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[A/N:  The other day I spotted a comment and planned to answer it when I got a second, and now I can't remember what chapter I spotted it on or if I even finished answering. Since I can remember the question still, I'm going to answer it here. The comment was about whether Matadero was located at the same coordinates as R'lyeh from the Cthulu mythos.

I'm only sorta kinda barely familiar with Lovecraft. When I first started worldbuilding Super Supportive, I wanted the most isolated place in the ocean for Matadero, and it all came together that way. I did see Lovecraft's name mentioned a few times when I was researching Point Nemo, so I was aware of the fact that he'd set his city in the vicinity.  

Matadero is exactly at the center of Point Nemo, so the precise point of isolation. I think that would put R'lyeh a little to the northwest?

Thank you for asking!

Now, onto Chapter 138! ]

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Up. Go up.

Alden didn’t know for sure what was coming or if it would even reach him. He had no idea if now was the right time to abandon his horizontal evacuation in favor of a vertical one.

The only thing he was sure would be safe was a flyer that was currently bound for South America without its intended passenger. In the absence of that vehicle, and with his public school education having failed to prepare him to escape from oceanic anomalies caused by magical contaminants, he was going to have to go with Plan C. For “caveman.”

Big scary sound is getting louder. Hide from it.

He increased his speed and hustled back the way he’d just come from, jogging past a row of oddly gothic-looking townhouses. As he hurried across the next street, flashing pedestrian warning lights automatically switched on, bathing the crosswalk yellow.

One of the safest-looking buildings he’d seen since he left The Span was on the corner.

A stretch of concrete wall, painted white, led him to a door that had seemed appealingly sturdy when he passed it earlier. It was a tall, wide rectangle designed to look like a jigsaw puzzle made of differently colored pieces of metal. Some of them had slightly different elevations, giving the door a textured appearance.

Now it looks too damn sturdy.

Alden had a couple of sketchy ideas about how he would break and enter, but he’d much rather it just be unlocked. If I can’t get in here, I just break into one of the houses instead. That’s all there is to do.

The roaring still filled his ears. He couldn’t tell if it was growing anymore, but it was way too loud for his liking.

This can’t be good. Either some Avowed is using really heavy-duty magic, or the ocean is eating things oceans shouldn’t eat.

He thrust his hand toward the extra large puzzle piece that served as a knob. Nothing happened when he turned it.

Crap. He swallowed. Don’t panic. Just try—

“Hi there! Bienvenue!”

“Ack!” Alden took a step back and clutched Zeridee with both arms as a smiling cartoon seal animation suddenly appeared on the wall by the door.

It waved a flipper at him. “Welcome to Apogee Artist Spaces! You can use your studio 24/7. Just input your personal puzzle code to gain entry.”

What the heck does a talking seal have to do with anything?

“I don’t have a code,” Alden said quickly, staring the seal in the eyes. “But it’s an emergency. Could you open the door?”

The seal giggled and performed a swimming back flip. “Art is fun!”

“You’re not equipped to respond, are you? I’m talking to pixels.”

It clapped its flippers. “You can rent our studios by the month! We even have boom rooms! Just call Kimmy T—”

Alden tuned it out and carefully adjusted his grip on Zeridee, trying to make sure he was holding her in a way that wouldn’t hurt.

She’s been stabbed. However you hold her is going to hurt. Just try to talk to her fast.

He let the preservation fall from the assistant for the first time since he’d lifted her.

Zeridee didn’t make a sound, but the sudden re-animation of her features turned the illusion of peaceful sleep into something more pained. Her eyes opened.

“You’re all right,” Alden said in Artonan, trying to enunciate. “I’m all right. I need to open a door. I think if I use my skill on the door or the knob for a second, it might open. Can I have this door?”

She stared at him with one eye. The other was pointing straight up. Blood from her head injury was trickling down toward her ear.

“Some of the doors in the residence are expensive,” she whispered. “Why do you want them?”

Stay calm. Don’t freak her out.

“We’re not in the residence. I’m taking us both someplace that I think is safe. This is another door. You don’t mind me using my skill on it, do you?”

“Those men are sleeping.”

“I’m glad they are. May I have this door? Or even just the knob?”

“Why?”

More warm blood was slicking his hands again.

Shit. I can’t do this to her. One more try. Then we re-preserve her.

“If I use my skill on this door, it might open. I hope it leads to a safe place. May I?”

“Yes.”

Great!

“Alden Ryeh-b’t, I’m sorry. I shouldn’t have allowed you—”

He slapped his hand to the puzzle knob, attempting to activate preservation on both Zeridee and the door simultaneously. Her words were cut off in an instant. As for the door…

There was no way he could actually preserve it while it was attached to its frame. Maybe with a lot of mental gymnastics that he didn’t have time for he could’ve convinced himself the building was an enemy trying to assault the door or something. But for now, he was just hoping that making his intent to take the object into his keeping would be clear enough that the skill would still count it as his.

Tag, puzzle door. You’re under my care now even though you didn’t get the full preserve.

Beneath his feet, a subtle vibration ran through the pavement. He swallowed.

Get inside. Get up high, he told himself as he looked for enchantments.

There was a better than fifty percent chance, in his opinion, of the door being some kind of Wrightmade magical artwork. The alternative was it being regular tech.

If it was magical artwork, there should be some enchanted components involved.

He didn’t see anything at first, and he almost jumped right to his backup plan—trying to use his skill on just the doorknob over and over to see if he could interrupt an imagined electric locking mechanism. Then his own heavy breathing and bloody, sweaty palm made him reconsider.

It might be there. You might just be in the wrong headspace to see it. Look harder.

The sensitivity part of the “defogging package” he’d chosen to enhance The Bearer of All Burdens with during his last affixation wasn’t one he’d had all that much opportunity to train. He was a pro at seeing enchantments on NesiCards when he was calm and focused, but that didn’t mean he could take it for granted that he was seeing everything there was to see about this door.

Give it just sixty seconds. Sixty seconds of focus.

The ground was definitely vibrating.

Ignore it.

Alden tried to make his next breath slow and steady. He pressed his hand to the knob harder.

Okay. You’ve been entrusted to me. All of you. What does all of you include? What are you besides just a door?

He asserted his skill as much as he could while he stared at the entrance, not trying to use any particular feature of his bound authority, just aligning himself with his affixation a little more. He was only capable of giving the process a fraction of the attention he’d dedicated to it the other night, when he’d spent ages contemplating his targeting ability and making peace with himself so that he could find the mug of soup Haoyu had hidden.

But fortunately, even a little effort made a difference here.

A new aspect of the door suddenly came into view.

The knob beneath Alden’s hand gleamed with a network of magic, similar to the ones he saw when he looked at entrusted NesiCard chips or temper spheres. And he could now feel that piece of the enchantment under his palm, like a patch of warmth.

Taking another breath, determined not to lose his head or shift his attention, he examined the rest of the door.

Smaller knots of enchantment shone on several of the puzzle pieces that were elevated or recessed compared to the others, all of them with hair-thin magical connections to the door’s knob.

The seal said to input my code for entry. Those pieces must all be buttons people press to open this thing.

He thought trying to pull the enchantment from a single piece would be a bad move. It might do nothing at all.

Pulling the whole thing and de-magicking the door entirely seemed like the surest option. He was pretty worried about the strain on his skill, though.

Enchantments were harder than objects, and with Zeridee preserved, it would be a double run on top of that.

I don’t think it’ll be nearly enough to wear me out, but…

Fast. Just do it fast.

Take enchantment. Turn doorknob. Done.

“Please work,” he murmured.

He made a pinching motion against the doorknob, like he was trying to pluck a cobweb from it, and activated his preservation again, this time with the intention of bearing only the enchantment.

All of it. The whole thing.

The network of light pulled free of the door and wrapped itself around his hand and a few inches of forearm. He could feel it there, under the sleeve of the sweatshirt.

And it’s taking way more effort to hold than the temper sphere enchantment.

“Shit!”

He grabbed the knob, turned, and yanked. The door opened.

In too much of a rush to be grateful, Alden stumbled through and dropped the stolen enchantment the second he was inside.

Heart pounding, hand still on the knob, he looked at what he’d done. He could feel the warmth of the restored enchantment beneath his palm again, and he could see it on the puzzle piece buttons…some of them. It was dimmer, and most of threads connecting the pieces to the knob seemed to be missing.

Pretty sure I’ve broken it.

He let go, pushed the door shut, and took a step back. A couple of seconds later, the door clicked as if it was locking itself. Then it clicked again.

And a few more times.

Yep. That’s definitely broken.

He hoped the cool door wasn’t someone’s magnum opus.

Something to feel guilty about on another, better day. One when he would also have time to appreciate the fact that he had just confirmed he could bust magical locks.


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It took Alden a few seconds to get his bearings; it probably wouldn’t have taken even that long if he wasn’t so stressed. The building seemed to have a simple layout. The lights were on as well as the heating. It was toasty warm, bright, and quiet.

The roaring was undetectable.

I doubt it just stopped.

The walls must have been thick enough to block sound, which could only be a good thing.

He carried Zeridee down a hallway lined with with doors on both sides. Some of them had nameplates. One had a “Boom Room 4 - Available” sign on it.

What’s a boom room?

He associated funny names with “boom” in them with Wrights who worked with dangerous materials, not artists.

He reached the building’s elevator and pushed the call button. Should I be looking for stairs?

Getting stuck in an elevator would make a bad night worse. But climbing six flights of stairs with his injured passenger would take longer.

While he waited, he watched the animated seal on a wall screen. It was swimming around in a bright blue ocean and using its nose to bump balls covered in notices and news toward him for him to read.

Someone was looking for unpaid collaborators, models in the 3-6 Appeal point range were wanted for a fashion show in the spring, and a “living sculpture experience” would take place in the sixth-floor gallery tomorrow night. There would be hors d’oeuvres.

“Your elevator’s here!” said the seal. “Have a creative day!”

Alden jumped into the elevator. As if to mock him, it was painfully slow. He tried not to imagine a giant wave barreling toward him while he watched the floor numbers change one by one.

When a ding finally announced his arrival at the top, he stepped off to find himself in the promised gallery.

“This is unnecessarily creepy under the circumstances.”

The whole sixth floor was a wide open space except for columns that supported the roof, and it was lined with windows on all four sides. The room was full of sculptures, almost all of them featuring life-sized human figures who were reaching out in various ways as if to interact with people who weren’t there.

That would’ve been eerie on its own, but none of the main overhead lights were on. Instead, about half of the sculptures featured their own custom lighting arrangements that left faces, hands, or other body parts aglow while everything else in the room was in shadow.

And the sound was audible here, thanks to all the glass.

Alden ignored the outstretched arms and knowing expressions on the statues’ faces while he strode toward the windows that overlooked the street he’d just left.

Nothing.

But his body wouldn’t relax. He stood there, waiting, on the alert for a glimpse of the villain he’d fled.

Gradually, signs of wrongness appeared. Not down on the street, but some distance ahead, in the direction he’d been traveling in and to the left, around where the coast was.

“Oh,” he said softly, letting his forehead touch the glass as he tried to see better.

There was an area of darkness, as if something had taken a bite out of the island.

Most of the places in the evacuated neighborhoods weren’t completely lit. But there were street lamps, signage, windows, and occasionally an entire house with the lights left on. In that place, however, it was totally black.

Maybe the power’s just out. Maybe there’s a cove there or some other kind of place that doesn’t have lighting.

Or maybe there was a brand new cove there, one created in the past few minutes.

“I’m really uncomfortable with the fact that it’s ahead of us instead of behind us, Zeridee.”

He’d been picturing the danger at his back, chasing him. And ahead of him—really, not that far away—there would be people, tall buildings, superheroes, battle groups…safety.

We could get cut off.

He walked the perimeter of the gallery, looking out in every direction, trying to understand what was happening out there in the dark.

“I think…”

He trailed off because he didn’t know what he thought. There was another blocky multi-story building in the direction they needed to go in. Several minutes of his fastest burdened walking pace, by his reckoning.

I could do jog-rest-jog. Keep moving out of the evacuation zone, stop every time I hit a concrete building at least a few stories tall for a breather and head upstairs to check out the landscape.

Doing it that way sounded like some sort of plan.

I think it makes sense. I don’t want to get in a situation again where I’m down at street level with no idea what’s going on up ahead or behind me, so heading up high to do periodic checks is good. Don’t want to run toward a patch where all the lights have gone out, right?

The plan came with new worries.

If the power goes out everywhere I’m not going to be able to see anything.

What if the next building I aim for has a door like a bank vault?

What if the next time I try to talk to Zeridee, the blood loss finally gets her and she faints?

