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2/8/2017: Falling for her Tits Chapter 23 (Patreon)

Published:
2017-02-08 05:43:35
Imported:
2021-06

Content

https://www.dropbox.com/s/hjzhz8e5ywrkzc3/falling%20chapter%2023.pdf?dl=0

New Falling for her Tits to start the month of right. So far judging by the polls I'm going to shoot for the next updates being a chapter each of Enslave all Cheerleaders, Snake Goddess and Succubus Cheat Sheet. I'm now rapidly going back through my notes to start back up on the last two. On the plus side I've been writing a ton so far this month! I'm going to try and write up everything I need to before my vacation in a few days since I'll be down in Florida for a week. You guys will definitley have another update before then though, so keep you eye out for it.

Comments

M H

Can't say I'm wild about Cathy's revelation here, just struck me as kind of underwhelming. I mean it well telegraphed that Cathy had some submissive tendencies but it truly felt in the early going she enjoyed the opposite role as well. That, coupled with Amy's fairly brisk switch from bitch to good feeling a bit unearned has dragged down my enjoyment some. Still very hot and worth a read but not absolute top tier that the earlier parts were.

sammynona
>>3860702

I know, in the beginning it was so easy to just write one character dominating another. Then about halfway through I realized I had to try and work character development and an actual ending in. Maybe this is why most stories build up to the brainwashing and end with that lol, this is what I get for being more experimental haha

larqven

I'm glad Cathy didn't go to the meanest domme that she could find in the city on short notice! Fortunately, relief was close to home! I thought that it was cute that Brooke was giving Cathy so much of what she wanted, but at the thought that Brooke could take Amy's place left her cold. I'm not sure what could be said of Cathy's 'true' self, it's like she had a crop installed in her mind--but once it is removed, she's still conditioned. I suspect that as a Senior near graduation with no known romances and a top performer athlete who still kept her grades up, that Cathy was possibly in the 'Q' category and was eager to please the authority figures in her life. Going gay and full on submissive is bound to create a lot of second guessing. I'm now wondering if Amy might think that Brooke is screwed up as well?! Brooke was a stronger and more determined girl than she might have seen, what with having her job. It shouldn't be completely surprising if she should develop a tougher persona if given some confidence and new tools to work with. One of the greatest evils of mind control is the cutting of connections in the lives of the subjects, but such a power can make connections as well!