Side by Side Challenge - Jumbo Juice Edition (Patreon)

Greetings dear patron.

 This is basically the same poll as the previous one, but with the entire story.

 I take some time to rant about my reasoning before the third revision edition so take a look at that if you'd like.

 I am not trying to change your mind or anything, but wanted to release the third revision version and was curious if more than a few paragraphs, a whole story in this style made any difference.  

 Is reading a story like this multiple times, side by side with different versions something you enjoy?  Either way, I sincerely hope that you enjoy it.

 
Version 1

Version 2

Version 3