“Yeah,” he said, deliberately ignoring his own inner questioner. “It’s a good plan. I think a short rest and regroup while I keep my eyes on things and try to figure out what’s going on out there is the right choice. I’ll do something about my fucked up toes and try to fix the straps on this Canadian man’s sandals. Oh, and let’s find ourselves some light switches!”

Inspired by Instructor Klein’s technique on the bridge earlier, Alden wanted to make the gallery lights flash an SOS by flicking a switch over and over. He was foiled by technological “advancement.” Instead of switches, there was only a lighting control panel accessed via the screen by the elevator.

“Listen, you dumb seal,” he said, poking the giggling animal in the forehead. “You and I both know that there is no reason to password protect the lights! You’re just afraid I’m going to get a good look at some of the freakier statues hiding in the shadows!”

He abandoned the project since it was cutting into his self-imposed “rest and regroup” plan and went to sit down.

The only seats in the room were benches lining the windows on two sides. They were made of translucent acrylic so that they didn’t distract from the art. He took a corner one so that he could prop his back against the wall and still see out, facing in the direction he planned to head.

He spent a couple of minutes adjusting his shoes, fighting his way out of the poncho—because it was getting messed up anyway and he was hot—and getting himself situated on the bench in as comfortable a position as he could find with a whole other person resting on him.

“Okay,” he said at last. “I’ve got to be totally honest, Zeridee. I wish you weren’t hurt, but I’m glad you can’t see me now.”

Playing a game of “the floor is lava for the person I’m holding” while he tried to adjust his clothing and examine his own feet was inelegant to say the least.

Now I sit here and I watch and I make decisions. Calmly.

Yeah, right.

He was already fidgeting even though he was finally getting the chance to sit, just because not running felt wrong.

The roaring seemed to have diminished. He stared out, trying to watch for changes in the cityscape.

People are up ahead.

The lights of downtown Apex were there, curving around the crescent, so close and so far at the same time. He hoped the guys were all right.

They’re definitely more all right than me.

He pulled his attention back toward nearer destinations. The building he’d mentally marked as his next stopping point was in view.

We’ll aim for it when we leave. I could take the stimulant injector there.

The label warned about sudden onset tiredness after it wore off, and he was leery about using it until he was just a little more sure that salvation was within reach.

For a while longer, he stared out, hoping to spot signs of life, signs of danger, signs telling him where help might be.

“I wanted this place to keep me safe.”

He shifted Zeridee’s weight. The way he’d positioned her was making one of his legs go numb.

“Anesidora, I mean. That’s not all I wanted from it, but it’s probably the main thing. Chaos is supposed to stay out there, with you Artonans. It’s not supposed to chase me to Earth.”

Matadero was supposed to be nothing—a blip that happened, and then he would hear about it on the news and forget it again. Like it had been every year of his life up until tonight.

“I would like to file a complaint with the ambassador. As an Avowed, I expect safe and comfortable living conditions when I’m off-duty. It’s only fair. The demon cube should be moved to whatever place on Earth is as far from Anesidora as possible. So you guys just pull some wizards together, act all mighty like you did when you showed up eighty years ago, and tell the rest of Earth you’re going to plonk it down somewhere else.

“And if the cube can’t be moved, you can plonk whatever’s left of this place elsewhere instead.”

He watched the dark place up ahead, wondering. Waiting for more lights to go out.

“Hey,” he said finally. “You weren’t about to tell me to put you down, were you? Before I preserved you again. It sounded a little like you were.”

He looked at the top of her head.

“Don’t do that to me, Zeridee. I know we only just met, but you’re…”

He hadn’t asked himself what she was. Or why he hadn’t seriously considered abandoning her now that they’d gone from a very minimal risk level to a situation that felt way more dangerous.

It hadn’t felt like a question that needed asking.

She was kind. She’d been left behind at least partially for his sake. She was the sort of person who fretted over the safety of her human neighbors, and she’d thrown her broken body at an Avowed who had tried to murder Alden.

And she’d killed him.

“You remind me too much of too many people who have been important in my life. Pieces of each of them.”

Kibby, Hannah, Arjun Thomas, Thenn-ar.

If she asks me to put her down, and she seems to be having a lucid moment, I guess I have to do it.

But then what happens to us?

“Please don’t ask. It’s really not heroic of me,” said Alden. “You’ve made me care about you just that fast. I still see ways for us both to get out of this together, and I don’t want to find out what it feels like to leave you behind. That’s all.”


******


Back downstairs, Alden gave himself a last minute pep talk while he drank from a water cooler.

I’m up for a jog to get to the next building. Move forward steadily. If I think it’s about to get really dangerous and I’m three quarters of the way there, I’ll keep going. If I haven’t made it that far, I’ll turn back.

He’d decided three quarters of the distance should be his cut-off instead of half, since he didn’t know what the exact situation with the other building would be. It might take him a few minutes to get inside or he might discover it was impossible and have to haul ass toward the next best thing.

This place had the advantage of being a known quantity.

He refilled his paper cup again, and the cooler released one giant blub as water poured from the tap.

He drank, crushed the cup, and dropped it into the trash.

He felt ready to move. He’d already washed the blood off his hands. Zeridee was slung across his back, her braid wrapped around his chest and shoulders.

All right. Let’s go. This isn’t a Thegund level tribulation. Just a bad night. It doesn’t matter whether the System’s answering me or not. I’m getting us both to safety within the hour.

Determined, driven, and focused on the journey ahead, he headed for the exit.

And froze at the sight of a pale-skinned, dark-haired man wearing nothing but a bright red swim brief. His back was to Alden, and he was pulling open the puzzle door. He stepped out into the night. As the door swung shut behind the man, Alden saw him throw his arms out and stand on his bare tiptoes, head tipped back for a big inhale.

“This is your night, Liam!” he shouted. “This your time! Become more than—”

The door closed, cutting off his voice, and the lock Alden had broken clicked a few times.

His thoughts, which had gone momentarily blank, came back online.

“Sir!” he shouted, running down the hall. “Dude! Liam in the tiny swimsuit! Wait!”

He flung open the door and ran out onto the sidewalk.

Where’d he go!?

Alden whipped around. He couldn’t see the guy anywhere.

“Liam!” he yelled as loud as he could. “Liam! Where are you?!”

Oh fuck he’s gone. He must be running. Turned the corner up ahead? If I just…

He kept shouting, racing toward the intersection, and just as he reached the crosswalk, he heard someone call back.

“Hey! You good over there?”

Alden looked around to see the man in the swimsuit standing in the other crosswalk, across the intersection. The pedestrian lights were flashing for both of them.

“What’s that on your back?” Liam called.

An image of the woman on the motorcycle shaking her head and abandoning him flashed through Alden.

“She’s alive!” he shouted. “I’m trying to get her to someone who can help! She only looks like this because of my skill. I’m definitely not a murderer!”

“Somebody’s hurt?” The man bounded toward him. His eyes widened as he got close enough to get a better look at Alden and Zeridee. “Ho wow! What happened to you!? That’s an Artonan. That’s a very bloody Artonan. And she’s real stiff.”

“That’s my skill. It’s preser—timestopping her and shielding her. What…”

What are you doing here in swimwear? Why were you headed toward the coast? Have you seen anyone else?

Alden settled on the question that mattered the most. “Can you help us somehow?”

The man was hovering around Alden’s back now, staring at Zeridee, so Alden had to look over his shoulder to see him properly.

“What?” Liam asked.

“Can you help us?” Alden repeated. “I’m trying to get out of here as fast as possible. I don’t know my way around the area, and—”

“Of course!” Liam exclaimed. “You’ve obviously had a hell of night already. What in Apex happened to you two? Did you come from that way? Did something go wrong with the evac up there?”

He pointed in the direction Alden had mentally marked as unsafe—the place where all the lights were out.

“No. We came from the Artonan ambassador’s house. It’s a long story.”

“Well, don’t worry. Unless your skill’s at risk of giving out? In that case, we might need to worry.” He ran a hand through his hair and looked up and down the street. “We’re nowhere near an emergency department, and I don’t really know how I would help with something like this.”

“I can hold her and keep her this way for a long time,” said Alden. “Running far would be hard, but if we walk—”

“You’re set then. Yeah. I know a place that’s safe.”

“You do?”

The man was nodding. “Yes. If you can really keep the Artonan petrified…you’re a hundred percent sure she won’t die of her wounds when she’s like that? She looks kind of…not healthy.”

“I can keep her like this,” Alden said firmly. “She won’t die.”

“Then you’re good, buddy! What’s your class? Healer? Never mind. I’ve got you covered. Yeah, yeah…oh, and we can probably use one of Tina’s spells to send a message ahead. For a good cause…definitely!”

Alden’s faith in humanity had taken some critical hits tonight. This guy was restoring it fast.

“Thank you so much. Who’s Tina? And where—?”

“Follow me!”

******

Liam Long led Alden right back into Apogee Artist Spaces, talking ninety miles an hour the whole way. The “safe place” he knew about was the ground floor studio he shared with his brother and sister. The brother and sister were B-rank students at Celena North University; Liam was a B-rank too. He had just graduated. The guys were Brutes. The sister was an Adjuster.

According to Liam, Apogee’s ground floor boom rooms were the perfect “base of operations” during a natural disaster. Basically, the things were reinforced concrete boxes that allowed artists to get more violently creative with their powers than was allowed in the upstairs studios. Hence, no windows and thick doors.

“The old lady in the studio across the hall films herself smashing through all sorts of things. Bet you’ve seen some of her work in movies! Cannonball Betty? We never hear a sound.”

That does sound good, but…

“Did anyone say the rooms were safe to hide in during a magical flood, though?” Alden was watching Liam input his code into the panel by the door of Boom Room 6. “Or a regular flood even? Are they waterproof? Have they been rated for external impacts by, like, an engineer?”

His code is just 123123123?

Alden was memorizing it in case he needed to leave and come back for some reason.

Liam seemed a little too nonchalant about the ongoing disaster.

“Of course they couldn’t officially let people shelter here. There are only a few rooms. But my siblings and I all agreed it was safe enough. You can stay here in our boom room. I’ll get back to the others quick and tell them about you. Tina’s got a spell that will signal friends back on campus if any of us get into trouble. When they get it, they’ll know to send someone this way. You just sit tight!”

He smiled comfortingly and pushed open the door, gesturing for Alden to step inside.

Alden did take a step inside. Then the lights came on automatically, and he reversed course so quickly he almost fell down.

“Thank you so much, but Zeridee and I are just going to head toward downtown on our own! Nice meeting you. Sorry to bother you. I think I’ll be fast enough to get where I’m going. I hope you and your brother and sister and everyone you know have a wonderful time together in your bathing suits. See—”

“Wait!” shouted Liam.

No way.

Alden was down the hall grabbing the puzzle-piece doorknob in a heartbeat. The man’s bare feet were slapping the floor behind him.

“It’s not a torture chamber!” Liam shouted.

“I’m sure it’s not!” Alden shouted back as he shot outside. “No judgment! Just going now. For multiple personal reasons!”

He ran as fast as he could.

Liam Long caught up to him, passed him, and skidded to a halt in front of him.

He’s faster than me. I’m screwed.

“Kid, it’s not a torture chamber! I mean it sort of is, but—”

Maybe if I kick him hard enough in the nuts.

My brother and sister and I just use it to scare ourselves.”

“I’m sure. Like I said. No judgment. I just realized I felt like running right now.”

Kick him and then kick him again.

“I know it looks weird!” Liam waved his hands. “But we just get together and scare the shit out of each other. I swear.”

“Why?” Alden demanded.

“Because…” He dropped his arms and gave Alden an embarrassed smile. “We’re doing it to help each other level.”


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Comments

Voidsong

Soup! Glorious soup!

Anonymous

Thank you!

IV08004

Thank you

it's me

thanks for the chapter, can't wait!

Poiuy

Wow!

JustMe

Thank youu for making more waves (making waves causes ripples in the fandom, meaning this chapter is also titled ripples

Andrew Simpson

IT IS HERE ALL PRAISE SOUP

Partha Peddi

Wow, decided to stay awake for a few more minutes.. and a treat... UPDATE: I dont want to talk about it!

Mortch

Thanks so much!

Alan Miller

Re: Point Nemo and R'lyeh, Wikipedia actually talks about it a bit. Point Nemo hadn't been identified yet when Lovecraft wrote, but he was looking for basically the same thing.

puppy0cam

I'm shocked he managed to get zeridee to consent to giving him a door.

