Shenzhen Fast - onto the next draft! (Patreon)

Hey everyone! I wanted to give you all an update on how Shenzhen Fast is going. I passed the comic to a non-technical beta reader, just to see how the whole thing was flowing and what needed clarification. I got some really good feedback on what can be tightened up (and you can see those marks in red.) 

So now I'm working on Tight Pencils. Working digitally is a bit strange... it's not like I'm redrawing the whole thing, I just make each subsequent version of the page more detailed and streamlined and less sketchy. When I move to "inks" i'm editing lineweights and clarifying detail. 

I'm also working in a funny order... the pages that have a red star in the corner are pages that I want to send back to my contacts in China for feedback and approval, so I'm finishing those first. 

Here are the first few that are almost ready to send: