Book Advice - Part 2 (Patreon)
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So I’m laying some groundwork so that I can have Book One finished as quickly as possible once all the chapters are laid out, but I need some advice.
Obviously, one of the first things I will need to do before publishing is ask all of my Monster Loving friends for help spotting some of my biggest continuity errors. One of the problems in writing a piece like this one chapter at a time is that I make some fuck ups, and I fully hope that those of you who have a better attention span than me will help me spot all of them come January.
However, when I am doing book length rewrites, there is the temptation to rewrite lines of dialogue, change set pieces, etc. Little things that correct the ebb and flow. Which brings me to a question that has been on my mind for a few weeks.
So far, every chapter has been well received by the Lit community with the exception of Chapter 9. While I get that some people aren’t into pegging, I can’t write every sex scene to appease every kink. However, in writing it, I wanted to establish Lily’s dominance (bad guy - duh!), and I wanted the scene to play out sort of like the first scene in the book where Naia slips her finger’s up Mike’s ass and he comes, discovering that he likes it.
However, I’ve gotten a lot of comments, reviews, and even some hate-mail equating the scene as rape. It is my lowest rated chapter by far, but it has more favorites than most of the others, so I am suffering some confusion as to how much people liked or hated it.
So I guess I am stuck. Do I rewrite it to keep my original vision of “You’re going to like this“ or do I reword some of the dialogue so that it is less “rapey?” Keeping in mind that this will eventually be on Amazon, the last thing I need is dozens of one-star “Rape” reviews, but I also don’t want to change the original material to placate the vocal minority. I really want to hear opinions on this matter as long as everyone can play nice. Rape is one of the big Annabelle No-Nos, and I’m afraid that I am struggling to gauge this situation abjectly.
Take care of each other. Hoping to have the next chapter land next week. Keep your eye out for a couple more Holiday Cards in the very near future!
Annabelle