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Hey all!

I got some really good feedback from a lot of you. I made several changes to the site, so for those of you who have a minute, go ahead and click through and give me first impressions. I toned down some of my design decisions that were described as a little much, and swapped to a different template.

Oh, and the weird scrolling background thingy is gone now.

www.annabellehawthorne.com

Thanks again! Check back tomorrow for another swimsuit image!


Comments

Anonymous

Now *THAT* is what I'm talking about! Well done!

Anonymous

Looks good a is simple and tasteful

Anonymous

Have you thought about maybe making a separate page listing all the different monsters that we have seen so far with them in a naughty pose either naked or wearing next to nothing and a flirty bio

Anonymous

I like this one too . It looks like a web page you go to buy books but maybe ad something , a design or picture in the left hand coner where you name is. Put a little of your flare there.

Annabelle Hawthorne

I actually have a hidden page for that. That one will take a lot more work right now, and the focus is on having everything ready for book launch. But it is in the works!

Anonymous

This looks great! Really like it

Anonymous

Agree with Robert Hawk, it looks really great now, all it needs is something unique to your self & your stories.

Anonymous

Muuuuccchhhh better!!! Add only thing that jumped out was that you could add the about you and the subscribe (maybe change subscribe to something like get updates) to the main menu. I don’t know if squarespace has a social media

Anonymous

Crap it posted... to continue my sentence. I don’t know if squarespace has a social media plugin but an addition could be another page that aggregated all your social media onto one page

Anonymous

Looks good. I agree about "subscribe" -- sorta means "pay money" to me.

Trimtab

Looks way better now (the teal wasn't my thing) and it formats pretty well on my android phone in portrait and landscape. I made a square space page for a friend's Startup business last year and was impressed, good call using the service; sky's the limit as you evolve your budding publishing empire! :-) Huzzah!

Trimtab

Oh and I agree with Michael, I'd recommend putting "newsletter" on that button, not "subscribe". Semantics maybe, but subscribe is possibly scarier for folks in today's hyper connected attention economy.