhard would be the coolest option.

We’re not there yet. Save that for last ditch efforts.

Ten minutes later, when his turn came, Alden had made a plan. 

Can I call it that? It’s not really good enough to be a plan. It’s a theory. No, not even that. It’s a notion. And…oh boy, look who I’m fighting with my notion.

[Dueling Block 3]

[Opponent: Jeffy, Aquatic Brute - S]

[Incapacitate your opponent.]

[Kills: Allowed]

He only had one minute to get into position, so he thanked Jupiter for being his entruster, picked up his best effort, and speed walked toward the block with it.

“Alden,” Instructor Marion said, looking up to take in his weapon of choice as he passed. The Engaging with the Unexpected Teacher had his brown hair pulled back in its usual low ponytail.

“It didn’t take long to make!” said Alden, worried he was about to be told that his creation was too much of a creation. “I could manage it in…not an emergency maybe, but an urgency.”

“I was just going to tell you to be mindful of your injuries,” Marion said.

He was still looking at the archer-defeating basket Alden had made, though.

The quick birdnest shield method. Just take all the ribbon, paracord, fishing line, and other lightweight string you’d brought and then scramble it into a pile the right size and shape before preserving. No tying, minimal fussing. If you had a little extra time, you could make sure there were no large gaps, and if you had a big pile of stuff handy—like the mounds of elemental bags in the practice area—you could drape your scramble over it and make a basket shape. 

Then you could give it a long handle and preserve the whole situation. 

The basket was around the size of a pair of small sofas stacked on top of each other. The handle was nylon webbing about six yards long that Alden was currently holding much closer to the “basket” part than the tip, because it was too unwieldy. 

Ideally, he would have run at Reinhard with it and dropped it onto his head. The crazy mess of string would stop arrows, and then, assuming that he lost preservation when he trapped his foe, all of the crap would still get tangled up with archer’s bow and arrows. For at least a moment. 

Reinhard would be very pissed. He’d throw it all off. And then Alden would try the final part of the plan. Reinhard would naturally end up standing on top of the remains of the basket when he freed himself. At least some of those strands would still be connected to the handle. 

And then I lift and catapult him into one of the barriers. He’ll be injured at least, and if he’s not unconscious I…stab him with one of his own arrows or something.

He didn’t know how good his chances of making it work were, but it would be a really fun way of winning. 

Maybe it will work on Jeffy? 

“Alden! Alden, guess what?!”

His mohawked opponent was waving both arms as Alden stepped into the block. 

“Hey, Jeffy. What?”

“The System says I’m two levels stronger overall now!” Jeffy started to walk toward him. 

“Everyone remember to start on your own side of the dueling block,” Marion called. 

Jeffy sprang backward. “I also got a lamp!”

Alden knew all of that already, but he was glad the guy was excited. He stared at Jeffy through a gap in his basket, then he turned his new tool sideways, so that the basket was to his left and the handle extended out to his right. The block they’d been assigned was ten by twenty-five meters. If Alden stood with his back to the barrier in the start position, he couldn’t hold the basket directly in front of him. The handle was way too much unless he extended it toward Jeffy. 

He didn’t think there was actually an established dueling rule for holding your six-yard-long capture device, but he was sure someone would say something to him about it if he was bold enough to start with his weapon already a quarter of the way toward his opponent’s end of the block. 

“I heard you were working really hard during the disaster,” he said to Jeffy. “That’s awesome, man. You should be proud.”

[Duel Timer: 2 minutes]

[Start in 5s…]

Alden took a deep breath and let it out.

Nerves. 

Just a little. 

Duels at Celena North. Let’s see what this is like. 

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[Fractured ribs.]

Well, fuck.

[Fractured ribs.]

“Jeffy!” Alden said. “Let me—”

“He’s a tricky Rabbit. Gotta hold him real tight for sixty more seconds,” Jeffy said in Alden’s ear.

“Put me down!” Alden pried at the arms wrapped around his chest.

“Get the job done. Aqua Brutes have the strength and wisdom of the ocean.” 

I think I would feel better right now if I were in physical pain.

Jeffy had started his attack by bellowing “LAND MOVES!” and baseball sliding across the floor at high speed. Alden had been proud of himself for about a second, for getting his shielded basket in between the two of them before Jeffy reached him. Only for Jeffy to shout, “SKY MOVES!” mid-slide and somehow lever his stupidly strong ass up and over the basket. He’d hit the floor at what had looked like a neck-breaking angle, but apparently it wasn’t, because he sprang right back up and bounded forward to grab Alden.

And now this.

Instead of killing Alden, Jeffy was bear-hugging him from behind. The Brute had bent himself backwards so that Alden’s feet wouldn’t touch the ground. He had failed to trap Alden’s arms, so Alden could freely flail all four of his limbs helplessly in the air while an unmovable Jeffy slowly caved his ribs in and said everything in his head out loud. 

“Strength of the ocean. Max says not to overthink. Instead, overdo.”

I should yield.

“You look stuck there, Alden!” Instructor Marion shouted. “Perhaps you’d like to concede?”

“No! I’m still thinking!” He kicked his feet. He waved his arms. 

He’d still had a grip on his basket handle when he’d first been picked up, but whacking Jeffy in the head with the end of it did absolutely nothing. 

Sixty seconds later, Jeffy set him down. Alden was breathing hard. He reminded himself that Jeffy wasn’t a deliberate jerk and him whispering about the strength and wisdom of the ocean while Alden flailed wasn’t some kind of insult.

“Good fight!” Jeffy held his hand up for a high five. “Wow, your face got red!”

“You…” Alden sighed and slapped his hand. “Yeah. Good fight.”

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[Dueling Block 6]

[Opponent: Njeri, Shaper of Water - A]

[Claim your opponent’s territory by tagging all of the marked locations on their half of the block.]

[Kills: Disallowed]

“Um…this doesn’t seem fair if you can’t run,” said Njeri, staring at the red squares on Alden’s half of the block. The water jugs she’d overturned were spilling their contents onto the floor.

“I’ll just do my best.”

She lifted her hands, and the water began to form a blob in front of her. “But your shield is a net.”

That is unfortunate versus a Water Shaper. Maybe I’ll get Reinhard next time. 

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[Dueling Block 3]

[Opponent: Marsha, Meister of the Mutable Haft - S]

[Incapacitate your opponent.]

[Kills: Allowed]

Just hold out for ten seconds, thought Alden. He’d ditched the handle, and he was holding the big bird’s nest shield directly in front of him with both hands. It covered his whole body and then some. Ten would be a triumph.

[Start in 5s…]

I’ll throw myself toward her as soon as we start. Using the good foot, so nobody can complain. She won’t be expecting that from me. As soon as I land, I’ll jump to the left as hard as I can. 

I’ll zigzag around like crazy. At least ten seconds, then I’ll find out what it feels like to take one of her hits on a shield. 

The polearm was still in glaive shape. She would probably just run straight at him as soon as they started and swing it.

[1s…]

[START]

Alden bent his knees to jump. 

A sense of threat. A flash of light.

No. His fingers tightened on the shield.

For the briefest instant, there was a detectable battle—the authority of his skill to protect and preserve, resisting the attack. Then Alden was standing there, holding two fistfuls of severed cord and string. 

His skill was toast. An injury list that could have been abbreviated as “very dead” appear.

He looked across the dueling block at Marsha. She hadn’t come toward him after all. She’d just swung her weapon from over there, trusting that the magical follow-up slash would finish him on its own.

“Like chopping wood,” she muttered, stalking off.

So, thought Alden, as he watched her go. This is what duels are going to be like.

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He was the second person to head to the bleachers. Olive was there, sitting with her arms wrapped around her knees and a jacket draped over her like a tent. 

The posture and the puffiness around her eyes made Alden think she wasn’t in the mood for company. He went past her and found a seat high enough to provide a good view of all the blocks.

Should have expected this. 

When having one big skill was your style, and that skill was tired, you didn’t have anything to fall back on. 

I guess I could have told Klein that I wanted to keep going until I’d run out of temper sphere uses. The look on his face might have been worth it.

He stared down at the current batch of duelists. Max and Astrid were just standing in their block, watching each other with tight postures. Alden assumed the problem was that Astrid knew Max had put down a trap, and she was trying to guess where it was. 

The skill that went with Max’s zone spells was one that let him adjust the effects the zones had on him, reduction only at this point. But that meant he could walk around in the middle of one and fool people into thinking it was normal floor.

In the neighboring block, Reinhard versus Haoyu wasn’t going well for Reinhard. He was faster than Haoyu, but not when he was running and shooting at the same time. Haoyu had him in a chokehold already and would be winning any second. 

There was still over an hour left of class.

I have thirteen more classes until the end of term. We’ll probably be dueling in a lot of them.

How should I handle it?

Writher plunged tip-first into the back of the Brute who’d just grabbed Lexi.

Should I try to figure out how to beat each classmate?

Lucille had the Object Shaper pinned to the floor. She looked apologetic about it. 

No. Let’s stick with the basic plan. I’m here to learn, practice, and grow the skill. So if I leave a fight having done that, it’s a personal win. And if I don’t get anything out of it, it’s a loss.

He looked down at Marsha.

No taking her hits like that again this quarter.

He’d learned what it felt like. There was nothing else to be gained from a repeat.

I also can’t outrun her without a ground element surface. So she’s no good for practicing defense in a battle like the one we just had. Next time, I’Il try out something offensive.

Okay, so if she’s going to stand in place and chop wood like that whenever we fight, I might as well use her to practice hitting hard and fast from range. Getting my aim down might take a while, but how fast can I make a temper sphere on the end of a string fly if I have time to prep it in the practice area in advance?

In between making plans for Marsha, Jeffy, and Njeri, he watched everyone else. The outcomes were usually predictable. He wasn’t surprised by where the gaps between his classmates were, but witnessing the width of those gaps in this kind of scenario was brutal. 

Everyone had been freed of the need to think about delicate rescue operations, team strategy, and complicated rules. The S-ranks looked like monsters. 

And the S-rank Meisters looked like the monsters that ate the other monsters for breakfast.

Tuyet, Marsha, and Ignacio didn’t lose except to each other.

Alden didn’t see Finlay fight Ignacio. But Tuyet got the speedster by throwing all of her darts at once, and Marsha just barely beat him in a difficult-to-follow close combat situation. Alden was going to have to watch that one in slow motion. He thought Finlay’s mistake might have been positioning himself between her and the place where the polearm had fallen on the floor. 

S-rank Weapon Meisters were generally the killingest of killing machines. So it was to be expected.

It was to be expected…but a lot of people, including the members of the class who had seemed most eager for duels, were acting like they hadn’t expected it.

The obstacle course didn’t make it as stark as this, Alden thought as he watched a boy stalk away from his duel with Ignacio. He turned back to say something that made Klein bark a warning.

The tempers were running hot in the A-on-A fights as well. 

Njeri was out running on the track. Her competitive streak had gotten the better of her during a fight with Heloísa and she’d dropped a bunch of water on her roommate after time was called. It hadn’t seemed like she was really angry, just too into the battle and unwilling to stop mid-attack. 

She’d looked mortified to be sent off to do laps. 

As time passed, spell impressions wore out. Skills wore out. Some of the Brutes got tired and clumsy, and Klein ordered them off the floor. A couple of people went to use the bathroom and never came back. The smarter ones just had private breakdowns in their seats. 

“People in this program get very upset about losing,” Alden said when Lexi, wearing a towel around his neck and moving like he was exhausted, finally joined him on the bleachers.

He’d done well, and he looked satisfied. That’s probably the equivalent of an average person wearing a giant grin.

Lexi drained a water bottle in a few gulps. “How did you do?” he asked. “How’s Haoyu? I haven’t been able to pay attention to anything but my own fights since I started.”

“Marsha butchered my magic and my body,” said Alden. Haoyu hasn’t been winning as much as you. Some people have started running from him to force draws. But he’s going to be the last A-rank standing.”

Lexi looked down at the floor, then sat up straighter at the sight of Haoyu’s current opponent. “Everly’s still in it?”

“Not really. She’s been on a losing streak for a while, and she can’t run at all anymore. She just wobbles around the block until she gets killed or manages a spell cast. But when Marion tried to tell her she could quit, she shouted that she had saved her impressions and this was her gym time.”

The instructor had seemed a little concerned, but he’d let her go on with it.

After a minute, Lexi said, “The bridge really bothered her. It should bother us all of course, but she’s got Kon asking me for running tips. Like I’m some expert on training just because I exercise in the mornings.”

“Why didn’t she just ask you herself?”

Lexi frowned. “I don’t know. It’s not like I’m that hard to talk to.”

Alden clamped his mouth shut and focused on Jupiter. She and Vandy had agreed to have a Shaping-only duel. They were each sitting on the floor in their respective territories while a ball of smashed cacti and a current of air clashed in the middle of their block. 

