WIP: The Visit 2 - Kidnapped (Patreon)

Hi guys, here is a small teaser of the story I'm currently working on, which I'll try to get out as soon as possible. It's the continuation of "The Visit".

At the end of the first issue we find that Leon, Rose's older brother has been taken by a woman known as Mantis. Rose and Laura know this character with whom they have clashed in the past.

This story will center around Laura and Rose teaming up to find Mantis and rescue Rose's brother. Scott (Rose's teammate and boyfriend) will tag along with them while the other members of their team will give them some support remotely.

Unlike the previous issue, part 2 will be more of a police/spy drama but will try to keep it in a "light" tone, with bits of humor and sexual situations. There will be more action and a healthy dose of the two main girls kicking butt, flexing their muscles and doing many impressive feats.

I'm currently in the writing stage so don't have many images to show as preview but I'll try to post works in progress as I move along this story. Of course any feedback along the way is more than welcome.

Once I started writing this story I realized I had put myself into a corner since I had never written anything of this nature (mysteries and investigation drama) in the past. I don't want the story to just jump to Rose and Laura "magically" barging in straight into fighting the bad guy and rescue the prisoner. I really want to make it a challenge for the two, putting them in a situation where they have to use their wits to find Mantis and Leon. A second challenge is to get Mantis to be able to face off two women much more powerful than her and still hold her own. Something like Batman vs Superman but without the Kryptonite or the mechanical armor. I know, it's a big challenge to figure out but that's the fun part of making a story like this. 

Again, suggestions and ideas are more than welcome!

I'll keep you posted on the progress, and I'll never tire of thanking you guys for your support. It's because of you I'm able to explore things like this.

Cheers!

-Kurt