Twara Sandeep

Thanks for the chapter! Poor Alden, going through so much in one day. I dunno how i'd manage if I was him

Cole Norman

They are just sleeping and it's NOT a torture chamber

Meridun

Thanks for the answer, Sleyca. I think I posted the R'Ley question back in Waves I or Waves II. Back in college I read a bunch of Lovecraft short stories, though a lot of it was skimming. The description of Matadero was similar, but then again, a lot of the chaos-related descriptions in fantasy/horror blend together and his stories are an early source of many of them. I looked it back up recently out of curiousity and found it pretty cool that he used the same area. I assume then that if Matadero is precisely at Point Nemo, Anesidora was created to be somewhere conveniently close?

Sesharan

Sometimes people are awful for no good reason. Sometimes they’re kind, with just as little need for a reason. And sometimes they’re weirdos with a definitely-not-torture chamber.

Emily Curtis

Oh boy. I can't believe I didn't think about how a leveling system would encourage self destructive behavior like this. Reminds me of the mentions of people attempting to induce trigger events for themselves in Worm.

John Anastacio

How did a suspenseful frantic rush from a hungry magical tsunami suddenly segue into a comedic episode? How did that happen? Thanks for the chapter Sleyca. I feel much better now. Why hasn't Alden asked Liam if he has any infogear or a phone so he can call for help? I would think that would be in the front of his mind. I wish Alden hadn't said he was definitely not a murderer. That's what a murderer would say. I feel so embarrassed for him.

SnuggleCat

Soup! I like Liam already, sketchy but lovable characters FTW

Jeremy Goldberg

I’m not sure how I feel about that ending. edit: on the one hand, it sure sounded like Liam was going to go swim in the hungry ocean to level, so his explanation of the dungeon is consistent with his behavior. On the other hand, no, Alden. No. Do not follow the half-naked man into his soundproof torture dungeon.

Giants Craft

How are you so consistent with writing so much at such a high quality? It’s really impressive. What’s your writing process like?

Voidsong

Totally not a torture chamber

fonn

1. enchantment theft is plot relevant!! 2. sculpture room is terrifying, thanks artists 3. "He was foiled by technological “advancement.”" -- nooo this is too relatable (crying laughing) 4. alden's one-sided speech to preserved zeridee got me in the feelss TT_TT 5. whahtjdh the fuck. who is liam. why is he like this. what a whiplash. somehow i dont trust him?? wait did he take his clothes off because clothes are Object?! we had a convo in the discord about this and it was like "sleyca is not going to write alden stripping its not that story" vs "but survival" vs "but we dont even know if clothes are Object". 6. im getting some... jeffy vibes from liam. like his password. 7. hey i thought this was a tense survival arc why am i laughing so hard. the dialogue at the end is so fucking funny.

MeYouIt

Thanks for the soup! Interested to find out why this guy thinks scaring yourself would let you level.

Nyroe

Alden found the BDSM bunker 😳

Kim Enteiu

Faith in humanity re-ady to keep running with my Artonan, thanks for your time.

JJ Hunter

Getting to see each bit of Alden's efforts into improving his Skill and his skills since getting back to Earth pay off in this marathon crisis is giving me all the feels. Even Bearer of Enchantments is getting its time to shine! Alden noping out of the (self)-torture room is deeply understandable and also quite funny in an ironic way after his own emphasis on not being a murderer, no really! I'm just time-stopping someone from dying, it's totally different.

Kim Enteiu

It’s definitely a not-torture chamber in a not-soundproof disaster studio.

John Anastacio

It's because stress while using a talent or spell impression helps you level. And I guess they're indoor people. I'm pretty sure they're all in the Arts program. Getting a torture room to help yourselves level sounds like an Arts thing to do.

JTP

Interesting, tell me more about leveling

Maddy Weller

Huh, those seem like some nice weirdos. I hope they are nice, at least. I wonder if the reason they are out and about is to try and do leveling in the disaster? If they are willing to torture themselves and each other to level, doing inadvisable things in the current problem weather seems likely.

Heather White

The tight suspense here gives off a real Hitchcock vibe. Very intense. And then Liam shows up, & I’ve got no idea what to think about him and his swimsuit, not-torture chamber wackiness, but I’m looking forward to finding out more. “I wanted this place to keep me safe.” — My heart hurts for Alden.

Michael Blue

So… when the System said that people motivated to level usually find a way, I didn’t realize this is what was being referred to

blinkmouse

I have no idea where this is going EXCITE

Heather White

#5 - When Zeridee is frozen, is she an object? If so, no reason for Alden to strip. He’s already stuck with an object he’s not willing to give up. #6 - very Jeffy

Bob Ross

Alden: I'm totally not a murderer. Liam: Oh, right gotcha, well don't worry this is totally not a torture chamber!

Jazehiah

So. * The direction Alden needs to go has been cut off. * Burden of enchantment is dangerously powerful. Taking only part of the enchantment was clever. * Alden has found a "safe" place to shelter. * The new ally, Liam, is pretty sketchy, but I've got mostly okay vibes. * We may get to see how people try to level their skills. Liam seems familiar, but I can't place him. I doubt we've met him before. I doubt he's just a "throwaway" character. Can Alden have multiple entrusters? I expect it should be possible, but I don't think I've seen him try since returning to Earth.

Satya Prateek

Lmao the turns this is taking. I'm quite pleased it's not going the solo thegund rescue route

Shawn

Wow not a torture chamber for sure. I'm not sure this adds a ton to last chapter but Alden is freaking out and is still capable of functioning with double peace of mind. He's thinking well and using the enchantment preservation portion of his skill, that's something. What's everyone listening to during this? My first song was Drowned Lovers by Kate Rusby which is thematically accurate but I it kept breaking engrossment. My second song was Horse Soldier by Corb Lund which did a good job fading into the background.

fonn

no, Object is an element like Ground/Sky/Water/Life, roughly defined by how much processing/manufacturing an item has gone through.

Tannim Murphy

Huh, that’s a new aspect about the world I had not expected.

Heather White

Next up to prove itself: the ridiculously expensive, seemingly pointless invisible screaming ball

Bob Ross

Did it seem like he was taking only part of the enchantment, or the while enchantment from part of the door (specifically the puzzle knob).

Nybsz

Well if Alden decides to stick around he might level up his rope technique

BeautifulBusinessBoi

Was Liam wearing a swimsuit because he was going to swim in the dangerous ocean?he’s basically an unsanctioned powerleveler lol! That’s so dumb and dangerous when it seems you can just workout your power like the kids in gym class do. It’s an interesting side of Anesidora to see the lengths people will go to (particularly B’s) to get an edge over others . And that there’s a theory that an element of danger makes leveling more effective. I wonder if this hypothesis comes from people who are away on chaos related things that causes them to level faster which makes the layman think real danger = more experience when it’s actually chaos assaulting your authority + waiting to level = increased experience like Alden. Alden can’t even explain that it’s wrong because of his Joe tattoo so I can see this whole interaction being exasperating lmao

Gaffer

Liam appears like his namesake to be leveling a…particular set of skills

Matt V

I feel like if you have to repeatedly insist that it's not a torture chamber, you've already lost the battle. It was nice to see Alden using his newly learned skills in interesting ways. Bypassing the enchantments on the door the way he did was neat. I'm excited to see him delve further into what his powers and wizardry will allow him to do.

TDarwin

Thank you for the chapter!

Amber Gregory

Liam, I'm pretty sure it's a bad idea to just decide on your own emergency shelter criteria. Alden, I know you know better than that. Even if Liam's room is absolutely not a torture chamber please don't shelter there

VP

I trust this guy. He said it was not a torture chamber, he seems legit

Gaffer

Lexi just found his new grinding spot for his whip. Wait, not like that.

Flying Goat

I assume he was planning on doing something ocean related that was almost certainly a very bad idea.

5haun

Thank you for the chapter, this one might honestly be an all timer great lol. There are too many moments for me to say where I laughed, though the first one was definitely Alden worrying about the Wright who made the door enchantment 😂he is the best The ending was so unexpected and so good… do we believe Liam about the leveling? What happens when Avowed are under chaos duress AND discover a potential new way to level? Only tough part is I was just getting to Ryan Gosling’s I’m Just Ken performance at the Oscar’s so I was delayed I reading this 😭

Jason Harpster

Take the emergency Bat-Signal, keep your back to the wall, don't eat or drink anything. The convo about scaring each other for leveling purposes is going to be a surreal addition to this already Rod Sterling level disaster arc.

Poiuy

This is some emotional whiplash here 😅

Tori, Writher #1 Fan

Why do I feel like I've been on that date. But also, this ripple/wave arc is so meaningful to me and I love that the struggle is centered on Alden's inner heroics, in how he manages his own capabilities and ptsd in an unpredictable world, and that it all keeps feeling so real despite or maybe because of how unexpected and colorful is every detail. Just before this dropped I was re-reading Ripples III, the chapter where the emergency announcements go out and Alden panics and then finally recognizes he needs to do the peace of mind chain he's been telling himself he needs to do... and then does the peace of mind chain. Out of the entire series, that's the chapter that haunts (triggers?) me most. I read a lot, a LOT, and Alden recognizing and doing the peace of mind is my #1 most heroic moment in fiction. (Like, for comparison, because I've seen we've got some Cosmere fans in the comments, see Kaladin [doing a nonspoiler decision] in Way of Kings. I cheered out loud when I read that for the first time. I love that moment. Yet Alden's hero moment in overcoming his own chaotic mind chatter to do a helpful wordchain feels stronger to me now, at least at this time in my readery life, and, I'm genuinely happy for everyone who thinks the recent storyline has no action.)

Neil H

I'm guessing Liam is a B-rank Aqua Brute?

Flying Goat

I didn't see it mentioned, but I assume Alden's movement skill is active as he runs around Anesidora? We've seen him use it enough that I assume either sidewalks are considered ground (or are thin enough for the ground below them to count), or there's enough unpaved area for his skill to work.

Robert Smart

Liam didnt really answer the water proof question about the room right? I mean this is pretty damned persistent water. Tftc.

Alan Miller

Zeridee is probably very cynical (working for a rotating cast of politicians....) but has sussed out that Alden is painfully earnest and is clearly very strongly approved of by people whose opinions she'd *really* value.

Darth Xaim

Huh.... so there's an alternative way to level up? Thought that one has to exercise their Authority to make it grow and the Affixation to Level Up by Affixing the grown Authority? Does being scared make one's authority grow somehow as a defense mechanism? There must be side effects.

Justin

Thanks for the chapter. This is gonna be a long night for him

rutjumper

Wondering whether the next expecting the unexpected class will be a review of how everyone went during the sinkersender incident.

Gibborim

"For multiple personal reasons!" Losing my shit on this one.

SkySeeker (definitely not Lauren K in a mask)

I know exactly what you are talking about, and it hurts. Great authors are the ones that can make it hurt in a good way when you see the character come through it, burned but still standing. I appreciate the comparison to Kaladin. Different circumstances, different story arcs, but the same kind of struggle to keep going, even though the trauma just keeps coming.

SkySeeker (definitely not Lauren K in a mask)

Lol. This is why I never try to anticipate what comes next in this story. Creepy art bunker with a guy in a minimal swimsuit and maybe not a torture chamber was not on my bingo card.

Terrestrial_Biped

I feel like if Liam was wearing infogear, it would be quite visible with his current getup. And if he had some stashed, he'd think of that as a means of communication before his sister's (apparently expensive) spell impression.

Janny

Might be that being truly freighted for your life makes it easier to engage your authority or your skill allowing it to grow faster.

puppy0cam

Chapter 63: > “It’s an ancient <>” he said in an annoyed tone. “I wish to follow it. For multiple, long-considered personal reasons.”

Terrestrial_Biped

At present, Alden cannot have multiple entrusters. Switching targets loses entrustment, as stated in the original skill description. A recent example happened in gym when Alden played catch with Snake (four days ago in-story). To attempt to catch Snake's throws, Alden had to change his target from Haoyu to Snake, and lost entrustment on his paracord shield as a result. That might change someday, but for now, it's one entruster only.

Cyrus McEnnis

Remember - no one on Earth really knows how you level up. People scaring themselves to put themselves under stress while using their powers? Not the stupidest thing to try.

Antony Laporte

Liam Long trustworthiness poll!

David

Alden: “Someone? Anyone? Help!” Also Alden: “I don’t know about this bunker. Have you checked the building codes?”

Carl Earl

Lexi grinding his whip is simultaneously the most entertainingly hilarious and the most dirty phrase I have read about this book.

John D

Yes, it's mentioned in the last chapter once he's off the boardwalk (which I presume is wooden). > Alden hurried toward it, moving at a lope now that his feet were on something that qualified as ground again. Concrete is almost entirely made from limestone and clay, so it makes sense that as long as it's being poured somewhere it serves the purpose of ground, it would count as ground. It's almost philosophical at which point it changes to being an object instead of ground, but with real consequences for the SupSup magic system.