“She blinded three people.”

“What?”

“Jupiter. With her cactus bomb.” Alden watched the green ball creep a little closer to Vandy. “She aims for the face.”



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Notes:

Remember these kids from Celena North? (Not all are listed, but I realized how long the full class type-up was taking me and decided to add the rest the next time they were featured.)

Alden Thorn — B-rank Rabbit -- The author's favorite character. Continues to plot against Reinhard.

Astrid -- A-rank Morph Brute -- Made bonding potion in the blender at Kon's party. Drew a raccoon on Alden's foot bandaid after Tuyet stabbed him during the obstacle course. Engaged in a mission to defeat Klein through acts of randomness; will continue to purse this mission as soon as they have another Klein-chasing session in class. Might like Jeffy; Reinhard seems to think so.

Finlay — S-rank Speed Brute -- from Scotland, an all-around nice seeming guy who is only just beginning to earn his first defeats, an excellent singer/songwriter if the songs are about gokoratches

Kon Roberts — S-rank Adjuster with a skill that reads objects and spell that restores them to a previous state-- Lexi's little brother. Is currently plotting to break into the huntski lodge.

Lexi Roberts — A-rank Meister of the Mind Writher -- It's not like he's hard to talk to.

Haoyu Zhang-Demir — A-rank Dura Brute -- The only person who has ever engaged in a battle of moos with Alden. Still thinks Aulia Velra should be run over with a car. Reading up on bromeliads and slow cooker recipes.

Heloísa — A-rank Strength Brute -- Both of her parents are originally from Brazil. Memorable moments: defeating Alden and his umbrella during combat assessment, wearing a green maxi dress with a teddybear purse, tying with Mehdi in the bonding potion drinking contest at Kon's party

Ignacio (Shrike) - S-rank Knife Meister -- His skill allows him to send flocks of sharp objects flying around.

Jeffy — S-rank Aqua Brute  -- Long for Jeff. His grandma says he doesn't have to pay for that tractor. Land moves. Sky moves...

Sea moves?

Maricel Alcantara — S-rank Shaper of Ground -- Has had a hard time adjusting to Anesidora, but it's actually been going much better since she made it into CNH. In intake, she knew Jacob Moore, who bought the Submerger from Orpheus Velra. At Kon's party, she received a message from him while she was crying in the bathroom. He also asked if she wanted to go with them on the boat right before he left, and she missed the last obstacle course race with her team because she decided to report his escape attempt.

Marsha - S-rank Meister of that Scary Polearm -- Enjoys strawberry milk and battle against other S-ranks. Memorable moments: bobbing up and down in the water tank because Jeffy's life jacket spell was too powerful

Max — B-rank Adjuster with zonal movement spells -- The only other B-rank in class. Grew up with his dad in South Africa. Visited his mom on Anesidora in the summers. Roommates with Jeffy, for better or worse. The oldest member of the class, just about to turn seventeen.

Njeri -- A-rank Shaper of Water -- gave Alden's team a very rousing speech about feeding their enemies to victory during the obstacle course run

Olive - A-rank Adjuster who makes illusions of herself -- Alden always knows which Olive is real. Thanks for making things weird like that, Gremlin.

Reinhard - A-rank Meister of Bow -- Being hunted by a Rabbit. Doesn't know it.

Tuyet -- S-rank Dart Meister -- She is Maricel's roommate and new friend. She tends to come across as anxious sometimes, but not so much in gym, where she is very fast and very good at killing people with her darts. Sometimes, she hides under mats out on the track and then leaps out to give unsuspecting Rabbits heart attacks and naps.

Winston Heelfeather — A-rank Speed Brute -- Filled with star power, on his way toward greater things, knows The Truth about Alden Thorn's ambitions to leverage his sad pigeon-filled life story for maximum fame. Winston's parents reportedly had him doing tons of interviews before he even left the USA, and he arrived at Anesidora with a large social media following. Because that's the Win-Win way. (Yes, I do have a list of every embarrassing thing I can turn his name into.)

Comments

Kbzzy

First for the first time HAHAHA

Josh Delgado42

Thank you for the chapter!

Poiuy

Thanks!

hmDrake

Thanks for the chapter!

ImNotHere

Yes, a new chapter! Thank you Sleyca

Reincheck

Thanks for the chapter! Rest well Sleyca!

Neal Mayne

Thank you.

Reege

Thanks for the chapter!

JustMe

Thank youuuuuu

Kate Yen

Yummy 😋 Thank you sleyca and sleep well!

CasualCheese

Soup! Lovely soup! I think you messed up in the notes, Jeffy's note should say long for Jeff!

Nathan

Thank you 👑

puppy0cam

I guess it took *quite* a while for Alden to convince Stuart that yes, his suitcase being damaged does not matter in the slightest... and by the time he had convinced him, it was already repaired. Using enough material to be worth 23 suitcases.

Cliff

This chapter needs to be split somehow. The stream of consciousness is very jarring. I liked all of the details though <3

Bryan Thew

TY for the soup

Jinjitsu

Is this the first time Aldens skill got overwhelmed? Not tired out but just broken?

Loser Me

Awww, was kinda hoping Alden would have told Stuart about him being able to use magic or smth. On that note, oof. Alden is being steamrolled in gym lmao- Hope he gets better. Thanks for the chapter~

JustMe

To me, it seems as if Alden has a general problem of not knowing how to attack. He is making up specific counters, which is great, but obviously he will never know who he is going to fight. Being able to adapt needs to come after having a general plan, shouldn't it. There are, of course, also the rank and authority difference issues...

Tungsten

thanks!

Jazehiah

I am beginning to dislike Marsha. It's a slow process. She's somewhat correct in that "winning" won't take much effort, but wrong to think there's nothing to learn. Even chopping wood is more technique than raw physical strength. It takes practice to get the pieces the way you want. What if she had tried to vary how she won? If she doesn't strive to improve, she will be left behind. It won't be today, but it will certainly happen.

Jazehiah

He lost to a tree while at Leafsong. I think that technically counts as both. It is the first time since Thegund.

Guus van der Borg

Huh, I have a feeling Alden had some real bad luck with his matchups. I bet he could've done better with most other opponents.

Kim Enteiu

Nonono! Jeffy isn’t short for Jeff, it’s long for Jeff! Please & thank you 💖

Mortch

Thanks Sleyca

Llainway

Thanks Sleyca!

Guus van der Borg

Alden should've brought his umbrella. Heloisa would've been so dissapointed if they got matched up and he didn't have it.

Obran

Bet Winsome FeelHeather isn’t on that list. Winsome-and-Losesome

Robert Smart

Wow that transition gave me whiplash. Alden seemed okay with it.

wakeuptheresbacon

Thanks! Typo: there's a missed quotation mark before 'Haoyu hasn’t been winning as much as you.'

Trugath

Hey, realistic planning! 😄 I enjoy these gym sequences with the introspection. You really feel the effort and learning.

Sesharan

Well, at least this will give Alden something to consider when he thinks about what spell he wants to pretend to affix?

Terrestrial_Biped

The whole reason duels are mixed rank and mixed class is because the high-ranks need to learn not to get cocky, and the low-ranks need to learn how to punch up (or at least, survive against a superior opponent as long as possible). She is gonna get a *nasty* defeat at some point. Hopefully it happens well before she leaves school. Hopefully she learns from it.

sebsebs

Wow, that was brutal. I think it might have been for the best though; resting his foot, watching others and making plans was probably what's best for Alden right now (especially since he was unprepared). He'll probably need a while still before his skill growth allows him to fight "on equal footing" (having a high enough level and range of usage to compensate for rank), so feeding Victory will have to wait. Thanks for the chapter

David

“Beginning to??” You have a lot more patience than I do!

Andrew Simpson

Ya know, I feel very vindicated watching Alden get destroyed after reading so many comments back in the obstacle course chapters about how Alden should just put Marsha in her place. But also, the running restriction seems pretty harsh. I can't imagine it's actually necessary if they removed his boot. Seems like a weird thing to ruin gym practice for, especially when you have magical injury prevention suits.

Terrestrial_Biped

Them's the breaks. RNGesus giveth, and RNGesus taketh away. But really, while these were really bad matchups (two S-ranks in duels, a Water Shaper in a territory contest), Alden doesn't currently have any *good* matchups. The very best is Søren, who can't use his powers effectively at all yet and, as a Shaper, should have low-ish foundation points. Søren, Kon, Astrid, Max, Olive, and *maybe* Reinhard and Everly are the only ones we know where we should expect a not-unreasonable fighting chance. That's five to seven okay matchups out of forty classmates total, twenty-five of which have powers we've learned about. It's not good odds for our boy to start with, and two of the okay-matches were out of the pool today. Duels are not his area of excellence.

Ploddingpanda

Thanks for the chapter!! Is Vandy also supposed to be included in the character notes? Love the notes anyways! And RIP to the object shaper that still remains nameless.

Andrew Simpson

Naw, Alden's skill is just especially terrible for dueling. Unless he decides to make a hammer of God by attaching a heavy thing to the end of a 6 foot long preserved rope, he's gonna have a rough time.

Guus van der Borg

True, true. I didn't really mean he'd WIN against most other opponents, just that he'd do better. At least being able to hold out for a while.

Andrew Simpson

How do you not already hate Marsha lmao. She is terrible. Her only personality trait is that she's a condescending asshole.

Andrew Simpson

Nope. Never. Well maybe one day, but it's gonna be a sweet 100 more chapters until we get any plot development there I'm guessing.

Vallla

Alden is actively hunting Reinhard, an A-rank. The B-list members would be proud! :D

ImNotHere

Alden being roommate with Lutwing van Nutmeg made me think: How will people react when they realise that the boy with Hazel in the radish video is Jacob. Adding Hazel being voluntary off world now might add fuel to the consipration fires.

Kyle

I really want to see Burden of Spell. It would burn out instantly against the S-ranks still, but it might give the As something to think about. He could probably at least go into a fight with a spell “loaded”. Possibly even one of his own wizard spells? I guess he’d run into the issue of entrustment there but it would be a neat way of seeing those spells in class without fully outing him. Maybe he can tell Lute at some point.

Temp One

It's odd, but I actually really like that Alden got steamrolled so embarrassingly badly. It's a clear demonstration of what he lacks. He's no Gary Stu character that's perfect at everything. He basically just has an awesome personality and a superhuman drive to succeed in the right circumstances. Otherwise? He's pretty weak, and outclassed by pretty much everyone at this stage.

Gregory

He's doing better than last time. He's still able to walk around and he'd probably get upset if a large carnivore threatened to rip his throat out.

Gregory

He's clearly still injured. Apparently he's ok to walk around but running would make things worse, hence the restriction.

Zachary Sloan

I think it's going to be a while before Alden doesn't get owned in duels. Tbh I'll be surprised if he even manages to be competitive before his next affixation. There's not really much he can do against opponents who are capable of directly breaking his Skill, and something like the Winston decapitation is going to be difficult to reproduce in a fight where the opponent is paying close attention to him (and any trick she does will probably only work once).

AFK37115

should've known Jupiter would aim to blind with the cactus, I love her

Trek

I think it was sort of implied that the instructors were trying to get Alden to rest due to his injury/pressure from his healer, so they probably pitted him against S-ranks (especially Marsha) on purpose so his skill run out quicker.

ImNotHere

Going again through the chapter and it seems also linked to the single track of Alden's approach. He focused on Reinhard and hoped to get him on the next duel. Reducing even more the probablity for him. But I still keep my idea that Klein played with the match-up after the personal advisement meeting

Guus van der Borg

I doubt that. Klein would never agree to it. Klein might not like what's going on, but he wouldn't pull something sneaky like that.

Francis

Poor Alden. I didn't realise that the authority gap between ranks were that huge. Our Rabbit has a loooong way to go to become a powerful knight

ImNotHere

I also like that "everything is not going well for the MC", especially because it feel realistic. But he is outclassed by everyone because everybody he knows is a high rank. In a school on Mid-city he might have better odds. Let's not forget that the strongest human in DBZ is Krillin...

Batty Corvina

Glad to see Jeffy! He seems a bit more serious since the disaster. Also positive! I like his new vibe. Also Lexi ... Totally not that difficult to talk to. 💀

Faiir

Yeah, the difference between last chapter's serious PTSD Alden and whining "my gym class teacher is not letting me win" kids, like, are you serious? These are your biggest problems?

Tori, Writher #1 Fan

Yes! That Jeffy scene is exactly what my soul needed today. I'm glad he's listening to Max and that he has a lamp.

Anthony Lutz

I think alden stil standing is two reasons. Today he was essentially at full authority so could handle being skill exhausted by an attack. Second reason, Marsha isnt as overwhelming as the tree was.

