Further progress on 'The Dream' (Patreon)

This is rough as guts!!  The first 5 pages are a little more finished, as per previous posts.  What follows is my work so far on the continuing story in very VERY (very!) rough form.  This is giving you guys a sneak peek into my process - both for text as well as imagery, my metaphor is a lump (clump?) of clay that I slowly work and refine until it's become a comic.

Typically, I go back over this and that, change a panel or two here, move or change some text...  and this is where some of those inconsistencies (that only the greatest of detectives and keen minds notice, sometimes😜)