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EAC Chapter 12 (Patreon)

Published:
2018-01-11 00:10:53
Edited:
2020-04-23 23:24:23
Imported:
2021-06

Content

Starting the new year off right with another chapter of this exciting series. Both the slaves and the free girls are trapped, but who really has an edge going into this chapter? Lots of twists and turns as we careen towards the finale. Who will come out on top?

 https://www.dropbox.com/s/zhk3fztl3qmvvmu/EC%20chapter%2012.pdf?dl=0 

Comments

ParagonRocky

Chapter 8 just got illustrated! <a href="https://www.deviantart.com/art/College-Seduction-8-Commission-730098730" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.deviantart.com/art/College-Seduction-8-Commission-730098730</a>

larqven
>>10057889

This is my favorite pic so far! Great scene. Good thing that Amber is tall enough to pull this off. Well, I suppose those breasts of hers have a certain--attraction--that just sort of pulls faces right between them! LoL

ParagonRocky
>>10057889

Sadly not every chapter has a smother scene, but when we get one it's good. 😅 Commission artist raised his rates but this is quality work.

Spark

Maria.... On the one hand, I want her happy - but can't she be happy as a lesbian mistress?

ParagonRocky
>>9402220

Maria's learning a lot about herself tonight. She started the story very timid and introverted, and if it hadn't been for Rebeca pushing her she wouldn't have even tried out for the squad. Now she's got agency and is taking control for herself. She might not want to give it up again. She likes who she is now, and wants to stay that way. Of course, she'd probably still be happy under Amber's power. We know that it's not really mind-control, and the slaves are still the same person they were before, just uninhibited and content. Maria's just worried about losing her autonomy. Right now, she's a lesbian mistress because she wants to be. If Amber gets her, will it still be her choice?

ParagonRocky

The scene with the bedroom slaves was fantastic. Heather's bathroom break was the perfect minor glitch that threw a wrench into Maria's plan. The interplay between the four slaves was great and everyone felt distinct. Ginger's cynicism, Emma's level-headed evaluation, Heather's emotionality, and Jade...wow, Jade. I was literally thinking she was like a Terminator before Ginger came right out and said it. Jade's extended brainwashing made for quite a surprising turnaround, and she really did become Amber's most devoted slave as Amber predicted. I don't know if we've had POV sections for every character, but it's always fun getting into someone's head when we do, and Amber was a lot of fun this chapter. Her dream sequence really does tell us what she really thinks of herself, even if she might see herself as benevolent. Her fears about what might happen if Rebecca and Maria were to escape, and the quick mention of "lesbian gods", are minor notes that could fuel plenty of speculation. Amber might literally have her own religious beliefs focused around the source of her powers... Maria's justification for entering the theatre is quite sensible. If Amber hadn't seen her go in, she might really have hidden out quite well in there. Plus there's food, and the line about pussy fulfilling your nutritional needs was hilarious. Amber's need for theatricality is still on full display, when she decides to play the movie instead of just seizing Maria. It makes perfect sense that Amber would know and enjoy a movie about a seductive villainess. I almost wonder if it wouldn't have made for a hilarious in-joke if she started playing a scene from "Slaves of the Snake Goddess". I get a kick out of the idea of implying these stories take place in a greater Sammynona universe. :P Jade's arrival was perfect. How she found them doesn't even matter if she was just that good at hunting them down. Calling her a Terminator does her justice. Presumably getting a refresher from Amber would have kept her in that semi-robotic state for a while, if it wasn't for her sudden faceplant into the chairs when the lights went out. I wonder where that emergency door leads, whether it's straight outside like a real fire exit or somewhere else in the mansion. And I wonder what Rebecca did to make that happen?