Josh Brooks

Thoughts: I find it pretty interesting how Alden thinks he can fight. He really goes for the Primary approach of head-to-head authority battles when needing to deal damage. I hope there is some kind of incapacitation that can be achieved by bearing some kind of burden (not in a horrifying Griveck way like using burden of secret to make them unable to have memories or something like that). Alden trying very hard to plan for individual cases is cool characterization to me. Like, he really wants to use what he has in front of him to succeed because that’s how he’s had survival in the past. Even if everyone around him can succeed wildly without all of that, he has had enough realistic experience with his skill that he doesn’t get frustrated at his lack of victory so far in duels. All of his wins are hard-earned, with the only possible exception being getting into Celena North, which is debatable (surviving Thegund=go to good high school??? Ok, but I’m sure that wasn’t why Alden fought so hard [Winston-level mental gymnastics]). It’s cool to feel Alden’s… reluctance to feel hopeless? Is how I would put it? Or maybe a resistance to spiraling? It’s cool to see a clear perspective shift that matches the emotional journey of Alden. I think Alden as a “main character” is interesting given how well-written and how obviously respected by the author every other character is. It really does feel like Alden just happens to be Sleyca’s favorite character. Which, I mean, he’s second for me. Boe is clearly the main character along with Sophie

Tristan A

I agree with the sentiment that Alden losing so badly makes sense. However, I know the story is more of a slow burn, but I do hope that Alden gets his recognition soon. Like even if he can't beat S's it is really frustrating to watch him work so hard but not see a lot of recognition or payoff. Not to say I'd ever stop reading but it would be rough to sit through another year and Alden is still getting whooped and still not being appreciated by the higher ranks.

Saaski

I don’t know. Alden’s goal never was to learn how to whoop ass… 1v1 was never going to be his strong point. And in teams, well, I don’t think anyone who was on his team last week doesn’t appreciate him. It’s mostly Klein that I’m frustrated with. A teacher who refuses to directly engage with you in class is detrimental.

Tristan A

Oh I definitely don't mean that Alden should be 1v1ing people. Just that I hope for him to solidify himself in class as someone who is not to be looked down upon because of his rank. Like the team battle was cool, but I do want ALDEN to standout. Through whatever means is best for him.

S

So I've been thinking a lot about Winston. For a host of reasons, I think he must have attended Winnacunnet High School before moving to Anesidora. The main impression is: he seems both well-off and spoiled, which is socioeconomically more common in that area. His personality also would likely have gotten an involuntary adjustment if he lived in rural parts of the state.

ChoWingGom

Thank you for the chapter. We are skipping the discussion about mind-healers. To be revealed in moments of introspection later, I suspect. The mysterious voulge-glaive-guisarme-bec-de-bardiche is properly named as a Mutable Haft. Marsha : chop wood. Njeri : carry water. Søren : Enlightenment?

QY

Jeffy sprang backward and said everything in his head out loud... Also LAND MOVES...lmao... Also Alden tries to un-mad himself cuz Jeff doesn't mean to be mean...Jeffy is just so loveable

hercule pyro

He's recognised by the 4th, there's only 3 higher than that. (Like I know what you mean but...he's sharing practice time with these kids but they're not playing in the same league. Why should anyone care what Marsha thinks of him?)

Markus

His roommates are starting to catch on that Aldens development is not normal.

MeYouIt

Spoiled for sure. But I don't think he got into the social media/influencer sphere on his own. I get the feeling that he has at least one "tiktok parent". The kind of person who makes a tiktok and monetices their children in some way. I kinda feel bad for him (despite his horrible personality), he's just a kid after all. He has horrible parents for sure.

A

Once he has ‘catch and release’ without touching an item dialed in - the first meister to receive their own attack redirected at full force is going to be in for a surprise.

A

I wonder how Alden’s authority awareness, growth and control will play into wrestling a meister for control of their tool? Marsha’s careless ‘wood chopping’ doesn’t sound like she’s training well except on occasions.

JJ Hunter

Bwahahahahaha, the references to Porti-loth's reactions are GOLD and I can't wait to go reread with especial attention to every time Alden is ducking his healer's instructions (and he still hasn't watched the Goodchild Kwoo-pak shows either! Better get on that, Alden).

JJ Hunter

@Jazehiah, lost an authority battle with a tree vs. Marsha "chopping wood" now... *squints suspiciously in Sleyca's direction re: potential punning*

Lee

Thanks for the chapter. So did Maricel's friend survive the magical submarine explosion? Don't leave us hanging Sleyca.

LadyLark

Different heroes for different jobs. A firefighter isn’t expected to do the same thing as a police officer and I think Heroes shouldn’t either. Honestly though should Alden start using Chainer enhancements. He’ll be a lot more dangerous.🧐

Clint

Maybe. But he’s still uneven from Waves. The Palace would be so disappointed in his luminous soul.

David Kanevsky

I think all the leaves that authority clashes on the fastest way to grow his authority. In a real fight he would probably run away and get one of his swank friends to deal with the problem.

David Kanevsky

Also his skill is primarily protection and sacrifice based. Not great for 1v1 training fight

Smaug

She isn't just an asshole, her defining trait is that she is a duelling nut and does not care about anything else. And as she has a very powerful duelling skill there are very few people in class that can give her the challenge she wants.

Gaffer

Sleyca yells TIME MOVES! and pounces!

Keven Leigh

Sometimes I just want Alden to shine. Having him get stomped puts into perspective everyone else but man does it hurt my feels.

Smaug

Oh no, he got in trouble with Porti-loth. Also, oof that Marsha just one-shotted the only thing Alden's skill is supposed to be strong at (in a combat situation). Really highlights the magical strength between ranks.

PearsMan

Felt a bit like whiplash from last chapter to this one! I thought we were FINALLY going to have Alden to start the healing and then go back to school. Not the other way around. It feels like this is taking a bit too long out of story to happen. Fun chapter anyways. I’m surprised Alden didn’t sit this one out considering he can’t be a rabbit. He’s already at a disadvantage being a b but oh well it was a good eye opener anywho. Imagine your only prescription is to eat any food on earth and you somehow fail at that. I sympathize with the doctors struggles.

Keven Leigh

Honestly agree with you 100% it seems that the only time he's cool is when it really matters. Hard to really think about what his skill can do when it's at the Knight scale. Something I want to see happen at some point is alden taking the burden of the Authority binding off someones shoulders temporarily

Clint

Today’s life lessons: - Always do your homework. - Follow your doctor’s orders. - A notion is not a plan, it’s not even 12% of a plan. - This is why no one uses sidekicks anymore.

Josh Brooks

Yeah, his skill is preservation-based, but only because that’s what he can do with it right now. I don’t really think he will make a huge breakthrough again with BOAB to get a good 1v1 skill, but I do think trying to force it to act like the Primary’s skill is a limitation that he probably will have to overcome at some point. His friends ARE swank, though, that we can say for sure

JJ Hunter

It was a learning experience! I like Alden's reframing of what counts as a personal win vs loss - not winning on combat terms, but winning in terms of growth and authority gain.

Josh Brooks

Also, while having your skill hit zero is a good way to grow the skill, iirc the fastest way to grow authority is for the user’s own free and bound authority to clash, not the user’s and someone else’s

JJ Hunter

Has Jeffy been taking lessons from Astrid in doing the bold unexpected thing? That land moves to sky moves sequence was surprising and hilarious.

J Reynolds

The thing is, Marsha isn't wrong. It took her about a second to one-shot Alden. We can hope that she is handed an unexpected defeat by Alden or Max - or one of the A-ranks - but until this happens, her current attitude is the correct one.

Lee

We know it's not Jeffrey. Could his actual name be Jefferson?

Doc_harry

I have an argument on the other side, not sure many will agree. If your hero is too bad against all other heroes in mock battles, but comes out ahead when it's the real deal, it may come to feel like plot armor rather than him being able to do it under pressure. So it's good to see Alden get beat here, but I don't think too much of the same will be good for him or the story. Sleyca has shown previously that he can balance things out, so pretty interested in seeing what Alden comes up with to deal with his fellow superheroes.

Jean

Typos: and what you might want to try in your next fight.”Instructor -- the abominable auto linker strikes again An injury list that could have been abbreviated as “very dead” appear. -- past tense, so appeared is more appropriate “Marsha butchered my magic and my body,” said Alden. Haoyu hasn’t been winning as much as you. Some people have started running from him to force draws. But he’s going to be the last A-rank standing.” -- quotes should resume after 'said Alden.' Other thoughts: Lutewing van Nutmeg, ha! Also wow, duels are brutal in this program. Porti-loth yells at Alden, off camera but sooner than expected.

rhekke

Marsha isn't wrong, but she is incredibly short sighted. If the only thing you excell at is one on one duels, than that is the only thing you're useful for. If she doesn't branch out, what superhero team is going to want a member who is useless 99% of the time? And she cannot even hope to measure up to the chaos monsters. She is pursuing a path of crippling over specialization.

Other Tan

Alden: WIZARD MOVES.

Adunn

Dang he couldn’t hold out at all. I kinda hope we get a skip to the next skill upgrade.

Jim

Notes Addendum: Object Shaper - A Rank shaper of objects. How could you forget our second favorite character? He got screen time today!

Tadas

Marsha is being positioned as the final boss of dueling. I wonder if she will get humbled during the class or outside. I could definitely see her being bad loser and running a lot of laps.

FrostyDaHomeboy

Gotta say, this is the first time I have ever seen an author truly bully one of their own characters. Poor Win-Win, you have a whole list of mockery ahead of you.

Clint

Prediction: Alden will help Lexi figure out what’s going on with Mind Writher, and a lowly A-rank Meister will defeat Marsha. But not this week.

Jazehiah

I mean, the genre is progression fantasy. The main character getting steamrolled early in their journey as a way to determine their baseline is almost required.

Clint

Is exhausting your skill’s authority a good way to make it grow? I’m wondering if Alden could get Lexi to whip his shield every night before bed. If it mostly grew his skill authority, it could make him stronger *and* postpone his next affixation.

DAK

I get the feeling that none of Alden’s duel victories are going to be his own for a while. But there’s definitely room for coaching wins… hanging out with Stu, he’s probably going to have quite a bit of insider knowledge of skill techniques, weapons potential and general authority control that might start tipping the scales in other battles. I’m sure Max is taking vicarious enjoyment in Jeffy winning more.

DaftWully

Alden should learn how to use a sling. It is something he can make out of paracord, his orbs would make decent ammunition, and with enough practice, one can get pretty accurate with a sling.

Aspiring Moth

Lexi's skill would start getting blown out after Alden's next affixation. maybe sooner given meister skills are on the smaller side and there's only a one rank gap

Anon.

Alternatively, cactus to the face might also work.

Terrestrial_Biped

For anyone not previously aware, the comment above is a play on the zen saying, Before enlightenment, chop wood, carry water. After enlightenment, chop wood, carry water.

JJ Hunter

This chapter is reminding me a great deal of the initial disastrous (for Alden) obstacle course runs. I wonder if there will be any 2x2 duel opportunities coming that would enable his excellent teamwork to shine some more, or if he will commit harder to figuring out his offensive options. Alden would have been in serious difficulty in the greenhouse if Zeridee had not recovered enough to act decisively and save him.

Lorcan

I do like the fight with Marsha emphasizing the vast power difference between the ranks, especially with that pure auth v auth contest that overwhelmed Alden.

Lorcan

Exhausting your skills and spells was essentially the daily instruction for the class.

JJ Hunter

...I'm pretty certain I've seen extremely disgruntled cats in the same position as Alden being grappled by Jeffy here, all four limbs flailing irritably. It's an amazing mental image, hope it inspires one of the fan artists among us.

Emily Gurnavage

“Jupiter. With her cactus bomb.” Alden watched the green ball creep a little closer to Vandy. “She aims for the face.” Fucking hell Jupiter, no, lol. Even with the suits thats a lil fucked lol. Psycologically if nothing else. On par with the pain gun from intake testing imo. That girl is crazy.

Emily Gurnavage

I dont think hes ever gonna "hold out" head to head against a combat oriented S while still a support oriented B. Tricks to manage, other uses for BoaB over time, maybe one day increasing from a B to an A or higher, more Wizard skills he can use without suspicion, but I dont think he will ever fairly handle them as a B.

Maddy Weller

This was a fun chapter! I’m not awake enough to say anything poignant about it, but I want to get back into commenting on chapters, because I know if I was writing I’d like comments. So thanks for the gym chapter, and poor Alden getting beat up in duels. If it does manage to win, it’ll probably make it even more impressive, at least?