Flying Goat

I suspect the issue just hasn't come up before, strangely, so he's not really sure. :)

N0m_N0m

see the thing is; almost nobody understands was authority is. the VAST majority of Avowed have no idea what causes people to level up beyond "doing things with your power". It figures that there would be people with a completely wrong idea on how to do things

Alan Miller

Are there Avowed who can do forced plant growth? Since the contaminant is focused on Object, could ground shapers build berms and someone else force growth to ensure that key locations are completely surrounded by Ground? (Any dirt with a plant counts as ground no matter what)

Terrestrial_Biped

You gotta be aware that not everyone has access to a safe space to try things like the gym at CNH. That gym is built and maintained by Artonans, and not many like it exist on Anesidora. If you're not one of the fortunate few chosen for the hero program at a top Apex school, what then? Maybe you can rent a place, like these boom rooms, that's safe *enough* for most purposes, and maybe it's a suitable venue for your talents. Or maybe it isn't. Or maybe your talents are too dangerous even there. Or maybe you can't even afford the boom room. I can definitely see how things would get weird fast for the people who are determined to level, to grow stronger, to get more summons, to find a way up and out of whatever situation they're stuck in through hard work and ingenuity. And Liam might not even be wrong. Authority passively defends you from chaos and from the skills of other Avowed (notably, Sway influence), even if you can't feel or move it; maybe it will try to give you just a little bit more when you're stressed. Or maybe having the also-Avowed siblings to scare you is the key ingredient; we've been told competition among Avowed helps leveling, and maybe that has to do with authorities clashing.

Jennifer N

Option 3- trust him to be a not-torturer, but don't trust that he will be helpful to Alden/the situation

Flying Goat

Next chapter: Alden goes to the city planning office. Surely the ocean-proof buildings will be noted somewhere.

no

he's an art person, they're just like this

John D

Some well meaning but strange art student in a tiny red swimsuit is exactly what was needed to ease the tension a bit. It's too bad about the "not a torture room". Is there a drain in the floor? If there's a floor drain, GTFO, because Liam is right. It's not a torture room, it's a murder room.

Drew Allan Coon

Shelter in the stranger's torture chamber where noone can hear you scream? Hard pass. If the building is that sturdy, maybe he'd be fine in a hallway on one of the floors with concrete walls.

sketerpot

And some people are just looking for an excuse to have a soundproofed BDSM incest dungeon. Not judging.

Leaf

We’re about to find out that stress and fear levels people faster

R R

Just went and watched Gosling's performance - fantastic!

Gaffer

I was quite worried this would put Alden on the floor: | Her words were cut off in an instant. As for the door… | There was no way he could actually preserve it while it was attached to its frame. Based on Joe’s comments that the skill was designed without many checks and balances on exhaustion.

Osamaru Ta

So my original theory is probably right. Fear, danger and risk have a Net Positive on an Awakened's growth. That's why he grew so quickly on the moon. But its likely hidden from the general population to stop people from doing stupid things.

Bryan Thew

or the adjuster is blasting the brutes to level a body /blaster skill?

Gaffer

Well John Cena did a fair Liam Long impression too

Charlie

I was rereading old chapters and while it might not fit narratively, a truly poetic punishment for Joe would be to make him teach at a human school. It would be extremely disrespectful to an Artonan professor and he would be required to learn more about the species he took for granted. I don't think it would bother him in particular, and I believe he intentionally lost the superior honorific as a token punishment so that Alis didn't kill him, but I think most other Artonans would find it fitting and horrible.

John Anastacio

An Aqua Brute should develop gills sooner or later, and he's not wearing enough to hide them.

John Anastacio

A rabbitoir. Red swimsuit to help disguise the bloodstains? Blood is easily washed off skin.

Alex Scriber

How weird can this night (and day) get? Let’s find out together.

Aguy768

I've been thinking Alden could use his trait for a powerful flying knee strike as his goto move. Assuming no weapon. A lunge punch might also be good. However, there's just not that many other techniques that push off the ground directly into your opponent. His skill should do the equivalent of brass knuckles if he utilizes it as well. You hands deform alot when striking so it is a bigger boost then it seems at first blush. He should Sagat it up and run over people with flying knee strikes.

Alan Miller

@Cyrus this actually came up in earlier chapters specifically because ground is so troublesome. Any dirt nourishing a living thing basically qualifies as ground. Edit: 69, Busy Rabbit, talking with Dave “I’ve never understood ground. I know Ground Shapers who don’t understand ground.” “I think it’s just a concept from an ancient type of magic.” Alden scooted his chair closer toward the heater that was warming their table. “It’s highly symbolic. Old Artonan stuff. It’s less ‘ground’ and more ‘fundament of the planet that supports our life.’”

Tristan A

Word chains. How consistent are they? What I mean by this is, say two identical twins use the same word chain. Let's say a word chain of strength, if that exists. Are both of their strengths modified by the same amount? Or could it change depending on who they are receiving that strength from out in the universe? Another question. Let's say 2 people take on the debt of the strength chain. One of these people is of average strength and the other is a world class strongman. Is the debt consistent in that both of them are left completely weak or is the strongman not as debilitated because his base strength is so high? If the gain or debt of a chain is always consistent no matter who the person is, where does the inevitable "extra" strength go? Is that part of the energy that maintains the chain? Like a tax? Any thoughts?

John Anastacio

Liam Long stars in ANESIDORAN PSYCHO. Alden Thorn stars in SILENCE OF THE RABBITS. Zeridee-Und'h stars in WEEKEND AT ZERIDEE'S.

Mack

This is great. Can't wait to see where this eventually leads.

Sleyca

Hi, Meridun! Thanks for asking the question. I remembered it because I had started to type a reply to you before I put my laptop down one day, and it's been bothering me that I didn't get an answer out ever since. Yep. Matadero location was chosen prior to Anesidora.

Brett Peterson

Sounds like tension's broken - I guess this is the end of Alden's Stressful, Long, Kinda-Good-But-Then-Later-Very-Bad Day

Matt

The semi-delirious preserved entruster is an interesting dynamic. The design of Alden's skill really is fairly puzzling (from an in-universe perspective). The entrustment restriction is simultaneously extremely limiting but also extremely loose in aligning Alden's actions with his entrusters' desires. Alden can choose any entrusters and trick then into giving him things. The point seems to be less about consent or control and more about the inconvenience of serving someone else. Oh and Liam seems cool. I trust him with Alden's life.

abowden

The last bit of this chapter absolutely destroyed my sides, killing me instantly. Now I know why she's called Sleyca...

Aspiring Moth

I remember the house of unbreaking had a special relationship with the knights. it's probably because they require heavier duty wordchains due to wordchains giving a flat boost rather than a percentage boost? we know there are wordchains of similar effects but with different strengths. this would suggest that each chain gives at least roughly the same output each time, and stronger chains are required for stronger output. I would think that this adds up to the strongman being less debilitated. but in the conversation between Klein and principal saleh, they mentioned that wordchain knowledge was a postgrad endeavour in their eyes. but would wordchains not be less useful for graduates with higher stats as a rule? of course some effects aren't equivalent to foundation points, and chains could still be used to boost lesser stats effectively

Obran

I had multiple thoughts asI read this: - At first I thought that Alden was going to rent an apartment to get in. Like how he had to practice a little used power better. - Then I thought that Lute would like a place like this as a practice studio. I lived in an artist warehouse for a few years in my twenties, there was an opera singer next door who used to practice her operatic laughter every morning. That was my alarm clock for a bit. Some people have roosters… -If Alden had not put the enchantment back on the lock but had instead put it on Zeridee, would Alden have to twist the ambassador assistant into odd shapes to unlock the door? - Any chance you watched Pulp Fiction recently. Thinking about the Bruce Willis bondage scene.

Cyrus McEnnis

See, that was the definition I was going off, and I hadn't quite put together the implication that any substrate that "supports life" would, by definition, be Ground. I read it as a fundamental part of a planet - the supports life part I took as a description of the planet itself. I can definitely see your point though.

Aguy768

A fright might cause something like Zeridee's authority flailing. If so it would be a way for an Avowed to directly exercise their free authority. If so it would speed up leveling like spell casting but to a much lesser extent.

John Anastacio

The really funny and ironic thing is, the roles are all opposite. The Rabbit is the cannibal, the stiff is the killer, and the crazy semi-naked guy is the helpless innocent... maybe.

11037

You can add "lock breaker" next to "smuggler" and "status forger" on Alden's list of villain-like abilities, lol.

Emily Gurnavage

Trustworthy, but I say he dies before the crisis is over. Or some of his group. The situation is painted so dire that I feel like *someone* Alden personally interacts with will be dead by the end of things. A well-meaning goofy stranger he gets to know a bit about first fits perfect. Therell be riots if Zeridee dies from this, and Aldens friends are all confirmed at safer locations.

maledei

They might have found a pattern they are exploiting. Alden leveled a whole lot, he was also scared a whole lot...

Tristan A

Yeah like would a speedster feel any increase if they used a speed or endurance chain? Maybe there is a possibility of one individual receiving boosts from multiple people. Like if a speedster needs to use a speed chain they would receive there boost from multiple people. And when it comes time to pay debt their debt is then sent to multiple people or someone who has a similar speed capacity.

orion

I have a feeling that for the Knights, avowed levels and ranks aren't a concern as they probably know how to constently "level", and that their place in the Knight hierachy is more about skill and character and not having chosen to die yet. I suspect its really all just who has gone the longest before chosing to end their suffering. If alden eventually finds out how to level at a steady pace, itll be an interesting dynamic of him wanting to avoid soul pain vs being high level enough to able do the right thing in any sitation, and survive.

Sindri

Why would Alis have any problem with Joe? Yes he put Alden in more danger than the kid expected, but if he hadn't done that he would have been condemning a dozen innocent people (including Kibby) to a slow and agonizing death. The people who hate Joe are mostly university authorities, who hate that they had to pay out damages for what one of their staff did to a hired rabbit. And rivals in the chaos research business, who tried to seize all his assets and decided to kill any employees who wouldn't jump ship. And iirc that senator whose wife Joe was caught sleeping with?

Kate Yen

And Zeridee is alive, despite appearing dead. These fit really well lol

ImNotHere

I like the smell of soup in the morning Thanks for the chapter

Sindri

Doing the same magical exercises in a combat situation leads to advancing faster than doing them under controlled circumstances. I don't think anybody on earth knows why this is the case, but it's pretty well known from all the people who level up more in a day or two of high-stress summons than they do in months of training. Sure training has a big role in not getting killed when you do go into combat, but the people who get to the high levels usually do so in a way that's less xianxia and more D&D. So it's natural that people would try to find ways to recreate that effect with less risk of fatality. The most obvious options are either nonlethal combat between consenting duelists, or trying to recreate the emotional state of a person fighting for their life but without the actual danger.

Alan Miller

@Cyrus it's been mentioned in a few places, eg Ripples III where Alden can't use his movement trait on the bridge. "Assuming it was really concrete and steel from Earth and not some similar materials from another world—always a possibility on Anesidora—he would’ve been able to run on it under most circumstances. But it was soaring over deep water, a marvel of engineering. Not so much as a blade of grass growing out of a crack."

Sindri

When he first showed up, I felt like he was sketchy as hell and following him would lead to an ambush. But now that he's being openly a little disturbing but trying hard to explain it away, I feel like he could be a stalwart ally.

Jeff Wells

Actually most standing strikes - kicks, pinches, knees, etc - push off the ground as a major component of their force generation. I hadn't thought about that before. It's all a matter of how well he can control it, but I would think of he can move side to side and backwards with his skill he should be able to use that for punches and kicks. If he can use the skill to twist instead of necessarily stepping he's golden. That would turn Alden into a fighting machine. Not as good as a brute, but well above base human.

Sindri

Later we will discover that Vandy used her deep understanding of population demographics on the island and local topography to optimize her rescue routing, spent her evening saving hundreds of civilians from certain death, and then woke up the next day to find dozens of 1- and 2-star reviews on her online hero profile.

Jeff Wells

Or honestly go back up the floors. If the basement is that sturdy then the foundation is that sturdy, and the walls are also probably super sturdy. The question is weather the ocean anomaly can swallow the whole building. That would be bad, probably.

Meridun

@Sindri: From A Scale Tips: ———— “Nobody forced me to come here,” Alden added. The knight’s expression was unyielding. “I am sure he told you everything you needed to know before you agreed and that he had your best interests at the front of his mind,” she said caustically, slamming her cup down. Alden jumped. He was certain the cup would have shattered if it hadn’t been made of wood. “I am sure he did not throw an ignorant young teenager at a problem of his own making like a —————-!” She’s gonna kill Joe. “I’m all right,” he said hastily. “You are literally moments away from dying horribly.”

