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2024-05-07 17:04:35
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Hi, somehow the epilogue of book 3 is also going longer than expected, who would have ever thought XD. I'd rather take my time to do it right, so I'll publish it tomorrow.

Also, I might do some tweaking to the second bargain between Kai and Zervathi. I'll warn you of any changes in the A/Ns of the epilogue.

Drew

Comments

Brandon Lydick

Better words have never been spoken. Thank you for your hard work! :D

TheGrandScrubLord

You're killing it! Love the story and the big twist at the end there. Can't wait to read the next Arc!

Viria

Please make Kai negotiate for some magic (or even just space magic) training from Z while he's stuck in there 🙏

Faa Diallo

Yeah hopefully, I was expecting a huge increase to his space affinity but it doesn't seem and that's kind how the story is setup.

Rick Angros

I loved the last chapter and cannot wait for the next

Adam

It’s all good and have a great day.

David Bordelon

I like the idea of fleshing out the deal a bit from the last chapter. As far as taking more time; you should always take the time you need. Don't feel rushed just because you said it would be done faster than it turns out it will be. Take your time. Write a great story.

Timothy Alexander
>>137343706

Yeah it kind of just feels like a big flumpf after all the build up to the space affinity, to the pull it out from under him. Would almost be more believable to give the space affinity increase, then that be the reason he can't get out, and Kai is caught by his own greed/arrogance etc. Much more in character too! And let's be real, it's just pretend numbers, it doesn't have to actually affect the story you have planned that much - he's already way better at space magic that almost anyone he will come into contact with! Just gives the reader the payoff that was promised.

Faa Diallo
>>137343706

Yeah esp with the setup going all the way back to Kai stubbornly saying that he won't give up on his space affinity to his 3 teachers.

Otter Pops

Nooooo! ... Ok.

Gorane
>>137343706

He already got a huge boost to space magic, whar are you talking about? He had space at affiniry score 38 and estimated it went up to 50. Then he got a second smaller boost on top of it, so lets say it is now at 55. That is still very high! That would be his third best affinity. If Drew changes the bargain to involve some space magic training, Kai has a very good foundation for using space.

Faa Diallo
>>137343706

That would be good too. Hard to say without knowing the actual number though

Fleisch
>>137343706

He never got a second space affinity increase. The blessing was only 2 favor. It would have said something about a blessing of space.

Gorane
>>137343706

His first two blessings never mentioned an affinity increase and only showed favor, but did increase the affinities as well. Kai told the god he wanted another space boost and only then was he blessed, so obviously his space was boosted and favor is just a by product

hello there

when will book 4 start?

RedEyeLordofFire

I hope he changed profession when he reached yellow