Shimelton

As always, the character sheets are my highlight

Robert Mullins

Alden's pretty spiteful to health professionals. Gets told to eat native foods and immediately takes the first trip to another planet since he got back from Thegund

A Free Skeleton

So Max was tutoring Jeffy. Makes sense, they're roommates IIRC. It's probably good for both of them.

ImNotHere

I would bet on teamwork It is his goal since the beginning and it is his strong point as seen in the rescue game and the obstacle race. He still needs to learn some personal defense/attack moves to not finish in the way like Fairy

FruitsPunchSamurai

Yeah the story keeps setting up the eventual reveals and the payoff for all these moments but it never actually takes that step. It’s teasing us non-stop. With the way the magic works, Alden is also discouraged from growing faster and being ambitious. I’m sure he will eventually get some personal motivation but god knows how long it will take to reach that point. I enjoy the story but I do hope for more payoff.

Robert Mullins

The worst part of being Alden is that despite how picky the gremlin is about his food and how it will prevent him from eating things he didn't even know came from an animal, it still won't let him him know if someone spits in his food. Since the spit was given to him. Might make for an awkward moment with Gorgon though.

Anon-Anon

I'm still salty that he cant go with an umbrella as a main weapon/shield. Only time i've seen it is in King's Avatar.

Poiuy

@Doc, Alden isn’t trying to defeat *people* in real life though. He’s trying to learn about his skill. So things going badly for him in mock battles against high rankers doesn’t really translate to how things might work when it’s the real deal, except that he will have had *lots* of experience using his skill in different types of impossible situations. And his goal is to develop his skill, so that tracks.

Anon-Anon

I know some might see it as a cop out but I wonder if he could ever entrust his own burdens to himself "All burdens" is in the name. (and to just add on, how OP the skill could be in a psychopaths hands if they just saw everything and everyone as burdens.)

L. Rattay

Klein 100% noticed Alden failed to make it 10 minutes early to class.

Brandon Steele

I am wondering why Alden hasn't tried some type of armor.

Ers20

Meister skills are small, but they seem to have most of their authority bound up in their weapon separate from any particular skills with it. I think that might be part of why Alden got so crushed, meisters have all of their eggs in one basket like he does.

John D Jones

Just assume no. No one on/in the submarine survived that submarine hitting the Matadero force field and exploding.

Charlie

1. Man, Porti-Loth really did give Alden one impossibly easy to follow thing to do and Alden fucked it up. 2. SKY MOVES!

denatured

I want to see Alden preserve the momentum of something without preserving the physical object. He can't preserve a weapon someone else is holding, but the impact from it? Totally meant for him, sent with love from his entruster. Then, put the momentum back into its natural home at a strategic moment.

denatured

He decided against his poncho-armor because he won't learn enough from using it in class. Same as gloves, though I really want to see him use some gloves to pick up and pitch a classmate across the gym.

En Tee

That raises the free authority more than the bound; I highly suspect that skill vs. skill raises the bound authority more than the free.

Brandon Steele

I was thinking more of shoulder pads and leg pads. Something along the lines of football padding. Though "gloves" would be interesting. I wonder how the "weight" of what he lifts would be affected... If something is inside a bag that is preserved, then he ignores the weight since it is being lifted by the bag. Would that apply to things he holds with a preserved glove?

Josh Brooks

Ah, right. Bound authority has different metrics than free authority. Forgot about that

Thayle Lee-Logg

Great chapter! Here's some typos:

Thayle Lee-Logg

His skill was toast. An injury list that could have been abbreviated as “very dead” appear. -- Should be 'appeared'

Thayle Lee-Logg

“Marsha butchered my magic and my body,” said Alden. Haoyu hasn’t been winning as much as you. Some people have started running from him to force draws. But he’s going to be the last A-rank standing.” -- Missing a " beside 'said Alden.'

Thayle Lee-Logg

When you’re not in one, you can use the practice area over there to figure out what went wrong, what went right, and what you might want to try in your next fight.”Instructor Klein gestured to the far end of the gym, where the floor had already been marked off with lines. -- Missing space between 'your next fight."' and 'Instructor Klein'.

Colton

I wonder what constitutes a Rank up for Avowed? Is it highest single skill level due to increased Authority? Such few people have ranked up that's my personal theory. In Ch 77, they mention Alden would be lucky to have a skill cap at around lvl 12-14. He's already level 10 with another level coming in less than a year. Very doable to hit level 20 by the time he graduates for a rank A classification. *Thank you everyone for the clarification!*

Clint

Agreed. An S-rank strength brute would take longer to get through Alden's shield.

denatured

He's due for another affixation in less than a year, not just another level. That happens when his free authority approaches his bound authority, meaning roughly a doubling. If only his free authority grows, he'll be a level 18 in less than a year. Since his bound authority is also growing, it'll be more than that. But we don't know what the skill level transition point is for a rank-up.

Matt DiMeo

Personally I think it’s mostly just a bone the system can decide to hand out whenever. Free authority greater than what the next rank up would have had at initial affixation, which any dedicated leveler could reach.

Aspiring Moth

Ers20 - my reading is the opposite. Meisters have their authority split many ways. they have a lot of foundation points, multiple skills and multiple spell impressions even at low levels. the reason why Alden got crushed was because of the massive difference in authority. Sleyca previously said that a starting A rank would have less authority than a level 40 ish B rank, but the B rank would lose because their authority is split between multiple skills. if we extrapolate out, that would mean a level 80 B rank would be equivalent to a level 1 S rank. the fact that meister authority is split between multiple talents while Alden has most of his in one skill closes the gap a bit, but the gap is still so huge that Alden can't do anything

Aspiring Moth

Gregory - the difference between now and last time is that he has more authority than just his skill. last time he had just affixed, and rabbits have almost no free authority as part of their class design. right now he has free authority of around 15% of his skill, extrapolating from the 13% figure given two Sundays prior

Spygeneer

I think he'd need to take some of the skills that allow him to preserve conceptual stuff first.

Aspiring Moth

I'm reminded of Haoyu's mum saying that it's too early for them to start looking for counters for specific skills. Alden needs to get better at dueling generally first

Robert Mullins

Levels represent exponential growth. Each level represents somewhere between 10-20% of the total authority held before that point. So double the authority will be closer to half again his current level. A jump to level 13 or 14.

Felix

I have a perfect solution to Alden's long range attack problem: just bring a gun.

zdm

Sky moves!!!

Aspiring Moth

Sleyca, I have a question. can an avowed affix the same skill twice? Reinhardt has a weak arrow recall skill, probably F or D rank. As he gets better as an archer, he's going to be shooting arrows faster and more than one at once etc. This means that the weak skill will be burned out even quicker if he's in a situation where he needs to recall his arrows. What should an avowed in his situation do? Arrow recall is a bottleneck for him in extended encounters. I assume affixing a bigger skill with the same function is an option, but they probably wouldn't both contribute to the effect in the same ways shaper skills seem to

JJ Hunter

We do know the System can affix more previously free authority into an existing skill - that's what part of what Mother enabled for Alden (adding 'more fuel' to his base skill instead of affixing as many foundation points). ETA: maybe there will be a create arrow skill at higher levels, or enabling Reinhardt to shoot less conventional arrows (arrows of pure authority, special magical equipment ones, etc).

Aspiring Moth

yes but that only matters in the case of uncapped skills. this maybe D rank arrow recall skill probably caps out in the 4-10 range, but the demand placed on it will continue to increase the more powerful reinhardt gets even after it reaches its cap

DAK

Life gives you discount cacti, you make cactus face bombs. It’s a thing.

Alex Scriber

The big difference between now and getting exhausted at Leafsong is that Alden has learned to feel his authority, so he no longer confuses it with his willpower. Which makes me wonder again if there’s something to Jeffy using his powers “really hard.” If Jeffy is still mixing up his willpower and his authority, he may really be more thoroughly using his powers that way.

Doc_harry

@Poiuy, my comment was in response to "He basically just has an awesome personality and a superhuman drive to succeed in the right circumstances" by op. My point is if it was just his personality and drive to succeed that makes him good in real situation and that is repeated again and again, it is going to feel like plot armor. It's much more realistic and important for the story that he gets steamrolled here, but can win in others on his skills alone, learns from his mistakes here to develop his skills.

Aspiring Moth

Robert Mullins - levels aren't that neat. if everyone had one giant skill, sure. but a low rank skill will level up at a 10-20% increase of authority from its previous level, even though that the authority quantity is less than if a bigger skill levelled up. but both are counted as a level by the system. an avowed who levelled up two F rank skills will have gained less authority than an avowed who levelled up a single A rank skill, but the first will have a higher number by their name. each skills growth is exponential (up to a cap) in relation to itself, but things are too complicated to say when looking at the avowed as a whole

Alex Scriber

It would be good if the school offered martial arts classes of some sort. It doesn’t matter how strong or fast you are if you don’t have any leverage - as Jeffy so kindly demonstrated. Fundamentals still matter and flailing at each other like kids in the playground isn’t going to teach them.

SnuggleCat

Jeffy whispering about the ocean in Alden's ear killed me, lmao

Lorcan

It's been a couple days since we were on screen on Earth. They might know.

Lorcan

Trying to suss out the line with Win-Win between The Family vs The Brand.

Daniel Franz

Poor Unnamed Object Shaper, not even acknowledged in the addendums

Edward Shattuck

This is a truly horrifying thought. Made all the worse by being 100% lore accurate.

Lorcan

Plus that follow up slash skill seems to be heavy on the directed authority/magic scale, very focused in the right way to overwhelm Alden.

Adamas Shield

[future] Alden: 'before enlightenment, one must chop wood and carry water, and that after enlightenment, one must chop wood and carry water.' [future Marsha/Njeri ]: 'what?!' [future Alden with the momentum of that much water and the cutting power of Polearm in his hands]: 'nothing. Just planning ahead (to hunt Reinhard)' :D :P

Ian T Hathaway

"Need a heeling?" I have never been more convinced Winston is a future super villain

Zenty

I already miss Stu and his family.

Ers20

Aspiring Moth: The question is, what happens when you're doing something where multiple parts of your affixation apply? If a brute uses Punch Skill, they're benefitting from both whatever authority is in the skill and whatever authority is in their relevant attributes. Marsha's entire build is probably focused on that attack. But maybe they don't stack with perfect efficiency... There's a lot of ambiguity.

Robert Mullins

@Sleyca is Alden fighting Njeri and Marsha an intentional "Before enlightenment: Chop Wood, Carry Water" reference?

Robert Mullins

Aspiring Moth, yes agreed. That just further reinforced my point that levels don't cleanly match to a specific amount of authority. And that's even before the system decides to fudge numbers and change when levels are given to suit it's own motivations. Like waiting until Jeffy did something impressive in water and give him 2 levels rather than giving him a level previously when he was still upset at his skills.

ImNotHere

He would not have done it out of spite but to prove their point to Alden. And it might have come from the school (Saleh was on that meeting too). The school is known to arrange match-up during the entrance tests, why not during classes? The groups were also pre arranged during the firsts classes of MPE

Etia

where's juniper in the character list?

ImNotHere

not a couple of days, more 24+ hours (the president speech was on monday evening and MPE is on wednesday late afternoon) But with the repercusion, nearly everybody must have look after Jacob so it is possible. Just a couple of things going in the not-know side: - the video was not on Jacob, he would just be in the background and people would not be looking into meme while looking for info - people asking him if he knew Jacob would have pointed it

ImNotHere

winning might not be possible but reacting could. Deflecting take less energy than blocking and it might be the same with authority involved. And broadening his mind might help, he planned for one person and kept that tool for every fights even against the shaper of water A little bit like his fight with Finlay during combat assessment, not being at the same level but being able to react in some sort of way

Kyle

I could totally see the entrustment thing being another “training wheel” like the movement part was before. I think the core of the skill is “bearing a burden on behalf of another”, and the entrustment enforces that so that the Avowed can’t just use it frivolously/selfishly. I think the eventual interpretation will be that he can use it practically whenever “in service to the Triplanets/Earth” or some such, but there’s a lot of perspective shifting that would need to be done to get to that point.

Robert Mullins

Alden needs a trustworthy Artonan to give him a quest to establish a mentor/student contract with one of his teachers. This way he can reveal his skill and wizardry to them and only them while still being protected and not being restricted by his contract with Joe. Since Joe's contract can't interfere with official System missions. Klein would probably be the ideal choice. With Plim a slightly distant second.

David

If Alden would just watch Kwoo-pak he’d learn that healers are another kind of instructor and that he mustn’t be so << incorrigible >>. It must be very frustrating for Porti-loth to be stuck in this catch-22 with such an obstinate child!

Jazehiah

The instructors suggested that. As they explained, a gun will not develop his talent, and the goal is talent development.