Sindri

Last time he was testing his ability to pull enchantments off things, they tended to break immediately or at least fade away really fast if applied to an unsuitable substrate. He can hold them together for as long as he's Bearing the enchantment itself, but if he puts it down anywhere other than where it came from (or maybe something extremely similar?) it doesn't last.

Meridun

Key quote, in case anyone missed it: —————- Literally any pot full of soil with a live plant in it was ground. Even if it was on an airplane.

Sean

"Thank you I'm not judging I just felt like running" is the best new exit strategy to awkward situations and now I will struggle to not smile when I have to say it in my next awkward interaction.

Alan Miller

Knights are in many ways like Artonan Avowed. Their Authority grows the same way in conflict with their affixations, which is why they have to swear oaths to the Triplanets (their strength grows faster than Wizards). They have to have uncapped Skills like BOAB to work best with that growth. And for the -art'hs they get sniffed by Murmur the Mlert while recovering from added affixations, and when they can't bear the thought of affixing further they're granted rest in the forest.

Sleyca

Thank you so much for the compliment. I'll do a post on it in much more detail one day if people are interested, but the biggest factor is a very boring one--time. Lots of it. Beyond that, I focus on writing things I'm excited about and letting characters lead the story. All of the major plot points I have in mind are things that I know will happen one day because of who the characters are and how their personalities will conflict with each other. And how the pressures of the world will affect them. Minor plot points on the journey to those bigger moments come about more organically. I build them in as I see them coming into being, sometimes months in advance, sometimes only a couple of weeks. I usually re-outline the next 5+ chapters once a week. Just a few hours of sitting down and saying, "Okay. Last week, I let things play out just a little bit differently than I'd planned, so what does it look like now? Where is Alden's head? How are any new elements that have popped up going to change things?" The web serial format is so freeing. There are so many situations that can only come about because I have the room to let the characters be who they are instead of driving them toward a predetermined plot waypoint. I know what their waypoints are, but I can let them arrive in their own time and in all kinds of ways, if that makes sense. It's fun and challenging (in a good way) to write for you all.

Aguy768

You do have to take into account center of mass. Most kicks and strikes use a rotational force around your COM by swinging your hips. I don't think he would be able utilize his trait with those basic strikes easily, though with enough training.. The flying knee and lunge punch have a more direct linear force from the Pushing foot into the COM and through to the opponent. he wouldn't need to modify the mechanics to get maximum use of the trait. A flying knee really isn't much different from jumping into someone so it's easy to adapt.

David Burchfield

Once again proving I have no idea where things are going with this story sometimes. Taking shelter in a trio of artist avowed siblings bdsm looking dungeon that they use to torture/scare each other in the belief that it will help them level faster (assuming that wasn't a total lie) was not even adjacent to anything on my list.

Zenopath (AEV)

Yeah I've given up on guessing. I'm not sure being scared helps you level, but who knows, it could. I'm guessing that the sibblings wouldn't do it if it didn't provide results? Maybe a persons authority will flare up a bit when scared... Like a mini authority scream.

Chris

Have a feeling Zeridee is going to end up working for Alden after all this.

Zelosh

OMG how come it never occured to me that Alden is slowly transforming into a Fae, and both his skill and vegan demon follow that same line of thinking. If you accidentally agree to give a Fae something, directly or indirectly, they obtain control over it. Eventually Alden might be able to preserve and take abstract concepts like someone's NAME, then assign it to something else.

Sleyca

He wanted help, but this help is wearing a Speedo and trying to convince him that a ground floor art studio and a lady named Tina will save him. This help needs to be questioned. 😂

ImNotHere

But at the same time it's part of the fun, we cover 360° with our prediction and then Sleyca goes up or down. And it is also a part of the fun when rereading, the wild guesses and plans on the future can also make you smile

Mason Kamer

I really like the concept of this idea. I wouldn’t be surprised for the next level if we get to see more abstract uses of the skill. It would be a really nice play on Boe’s ability if Alden is capable of bearing someone’s emotions/fits the theme of being “super supportive” by taking people’s fear/lack of attention/etc.

maledei

very interesting! May you enjoy writing for us all the days of your life, and may your days be many.

maledei

I think jumping head first into someone with a preserved poncho should also do the trick

ImNotHere

Hey Alden is a mind reader too, “You’ve made me care about you just that fast" was straight from my mind

maledei

"do you entrust yourself to me? hmm yes, now let me divide your skill and authority from your whole and assign it to myself... muahaha" Anyone remember Sylar from Heroes?

Rob

Alden can disable magical locks, alarms, preserve fragile objects, carry heavy weights compactly, he can run as if he weighed a lot less and jump high walls. He’s the perfect cat burglar!

Skeys13

Out of the frying pan and into the Incestuous torture dungeon.

BerciTheBeast

So how long until Alden's two "Peace of Mind"'s expire?

GryphonKnight

TORTURE😻💤 >“It’s not a torture chamber!” Liam shouted. >“I’m sure it’s not!” Alden shouted back as he shot outside. “No judgment! Just going now. For multiple personal reasons!” . . . [discarding first joke] . . [discarding second joke] . [discarding third joke] [discarding fourth joke] Any response I make here says more about me than the chapter Except, that was not the cliffhanger I was expecting Surprise factor Log ( 0.0001 ) / log ( 0.999768518518519 ) out of 10 Curiosity factor 😻😻😻😻😻 out of 🙀 Worry factor 💤💤💤💤🧨 out of ❤️‍🔥 🔲

N0m_N0m

yeah, from the looks of things "levels", "ranks", and the specific "classes" are things that are in use only by the earth contract.

AFK37115

thanks for the chapter! I loved Alden questioning himself about saving Zeridee then her reminding him of Kibby, Hannah, Arjun Thomas, Thenn-ar. Last part was so surprising I am excited to see what happens!

GryphonKnight

I often compare Lovecraft to Edger Alan Poe Poe invented the detective story but Sir Conan Doyle, and other writers, vastly improved on it Lovecraft wrote some very inspiring stories, that did not age well, but many subsequent writers are vastly better at writing in Lovecraft’s mythos than Lovecraft 😈

GryphonKnight

Worse, in Worm, attempting to non lethally, trigger yourself had a 100% failure rate Here, it can sometimes WORK But without an authority sense, and adding university age hormones, this can go horribly, horribly, wrong 🙀

Jinjitsu

Liam: "It's not a torture chamber!" Alden: "That's something someone with a torture chamber would say!"

Zelosh

Well it's a very stable chain so like... weeks probably? I don't know what double stacking it will do though, as that might shorten the timer significantly. Rather than expire, it's more likely he'll pop it early like he did on Thegund to give himself that adrenaline boost to keep going past his limits.

GryphonKnight

Takes “tortured artist making magical art” to a whole different level 😈

Elephin

I cracked the code: If you rearrange the letters in "Liam's sister" you get "Alis Merits, S", which is proof that at the end of this disaster, Alden will will get another commendation and rank up to S.

Zelosh

Alden will think they're friends. Zeridee, the ultra-serious person she is, will accommodate and support him even when he tells her not to. He may then feel guilty and pay her for her time. It's like employment with extra steps.

GryphonKnight

( discovering Alden uses temper spheres )“is that for a ball gag that PRODUCES screaming? Isn’t that besides the point?” 😈

Zelosh

This is why I can't be a writer. How do you just decide that this is path you're taking the story in?? That sudden jolt I felt when Alden first sees Liam was very real. Also, I'm super curious to hear the explanation for fear = leveling. Unless its specific to the type of Brute/Shaper they are? Either way, I immediately went "oh cool Alden's been getting an XP boost this entire time and we didn't know it! All it cost was his sleep and mental health..."

GryphonKnight

“why do the chromed links each have a word engraved on them? Wait! Is that a poem!?” “I was leveling up my word CHAINS” ⛓️

David Burchfield

I think there are some signs that it may already be gone, but if not, I am not sure I think it only lasts a few hours. It wearing off is a real risk if it hasn't already, however I think the risk of it backlashing and him getting the bad half anytime soon are minimal.

GryphonKnight

Once, I spent 3x days analyzing magic. In part to answer this question about word chains After too much brain juice, my two take aways Logically word chain debt, and boost, should be an exponential percentage- Chain debt should be 0.X^n per person in a word chain group ( example The Gloss is a group chain ) Where x= power of effect, and n=number in the chain stack, example 0.9^4 While chain boost should be equivalent, example 1+ [1 - 0.9^4] ) per person in the group This is to prevent death when the debt comes due, example suffocating from zero body, accidental suicide from zero mind, meteorite to the temple from zero luck The above may be false. With a System that can read your mind, and teleport you between dimensions, word chains are only limited by Sleyca’s imagination and what helps the story she is trying to tell ♾️

GryphonKnight

>Zeridee-Und'h stars in WEEKEND AT ZERIDEE'S O M G I would watch the heck out of this!‼️

Terrestrial_Biped

Peace of Mind lasts about three hours, and it's probably been about two hours since he cast it, so he's probably got an hour or so left. Here, have a timeline! https://coral-sheree-56.tiiny.site

Silver21

Yeah, I agree, the ending was totally unexpected. About scaring yourself to level, I think, it might help making yourself/your body believe it's in serious danger and get your mindset set on escaping or fighting and thus trying new creative ways to use your skill, like with Alden and deathballs of Big Snake where he got the hang of catching the balls. Something like that or Sleyca will probably come up with some other unexpected things XD

Zenopath (AEV)

It is too much of a cliche. "You saved my life now I must serve you" Sleyca seems to really hate cliches, and goes out of her way to avoid obvious ones.

GryphonKnight

I agree, Earth’s System is pandering to the Super hero/ video game genre As Alden’s Summoner Stat sheet show, Wizards only care that an Avowed can do X, not anything else Example a Level 50 Rabbit is the same as a Level 10 Rabbit if they both have maximum Tailor Environment skill 🍽️

Obbu

This chapter: -- "But we just get together and scare the shit out of each other." -- made me think of ch67: -- But you say, ‘Stress me out bad, Neha,’ and I think of those guys.” “I said I want to be more stress-resistant,” he said. “It’s the same thing.” -- I've also been sort of toying with the idea that ranking up might be a case of individuals reacting to pressure in such a way that their perception of *self* shifts, coming more in sync with their authority (and possibly diverging from base human at the same time, hence "divergence rank"). Alden's sort-of-epiphany during ch117 (Catch) really did feel like he was trying to shift mindsets to be more in tune with his affixation. Liam does use the term "level" and not "rank", however. But considering they're all confirmed as B-rank uni students, and considering Liam was apparently hyping himself up to do some extreme swimming in the middle of a disaster event - having a bunch of low rank people doing something reckless to force level ups does seem to be a similar trail of thought.

GryphonKnight

COLLECTIVE RAMBLINGS LOVECRAFT, CHAINS, DEBT, LEVELS, PSEUDO CHAOS FIELD Archived so I can find them easier ( mainly the Debt section below ) LOVECRAFT I often compare Lovecraft to Edger Alan Poe Poe invented the detective story but Sir Conan Doyle, and other writers, vastly improved on it Lovecraft wrote some very inspiring stories, that did not age well, but many subsequent writers are vastly better at writing in Lovecraft’s mythos than Lovecraft 😈 CHAINS “why do the chromed links each have a word engraved on them? Wait! Is that a poem!?” “I was leveling up my word CHAINS” ⛓️ DEBT Once, I spent 3x days analyzing magic. In part to answer this question about word chains After too much brain juice, my two take aways Logically word chain debt, and boost, should be an exponential percentage- Chain debt should be 0.X^n per person in a word chain group ( example The Gloss is a group chain ) Where x= power of effect, and n=number in the chain stack, example 0.9^4 While chain boost should be equivalent, example 1+ [1 - 0.9^4] ) per person in the group This is to prevent death when the debt comes due, example suffocating from zero body, accidental suicide from zero mind, meteorite to the temple from zero luck The above may be false. With a System that can read your mind, and teleport you between dimensions, word chains are only limited by Sleyca’s imagination and what helps the story she is trying to tell ♾️ LEVELS I agree, Earth’s System is pandering to the Super hero/ video game genre As Alden’s Summoner Stat sheet show, Wizards only care that an Avowed can do X, not anything else Example a Level 50 Rabbit is the same as a Level 10 Rabbit if they both have maximum Tailor Environment skill 🍽️ PSEUDO CHAOS FIELD > their strength grows faster than Wizards You are not wrong But that is like saying the ocean has a few fish Knights are ultimate OP skill set Wizards have to temporarily use up their unbound authority it increase it, which requires more expensive magic ingredients and more time, the more powerful the Wizard ( or try to shortcut by consorting with demons, and Arch demons ) Similar to a RPG were grinding low level monsters, and casting low level spells, provide little XP for leveling high level Wizards Knights are in a constant pseudo chaos field ( unbound authority versus affixation instead of unbound authority versus chaos ) that automatically, increases in strength as their affixation levels Like getting Y% XP to next level every day, with Y increasing each day ( resetting to zero each affixation ) Then any Wizard training done by a Knight, chaos field exposure, consorting with Arch demons, etc. will stack on top of their current Y% auto XP 📈

Pete

@nom_nom We have seen rabbits of other species for instance, and skills like the original 300 are presumably older than the earth contract. The knights themselves might use something tailormade instead of the general system, who knows, but there is no indication as far as I remember that they work fundamentaly different. Levelling is a natural part of the magic setup, they might call it something different but authority grows and if you are a knight or avowed at some point you need to invest more authority into bound skills to avoid an imbalance.