larqven

As pointed out, the brainwashing room scene was very good. The girls, (with the big exception and perhaps oversight of Jade), were merely lost in their 'time out', but didn't stay that way, due to Heather needing to pee! The idea brings up potty humor of a subject forced to drink a lot through the day and then having to hold it a lot for light sadism of seeing the subject do the 'pee-pee dance', running to the restroom at the last minute, literally messing themselves or wearing some form of diapers. In this case, of course, the needs of the body sometimes overrule the mind. At least when the girls are mind controlled with some good sense and are largely still themselves. Or some form of better versions of themselves at any rate. Jade being the exception in that, as she got a longer, or at least stronger and more vindictive dose of breast power for physically assaulting Amber earlier. While clearly not a drone, and still in possession of some of her madcap nature, that wildness has been tamed and harnessed to Amber. It would appear that the extreme zap and long brainwashing session have made her mostly single minded--but not stupid. A valuable slave indeed. If Jade's personality has been radically and permanently shifted, this could cause her trouble with family and friends? But Amber seems to believe that the harshness will dissipate soon, and she might be able to alleviate the problem herself with additional programming. It might also be that the excuse of 'College in its Final Stages' and 'Reality Hitting Home' might make a change in a college girl? Family might well notice that Jade isn't as she was, but if she's more centered, careful and studious, they might all be very grateful for the change! Not that Jade is all care. She summoned up some full power to destroy that door, on a level that might have harmed her leg? The other girls might be devoted, but they don't have the same drive or are exhibiting some programed 'hypnotic super strength'. But Jade is. But she did get strongly zapped, and she is used to life on the edge and 'going to the extreme', she might be better able to do so. Great fun seeing her run on the back of the theater chairs in some 'anime style'! Amber got herself free fairly easily. She would have had a harder time if she had stayed locked up longer until Jade freed her. Or would she? Amber's activities were fun, but hardly productive. The mirrors at the concession stand were a nice touch. I honestly considered if they would work. Mirrors can be the 'kryponite' of Amy and Amber's breast power as we well know. But, it's a 'one in a hundred' sort of shot. The 'One subject at a time' rule might sort of protect them in that. On the other hand, the fact that the mirror worked at all, or Cathy was nearly ensnared by Amy accidently, or so on, suggests that the 'one at a time' rule can be bent. Actually, the REAL 'kryptonite' of Amy and Amber probably is neither mirrors or the 'one subject at a time' rule, but the goddess complex and need to be theatrical. Here, we see Amber get herself free, and she could probably have easily ensnared Maria just by walking up to her and being seen. Instead, she takes the time to create her little home movie effect, and, basically, in creating a scary movie scene, creates visual and auditory distractions that might be frightening, but also allow Maria to hide, and provides 'chaff' and interference to her own breast power. And this is after Amber has been knocked about by her victims, even knocked out and locked up for a short time. Amber is right to be concerned about escapees. I mean, it IS true. Rebecca and Maria are almost certainly NOT going to be believed alone. But in a world where mind control exists for one, it very well exist for several or many. Little mind controllers could be 'eaten' by 'big' mind controllers. Intelligence organizations will very likely know something about them, or a great deal. One little, silly police report of 'hypnotic breast flashing' could immediately lead to connections with others. Stuff which would have languished in a jurisdictional administrative vacuum just twenty years ago are much more likely to be detected now, and someone's going to start investigating Amber, and then it is probably all over for her. Maria stands up for herself against even the 'goddess'! And she did a bang up good job of it too. In large part due to Amber underestimating the nerd-girl, not knowing of the amazing switch that Maria has already played, as well as a silly need for the dramatic and assuming that Maria would freeze and fold. The mirror may have been comical and, indeed, 'comic book logic', but--WE--know that it might POSSIBLY have even worked. And a mirror might be a terribly cumbersome weapon, but getting hit by one is no joke. They are heavy, they are full of glass, they might possibly be bloody, disfiguring business, and even lethal. So, while Maria might have done the least physically to Amber, she might represent one of the greatest frustrations, particularly in being a great waste of time and a failure of what ought to have been nearly a sure thing. Amber might finally question her slaves and find out what has been going on. She might well like the idea of the little nerd girl being some sort of dominant to the rest of the group? Usually, the one with the 'dick', be it a dildo or futanari penis or pseudo-penis, is the dominant. But, this, of course, isn't so true in fem-dom, and sometimes in lesbian fem-dom, it is the submissive, or 'less womanly' girl given the 'dick' to please her mistress by playing 'male'. There are a couple of erotic fanfics of the skinny, shy, demure (and sometimes sort of homicidal crazy) nerd-girl, Nina Einstein, from the anime "Code Geass" where she submissively 'has the dick' to the greater endowed women. Maria sort of reminds me of that, in both her role and unexpected and frenetic strength of character if not outright of body.

ParagonRocky
>>9449158

I always look forward to the level of insight and analysis you bring to these, larqven. Always so much to unpack.

larqven
>>9449158

I'm really glad that my often lengthy responses are enjoyed. :)