Terrestrial_Biped

I mean, I think the solution for Reinhard is to carry a lot of arrows and not get in an hour-long slugging match? Most fights are over very quickly. Like less than a minute. Normally the first person to land a serious blow wins. To have a long fight, an archer would need to either continually miss, or do basically no damage at all, and in either case continuously evade being seriously hit themselves. That's not likely.

Obran

Winston FeelBetter/FeelBitter?

Anon.

Defensive builds do exist. Like future higher level Alden, or Hayou's family...

Shawn

ditto. This felt like such a letdown after the previous chapters. It didn't help that the RoyalRoad chapter released yesterday was such an wonderfully emotional chapter that this just feels lesser by comparison.

Aspiring Moth

yeah, defensive builds or multiple opponents. imagine a meister of bow fighting demons in a chaos infected environment for example

Nyroe

The to take it a step further, whenever he is attacked Alden us being entrusted with the damage, the pain, and the injuries. Totally something he needs to preserve, wouldn't want to drop those.

Nyroe

He's going to be pivitol to the plot later. That object shaper is going to be the first to find out Alden's secret and then have a whole moment of saying, "I've been here the whole time! Watching, waiting!" It's going to be glorious.

hercule pyro

Like the school said, if/when he really needs a weapon they'll give him a wrightmade gun. He could spend the time learning to use a sling but he'd rather spend that time learning magic instead. This is just a situation where his goals don't align very well with hero-school's.

Josiah

Alden is gonna have a massive guilt trip once learns Mina was on the ship, isn't he?

Aspiring Moth

Alden didn't even think about handicapping himself with a second preserved item this gym session. the instructors were out to crush him so they didn't get shouted at by the wizard healer for not taking care of the golden child, so it didn't make any difference today. but it definitely will in some match ups against the A ranks in later sessions

Smaug

Sleyca, you really should include the chapter notes in the .epub file. For someone who likes to auto-send new Patreon chapters to my ebook reader, I feel like I am missing a lot if I only read it like that.

Blorcyn

It feels like order of magnitudes doesn’t it? I just wonder if S1 is 100x B1 or if that’s A1. Considering skills can ten top and 20 top, it’d be far more common for lower rank ups if people only had to achieve 100 combined levels in skills (F -> D) (B—>A). If S is 100 x 100, does that feel too high from B? I’m not sure. And yet the Knights are so much stronger and growth is exponential so maybe? I cant actually remember what BOAB is at, but it’s like 9-12 or something isn’t it? Next affixation is expected to get to 30-40ish? So if its two orders of

Blorcyn

Eventually (probably not the next affixation in 8 in-story months, but maybe the one after?) Alden will rank up from B to A. He will have various attentions before then, and spells etc, but he’ll have broad school wide attention then. I don’t know if he’ll hit S before uni? I feel like him being peak normal rank while at peak educational experience makes sense. He’s at the top of the human hero programme experience and he’ll have planetary renown.

Aspiring Moth

This feels like the next logical development of his shielding ability. It's pretty much a trope at this point for characters with defensive powers to have some sort of reflection or thorns ability. this fits in with his current practice of trying to catch and redirect projectiles, and gives him some ability to fight back in these gym sessions. the momentum is definitely meant for him even without mental gymnastics, and he can preserve momentum when it's a property of an object. the question is whether separate from whole can be used this way without any additional seeds meant for it added to BoaB. assuming it can be used this way, this should be easier than projectile redirection since the only point of failure is the timing for activating separate from whole

denatured

I think return to Earth was inevitably going to be a downer. So many awful and stressful things left to deal with, and although school was "starting to feel like a life he was building" it seems like the best parts of that happen in the dorm, and he's not staying there yet. And even if he did they'd be down a von Nutmeg so it wouldn't be the same.

David

Alden once again showing his ruthless pragmatism. By crushing Reinhard in their first duel, he seeks to demonstrate his superiority over the primary competition for the position of squad leader. If he’s thorough enough, he may even be able to bring Reinhard to his side, instantly consolidating the requisite power to assume the mantle directly. Lucille will surely back him. His timely ploy during the obstacle course neatly demonstrated what he can offer both his allies and his enemies. Haoyu and even Lexi will follow when it’s clear he has more support than they do. He’s already insinuated himself to Maricel, who would otherwise be the natural choice as an S-rank squadmate. She is much too distraught at the moment to compete herself, and by the time she’s recovered, it will be too late. Astrid and Jeffy are soon going to be too busy dating to keep up with the role’s responsibilities, thanks to Reinhard’s own machinations. That just leaves Njeri and Everly, neither of whom possess the advantages Alden enjoys, and one of whom is compromised by ties to an enemy squad… Yes, Alden’s plans proceed nicely. His growth outpaces all others. Soon, it will be too late to stop his rise. Nobody suspects the quiet rabbit.

hercule pyro

I don't think so necessarily? He's generally been fairly good at taking responsibility for appropriate-ish things and not feeling guilty for stuff that isn't his fault

Fleisch

I still feel that armor would be a great choice simply because it would allow him to grow his skill more. He would also learn more in depth on how long his skill would last with basically full body armor. Out in the real world, he should have a form of armor for protection. Might as well get used to using it Maybe he would learn a way to keep his items that are preserved flexible as well, so he could walk normally.

David

The odds of Alden getting two S-rank matches aren’t as bad as I thought. There are 42 people in his class, 11 are S rank. This reduces to 38 competitors with 9 Ss after accounting for Maricel, Kon, and Soren. That means the odds of getting two S-ranked opponents in the first three matches is 12.38%*. Although that isn’t really an accurate assessment because his match length is biased toward ending against an S-rank opponent, since they can so easily overwhelm his shield. It also doesn’t account for drama. Anyway, what I’m saying is that if they duel every week, he’s likely to run into this problem multiple times before his next affixation. *p = 12.38% = 3 * (9*8*29)/(38*37*36)

Azeroth

While I loved the previous chapters, I’m glad we’ve moved back to earth. You can only have so many emotional chapters in a row. I’m ready for action chapters again

Thomas Todd

Does that 42 represent the people at the gym today or on total because not everyone attended from the total class

N0m_N0m

Maybe, but I'm willing to bet that most Meisters have greater Authority invested and would win if he tried to take their weapon from him. He probably could perserve/redirect Marsha's "wind cut" in the near future, but the glaive itself is off the table for now.

Jeff Petkau

Three things: * Careful with the leg * Watch Kwoo-pak shows * Eat earth food Alden did none of them. He is not a good patient.

Temp One

@Doc, I agree! But the important point is that the MC is not perfect, and definitely has room for improvement. Honestly, I think he could be the first person to beat Marsha. It seems like Weapon Meisters crush everyone else in combat, but all the Meisters throw their weapons, and Alden is uniquely suited to handling that kind of offense.

puppy0cam

considering Stuart plans to go off to join his father's crusade, it might even be several hundred chapters away.

N0m_N0m

I mean, it probably will come out soon that Alden currently has saved more lives than the rest of the class put together. like in terms of fighting he is weak but in terms of accomplishments and actually BEING a hero he is miles ahead

David

It’s everyone. I went to an old chapter and counted all the people listed in the before-chapter notes where it broke down who is on which team. Maricel is absent (41) and Kon and Soren are sitting out (39). Alden can’t duel himself (38). Bonus stats: odds of 3 S-ranks in a row is 1%. Odds of exactly 2 S-ranks in 5 matches is 50%.

Shawn

Once upon a time Sleyca typed up a comment that basically said a level 40 B rank has more total authority than a level 1 A rank but probably can't bring all that authority to bear because it's split into so many different skills. This is borne out with just how utterly absurd his dual against Marsha (Marsha Marsha) was.

John D Jones

I think Plim would be one of the worst choices because she seems too excitable to keep her "faucet" turned off.

Robert Mullins

The Contract would prevent her from sharing anything she shouldn't if that's what you mean. Otherwise, I don't understand.

Stonedwarf Stonedwarfson

Marsha is very rude, and is going to get into real trouble underestimating people one day, BUT she definitely had a point today. What is the point of these mismatched duels? The students learn nothing from them, a waste of valuable gym time. The instructors need to apply appropriate suit settings and other handicaps so that every duel is a challenge for everyone. For instance how much practice has Marsha had fighting someone with a shield she can't just power through. Outside of the gym Alden is not that guy, but in the gym he should be. One last gripe, the instructors should be absolutely insisting Alden try every object he can think of in the gym. Versatility is a strength in itself and they should be helping him develop it, instead of building this weird dependence on cordage alone. Fighting a water shaper with a net grumble grumble, a NET!!

Robert Mullins

Lower ranks need to learn not to fuck with higher ranks in actual battles. Especially anyone who is higher ranked in a combat oriented class. I imagine many of the A ranks and even some Bs will think that with proper hero training they stand decent odds against lesser or untrained S. This goes a long way to showing just how wide the gap is.

JJ Hunter

@Stonedwarf Stonedwarfson, Alden just learned that his best defense will likely never be strong enough to hold against Marsha's offense. That's a valuable lesson to learn in gym where learning it isn't permanently lethal.

Super Super Supportive Supporter

Cheer up Alden, this is just setting up for chapter 476 which releases in 2030 where your real rank is 3 and your skill is invulnerable to everyone in gym

Shawn

denatured. That's a great point. The best parts of school are his roommates and friends, not school itself.

Smaug

Why? Her getting in the school already had a below 1% probability (poor class, mind control skills, poor rank).

Stonedwarf Stonedwarfson

True. Learning you will sometimes / often be outclassed and or overpowered is a very valuable lesson but isn't it Marsha not Alden who is in the most need of learning it?

Joel Wells

I agree that the limitation to one object is stupid. I understand that its meant for Alden to get creative with his skill. But it seems like an artifical limitation on a skill that already has limitations. Such as needing someone to give entrustment.

Jacob Moore

Winston knows the truth. Plus, I wouldnt bet against Jeffy stumbling onto the truth.

Jacob Moore

I feel surprisingly bad saying it but i'm glad Jacob died. He was an interesting character and added to the story but I feel so weird every time I read his name.

Stonedwarf Stonedwarfson

No known reason why he couldn't affix multiple copies but I think he would eventually outpace even mutlple copies of aweak retreival skill. He shouldn't be crippled by it, as per the other comments here, but he will be stuck with a nearly useless skill, tying up a significant portion of his 'self' because earth's contract sucks like that.

Saaski

This! I’ve been wondering about this for a while. For a school that is supposed to be at the top of the fighting villains and disaster relief totem pole, they really seem to be lacking in some fundamentals. Like actual martial arts training. Like wilderness survival. Like tracking and recovery. Like First Bloody Aid!!! I’m hoping that this is a first year thing, or that hopefully it will at least be a thing in University. I know Alden has already expressed disappointment that there is no wilderness survival class in any of the high schools. So really I’m just holding out for University. Even if they can’t go off the island. They should have a theory class on how to deal with being in different Earth biomes. I refuse to believe that no villain has ever hidden out in the middle of a dessert or rain forest etc. Maybe they just think that it’s something to learn on the job, once you get hired by a particular country, but that’s stupid.

John D Jones

@ Jacob Moore Jeffy: Alden's a nice guy who let me do my Land Moves and gave me lots of different jerky. Alden should be named God-Emperor of the Multiverse.

John D Jones

@ Stonedwarf Stonedwarfson I think the "single class of object" might be just for this term and Alden will be allowed to choose other classes of objects for other terms. As for Marsha, Alden learned a useful lesson about how with her, the only defense is a good offense. He probably won't beat her if/when they duel again, but he might give her a "broken nose" or a "concussion."

The butler did it

I think 'okay' is a bit much. After the last chapter I read this one as if he was in a bit of shock. You know, that hyper-aware feeling like when you've been shocked awake in the middle of the night and aren't quite tracking but are outwardly functional. The whole scene was so sudden after his time with Stuart it came across as surreal to me.

Anthony Lutz

I didn't expect it for todays duels, due to the teachers knowing about his injuries, but i truly hope in the near future they actually give him some ground element to run/manoeuvre on for duels or obstacle courses. Hopefully it lets him unexpected beat someone. On another note, i'd love a short staff meeting for next chapter. Alden was with Porti-Ioth until very close to gym time. While Alden did tell klien and the principle that he had a healer tending to him, he never said who/where they were. Them sudden getting a permission slip from a wizard healer that they might know is a matadero wizard (do we know that?) And just be going "what the heck how did Alden get healed by him... whats with his commendation" or perhaps they are going to think its all positive instead of "why did you let our precious Alden get hurt on a school excursion, take better care of him". The shouted "WALK, ALDEN" makes me think its the latter.

Trin

Ignacio formulating a plan specifically for Alden makes me want to know more about him.

Marlkaz

In real life, it takes a while to master a new tool and you end up with more mastery if you focus on picking up one and figure out improvements over time with it, then focus on picking up another and so on. Alden will ultimately practice with a large variety of objects, but getting a sense of the different ways each can be used will require giving meaningful time and practice to each. Especially with items as versatile as rope.

