Rings - the Script! (Patreon)

Here you go! Been thinking of some more things to give my behind the scenes patrons :) Starting next comic I'm also gonna be showing you the inks!

Rings

By MisterStallion

Story by Sisco

Page 1

Panel 1

Charles, a grey and black water buffalo, is sitting at the kitchen table in the small apartment where he and his boyfriend live. Medium wide intro shot, he’s thinking hard, holding something in his hand.

Panel 2

Close up of his face, he’s looking anxious.

PAnel 3

Close up of his hand, he’s holding a gold ring.

Panel 4

sfx: C-lick!

Medium low angle, Charles is stuffing the ring in his pocket in a panic, burst lines.

Kenny: Hey honey!!

Panel 5

Front door (which has two door handles of different heights), a little beaver, Kenny, is bursting in, big grin on his face, setting down a box.

Kenny: I’ve got a HUGE surprise for you!

Page 2

Panel 1

Medium close, Kenny has hopped up on Charles’s lap and is kissing charles on the cheek.

Charles: Hey cutie.

sfx: muah

Panel 2

The two of them together, Kenny sitting seductively on Charles’s lap, tail and butt right on charles’s bulge.

Kenny: Listen - I know you and I have been having… issues in the bedroom.

Charles: Well…

Kenny: I know - I’m a little guy, you’re huge. Some might say we can’t make it work.

Panel 3

Closer shot of their two faces, Charles looking over Kenny’s shoulder at the box by the door, Kenny looking conspiratorially back at it too.

Kenny: But that was before… our new toys came.

Charles: Our what?

Panel 4

Lower angle, Charles is sortof dumbfounded as Kenny races off towards the bedroom, shirt already off like a kid, Charles watching after him.

Kenny: Now bring that box back here and get your clothes off!

Panel 5

Charles picks up the box, looking at it curiously with his head tilted, low angle.

Panel 6

Close up of the box, the label says GloryRod

Page 3

Panel 1

Charles is entering the bedroom holding the box. Kenny is naked with an erection, turning to look at him askance.

Kenny: Hey! Your pants are still on!

Panel 2

Close waist up of Charles, Kenny’s hands have snatched the box away in low frame.

Charles: Listen Kenny, I know we’ve been having problems, I can’t fuck you and you fucking me doesn’t do much, but you didn’t need to buy… a dildo or-

sfx: snatch

Panel 3

Kenny looking back over his shoulder sexily as he opens the box.

Kenny: This ain’t no dildo!

Panel 4

Charles looking uncomfortable, medium close.

Charles: I’m just saying. There’s… more to life than that.

Panel 5

Ultra close up, just kenny’s face and hands on the glory rod.

Kenny: Uh huh?

digital voice: *beep* registered and linked.

Page 4

Panel 1

Kenny ultra foreground, looking down at something. Charles is standing slightly askance, attempting to see what charles is doing.

Charles: What is that?

Panel 2

Close up of Kenny’s backside, he’s tightening a leather strap around his waist.

Kenny: You’ll see!

sfx: scrrp

Panel 3

Medium close, Kenny has rushed over to Charles, seizing his pants.

Kenny: Now, I thought I told you to get these off?

Panel 4

Medium close from front, Charles is standing there, cock now exposed, Kenny bent over, having pulled his pants down. Charles’ body language is surprised, hesitant.

CHarles: Oh - but… kenny, I-

Panel 5

Close up of Charles’s eyes, looking down worriedly.

Charles: I wanted to…

Panel 6

Close up of his pants on the floor, the glint of the gold ring sticking out of one of the pockets.

Charles: Ask you something.

Page 5

Panel 1

Close up of Charles’s face, looking surprised.

Kenny: Later, please!

Panel 2

Seeing what he sees, Kenny standing there proudly, showing off the belt he’s wearing - it’s got a thick glowing portal at the front where his cock should be. He’s holding a glory rod in his hand.

Kenny: Charles. Trust me.

Panel 3

Wider shot, Kenny in ultra foreground, looking over shoulder at Charles.

Charles: The fuck is that?

Kenny: Get over here and find out you big weenie.

Panel 4

Charles has approached and has one knee on the bed, shirt 3/4 off, arms over his head, focused on what kenny is offering him.

Kenny: Slide this over your dick.

Panel 4

Close up of Charles medium high angle, sitting with one leg on the bed, leg folded, the other off, holding the glory rod in one hand and his semi-hard dick in the other.

Charles: It’s too skinny.

Kenny: No it isn’t.

Panel 5

Close up, He’s holding his dick and has slid his cockhead inside the lips of the glory rod.

Panel 6

Same angle, it’s all the way at the base of his cock - it looks odd.

Charles: Huh. That’s… weird.

Kenny: Look over here.

Panel 7

Burst lines, Kenny is standing proudly, with his hands on his hips, Charles’s huge cock flopping out.

Page 6

Panel 1

Wide angle of the two of them, Charles looks aghast.

