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Sometimes when I am writing a scene for Tenebroum, I wonder: is this too dark? 

I asked myself that when the broken bard of blackwater was tortured to death - I even had someone read ahead and tell me they thought it was okay. I was still surprised when no one complained though. 

I had the same thought when I wrote the scene where the river dragon was chained inside the corpse of the swamp dragon... and everyone thought it was awesome. 

Well, today, I worry again that I went too far in the climax of Act 1. That's right. I finished act 1 FINALLY, and chapter 48 is now complete. The story will now move in a slightly different direction for the next 20-30 chapters which is how long I THINK Act 2 will take. We will see. 

That's not important though. What's important is that writing is... well, it's dark. I have taken pains to make it not gory and reading some of the descriptions I've read bring Lovecraft to mind for me. At this point I wonder how many of his "unseeables" and "unknowables" were just about wanting to write terrible things that were simply too graphic for the day. 

So with all that in mind: Is there such a thing as too dark when it comes to Tenebroum? At this point people know what they're in for, right?

Comments

justin wade

If the MC ever gets to the ocean will he make a ghost ship to carry out one sided deals for him by chance?

DWinchester

I would love to have a ghost pirate arc. I would just have to decide what to do with the river dragon in that instance...

Rain

I think it's fine, if I don't like it I'll skip ahead

EsZeus

I want him as a dark god who runs his own assassin guild who "offers" their targets to him all the time :D Money + Blood! Check

DWinchester

I think you will enjoy the direction the story is going RE: Dark God stuff. You will just have to wait and see...