Christine

Aspiring Moth, I agree with your point. But I can't help but focus on your extrapolation of B vs A levels. Are you suggesting that when a B-rank reaches the same total authority as a level 1 A-rank, their levels contain the same authority as A-rank low levels? I guess it's obvious in hindsight, but I never thought of that idea before reading your comment. Levels are truly a mindfuck.

Austin Gillespie

I want to preface this by saying that I appreciate the character recaps as I think more series could use them. But to save yourself some future effort maybe you could compile them into one or several documents (the students, the artonans, the adult avowed) and link the doc at the end of the chapter. Something like that, food for thought, please continue doing them either way and thank you!

Christine

So... Kon and Søren got singled out because they recently made advances in their skills... but am I wrong for being miffed that Alden didn't get singled out for the same?! He discovered his super-cool automatic burden-catching with Big Snake!!! His accomplishments are being ignored because of his rank! Klein, you massive rankist, get students to pelt him with balls in the practise area during breaks! Also, that counseling session between Alden, Klein, and Lesedi feels so much less excusable now. If they had wanted to give him an out to duels, they could've suggested he focus on his recent advance during gym time, and pointed out that other students would also be doing it. Argh, I started off a big Torsten fan, but he's really disappointing me at this point.

JJ Hunter

@Stonedwarf Stonedwarfson, I will be *very* interested to see how the faculty handle the challenge Marsha is posing here. She was quite thoroughly defeated by Jeffry's life jacket spell in that last obstacle course run, but seems not to have taken that or her recent exposure to a real-life crisis with real-life consequences to heart. Whatever lecture her team got after they completely dissolved as a team doesn't seem to have phased her at all, at least not in a way Alden could perceive from the outside. Why has Marsha doubled down on assuming 1x1 combat scenarios with kills permitted are the only gym challenges worth her time? She's doubled down on only wanting to fight, and only wanting to fight without the help of teammates, and only wanting to fight other S ranks so hard that it's starting to feel like there must be some thorn (and not Alden Thorn) driving her so single-mindedly here in pursuit of this one goal. Is she not really trying to get a job on Earth working as a superhero someday at all? Is she aiming straight for offworld combat missions and trying to level as fast as she possibly can? What's her actual goal here, and why does she seem to think teamwork won't be required to meet it? I don't think Marsha's attitude is likely change from fighting S-ranked classmates. She might get a reality check from one of the alumni volunteers; she might get a reality check from one of her A or B-ranked classmates pulling an upset and causing her to treat them as a valid challenge. tl;dr If the faculty were to permit Marsha to only fight other S-ranks the way she wants, they'd just be replicating the Superlative club gym experience and reinforcing her current tunnel vision. Their challenge is to get Marsha to learn other win conditions are worth her considering at all.

Josiah

She was an S-rank... Also if she had just branded herself as a stealthy assassin instead of a support hero, I feel she had a very legitimate chance to get in and maybe wouldn't have had to find a partner.

Josiah

Weren't there only 41 students in the class? I'm assuming you went to the obstacle course lists but in a later chapter I think Sleyca said she got it wrong and there was only one team of 11 instead of two.

Joseph Lemongello

I don't understand why Alden can't just entrust himself things. Why shouldn't someone be able to carry their own burden. I hope that's the authors end gole for Aldens ability

Jim

Reinhard - A-rank Meister of Bow -- Being hunted by a Rabbit. Doesn't know it. Shhhhh. Be vewy vewy quiet. It's Reinhard season!

Jim

But, I don't think they know. He can't really talk about the Zeridee stuff, and he's been ensconced at Matadero, so I don't think he has had the opportunity to tell the anyone, let alone the teachers, that he's advanced his skill. Edit: oh my bad, you meant the catching skill

Josiah

I mean you need to keep in my this isn't even a real gym class. This is their stand-in gym class because they all entered mid-term and the school doesn't like wasting time. Plus they will all be taking nirmal classes that pertain to hero work throughout their years there. It isn't like what is going on this term is all that they are ever going to be doing. Although I absolutely agree that the school needs to teach many varied and practical classes and that combat class shouldn't just always be about duels and tournaments. My biggest gripe with Superpowered was that the hero classes were awful and the author really wasted not actually having legit classes. It was to the point where they were in their last year and didn't know basic shit like call signs and hand signals—something that really ought to have been standardized in the whole industry and taught to them. But no, they made up their own on the spot. Sleyca is already doing better in that regard with classes like expect the unexpected, the obstacle course, search and rescue, the tag maze, the rumored water days, etc. I am excited to see more ideas of creative heroing classes—both in normal classrooms and gym. I think it is the most interesting part of these student hero stories but many authors choose to skip it, not give enough thought to it, or just ignore it in favor of drama and powertripping.

Aspiring Moth

Christine - the comparison only really works in the case of two same class avowed, with the lower ranked one having an uncapped skill. if there are two identical avowed and one focuses on training their main skill while the other focuses on training an F rank add on skill, both will gain a level in their focus, but the one who levelled up the F rank skill will have gained much less authority. the level number by the rank doesn't make the distinction between the value of each level though. And it doesn't make the distinction between skills between classes being different sizes either. But if you compare Alden to an A rank rabbit or shaper (or other class based around a big skill), the value of a level up around level 40 in bearer of all burdens will have a similar amount of authority to the increase from level 1 to level 2 in the A rank skill. Similarly at around level 80, a level will have around the same worth as a level up from level 1 to level 2 from an S rank skill. each level has around 10% more authority than the level up before it as compounding interest, but due to skills being capped it never gets to the point of becoming equal to the skill of a rank above it in authority per level

Sleyca

I feel that Alden’s plan for Reinhard is very Loony Tunes-ish, so this is appropriate.

Josiah

It does beg the question, if someone refused to affix until they had enough authority to bind a skill of the rank above (provided it doesn't kill them) and then affix a higher tier skill, will they immediately "rank up"? I always assumed you rank up when the free authority you gain in a level up—the increment at which the system decides you should affix—is high enough to bind a skill of a higher rank. Most people affix straight away with the piddly little authority they gained, so it makes sense that only the rare monster who really dedicated themself sees the kind of authority growth to rank up. But if someone were to not take those levels and wait until they could afford a skill of the next tier, would it really make sense to still call someone who has an S-rank skill an A-rank?

David

I went to the lists on RR. I assumed they were corrected when they were released later. The difference is pretty negligible.

Darth Xaim

@Sleyca Quick question, do all Hyperbole have Code Names? Or are those already there since the names are their Hero Name?

Robert Mullins

I mean, by definition he's already bearing his own burdens. The point of the magic is to make it possible to bear burdens for others.

Robert Mullins

Pretty certain it's been established that Lute is closest to becoming a Hyperbole out of everyone of their generation. Which implies that it doesn't require being a hero at all. Though the hero training probably correlates strongly of course.

Joseph Lemongello

Yeah but some people in this world shoot fire at people but can also burn them selves. I don't see why aldens power should have that restriction permanently. Imagine if Stu-art had to ask someone for coordinates every time he wanted to create a path lol

JustMe

I completely agree with what JJ Hunter already said. I would like to add that Marsha chooses to not learn anything. We know that she goes all out all the time until her magic is exhausted. Fighting on gym with lower ranks could allow her to learn how to preserve her strength. How to only exert as much magic and stamina as required. Like, did it cost her more magic to use the magic follow-up attack or would it have been better to do a jeffie-esque thing and attack Alden with a normal slash. Marsha could try out perfecting moves against enemies that can't punish her mistakes. There is a lot she could do actually

puppy0cam

The hero program mainly functions to balance the fine line of making someone useless to the artonans and useful for mitigating the threat that is our own species. As a result, their recommendations and training reflect that. Honestly I think that the longer Alden stays in the program, the less beneficial it will be for him.

JustMe

Yeah, those awful parents naming their child unnamed object shaper (I stole that joke from either oatreon or discord. Can't remember sorry)

Sleyca

Kon and Søren were singled out, but it was more necessity than special treatment. They’re off in the corner practicing the things they almost killed themselves with last week, and they really can’t do that practice in a duel or outside of the gym. Alden can practice his catching, at slower speeds, any time as long as he has a partner, whereas he can’t safely experience Jeffy’s clever Sky Moves without his suit protecting his poor rib cage. Plus it was just last week that he got the extra attention from Big Snake that let him have that breakthrough. And he did get complimented then and encouraged by Snake. So I don’t think we have to be too mad at Klein for *this* particular thing. Though it can be fun to be annoyed with him, too.😊

Sleyca

They don’t all choose heroesque names or go by them, but hyperboles tend to be a source of fascination for people so they often end up with famous nicknames regardless.

Josiah

I agree. This Juniper lady just shows up out of nowhere with no introduction. What are her skills? What does she even look like? What is her class? This is unacceptable by the author and I am hopping mad. Justice for Juniper!

Sleyca

Oh! You’re a real Jacob Moore!? It’s a great name…I’m sorry for Other Jacob Moore.

Saaski

Josiah, this is true. And the reason I hadn’t brought it up before. However. The reason that it is a worry for me at all is as follows; One, Alden was looking that kind of thing up when choosing his school, and specifically mentioned that none of the high school’s have any kind of wilderness survival training. Two, there have been no discussions of any kind of physical courses that they might take outside of gym next year… which doesn’t prove that there aren’t any, but it is indicative. Three, there have been several examples of Avowed, especially high ranks, just utterly disregarding the idea that you need to train technique, and not totally rely on skills and attribute points. Again, I personally haven’t ruled out the idea that those discussions simply haven’t happened yet..

Blorcyn

Is the one who came first as a 1 called one, or perhaps 1, by chance? Surely not 2.

Lee

I really like the character recaps within the chapters so I don't have to look for it.

Jeff Wells

This is what I like to think of as the "eat your vegetables" part of the story. It's important for a healthy story, but even when done well tends to not be very exciting. It's better when it's leading up to something, but the nature of the web serial format means we've basically followed dessert with a hearty bowl of steamed vegetables. But if you just ate cake and ice cream all the time you'd get sick of it in a hurry.

Jeff Wells

I think the problem is powers change the dynamic so dramatically that any martial art will basically have to be completely unique to at least the power archetype, if not the individual super. Case in point: Alden vs Jeffy. The strength difference there is probably something like a grown man vs an 8 year old. The 8 year old can be a jiu jutsu master, it wont matter. The grown man can simply power through any holds or locks and beat the shit out of the 8 year old. Despite what movies like to show, vast differences in strength are practically insurmountable by technique. At 2x-3x strength difference, the weaker person would need to be a master and the stronger would have to be completely ignorant of fighting in any form for the weaker person to stand a chance. And even so, chances are the stronger person just grabs them and squeezes and it's over.

Noc

So, if Alden had taken 'Burden of Spell' instead of 'Burden of Enchantment,' would he have been able to preserve and redirect the 'magical follow-up slice?' ...Assuming a scenario where he had enough authority to match Marsha, which he doesn't, of course.

WannaBeATree

Could Alden break physics by catapulting something he stands on top of? Like pulling himself up? Or Jeffy of him, if the gets grabbed?

WannaBeATree

He might not even need enought to match. He is not stopping it, only putting it on pause.

WannaBeATree

I kinda want Alden to bring a bomb to school (MPE) now. The drama would be funny and the learning potential for many students is there. Boom-Radish?

Saaski

We have been told that A is about 40 levels in B worth of Authority. Assuming that he Affixes every 4~5 levels max, and that he does so every 10 to 11 ish months… 2 months of intake, few weeks at school, plus 8 months, give or take for additional traumatic incidents…. It’s not unreasonable that he’ll go up a rank while at Uni.

Sesharan

I do think Alden will actually perform reasonably well against people who are in his “weight class”, once he gets some more balanced matchups. If only because he’s determined and willing to push through pain. Two S-ranks and a Shaper whose element he can’t block is a particularly bad run. If he’d been against, say, the Object Shaper, he could have at least put up a fight.

Aspiring Moth

he would have died in the floods because of not being able to force the wrightmade door, and would probably have the movement requirement on his skill still. but if not for those then probably

Aspiring Moth

shapers can lift themselves with their element so Alden probably could too, but it may need him to be remotely preserving it for mindset reasons

Aspiring Moth

because that's the description of the skill. it's fundamental design is based around the concept of service and sacrifice. entrustment isn't going anywhere, even if he finds mental gymnastics to widen the possibility of what is considered an entruster

Guus van der Borg

He would not have done it without telling him. Period. Even when Saleh conived to get him into the school for disingenuous reasons that were merely for the good of the school, Klein protested by advising Alden to drop out on his own anyway. If Klein is doing this because he thinks a student's (mental) health is at risk I STRONGLY doubt he would lie to his face and tell him it was random. I bet Klein is the sort of person that would quit his job before cooperating with a scheme like that. He's consistently been shown to be honest and direct, as much as he can at least.

