Chapter 45: Courting Disaster Part.1 (Patreon)

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Note: Now is proofed.

Thank you for waiting!

Unfortunately this is only half.. or a third of the chapter o)----)

I have brain freezing from thinking about the storyboard. If you read my rants from previous chapters, i drawn my comic similar to a printed comic book: I must make a small cliffhanger every 4-6 panels. I got frustrated since maybe 10 or 15 chapters ago that i no longer can do itヽ༼இل͜இ༽ﾉ every chapter with same frustration. This one is the 4th storyboard i made in 10+ days and i still haven't find the good flow or good plot... simply because what i want to draw in this one chapter is A LOT.

I already decided how to end the chapter (with a certain cliffhanger) but to reach that point there's new ideas keep popping out and everything seems like a nice idea. I think hard how to fit all the idea and... my brain stopped working o)-----)

so i decided to just draw everything with reduced quality (・∀・)

this one took 3 days to finish (my usual fully thought, carefully drawn chapter needs 14-21 days to make)
come to think about it Mr beta's first 7 chapters also made this way, without much thought.

Yesterday i received my first commission piece, I commissioned this one writer to write 10k words of one of my storystock. This is the first time I commissioned someone. When I received it and read it, the characterization is not like what i want in my head, and the writing is also a bit sloppy, the wording is not effective, but when I read it I feel like I'm going to heaven because I'm so happy. Even if it's not perfect but I will still give it a lots of heart and thumbs up because I like it.

Got me thinking, "is this what my readers is feeling all this time..?"

while the author is feeling bad for making so-so, or suck chapter, want to redo everything, but as the reader as long as there's update they'll be somewhat happy..?👁👄👁

that's why i stopped thinking and just draw something. I will keep doing this for the rest of chapter 45.

Expect another express chapter (perhaps part 2) in 4 days because I'm taking a week off my farm work. But don't expect much because it won't get revised ༼ಢwwಢ༽ I'm tired of thinking 'how should i make this chapter better', revising so many times and just want to draw. 

Whole chapter 45 will be proof-readed when all part is done being drawn! Thank you for being patient with me and Look forward for the next parrrrtt! I think it'll be yolka POV hehe

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