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We heard you loud and clear. I'll upload the process of refining these characters in short bursts. More frequent updates of random stuff!





Here's what we have so far of Ritona (14) casual. Top 4 designs were all good but I needed Ritona to look more like a slob/bum because of the setting of the story. All the designs were too overly designed and the primness was detracting from a more gritty feel I was going for. We were gonna scrap the the whole thing and start from scratch but Hare-san came up with this idea:

"Maybe Ritona just gets all her clothes from Flora as a hand-me-down?" 

This made perfect sense because Ritona's not the type to take good care of herself ( at least in StP). We could make her look flowery -- which will probably be better for marketing -- but at the same time have an excuse that she really doesn't give a shit in the end. 

This also gives them an interesting and very human dynamic. Those of you that have read "aMora dies Sympathika" might have noticed but Flora has a pretty major inferiority complex towards Ritona. No matter how hard Flora tries, there's just something different about the blood of a Reighnvhasta when it comes to  Manakravting (or is there?). In StP they are going after the position of Royal Guardian of Selphine, but Ritona eventually stops caring because reasons, aka spoilers. This causes weird tension between the two. 

Imagine wearing clothes that were giving to you from a sibling like friend that you're slowly starting to not give a shit about. That's a pretty interesting and disturbing (aka fun) dynamic.

The bottom right is what we've settled on so far, but we have to finish the rest of the crew and put them all together side by side for final color adjustments. 

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Anonymous

That does sound like an interesting piece to their relationship! Very excited to read it. Flora and Ritona's relationship sounds very interesting. I liked the big coat on the bottom three. but it didn't survive to bottom-right. Looks great both ways though. Thanks very much to showing them to us!

fault

Oh the coat will be there (I hope). There will be an outdoors version and in indoors version.

Anonymous

Well I will say you did a good job at making Ritona look like a rude nasty teenager who doesn't give a shit about much. I know this sounds kind of odd but when I see your guy's design of her and read the description I can kind of sort of tell she doesn't look like the type who would shower or wash her clothes....If that happens to be the case I am glad I would not be able to smell it.

Anonymous

I love the posing! Really communicates that as well dressed as she is, it isn't really something she cultivates herself.

Anonymous

also, like the necklace.

Bytes487

I like ritonas design!!! omg i love her hairstyle too~~ so cute :D Im going to enjoy reading Flora and Ritonas backstory in StP in fact i was anticipating it to happen! If you wanted her to look rugged/bum like id give her a ripped cloth dress (most likely hand made) with stains and rips also have cuts/brouses or blemishes and blood stains on her body like shes been surviving in harsh environments like super cold or hot temperature and have her eyes look either dead or depressed bags under eyes. Also her body have it slightly skinnier than normal like shes malnourished or something. and make her hair colour look darker dirtier and ruffed up. I dont want to see a poor looking Ritona though :( As for design choices, id go with First choice: Bottom Far Right Second Choice: Top Far Left Third Choice: Second Top Left (uncoloured) I chose these mainly because it appeals to her and with the story. Since shes just been introduced into the Rughzhaide family she would need to start off in something simple bland and slightly rough since she will be a child (kind of) the bottom far right one has caught my eye for that concept. If its too plain i chose Top Far Left design to add abit more character. The third choice i thought that design had a bit of both choice 1 and 2 involved it wasnt too plain but didnt show too much character either. Those are my thoughts sorry for long post! hope this helps improve Ritona :D

Anonymous

Oh my, I love them all.

ParityDesu

I loved how Ritona looks nonchalant and ragged compared to how Flora looks elegant and sophisticated. These small little details really help connect the art with the story. Thanks for the updates!

Anonymous

Very, very cool to hear some of the back story on the designs from you guys. It just adds so much depth to the world that I know the fans can't get enough of. Thank you and continue to do these kinds of updates.

Anonymous

Oh man, these are cool! My favorite is top left. I love the bits of info you guys trickle out too lol