Terrestrial_Biped

A... bomb? What the hell do you think would be learned, aside from "don't bring bombs to school, no matter how cool that idea sounded in your head"?

WannaBeATree

I also feel like missing out, since i do nearly the same (text to speach app). On the other hand i am always surprised and delighted when i remember that the notes exist. I'd argue against adding the notes, if only one epub is made available, since it would probably break the reading flow of all text to speach apps that don't have a skip flag.

Terrestrial_Biped

Gemma Elber, Hannah's mom, isn't a hero and doesn't go by a code name, but people call her the Gloom anyways.

DAK

I’d guess he’ll always have to be entrusted, but there’s a lot of room for broadening that interpretation. If someone is mortally wounded and bleeding out on the gym floor because Marsha’s too cranky to check Floor safety, he may discover that a victim likely wanting to be saved if they could have given voice to it might be enough of permission. Or having a knight tell him that an entire world is entrusted to him in the context of chaos management for the length of whatever project. Or conceptualizing Earth as being his own by right of birth and responsibility…

WannaBeATree

I did find it a bit cringy, but I loved the scene anyway, since it seems Max is coaching him and it shows their connection while everyone stayed in character.

WannaBeATree

Maybe it is done deliberatly? Once fighting stsrts and they turn on the pain, the teachers make the students feel their own faults and only afterwards, when the deficiencies set it, provide them with the solutions(lessons). I could see first aid coming up in a game to remove some delibitating suits effect or reduce death cooldown if done right or something of the sort.

Terrestrial_Biped

Low ranks need to learn how to punch up, or at least survive an encounter with a high rank for a couple minutes. High ranks need to learn not to get cocky, because weaker people can still kill them. Everyone needs to learn and test and expand their limits. Alden managed to learn something from the Marsha fight. It is a flaw in Marsha that she did not do the same.

WannaBeATree

That is a good question! It might not work though, since they are presumably activated by the same "feeling". Instead of twice as often, he might just cast it twice as hard.

WannaBeATree

He might shoot himself with it and catch the bullet and bring that one into the fight. But even that would be educational only once, same a bomb.

WannaBeATree

I think so too. From what I remember, most hyperboles became such, after a long summons. So presumably without a system and at least 2 levels banked, instead of the usual 1.

WannaBeATree

I agree, but it should not happen too fast. I love the resident Morph-Brute, because she is a clear visualisation of the average power progression of the class for the reader. From holding a piercing to a few cm taler, to pink skin etc.

JJ Hunter

I wonder if the internet has realized Jacob Moore was at Benjamin Velra's birthday party as Hazel's supposed boyfriend yet. Did one of those drones capturing the Hazel vs. Alden scene get Jacob literally leaping back to avoid shaking Alden's hand?

WannaBeATree

How he can use his skill to best shield from explosives and use it against his target. His targets could learn how to protect themself against explosions. Kon could try for infite bombs. Shapers could try stopping it, Meisters maybe as well. The rest could learn what to do to mitigate shockwave damage. Like hands over eyes, ears, open mouth etc. Speedsters could try outrunning it, Max could study zone interaction with explosions etc. etc. For a one off occurence, there is plenty to learn. Aldens skill was quite literally used for disposal of explosive materials, so he really should learn to handel them, for when he gets another such assignment. Summoning rabbits for bomb disposal sounds like something the Artonans might do in an emergency.

Tycho Green

You thought a healer at this level of competence would be available within hours and that he would promptly start the mind healing session with barely any conversation of what the goal is? All that happening quick enough for Alden to be back on Anesidora in time for gym class? Okay.

Lewis Wood

Alden's really got this rabbit thing all backwards. First he starts carrying around a lucky wizard's foot, and now he's hunting an archer.

Joel Wells

As much as I wish it weren't true. I doubt the entrustment aspect of his skill will go away. I see to remember that when Alden was mentally tracing his skill, he noted that the entrustment part was woven throughout the skill. To me, that indicates that having someone else entrusting things is a core part of the skill.

Colton

I think we've already seen Alden find a work around to what you're saying. He's been using verbal consent as a crutch so far... but when Klein was throwing tennis balls at Alden, he framed his skill in mind as someone throwing something at him was them "entrusting" the balls to him. Also...There's a phrase out there, "To exist is to suffer". If Alden took this to heart, then at any point he could freeze someone to alleviate them from the pain of existing for a time.

Aspiring Moth

DAK - the idea about acting in the interests of others who haven't given an order but would is a good one. Manon was doing something similar with her tailor environment skill. If Alden could do it too, that would open up so many doors

Aspiring Moth

there's value in the idea of a more factual document about characters, but the recaps at the end are funny and change each chapter. I like these too and think the story would lose out a bit if they were gone

Aspiring Moth

JJ Hunter - the combat mission idea is interesting. I can see her getting summoned to fight demons and coming back humbled as for her goals, she probably wants to be a super athlete. there have been mentions of brute arena, meister duel compilations, and a shaper of ground fighting arena I forget the name of

John D Jones

Clearly the above Jacob Moore is Better Jacob Moore because the other one was kind of a dumb-ass who had to date Hazel Velra and died on surface boat acting as a submarine.

John D Jones

Aside from a few folks on the Bridge that Friday, Alden is still pretty much the only one in the class who's done actual shit in the real, you-can-easily-fucking-die universe. Ignacio was also there when Alden kidnap-rescued Soren to get him to healers after he set himself on fire. Despite their Rank differences, Ignacio knows to not take Alden lightly.

DAK

Could he just get a sling up to speed and then preserve the projectile? If so, the momentum would be maintained and he could just hold it in his hand later and release it at targets as needed. No need to really learn how to use the sling (ie aim and release), and it would be more skill relevant.

John D Jones

GENERAL (all-caps for emphasis) Esh-erdi is letting Alden tool around on the green space cookie. The school officials might/probably also know that Alden isn't staying on-campus right now even when he's on Earth.

Michaellogan

When it comes to Martial Arts it would only be useful to the most basic Brutes with maybe the very basics of fighting as a whole being taught to everyone. Why should Meisters learn anything when they have skills for that? Shapers whould be so outclassed in CQC with any other fighting class (if they are fighting opponent of the same Rank) that there is no point. And if they need to fight another Shaper in CQC: 1) it will be hard/impossible to get close enouth, 2) if bouth of them exhausted ther Skills/Spell impresions then the first one to pull out a gun wins. Brutes have such a vast diferrence between one another that teaching them collectively makes it impossible. Don't remember if there are any more battle oriented classes, but if think that they will be learning how to fight from from Anvowed that have the same or very simmilar Class to them. As for Wilderness Survival, remember that unless you are close enouth to Matadero that the System doesn't work you simply use ET and within seconds you are in a fully equiped. migically assisted hospital. So why bother.

John D Jones

I kind of hope that Alden got some audio/video of gokoratches that he got while on Artona I to give to Jeffy to give to Astrid.

Alex Scriber

That would be cute. I’d be surprised if there were stinky cannibal parrots in the refuge. The trees might not like them. Maybe Alden and Stu could go on a field trip or zoo visit to take pictures, though?

John D Jones

I mean, the Artonans are a fully modern space-faring civilization. I figure Alden could have gotten the videos from Stu without needing an actual field trip. But a Dec 15 field trip to see (and hear and smell) live gokoratches would be cool too.

John D Jones

So basically this? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vJh20Bj6KqU&ab_channel=AdultSwim That would be an unexpected way to end the story, that's for sure.

JJ Hunter

@Aspiring Moth, yes, I love the telling little character nuances Sleyca includes! Sometimes they give us additional information Alden wouldn't know that we would otherwise not know either. Stu patching Alden's suitcase with materials worth ten suitcases will live in my heart forever. Ditto Other Alden eating the zipper.

Smaug

The drones were from Velras and their associates (as Lute pointed out when Alden's outburst was recut to leave the family in a better light). None of them would be crazy enough pour more oil on the flames.

Josiah

Not just mindset reasons. I doubt he will ever be able to lift himself with something for the sole reason that he would no longer be bearing the burden, it would be bearing him. This breaks physics (in a ridiculous way not the somewhat practial ways it usually breaks in this story) and the image of Alden flying around on his burden like witch's broom is making me laugh. Well, he would probably more likely just constantly accelerate in one direction until he escaped the atmosphere. Still no reason to think he couldn't stand on stationary burdens that he is holding with his authority.

Smaug

It's a component of sacrifice just like the requirement to bear the thing being preserved as a burden. The idea is to stack concepts that cause burden for the bearer to increase the efficiency of the magic. Same as why someone helping to carry the preserved item causes the preservation to break or why carried things still hold their mass. If Alden somehow manages to remove the requirement for bestowal, he will make the skill weaker.

Kim Enteiu

Alden and Stuart running an obstacle course together, Alden paints a tunnel on a wall, Stuart used his skill to let them go through the wall like it isn’t there. Someone runs into the wall chasing after them. In the distance the cultural advisor pulls out their hair.

Josiah

I don't think he can preserve an item he isn't directly touching yet (besides that one instance) so if he preserves the ball, the whole damn sling is coming with it. Gonna make aiming and utility of it a little more inconvenient.

John D Jones

Honestly I think the duels are kind of useful for Alden because his intended future isn't on the line with them. He genuinely doesn't care that much if he gets bodied by Marsha, Jeffy or even, eventually, Winston. I'm looking forward to Alden dueling Marsha after the gym suits' pain level get set to 100% and she ends up crying on the floor because he "smashes her teeth in" with a magic glass thingie.

John D Jones

@ Aspiring Moth I think if Marsha gets summoned to fight demons, she doesn't ever come back.

John D Jones

@ WannaBeATree Presumably the Gym can simulate bombs and explosive effects so Alden would not need to bring an actual explosive to class.

BeautifulBusinessBoi

I wonder if Ignacio was going to handicap himself in some way, or have an additional objective while fighting Alden. Like winning with only one knife or a spell impression he doesn’t use often as a way to practice some other ways to use his power. This would contrast with Marsha who didn’t learn anything fighting Alden because she just over powered him with a Getsuga Tenshou which is her go-to everytime

Jacob Moore

No worries about Other Jacob, he's a great character. It took repeated exposure in the submerger but I've mostly gotten over the 'someone is talking to me' reflex to seeing my name in your writing. However being immersed into world building about talk show hosts monetizing outrage, to seeing MOORE in bold and off centre meant I had to reread next section about Lute's dad twice. Also, wasn't expecting the affirmation but it is appreciated. I'm sure the other Jacob Moore is an OK guy too, who will no doubt be blamed for everything by a small section of Anesidora.

Skeys13

I didn’t really comprehend it until now but the avowed powers are designed to turn every aspect of a battlefield and then some against the demons. The ground the water the air any plant life. I guess there aren’t any bug or animal shapers (those get turned into demons?) but like damn. They must be a powerful and varied foe for no one strategy to work the best. Or maybe that’s just how wizards think

Aspiring Moth

bugs and animals are under life. Sleyca has mentioned that talents specialised in controlling them exist in the comments before. she even mentioned that life shapers would be able to lift people once

Aspiring Moth

I can't seem to find the animal/insect control comment right now, but here's the human levitation one Flopmind Sleyca I have a question of absolutely critical importance! Can life shapers make themselves fly by targetting themselves with Life telekinesis skills? Sleyca I would think so! Yes. This works. I can't think of any reason it wouldn't within the story. (same comment) Sleyca There should be several flying options of varying quality/ease given the variety of classes.

denatured

@John D yeah why WAS Jacob at that party? So weird and suspicious.

Josiah

Hazel had leverage over Jacob because she took a picture of him with illegal wright-tech (the submerger) and wanted someone lower rank than her as her companion at the party whom she could denigrate and look better in comparison to. So she made Jacob, a C-rank, go so she, a B-rank, would feel superior. At the party she constantly made snide comments about Jacob's rank and personality, and also made Jacob her "grunge" while she dressed entirely as the "gold". She really only wanted him there to prop herself up and make herself feel better. No other reason.

JJ Hunter

@Smaug, I would not be surprised if some of the non-relatives in attendance at the time are now rethinking whether they want to continue being publicly perceived as closely affiliated with the Velras right now. People who married in or got adopted may not shed those ties so easily, but friends, casual +1s who are now ex- partners, business associates, political allies, people invited for schmoozing purposes? All it takes is one person selling the full footage to the Informant, or using the Informant's spyware which is much the same thing, and other people being willing to pay for any footage of Jacob associating with Velras. I'm sure the official Anesidoran and Artonan investigators have already found and accessed copies; just wondering if the amateur internet sleuths have managed the same yet.

