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Viv's story continues in part 2 of this 3 part corruption story. Her potion seems to have fully taken hold of Juliet, but will everything go exactly the way that Viv wants it? Our evil witch may have bitten off more than she can chew...

https://www.dropbox.com/s/j6zaefpewielytt/A%20Witch%27s%20Dream%20of%20Power%202.pdf?dl=0

Part 3 should be ready for next month as the exciting conclusion but there's plenty of fun to be had in this long update. This will be the only story in May for all patrons since it fulfills all 10,000 words, but keep an eye out for the other stories you love in June. As always feel free to comment and discuss below!

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M

I must say I did not see that coming but I am thoroughly intrigued for part three. This is quite the fun ride!

Abby Gail

Look forward to reading this chapter but a quick question first. Isn't the new tier program 10K words for all patrons and an extra 15K for your $5 Patrons? That's what I read below. "I announced at the beginning of the year that I'd stop sticking to a strict five story count rule, and instead work off of word count for each tier, with me sending out at least 10,000 words of stories to everyone pledging at least a dollar, and then an extra 15,000 words worth of stories to everyone pledging $5 or more." So... when you say this is the "only" story... you are referring to the $1-$4 patrons only.. and we $5 Patrons get to enjoy another 15,000 words sometime later this month... right?

Abby Gail

PS: Wonderful chapter... loved every bit of it. Thanks

Emily Bostic

Mmmm. Yes, this is exactly what I signed up for. I just hope Juliet finds a way to completely enslave Viv without destroying her mind (or vice versa).

sammynona

Yes I apologize if that was vague! This is the story for all general patrons, while the $5 and above patrons will receive another 15,000 words of stories in the rest of the month. There will be more smut incoming soon haha

sammynona

And I'm glad you enjoyed it :) This story has been a blast to write but to see that people like it too is even better

sammynona

Not giving spoilers either way, but you'll notice my stories tend not to include utterly mindless slaves in a permanent state. I tend to consider that a bad end and much more enjoy characters with more personality haha

Natasha

This chapter was amazing. I love the image of her looking up to see her "creation" using mind control magic on her

V01D

I LOVE your stories. This is perfect. It's the whole corruption ending up resulting in a relationship nobody anticipated, and it being BETTER for it. I've noticed Vivian has a bit of a submissive streak - Juliet just needs to get her to realize it. Instead of just one of them on the throne, it would be a pair... It's why I REALLY want to see Falling for her Tits continued...

Emily Bostic

If Viv has a submissive streak, maybe that came through in the potion too. The perfect evil power-couple, each looking for flaws in the other's plans so they could come out on top. Instead of a hero defeating them, each will defeat the other in turns when she gets too full of herself.

larqven

I got many things from this story. Many little one liners, which means that it can't be defined by a one liner! (But when have I ever done that?) LoL 'Pride before a fall.', 'Evil clashes with evil', 'Evil particularly clashes with like evil', 'Be careful what you wish for as it might come true', and somewhat surprisingly, 'Naughty girls need love too!' For being so smart, Viv was kind of blinded by her pride regarding the potion. The mind control aspect of it always seemed rather sketchy to me from word go, even if the potion worked exactly as advertised. Crazed folks wanting to be worshiped and make slaves don't want too many of their like minded fellows around. Particularly if those new fellow dreamers are more smarter and more powerful than the erstwhile protagonist. In truth, for overcoming multiple dark lords, Juliet seemed rather dense herself for taking a potion so easily, and being blind to its nature for so long. Juliet's slow and less than decisive action after she learns full disclosure actually makes me wonder if Viv's concept of the potion is more right than wrong. Just that whoever sits on that throne is less certain and more transitory than Viv ever expected? The use of the morphing floorboards in Juliet's spell was a lot of fun! As was Viv's efforts at outdoing Juliet and her incredible faith in how she thought the potion would work. Your use of more extreme magic continues apace! It's easier to use what would normally be overwhelming use of power when both adversaries have great power of their own. Indeed, such is Juliet's power and corruption that I've wondered if she is some sort of magical super-human. That is, maybe a powerful villain's very powerful assistant who had her memories suppressed and was turned into a seemingly normal student. But her corruption is releasing the limits placed on her? Anyway, Juliet didn't disappoint! chapter 2 errors: Viv fought against her bonds, struggling to breath [breathe] (page 17) The wand left trailing sparks of red power in it's [its] wake (page 21) but right then Viv just took a moment to breath [breathe] a sigh of relief (page 27) Ooh, that sound [sounds] fun. (page 32)

Natasha

this has to be my favourite story of yours