In regards to the Tohru set story. (Patreon)

I am aware as many already pointed out that the story is not up to standard compared to what I usually write. With the pen accident and the fact that this was a very complicated set (Had 3 characters in it), I had to rush the story out.

Sorry but I do need to meet deadlines.

However,  I am going to rewrite the story of this set this coming weekend. I don't intend to drastically change the overall story but I want to increase the quality, add one or two more text pages to give the story more detail and flavor. 

In essence, not changing the story completely but taking the needed time on it for it to be of a more acceptable quality and length. 

With that being said, I need to set some boundaries for future creative inputs to avoid something like this in the future (Mainly, a max of 2 characters. The second character can only appear in one frame). This is not the lottery winners fault, but my own. I have to make clear of what can and cannot be done in the future. Something I failed to do this time. 

The pen wasn't the only issue here. The number of showed characters was a big factor in the time it took me to finish it.