Tycho Green

I vaguely remember reading this comment about 100 chapters ago, but how do you just pull it out of your pocket like that?😭

Smaug

It could happen, although such persons are surely aware of reprisal that would follow.

Skeys13

Yea that’s impressive as hell especially considering the horrible UI of patreon

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I think there might come a time where Alden will be able to do a form of self entrustment or maybe just preserve something without entrustment. But I imagine it will be similar to how Stu was describing his skill could be used to fight, I.e. he will eventually be able to use it for that but it’s not the intended use of the skill so it won’t work at full power and might be very difficult to pull of and with terrible efficiency.

Super Super Supportive Supporter

I had a dream that I was an S rank Meister of Brick The system granted me a refilling bag of quick drying cement-like material (but brick red) that I could use my authority to shape into cuboids I was able to throw bricks very accurately The end

WannaBeATree

When I say that he should bring a bomb to school, I of course imply doing it the responsible way. :) Ask faculty first, include a paper on benefits, include responsible wright address, one that would agree, costs and Aldens promis to pay for any possible damages, ways to handle the bomb and how it might get to school safely. Maybe a comment on usefullnes from Artonans. A list of usefull things to test and skill interactions of any classmates he can think of. Also, give the request to the B-List teacher. Maybe add a note that he asked his psychologist about it, if he/she thought it would be fine.

Lorcan

Nine Clawed Son Who Ate His Mother's Other Hatchlings

Lorcan

Also, if any of the shots including Jacob were already out in public...

JJ Hunter

@WannaBeTree, I respect your ambition, but suspect Alden would be better served starting much smaller with cheap commercial firecrackers. Firecrackers would have much less risk of collateral damage while Alden's still working on getting the hang of preserving them at different points of exploding because the area of effect is tiny. They still make a loud noise and have light / flame / pinch of smoke effect, so the hilarious visual effects that Alden has subconsciously decided should absolutely be a thing when he preserves something on fire or in the middle of exploding would still be in evidence. Once Alden masters firecrackers, he can move up to fireworks. Bombs would be somewhere well beyond that in terms of risk, and I'd like him to affix at least 1-2 more times with more foundation points to resisting bodily deformation before he starts messing around with those even with the gym protections. You just know narrative causality would promptly drop Alden into a situation outside of gym where he'd have to use his newly mastered bomb talents without the gym uniform protections...

WannaBeATree

Good point about narative. Did not consider that. Though the suits allow more of the sink or swim aproach, i suspect, not gradual increase.

Obbu

Sleyca has mentioned a concept a few times called "Battle Theater" (ch103 and a couple of other places) that is effectively battles as a form of entertainment - it's unclear how interconnected this is with the status of superheroes (and how that relates to the hero track/talent development program), but it's possible that Marsha is focused on going in that direction.

VP

If Marsha ever wants to work as a hero in a city, she will need to fight people she can easily kill, without killing them. Fighting Alden might not seem very useful, but if you step back from demons back into the reality of a 9 to 5 hero job, then it really, really is

Jeremy Goldberg

Hi Sleyca, thank you for the chapter! A while back you spoke briefly about your outlining process, which I thought was really interesting! I wonder if you would ever be willing to share one of your low level outlines for an older chapter, or if that would even be possible without giving away spoilers? It would be really cool to learn more about your writing process.

Barrett Fogarty

When Alden stops being a Quiet Rabbit voices will start demanding oaths. This is because as Mother says in Chapter 60, "When you have an authority sense and you bind a skill, your power can rapidly snowball. Especially if you work at. It’s why even Artonans can’t affix without swearing oaths that prevent them from harming the Triplanets.” The question I have is what sort of oath(s) should Alden eventually make? Why would he ever want to? Can he get away with an Knight's oath to just not harm Earth, his home planet? What would be the impact on Summoning?

Jazehiah

I'm pretty sure becoming an avowed and agreeing to the interdimensional warriors contact constitutes swearing loyalty.

Barrett Fogarty

@Jazehiah, I was thinking that Alden, a human with authority awareness, is an unexpected event and not warrior or attendant under the original terms of the contract. We don't know the details of the contract but I don't think many would argue that he's still an ordinary human avowed. That was my thought.

John D Jones

Even if agreeing to the warrior contract constitutes an oath, it probably only affects Avowed abilities. Alden is also a wizard. So, even if he couldn't somehow harm Earth/Artona I-III with his Skill or Spell Impression, he might gain enough power to cast the Armageddon Wizard Spell.

Ducktacular

Jeffy after character growth "You should use your powers to be the building builder not the best building puncher!!"

puppy0cam

dawn of the final day until chapter

jg

I thought it is 1.30am supe time now

jg

If Earth contract is a super sophisticated spell with sentience and a mote to Mother ( ... you liked the forest you thought ) and an exhausting never ending debate at the top of Artonan wizard society about the proper use of the contracts, with knights ... Her Alden ... Aren't they both property?

John D Jones

It's currently Sunday, 5:11 AM for me on Central Time. The chapters usually come between 1 AM and 6 AM Monday mornings for me. So maybe 20 hours.

Terrestrial_Biped

No, because a) the slice is a skill, not a spell b) it has not been entrusted to him c) if it some how came down to Alden fighting Marsha for control of it, Marsha would win in an instant, like she did just now, cuz she stronk

Aspiring Moth

speaking of jeffy, I wonder if the faculty made him put some of his foundation points from the level up into processing?

Aspiring Moth

@terrestrial biped a) skills are just complex spells. see the conversation with Joe in his final lesson. also see Stu'arth just casting the skill he plans to affix using an auriad b) neither was the tennis ball. this is no different to a feat he's already done, except for it being a magical projectile rather than a physical one c) Noc already made a note of this in the original post. this hypothetical is assuming Alden wouldn't just get flattened in an authority contest

CrispyCritter

Perhaps done on the extremely nice resource by wakeuptheresbacon. https://soup-comments.vercel.app/Sleycas_Patreon_Comments.html All of sleyca's comments gathered together. Here's her comment on animal control. "Boe's favorite hero actually does something Sway-ish with small animals. Bedlam Beldam. A U-type with Sky Shaper-ish and animal communion abilities. It's mentioned in just a couple of sentences when Lesedi Saleh is first introduced, and it's not at all the most interesting thing going on in that chapter so it's easy to forget. "

Jeanean

So, I had a little thought: Alden is capable of preserving the motion of an object, right? But he can still move the object once preserved, right? Now, the question is, what happens if he releases the preserved motion on an object WHILE he is moving it himself? If they are added together, he could have quite the potent ranged option on hand! He could take a weight on the end of a string, let the weight hang down, and preserve it. Then, he swings the weight on the "stick", realing it mid movement, and immediately re-preserving it, but including the motion. Rinse and repeat, and the weight should get faster with every swing and release! It might take some practice and a bit of time to prepare, but he could turn his weight into an absolutely deadly projectile, the only limit on its top speed being Aldens ability to keep the whole thing under control. I bet he could oneshot all but maybe Haoyu, and some of the more durable S ranks.

SnuggleCat

Jeffy calling Alden a "Tricky rabbit" reminded me of Bugs Bunny

Aspiring Moth

this isn't the comment I was thinking of. the one I remember was specifically referring to life shapers, but this one is talking about a U type with a weird combo of sky shaper and animal communication. I've ctrl-f searched this page for 'life', 'bug', 'insect', 'animal', 'shaper' and can't find it. I could have sworn that the comment about insect/animal control talents existed. maybe it wasn't transcribed, or I'm not using the correct search term. does anyone else remember the comment I'm referring to?

DAK

Looks like Bugs Bunny came out around 1940, so it should be a reference that works in-world. Of course, this is 100 years later, so who knows… It would be interesting to know what shows and singers and genres persisted after first contact, and what just faded out. Also, maybe Elvis really was abducted by aliens in this timeline

David

The plot progression is a lot less clear than it has been for a while. What do people think the next chapter will be about? Catching up with the roommates and the investigation? Regular classes? Mini-time-skip straight to the first mind healing session?

JJ Hunter

Every now and then I remember Alden still needs to notify some authority about the dead man from Iowa's wallet and the motorcycle lady's earring. Think of their families, Alden! Wondering if Jeffy bringing up his well-earned lamp of appreciation here is (heh) lampshading some pending appreciation from Zeridee or her und'h family...

puppy0cam

It will be a meeting with Earth so it can put him in his place after Mother's meddling.

Super Super Supportive Supporter

If he’s allowed to get help from others, he can sidestep most of the possibility that this process goes against the symbolism of Bearer, and save some time Just have a shot put ball on the end of a string and have the S rank strength brute throw the weight as hard as she can, and preserve it as soon as it leaves her hands The weight can’t be too heavy as he feels the full weight of something when preserving it Alternatives are preserving a bullet (maybe too fast for him to time the preservation) or the suitcase trick that he already used in the B club (possibly high authority cost based on the weight inside the suitcase), except instead of a suitcase it’s a loop of string

Super Super Supportive Supporter

Actually I have another idea that takes the suitcase trick further Take a piece of string, maybe 2 feet long Wrap the end of it around the handle of a 1-ton kettlebell, but don’t tie a knot, just a single loop Preserve the string Make a throwing motion with the string and unpreserve it at the end of the throw but don’t let go Should act like those sticks you use to throw dog balls Can be used as a flail/mace in melee combat I don’t think there is a symbolism issue here, the concept is essentially the same as the suitcase trick - he is not swinging the preserved object at someone as the thing taking the impact is an unpreserved object that happens to be held by a preserved object

denatured

Matadero drama-rama. Secrecy contract with Esh-erdi? Finally getting a contract tattoo when he can actually observe the process? Meeting Lind-otta and remembering he still doesn't know what esvulgivnas means and neither do the rest of us.

Aspiring Moth

I have a feeling Esh-erdi will be there to pick Alden up from gym in front of everyone. but it'll probably be matadero related. maybe meeting up with zeridee and lind-otta

JJ Hunter

Alden is planning to watch the news and find out what he missed while he was off planet. I expect he's now running low on clean clothes and will likely swing by his dorm room to get some. Haoyu and Lexi will likely have questions if Alden isn't staying over - first Lute's gone off planet, now Alden also has some less usual arrangements going on? Alden was also planning to check on Maricel. There's still all that Artonan politics and drama lurking in the wings - when will Alden be safe to move back from Matadero, Esh? Is Drusi-otta still keeping an eye and a mind on Alden today? Will Bash-nor put in an appearance? What about the und'hs? How exactly will Alden be getting to his (presumably off-world) Healer of Mind appointments once he's back to living in his dorm? Liam still needs Tiny Snake back, and Alden still has identifying items for the dead to hand over. Someday we will get to learn what the internet has been making of Alden flying around on general Esh-erdi's highly identifiable magic platform. Alden needs to get his head back from Knight Rapport I and find his footing on Earth again. He's doing better than he was two days ago, but he's still got some work to do on reassembling his high school life again. Maybe he'll start by going to do study hall potion sauna in lieu of the gym showers with Haoyu again...

JJ Hunter

More than anything, I'm wondering what it might look like if Alden does choose (and choose again, and again) to excel as Mother is gently challenging him to do. Does excelling require winning at combat in his classmates' eyes? (If yes: *how*). Is excelling growing his skill, his authority, the versatility with which he uses his magic? How long can he stay a Quiet(ish) Rabbit and also excel in the direction of someday choosing that path of highest onus? Is being Moon Rabbit another kind of cover here, or a sign that he's already notable and he may not be able to opt out of some of the higher intensities already...

SnuggleCat

Poor Win-win. Think of the mortification when he looks back on this part of his childhood.

Temp One

"My god, 'Win-Win Way'? How could I have been embarrasingly ridiculous. My new moniker, 'Win-Stone Cold', is so much better..."

Kate Yen

My unfounded headcanon is that Jeffy is one of those people that gets very 'handholdy' System rewards. (See "You've Grown" if you don't remember what I'm talking about)

Colton

Will his gremlin allow such an oath? What could equate to never rebelling against society?

DAK

-Regarding flow state dopaminergic earings: will Vandy be jealous or just confused? --don't you ALREADY intensely love every minute detail of your learning, Alden? Why do you need help for it, again? -Gus just alluded to it, Spree day set it up a couple months ago, and now Bash-nor is underestimating them! Money is power, and Rabbits are money! Like Batman, now Rabbitman! It's time for Alden to remove whatever spending governor he's running in the background. It's time to hand Dragon Rabbit a blank check. It's time for the random 10,000 argold tips. It's time for air dropped turkeys, barrels of cranberry sauce ferried by private speedboats and enough disparate catering to shake this already shook economy... And if the big guns are coming out, maybe it's even time for Natalie.

guy

I hate marsha