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MHA 111 (Patreon)

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2023-11-24 03:04:15
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2024-01-19 03:50:20
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Taking the Jump

At mass request, here's the next chapter of MHA!

Also Happy Thanksgiving!

Also^2 I've finally moved into my new apartment, so updates should be a lot more frequent!

Thank you for your patience, and let's get back to these stories!

Comments

Zerak

Still did not explain the hospital thing, like why no one from school or parents were keeping an eye on him. But more importantly the way things are now it leaves things hanging, all that buildup with Momo only to drop it (and please please don’t have her just be in the suitcase). The same for Mai, leaving her behind after everything they have been through and go to a technologically advanced world like Star Wars would be to her like a punch in the gut. Like imagine the person you spent a decent part of each day with alone with just your thoughts and wild ideas one day just decides to up and leave without even the decency to say “by your leave” or even just meeting up after 10 days of being MIA. I am excited about Star Wars, but the things as they are now feel even less satisfying than the ending of last chapter. I hope this doesn’t come off someone bitching the story isn’t going the way they want, I am just trying to give some constructive criticism. On a side note I highly doubt Jiro did as told, she likely listened in and has way more questions than before. Edit: I guess Danki could have done some stuff stuff during those 2 days, and maybe you are leaving them as a surprise, but it definitely feels like that lowered the quality rather than increase anticipation. Because unlike the enthusiasm I usually feel with an upcoming big event in one of your stories all I feel is hope that things will be explained in a satisfactory way rather than a downward spiral of more unexplained things. Because that’s what the previous chapter was like, and this chapter did not illuminate any of the issues in it. Tl;dr: I don’t know what the emotional response you were going for, but I don’t think it’s what you got, unless it’s a mix of unsatisfactory and empty. I definitely felt more happy about the new chapter coming out than I did after reading it. Edit 2: Fuck this website is annoying to using on phone to comment. I am glad you found a new apartment, looking for a new place then arranging for movers (or doing it yourself) and making sure everything runs smoothly (or as smooth as possible) can be very mentally draining. So despite the criticism, thanks for the chapter :)

Silent_Ninja10

Yes! We are finally traveling through the multiverse! Congrats on hitting this milestone Lee, I've been reading your star wars fic and I'm looking forward to seeing your previous (and possibly refined) concepts here

Vincent Mason

It's certainly a bit more abrupt than I would have expected, but I recognize that Lee is fundamentally someone tied up in his own trauma and emotions. Most Shonen settings I think would require a certain kind of chimpanzee to be wholeheartedly thrilled for the absolute balls to the wall danger, heartbreak, and heartache, that comes with them. In comparison, depending on what time period of Star Wars they're dropping into, it's decidedly more innocent and not nearly as dangerous. Provided you don't get sniped in a ship, Quirks are such out of context bullshit for your average person that they wouldn't have the faintest clue what to do about them.

DragonShark-Eater

Awww, I was hoping that Momo and Mei, would also go with him. Anyways, good chapter as always Lee, also Happy Thanksgivings and that everything goes well in your new apartment!

Joseph Fera

Is it weird that I'm more disappointed about Mei not coming with then Momo? Honestly, it feels more like he's fleeing the world then going off to train, and I kind of wish Mina had at the very least tried to make him see that, though given both her age and brand I could see those making it so she didn't see anything like that.