GN

Merci.

Hallow (edited)

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2024-03-11 10:45:51 Okay so, I read this last night at 4 am and I gotta say I didn't expect... this. LMAO But, after a little while of almost thinking like "is this gonna get retconned? Was this an 'author was tired and couldn't figure out what direction to take the story and panicked' moment?"... Like no. I've realised it does actually totally fit the story, even if it felt incredibly tonally jarring at first. Because low-key, when I first read this the traumatized part of my own brain that recognises danger was like "Liam has came across a vulnerable teenager and has acted in a way to make him trust him and then is taking him to a 'safe' location he will be unable to escape from, Alden RUN" Now though with the benefit of a few hours of sleep (and more perspectives from reading comments), I think Liam is probably not awful... Hopefully... Almost definitely... Like his story and actions seem too specific to be made up. Even if it does feel a bit like "Yeah... Tina, my totally real and not made up sister! She can help!" for a moment there. And like just from a story tone standpoint, so far Sleyca has subjected Alden to a lot of trauma but never like that kind of trauma, so it's thankfully incredibly unlikely for it to go in that direction. It just wouldn't make any sense. Plus if Liam were to do anything awful to Alden, he'd suddenly have an artonan corpse in his hands so, yeah Alden is gonna be fine.
2024-03-11 09:36:00 Okay so, I read this last night at 4 am and I gotta say I didn't expect... this. LMAO But, after a little while of almost thinking like "is this gonna get retconned? Was this an 'author was tired and couldn't figure out what direction to take the story and panicked' moment?"... Like no. I've realised it does actually totally fit the story, even if it felt incredibly tonally jarring at first. Because low-key, when I first read this the traumatized part of my own brain that perceives danger was like "Liam has came across a vulnerable teenager and has acted in a way to make him trust him and then is taking him to a 'safe' location he will be unable to escape from, Alden RUN" Now though with the benefit of a few hours of sleep (and more perspectives from reading comments), I think Liam is probably not awful... Hopefully... Almost definitely... Like his story and actions seem too specific to be made up. Even if it does feel a bit like "Yeah... Tina, my totally real and not made up sister! She can help!" for a moment there. And like just from a story tone standpoint, so far Sleyca has subjected Alden to a lot of trauma but never like that kind of trauma, so it's thankfully incredibly unlikely for it to go in that direction. It just wouldn't make any sense. Plus if Liam were to do anything awful to Alden, he'd suddenly have an artonan corpse in his hands so, yeah Alden is gonna be fine. Oh and ty for the chapter Sleyca

Okay so, I read this last night at 4 am and I gotta say I didn't expect... this. LMAO But, after a little while of almost thinking like "is this gonna get retconned? Was this an 'author was tired and couldn't figure out what direction to take the story and panicked' moment?"... Like no. I've realised it does actually totally fit the story, even if it felt incredibly tonally jarring at first. Because low-key, when I first read this the traumatized part of my own brain that perceives danger was like "Liam has came across a vulnerable teenager and has acted in a way to make him trust him and then is taking him to a 'safe' location he will be unable to escape from, Alden RUN" Now though with the benefit of a few hours of sleep (and more perspectives from reading comments), I think Liam is probably not awful... Hopefully... Almost definitely... Like his story and actions seem too specific to be made up. Even if it does feel a bit like "Yeah... Tina, my totally real and not made up sister! She can help!" for a moment there. And like just from a story tone standpoint, so far Sleyca has subjected Alden to a lot of trauma but never like that kind of trauma, so it's thankfully incredibly unlikely for it to go in that direction. It just wouldn't make any sense. Plus if Liam were to do anything awful to Alden, he'd suddenly have an artonan corpse in his hands so, yeah Alden is gonna be fine. Oh and ty for the chapter Sleyca

Pete

I don't think you get it from a specific person or even a pool of current ones, that would make rare powerful ones like the luck one rather hard to use. Maybe you basically borrow against your own future? Maybe the magic can just handle imbalances as long as they don't last too long.

sebsebs

I like Liam! Thanks for the chapter

ChoWingGom

@GryphonKnight : only pandering to us readers! Sleyca has been clever in avoiding people thinking of the Contract as game-like or video-game like : the Artonians arrived in the sixties, while Dungeons & Dragons began in 1974 IRL, popularising the ideas "Levels" or "Exp" and stuff. The people of SupSupEarth had no basis of comparison. I notice humans call the letter-grade just "rank". But for the System, it is "divergence rank" A lot can hide in that extra word. Not just  amount of raw power...

CentaureHeart

Thanks for the chapter ! You, again went into a different direction than I was expecting. Nice to see Burden of enchantment getting a work out.

Partha Peddi

My prediction that Alden will go to the higher floor to decide keep moving came true, only the motivation for doing so changed to something more positive. I will re-read the chapter in a day or two to try to make more predictions. Will Alden advance further, or get stuck in the not-torture soundproof boom room. The soil erosion theory is still a possibility, albeit ahead of him rather than behind him. The swim-trunks Liam puts a wrench on further speculation right now.

Sunden

I wonder if it's true that being in pain or being scared causes faster leveling. Other people in comments are saying this like it's fact, but I don't think we know that for sure yet? *Maybe* pain does, because it was implied that Alden feeling his authority's pain would cause him to level faster. But that doesn't mean physical pain would. And I don't think we have any evidence yet to suggest that fear has that effect except for the word of some crazy dude. It seems like if either were true (physical pain or fear causing faster leveling) it would be widespread knowledge by now. Some doctor would have noticed that avowed with chronic pain conditions level faster. Or some psychologist would have realized that people who suffer daily panic attacks did. The only way I see it being true is if the knowledge is intentionally suppressed by the Artonans.

Anon

Why is Alden wasting time talking to this bozo? Just move away from the Death Water, ffs!

Erik Borgstrom

It has always seemed to me the skill LMTYL/BOAB has always been a skill designed to help knights as a vassel. Like the emotional holding skill - have to make the tough decision take my feelings away. The feeling of pain from both bound and free authority clashing let's take that away. I wonder if the transfer of emotions/pain from one knight who will go on to one who has chosen to end their service and wants to perform one last action to their ranks/people is something LMTYL/BOAB is designed to perform...

Erik Borgstrom

It has always bothered me that Joe gets the bad wrap here and it is never brought up by the in book characters that the other company has any blame.

Erik Borgstrom

You miss your chance to say "and the walls are also probably super supportive".

Francis

What the...

John Anastacio

I'm one of those who is sure that stress while using your talents helps an Avowed level. Mostly because of this segment from ch 99: > But the general consensus among some of the best levelers on Earth—the ones who’ve seen fit to share insights with the rest of us anyway—is that hard work at the edge of your abilities always pays off. So that’s what we’ll be having you do. We can talk about more creative, personal endeavors to push your limits when that hard work has become a matter of course for you all. And this line from ch 100: > “You ought to be trying to exhaust your levelable talents often,” Big Snake was saying. “And your spell impressions…oh, uh…the one’s that won’t bankrupt you.” Those plus the hero schools encouraging competition between students leads me to infer that stressing yourself and your talents helps you level faster. Plus look at how gym classes ignite strong emotions like fear and anger, shame and jealousy in the students. I don't think that's completely an accident.

Francis

I was wondering what the hell Liam was doing in his swimming costume outside. If he is an extreme leveller, that could make sense, thanks for the comment

Erik Borgstrom

Your handle and comment about being on that date make we wonder if your Alden or Liam. For.me the crosswalk sign is that moment of the mundane that ties the story to our world (and is the kind of detail that keeps the story from feeling - I can't remember the term now, the term means when a story has no background . Maybe it was whitewashed story... BRB gonna look it up). Edit: it's called "white room syndrome"

Francis

Interesting comparison. Alden actually shares a lot of characteristics with Kaladin. They both still do the right thing in spite of mental health issues. Kaladin is just a more... flashy hero (pun intended) I will protect those who cannot protect themselves.. indeed

Francis

Hopefully the spoiled kids in that class will have some different perspectives on how easy it is to just save people during a crisis

Francis

Ikr! I think Sleyca reads our predictions in the comments and then does the evil-style laugh: mwhahahaha

Francis

He shouldn't have worn the colour red Emily! He has flagged himself as a Red Shirt!

Francis

Agree with you Sindri. If he was sketchy in the wrong way, he would've come up with better excuses..

ard galen

The fanfics that this chapter has paved.. I'm so scared I just leveled like 50 times

Francis

What is wrong with these people? Aren't they scared to be locked in a basement when there is danger of a flood? Shudders. It would be my worst fear being locked up underneath a body of water.. Liam and his siblings are insane. Not just because of the dungeon, but also because they clearly have no sense of self-preservation. And then he asks Alden if something went wrong with the evacuation :D oh the irony... But I guess only a crazy person would be ok with Alden after seeing him carry a bloody Artonan on his back. Edit: read again and Liam standing in a pose saying he must become more - maybe he treats being Avowed as a video game?

SkyGold

AMEN

Jean Bohdel

I would totally be interested in that! You’re so amazing at tying things together and making it possible for us to keep up without feeling led along on purpose. I would love to know if that just comes naturally to you or if you learned and honed it somehow. I am about to start reading again from the beginning and remembering parts I’ll come across again is such a joy. I can’t imagine being able to create such a fantastic story that is still so perfectly rereadable when you know what’s coming.

Jean Bohdel

I think “scaring” each other was a euphemism—a little white lie. Having known some artists who punched holes in themselves so that they could work through pain this doesn’t seem far off. In other words “it’s not a torture chamber” : it is certainly a torture chamber :: “he’s just sleeping” : that guy is totally dead

Jean Bohdel

I thought he often kept a mint entrusted in his stomach from someone while asking someone in gym to entrust him with something he needed?

Giants Craft

For me, the strongest parts of the story are the Moon Thegund bits and the chainer chapters. I still find myself going back and rereading from ‘Lesson Zero’ to ‘A scale tips.’ They’re so good. I’m saving my reread of the chainer chapters for when I need a pick me up lol. Did you have a vague idea of that stuff in your head, or was it outlined in a document somewhere? Also those parts of the story were a lot of words. A hell of a lot for the short time you had. Maybe I’m projecting, but those two parts feel like something you were looking forward to. What was writing those like? My experience has always been that the exciting bits start well when I’m getting down the words almost when they’re too hot to just stay my head. But after I get through a fair amount, I start worrying about whether I’m doing my idea justice and it becomes a slog.

GryphonKnight

"But Mom, were did the luck come from? The clan took a loan from the local branch, of multiverse Wizard's, Bank of the System" @Pete It is implied that modern magic relies heavily on the System to patch problems with older magic In reality this works as hand waving for any plot holes in the magic system 🧐

GryphonKnight

We know the first Avowed we're not trapped at Point Nemo, in story Sleyca could hand wave it that way, levels came later with the invention of gaming XP interesting D&D ( I am old ) was originally fantasy miniature war gaming genre derived from contemporary war gaming from Wikipedia Modern wargaming was invented in Prussia in the early 19th-century, and eventually the Prussian military adopted wargaming as a tool for training their officers and developing doctrine. After Prussia defeated France in the Franco-Prussian War, wargaming was widely adopted by military officers in other countries. Civilian enthusiasts also played wargames for fun, but this was a niche hobby until the development of consumer electronic wargames in the 1990s.

Curtis

Maybe I'm just cynical, but when presented with a group of artist-types in their early twenties who think they've uncovered a deep secret I am very very skeptical. In a meta-sense, a lot of people seem to expect the fear-induced levelling to teach us/Alden something new about how levelling works. Personally, I think the actual purpose of it is to show us how very little the average human knows about how to level efficiently.

Anon.

This discussion has me wondering if his Speedo is all natural fiber or synthetic, and if that makes a difference to the element classification...

GryphonKnight

Now I am reminded of the farming equipment in the original Twister movie Room full of chains and sharp blades "MY GOD. Who are these people?" TWISTER Clip - "Barn" (1996) Bill Paxton + Helen Hunt ( https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=1R7ZjaYapvo ) 🪚

Victor Cavalcanti

He grew quickly on the moon because the chaos forced him to exercise his authority 24/7, but a crisis situation could be both a great motivator for improvement, as well as provide insight.

