Libby&Holly Ch2 Pg1-4 revise Roughs (Patreon)

This is one of those moments where I've been wanting to fix something that's irked me for a while. I was never quit pleased with how my current page 2 reads and I wanted to try inserting some space to lead into the storm.

I think I was trying to be too clever having a big thunder clap in a small space that really reads more like the tree is breaking, which was not my intention. Adding another page in between will give me some room to show the storm brewing.
I hate the thought that someone would get taken out of the story because they're confused about some text I just didn't consider too well.

In order to not disrupt the page order of the rest of the book I have to add two pages, so everything doesn't get shuffled around and page breaks messed up. 

It's a little annoying going back to the beginning to add pages, it's also going to make all of my numbered pages change, but I'm only a handful of pages away from completing this chapter and then I'll be able to post the entire collected pages!

Stay tuned!

🖤Winton