Twitching (Patreon)

I had a slightly different idea for this story than what I ended up writing. The core concept was twitch whoring for donations, and I think in my first flash of inspiration I imagined he would get donations from the viewers as he self-mutilated, from his own point of view. Instead we ended up with a more surprise transformation story, due to the mysterious nature of Heavenly Bodies. One thing I did set up but didn't really use in the end was the high cost of the modifications. The idea was perhaps to reveal in the end that something like $500,000 real-world dollars had been spent on his body, and while the app still is accessible and working, it would be way out of his savings to undo anything major. In the end it felt much more satisfying to just have him roll with it. It's probably a top three real world reaction if something like this were to happen.

I've had a lot of positive feedback and people wanting a part two of the story. I'm not really sure what that would be, but as always I'm happy for any suggestions and feedback.