Victor Cavalcanti

If that was true, a lot of people would already know about it. And a lot of fucked up parents would probably traumatize their kids on purpose for the sake of growing stronger. But maybe it's one of those things people know but just don't talk about. If this works, using the reverse side of peace of mind could be beneficial for training.

Jeremy Goldberg

So leveling involves two different concepts, right? First is understanding the skill better, and second is growth of authority. We’ve seen that understanding the skill seems to mostly require quiet introspection, and authority growth requires actively using your skill and the passive strain of free and bound authority fighting each other. I feel like maybe Liam and his siblings are making a causation vs correlation mistake? Like, superheroes use their skill to exhaustion in stressful situations, so Liam & Co. think it’s the stress that must cause leveling?

Jean Bohdel

Trust him not to INTENTIONALLY hurt Alden, but I worry at the way he was staring at our not-quite-dead Artonan. I fear he may take things too far in trying to level that bad things will happen.

Guus van der Borg

I think it's a tie-in to Zeridee's authority fear scream. Apparently fear of death is something that instinctively moves your free authority. And if you move it, you exercise it. It might be one of the few ways that you can exercise your free authority without even being aware of it. And these guys might've accidentally stumbled upon that.

Shawn

This is slightly different as they're trying to advance their skills rather than induce the initial event but still very concerning.

Shawn

The word stashed when referring to a man in a speedo... hoo-boy. Hopefully they're good folk and the spell impression helps.

Shawn

@Francis I'm hoping we have a B-rank aqua brute on our hands

Curtis

Maybe? I guess my skepticism is because there are like a million avowed on Earth, thousands of whom have spent decades trying to learn the best ways to level. "How do various emotional stimuli impact levelling?" feels like really low hanging fruit, that people would have looked into very early on.

Jazehiah

A small part of me hopes the haunting sphere never sees value. Late in his hero career, Alden will be able to say just how useless it has been. A larger part of me knows it has some niche application we'll rarely see.

Gaffer

RIPPLES into WAVES into BRING OUT THE GIMP: I - the natural arc title progression, so obvious in retrospect.

Meridun

Zeri is also very confused. She has some rational thought available, but very little.

Neal Mayne

Both of those sections specifically mention pushing your skill to the edge no mention about emotion at all. This might be the same collation vrs causation that the artists noticed, but just because pushing your skill to the limit can be stressful doesn't mean that stress helps it level its just a side effect.

Shawn

Emily nailed my thoughts. Ugg. They certainly aren't taking this seriously enough.

Bob Ross

Alden: "So out of all the available swimwear, why did you choose a Speedo?" Liam: "Oh man have you ever tried one? They're Super Supportive."

Memoryofgold

So I just came from the future, and I think it was such a powerful narrative decision for Sleyca to hit us with an absurdist Saw-style/Outlast survival horror right in the middle of this arc. Chills.

Storyhunter

This guy is setting off. Alarm bells 🚨🚨. Hopefully everything turns out alright. + Hopefully his friend can match his helpfulness in action here.

Alivaril

Really hoping that none of Alden's ramblings are used against him or come up later, especially the "complaint to the ambassador" bit. Like it's good to read in the present but I am So Weak to second-hand embarrassment, and the "complaint" would sound so entitled if taken seriously later.

Bob Ross

Entitled is a funny word, a lot of people use it to demean or diminish people younger or weaker than them when they ask for the same opportunities or advantages the demeaners had when they were in that position. But taken at its basic level, an entitlement is something to which you are entitled, that there is an expectation that you receive, usually in exchange for something else. The things Alden are requesting here are inarguably things to which he is entitled. There's a whole Contract about it in fact. :) I think if a single wizard heard our cute little commended ryeh-b't lost and alone crying out for the things he was promised, they'd start sharpening pitchforks, and it wouldn't be to stab Alden.

CapezzoloNucleare

its like the moving when preserving part, it must be a side of the skill meant to be abandoned with time. eventually Alden will be able to just target people and be entrusted without explicit consent. its probably very far away.

CapezzoloNucleare

It must be extremely confusing being preserved during a crisis, one moment you are bleeding on the floor the next the cute rabbit asks you to give him a door while he holds you.

Sunden

I think it's clear pushing a skill to its edge or the point of exhaustion causes it to level, but I don't think either of those examples implies that being in emotional or physical distress at the same time increase the effect or is necessary.

Heather White

Liam gives me Jeffy vibes. To me he feels totally earnest, but his beliefs about things may not align very well with reality. When Alden sees him leaving the building in his swimsuit, giving himself a pep talk to go & do something likely very stupid, my brain saw Jeffy. And when he explained that he & his friends scare each other to try & level, it felt like the kind of plan Jeffy would come up with. The moment Liam saw someone needing help, he abandoned his plans & tried to help Alden. That also reminded me of Jeffy’s seeming willingness to stay in the pool (instead of going out to use his land moves) when he thought Reinhard was afraid of swimming. Liam’s plan for Alden to stay on a lower level floor that he knows to be soundproof but not necessarily waterproof also feels kinda Jeffy. He’s got a plan that has its own internal logic but may be way off base.

Heather White

It’s hilarious to me that you mentioned Pulp Fiction, because when I was trying to make sense of the chapter’s transition from Hitchcock-esque suspense to whatever Liam is, my brain went to Pulp Fiction. Not any particular scene, just that sense of a lot of danger & life-threatening situations mixed up with some very surreal humor.

glow

the image of Alden walking into the safe room and immediately going "kthxbye" is so funny to me.

Heather White

“If she asks me to put her down, and she seems to be having a lucid moment, I guess I have to do it.” Only long enough to talk her into entrusting herself to you again. You hear me, Alden? This line did make me wonder — if Alden has something pickled & his entruster says to put the thing down, does that automatically cancel Alden’s magic? I don’t remember that ever coming up before, but it seems like it would. The thing he was carrying would instantly un-pickle. Also, depending on what he was carrying & how he was carrying it, that could be bad.

Aspiring Moth

the entruster can't revoke permission. boe and jeremy helped Alden test this when he first affixed

Heather White

Oooh. I’d forgotten that. Nice catch. So then if Zeridee says to put her down (when she’s not pickled), he won’t be able to re-preserve her because she’s no longer entrusted to him or because he’s respecting her wishes? We did see him sort of trick Soren and Zeridee into being preserved when he saw them making decisions that went against their own self interest. So does that mean that if she were having a lucid moment then entrustment would be cancelled & he wouldn’t be able to re-preserve her, or would he just be putting her down because he respected her wishes? Alden, I still vote for convincing her to entrust herself to you again. Letting her die is an absolute no.

Bob Ross

Fairly certain he's referring to respecting her wishes, rather than losing entrustment. But dang, what a tricky situation, he wants to respect her agency but she's in shock/suffering from bloodless/struggling from head trauma. How can he know what's best in line with her desires?

Bob Ross

Liams questions are also so different from the last adult stranger Alden met, contrasting "Hey, are you some swanky Rabbit who I can use?" with "Whoah, you need help? OK, is that Artonan gonna be alright? You sure? Awesome. What class are you? Healer? Nah doesn't matter I guess, let's get you to safety." Total jeffy vibes for sure.

Bonkney

“That’s my skill. It’s preser—timestopping her and shielding her..." The return of Pickle Man has been narrowly avoided.

Shiyon

"It's not a torture chamber! I mean it sort of is, but-" oh Liam, buddy, you're not helping yourself there lol It makes me happy to see Alden is managing to stay positive! But I'm conflicted about how I want things to turn out.... On one hand, I want him to rest and be cozy and happy because he deserves it. On the other hand, I want things to go awfully because I'm a sucker for tragedy and hurt/comfort..

Memoryofgold

I really loved that scene when he finally reaches the sixth floor and is greeted with the artfully illuminated sculptures. So eerie and with the distant sounds of water and rumbling it just becomes so foreboding. I love the atmosphere, it reminded me of the feeling when I first ventured into Rapture (especially the level with the insane artist) in Bioshock.

Shiyon

Ideally though, Alden should retire, get a house somewhere nice, and invite Boe, Kibby, Stu'art'h, and Lute to live with him. Kraa and Sophie can visit and meet Victor! Leo gets a spot too! And Jeremy and Connie get free teleports in and out! Someone send me more copium, I'm running out..

Gregory

I'm kind of surprised by that line, especially given what he did with Soren. He's clearly ok with saving someone against their own stated wishes.

Francis

Maybe it isn't just emotional stimuli, maybe you need to be in extreme pain or close to death?

Dessico

I agree, nothing in the story yet suggests fear causes increased levelling. I think these siblings either have some super specific power, maybe they are just training themselves to think while panicking or they are just plain wrong about what works.

Kserand

Mentions of Alden’s Fae like abilities in the earlier comments made me think - could there be one for communion with nature/universe? (It seems like the woods in Art’h estate have some form of sapience.) So maybe with such ability he could “negotiate” for control over objects. It would give him reasonable autonomy in the absence of people without being overpowered, if written properly, I think.

Francis

I was also thinking while reading that I hope no one heard or recorded him, but only because Zeridee and the Ambassador might be in big trouble then

Francis

And then hopefully waking up in a house of healing suddenly fully healed?

Francis

Agree with Gregory, I also found that line to be strange

Francis

It was a great scene. And only certain body parts illuminated. Lots of light metaphors in this chapter (if that is the correct term even). Those pedestrian lights flashing at key moments almost paving a way for him, or perhaps signalling the danger, since they were yellow

Heather White

It’s such a pain-filled line. I mean, it comes in the middle of him thinking about people he has cared about, some of whom have died, one he ran across a moon to save, and here he has Zeridee who keeps trying to sacrifice herself specifically to save him. I think it’s sweet that he says he’s willing to respect her wishes, but I say screw that, act like you have before — save her from herself and make sure she lives.

Mehmet ali Reyhan

Entruster can revoke permission it is in the description of the skill" preservation ceases upon. The loss of entrustment"

Meridun

@Mehmet ali Reyhan Chapter 25: --------- “Yeah, it’s way more useful if it doesn’t get snobby about containers. What happens if I say, ‘I no longer entrust you with the box?’” Nothing happened. “You’re untrustworthy,” said Boe. “Let go of my parcel. Request cancelled. I want my stuff back. Cease carriage.” “Drop it right now!” Jeremy was getting in on the action. “Still nothing,” Alden said, leap-walking around with a grin on his face and shaking the upside-down box. “That’s surprising. You’d think the entrustment could be revoked by the person who gave it to you, right?”

Shawn

* the constant state of low level panic that Alden is in really reminds me of the precursor to my anxiety attacks. That's unnerving * Plan C. For “caveman.” Lulz. * "the ocean is eating things oceans shouldn’t eat." * aligning himself with his affixation a little more - We've had some discussions about this in the past but I think this is how you level. This is how knights avoid suicide. This is how you make the most of your skills. Unfortunately this bodes very poorly for Jeffey. * Mannequins ugg, that's super creepy and reminds me of some Doctor Who episodes * There was an area of darkness, as if something had taken a bite out of the island. -- oh wow this would send me sprinting directly inland as fast as possible. * They’re definitely more all right than me. -- oh you sweet summer child * “I wanted this place to keep me safe.” 😢 poor guy. His following point about chaos is a little off but thinking critically is really hard in panic mode. * All right. Let’s go. This isn’t a Thegund level tribulation. Just a bad night. It doesn’t matter whether the System’s answering me or not. I’m getting us both to safety within the hour. 🐰 * I’m definitely not a murderer!” 🤦‍♂️ * Alden’s faith in humanity had taken some critical hits tonight. This guy was restoring it fast. -- Go swimsuit dude! * Liam Long led Alden right back into Apogee Artist Spaces -- yeah I'm noping out right here. Don't backtrack * “Did anyone say the rooms were safe to hide in during a magical flood, though?” -- this. The chance that some rando b-rank brute knows more about what's going on than Alden is super low. * “It’s not a torture chamber!” Liam shouted. -- just like you're not a murderer. * “We’re doing it to help each other level.” -- I'm sure they're convinced this works but I don't buy it. Great writing as usual, even if this chapter didn't grab me quite like the previous one did.

Meridun

I'm not sure I'm following where this power is supposed to come from. Alden's skill is extremely good if he arrange someone to run into his preserved object or if he can use a trick of the preservation to accelerate a heavy object and then let go. However, in terms of pure offense, it doesn't really provide him with anything direct. Ch.99: ------ What he was using the skill for mattered. If he preserved an umbrella and swung it at a concrete block with all his might, he’d hurt his arm. If he preserved his umbrella, and Heloísa tried to crush it with a concrete block, his power broke the concrete. The Bearer of All Burdens protected things, transported them, and bore their weight. He was sure he’d find more. And he also suspected he’d collect more evidence that although Bearer was vast, complex, and versatile…it wasn’t a skill designed for cheaters.