Charles: What is going on?!

Kenny: Touch it!

Panel 2

Closer up of Charles’s hand as he grabs it.

Charles: *gasp!* It’s mine!

Panel 3

Medium close of the both of them. Kenny is smiling sidling up next to him, holding his cock up with both hands. Charles is staring at it, transfixed.

Kenny: Yep!

Charles: I feel you holding it!

Kenny: Yep!

Charles: But - how?

Panel 4

Kenny smiling at him.

Kenny: It’s called a glory rod.

Panel 5

Close up of charles’s groin, focusing on the glory rod.

Kenny: It’s the newest invention in portal tech.

Page 7

Panel 1

Close up of charles.

Charles: But… where’s yours?

Panel 2

Medium close of Kenny, still holding the cock with one hand, pointing at the box with the other. Charles is reaching towards the box.

Kenny: Ha! check the box!

Panel 3

Close up of the box, Charles is removing a miniature glory rod, one fit for Kenny’s size, Kenny’s erect penis jutting out of the end of it.

Panel 4

Wide angle of the two of them, Kenny still standing holding Charles’s cock, Charles holding up the little glory rod like a popsicle, the two of them staring at each other.

Panel 5

Closer view, the two of them have burst out laughing.

Hahahahahaha!

Panel 6

Above view, the two of them have fallen on their backs together, smiling and still laughing, charles has extended a tongue and is licking kenny’s cock.

Charles: Hahaha. This is so ridiculous! This is your dick!

Kenny: Hooooh… yeah! I love your tongue!

Page 8

Panel 1

Side view of the two of them, Charles in the extreme close up, Kenny focus.

Kenny: Charles… do you understand what I have planned for us?

Panel 2

Same angle, other side.

Charles: …maybe?

Panel 3

Close up of Kenny’s hands, using a hand-sanitizer style lube dispenser on the bedside table.

Panel 3

View from the end of the bed, Kenny is scooting towards us, his back towards us, charles sitting up.

Kenny: On your hands and knees, big boy!

Panel 4

Close up of Charles’s face.

Charles: You mean… oh!

Panel 5

Low angle, Kenny is standing up, Charles’s cock has just sprung up and gotten rock hard as he’s rubbing it with lube.

Kenny: Oh hell yeah!

sfx: slp slp!

sfx: throb

Page 9

Panel 1

Side view, Charles is on his hands and knees, Kenny has to remain standing to make it work, he’s lining up his cock.

Panel 2

Close up of his cockhead touching his asshole.

Charles: Oh god…

Panel 3

Side view, the cock is sliding in halfway.

Charles: OH GOD!

Panel 4

Close up of Charles’ face, absolutely overwhelmed

Charles: I’m not.. gonna last long!

sfx: plap plap plap

Panel 5

High angle, Kenny fucking charles relentlessly, charles looking at the glory rod in his right hand, having forgotten it was still there.

Kenny: Then you better give me the best blowjob of your life!

sfx: pap pap slap

Page 10

Panel 1

Close up, charles has greedily slurped down the entirety of Kenny’s dick.

Kenny: Oh fuck!

Panel 2

Underneath view, Kenny’s tiny balls visible underneath Charles’s cock, Charles’ balls swinging, cock in the glory rod.

Panel 3

Close up of charles, sucking on Kenny’s cock, eyes clenched shut.

Charles: MMMMNG!

Panel 4

Close up of Charles’s asshole as his cock pops out of it.

sfx: plop!

Panel 5

Action burst shot, Kenny jerking Charles’s cock as it ejaculates all over charles’s back.

charles: MMMMMOOHHHNGGGG!

Panel 6

Close up of Charles’s mouth sucking Kenny’s dick, rapidly moving it in and out of his mouth like a toothbrush.

sfx: slurp slurp slurp.

Panel 7

Medium close of kenny, he’s dropped Charles’s cock on his back with a slap, clenched his eyes shut and bared his teeth.

sfx: slap

kenny: Fuuuuuck!

Panel 8

Close up of Charles’s face, eyes closed, mouth open as Kenny’s cock squirts all over his tongue.

Page 11

Panel 1

From the front of the bed, Charles has collapsed onto his chest, huffing heavily, Kenny is crawling up towards his face level, Charles’s softening cock dragging behind him.

sfx: huff huff guh

Panel 2

View from above, mid-level, Charles has rolled onto his side and the two of them are close together.

sfx: hah. hooh.

Charles: Kenny.

Kenny: *huff* yeah?

Panel 3

Close up of charles, Kenny head ultra foreground.

Charles: Will you marry me?

Panel 4

Close up of kenny, his gaze is locked on Charles, tears welling in his eyes.

Panel 5

Same exact angle, he’s wiping his eyes.

Kenny: *sniff*

Panel 6

Close up of charles, smiling.

Charles: That’s a yes.

Panel 7

Close up of the two of them kissing.