V13 Preview! (Spoilers) (Patreon)

I don't have anything too terribly interesting to show this week, so I decided this could be a cool opportunity to try something new and (maybe?) interesting! 

This is a rough draft of an early scene in V13. There are still some polishing things I need to do. If you have any suggestions, criticism, or general comments, please leave them below!

Also I think I already know the answer, but if you would like more types of previews like this, let me know! :)