Meridun

@Erik I think Alis's issue is that Joe did the equivalent of sending a teenager into a burning building to rescue a bunch of people. Did the people need rescuing? Yes. Was the dangerous situation Joe's fault? Not directly, but he had some blame. None of that changes the fact that it was highly unethical to request the service.

Aspiring Moth

He better learn an actual pickling spell at some point. that's definitely on the rabbit list, so maybe it's in a book he can get from Mother too?

Jazehiah

People seem more willing to push the limits of their affixations when stressed.

Richard Fields

I'd like to dedicate this chapter to all the people who got offended by my rope bunny jokes.

Sleyca

Not retconned! Liam's not a creation born of panic, but a planned part of a "very different adults Alden interacts with during this crisis" thing that the story has going on right now. However, I'll be honest...I hesitated on ending the chapter right here. Talked about chapter endings a little in the comments a couple of weeks ago, so I shall continue here. I kind of wanted to end this in two other earlier places: 1. "I don't want to find out what it feels like to leave you behind. That's all." 2. Right after Alden first spots Liam. When his brain is broken. Number 2 felt funny, but with no follow up for context at all, it was a bit too much like a joke in a chapter that didn't need that. "Ha! Off the wall surprise! Wait until next week to find out what it means!" So I decided against it. Number 1 felt really good. But despite my assurances in that comment I referred to earlier (that I always try to break chapters where they should be broken without caving to reader expectations for certain lengths) in this one I hesitated to break at number one... I *try* not to be aware that people prefer longer chapters and start feeling like "nothing happened" if chapters are shorter or don't involve extremely obvious progress toward a given plot thing they imagine is ahead and look forward to reaching. But I do tend to notice when some commenters are feeling...antsy about not plowing forward in a certain direction at a certain pace? I don't want to put it in a negative way and imply anyone isn't allowed to complain. I'm cool with criticism as long as it's polite and I haven't noticed anyone being rude over the last chapters, so we're all good here! In my opinion, though, that last chapter was full of plenty of food for thought about Alden's character--how he responded to the bodies, how he chose to handle Zeridee, his attempts to interact with System and wondering what the System really thinks about him and why it's being so unhelpful at the moment... I felt (and still feel) like it was a very engaging chapter, but noticing a few people not being interested in engaging with it in the way that I meant for it to be engaged with made me a little more sensitive about letting this chapter stand on its own in a spot where it would be asking for a very similar kind of engagement. Ending at #1 would have provided a sub-4k chapter that said, "Here's another one that's mostly about what's going on in Alden's head. Pay attention to him and where he's at right now." So I looked ahead, and I had this spot a bit farther along, already written, where I felt like, "Well, broken there the chapter does an interesting thing, too. You get to see that Liam and his siblings are treating the disaster totally differently than Alden and the incongruity of his presence here will give everyone something to think about and talk about. It puts emphasis on the contrast between their night and his. That does some cool things that work with what I have planned for the arc, and nobody will be able to say nothing happened for sure." It was also enough writing about Liam that I didn't think it would feel like too much of a joke (as #2 possible ending might have). And my family member who reads all the chapters and comments on them before you guys really liked having a funny ending here. So I went with it. *This morning* (Hallow, we are both doing the "after a few hours of sleep" re-read together!) I'm feeling more like I should have stuck with Ending Number 1. Alden removing the enchantment from the door + his thoughts regarding Anesidora and Zeridee + the realization that it looks like danger might be cutting him off up ahead is plenty happening for one chapter despite the length. It's full. It's a story moment. On the heels of the last chapter, it confirms that Alden's feelings and decisions regarding these things aren't stuff that happens in the background of the plot for this arc, they are themselves worthy of being the point of the chapter. (Or something like that...I'm kind of tired today. Hope it all makes sense.) So there's a good chance--a very, very good chance the more that I look at it and think about it while I write this post--that I'll revise this to end at #1 and then put the rest of it at the beginning of the next chapter, where I feel the tone shift is equally incongruous, fun, and funny without robbing 138 of tension and impact. This will almost definitely be altered in that way, maybe even by the next post. Pretend you got a chapter and a preview of the next chapter I guess! More on chapter length: (only related to Hallow's comment because it's a facet of my thought process and emotional dumbness when it came to choosing where to end this chapter) Despite my determination to stick to my guns, I tend to worry more about disappointing you guys with short chapters than I do about other things that can make readers grumble from time to time. I'm always confident that what I'm writing is something *I* like, and I can't really do anything to change that. If I pay too much attention to tastes other than my own, then all my enthusiasm will evaporate, which would be a story killer. So complaints about content and pace tend to roll off my back fairly well, since content and pace are things determined by my personal tastes (can't change), the limitations imposed by my abilities and foresight occasionally running afoul of the time crunches caused by serial format (can't change), and my unwillingness to jump over anything I find interesting to get to someone else's specific idea of "the good part." (Won't change because it's baked into what Super Supportive is and has been from the beginning. So many of the good, surprising things that I have loved and other people have loved only come about because I have no interest in jumping over Alden's quotidian moments in this world to get to his big ones that will change this world.) But when it comes to chapter length complaints, I do feel more like..."Oh, they want more! They would have been able to appreciate this chapter for everything it is, instead of getting disappointed, if I had given them more words. Maybe if I could have found a way to work faster, I could've given them two chapters today, to make up for the fact that they weren't big enough!" The wordcount creep has been real, so since this arc started I've been actively fighting against thinking of it as "too short" whenever a chapter lands below around 5k. But those of you who've been around long enough to have read the Patreon from the start will know 4500-5k is what I expected my chapter *average* to be in May of last year when the Patreon was created. (I think this was mentioned in the second ever post. I need to rewrite my "Welcome to the Patreon" post and pin it.) I anticipated every 8k and 10k word chapter eventually being brought back down to the average by 2k and 3k word chapters. Instead, my Anesidora, slice of life, world building extravaganza post-Thegund ended up being 8k, 8k, 7k, 6k, 10k, etc... completely destroying the ten chapter backlog I had at one point. And steadily warping even my own feelings about what was "enough" writing for a chapter. I used to feel like a 4k word chapter was giving everyone a normal one, and now I run afoul of feelings that a 4k chapter is somehow cheating. But I can't actually write at the 16k/week pace I've set so often without losing ground, except in very specific circumstances. Specific Circumstance: the backlog was down to like one chapter, I think, when The Chainer started, but I still managed to write those gargantuan chapters at a high quality (imo) and put them out on schedule because I'd been planning to talk about the Velras for months. Those chapters were living right at the forefront of my mind, fully formed. So I could probably crack my knuckles right now and do a thousand words an hour and spit out the 15k word story of Lute's first meeting with Parethat-uur (which was going to be the final Chainer chap before I decided to save it for a rainy day) before next posting day. But for *most* things I'm writing I need more time to think and plot and make sure I'm not misstepping. Anyway. Very much a TL;DR: that's where I'm at when I'm writing lately! Liam is wacky. I love the end of this chapter but I think it probably belonged at the beginning of the next one instead.

William Forrest

Duration wise, we at least know they are the same. Lute knew the duration of Peace of Mind down to the second. I rather expect the boost is the same for everyone as well.

Aguy768

We were talking about ways to utilize his Azure Rabbit Trait for martial arts. Only a few musings about using the skill to present a harder striking surface then flesh. The trait is what gives the extra power but it's not straightforward to tap into.

Adam Davies

I like the realism of how Alden hasn’t just bumped into some ideal hero who knows exactly what is going on and has the correct skills, knowledge and capacity to help him. The others (bike girl, speedo guy) have their own shit going on. Well done.

Anonymous

Hello Sleyca. I wanted to ask you a question, and I hope you have an answer and the time to write it, and if you don’t that’s fine don’t worry. I love pretty much everything about your writing, but something consistently stands out to me. The way you write the casual interactions between characters is amazing. It gives so much personality to the characters, which is vital for any story. The banter and interactions and exploration through conversation is, for lack of a better word, natural. They read like actual people talking to each other, which is very, very rare to me. I think it is just a thing that comes naturally through great talent, experience, effort and thought; but I wanted to ask if you had any advice or trick or something to emulate that “naturalness” or at least a way to practice so I can eventually accomplish it myself.

Terrestrial_Biped

@Francis: I think maybe you're looking for "motif" instead of "metaphor". A motif is a recurring element in an artwork, typically with symbolic meaning relevant to the whole. A metaphor is when you say one thing is another thing (even though, in literal fact, it is not), in order to draw parallels between the two.

Sleyca

I love a disaster movie. Twister is getting a sequel this year, and I so want it to be a good one.

Meridun

Something that also has to be understood is that, just like symphonies can't be loud, exciting sections constantly without losing their impact, so too stories (or at least good stories) need to have the transitions and connecting passages to help the great climaxes and revelations to really have their impact. This is a transitional chapter and we see Alden having to struggle rather than just getting some sort of quick resolution.

Hallow

ty for the response ^^ Also, I didn't mean for it to sound like I may have continued to think that he was a panic character or that there would be any content retcons or anything like that if it did seem like that. That thought at the time was just the unique mix of being caught up in aldens emotions and responses and like my 4am brain overreacting. (Now that I've managed to properly claw my brain back from assuming the worst and have properly realised he is more of a comic relief jeffy vibe character) Liam seems like he'll be a really fun character, it'll definitely be fun to see more of him. I'm honestly really looking forward to next chapter now, it's fascinating seeing like different responses to the disaster. And I just wanted to like respond on a personal note, that super supportive is my absolute favourite story right now, and I personally think it's one of the best stories I've ever read, it's consistently very good and as a reader I feel like we can all see how much care you've placed into crafting this wonderful story. (and sorry if my prior comment caused you any distress, I do truly think this is a fantastic chapter, whether Liam is introduced this chapter or next chapter)

Sleyca

Zero distress! Your comment didn't even read like criticism, Hallow. I took it as a thoughtful response and a compliment. It was just connected to my own thoughts about plopping Liam at the end of this chapter instead of waiting until next to have Alden meet him, and once I started replying I just kept rolling with it. Sorry if the mega essay caused any stress for you, too!

Sleyca

I have a tendency to write whole essays that have less to do with the starter comment than they should. As if I finally found my chance to talk about everything I've been thinking while reading the past 3 or 4 comments sections, so off I go!

Shiyon

I think the chapters are meaningful and full. Some are extra meaningful *because* they were short. The story is so good that people (hi, I'm guilty) speed read at mach 12 then have to reread the chapter. Everyone wants more, but it's just because we're addicted. Stick to your guns, Sleyca, you're truly a master at your craft! If this were the wild west, I'd pay to have to represent me in duels! Write whatever you want and however much you want. It'll be great. I'm here for the ride.

Anonymous

Don't you dare manifest that into existence. Put that thought right back in your brain.

Shawn

@Heather I expect the invisible screaming ball to always be there, but never quite be useful. After all a knight is only supposed to invest in one skill.

Shawn

I thought it said the direction he was going and slightly left (i.e. toward the coast) was cutoff. It wasn't clear that bearing essentially NE or due inland (assuming he was facing north) was cut off.

Kim Enteiu

I’m really curious about the living sculpture exhibition. Is it models in makeup. Did Alden just stumble into a certain b-rank figurinist’s secret lair? Will he nope out fast enough to find a safe place with fewer awkward explanations and questionable insinuations?

SnuggleCat

Goodnight, y'all, see ya come morning

Aspiring Moth

soup dealer, I am going into battle and require only your most delicious soup

BoxQueen

I really love Alden's reaction. I also enjoy those moments where he goes through his inner thoughts like that. A lot of self-reflection and some insight on what he needs to do. Hopefully after this mess, he can appreciate taking a bigger responsibility he took upon himself and not focus on the embarrassing small moments he had gone through (he likely will but it helps to overcome such things in the future).

JJ Hunter

On reread, I'm struck that Arjun Thomas is one of the four important-to-Alden people that Zeridee reminds him of. Is the connection someone killing for Alden to save his life? Aside from Arjun showing up to discourage Alden's high school application, his most vivid contribution has been his intense distress at needing to resort to lethal force. He saved Alden's life, and he's been avoiding Alden (not to mention his former partner) ever since. Is some part of Alden worried that's how Zeridee will act afterwards also? I hope we get to see more of Arjun - he'd be a very interesting person for Lucille to meet, and I wonder if spending time with living kids choosing heroic paths might ease how killing the Body (Authority?) Drainer kid has clearly haunted him.