Star-Crossed outline (Patreon)

Hey everyone!  I just realized I forgot to share this outline in the last commentary, so I'm sharing it now for you all to see before we all forget the story and move on.  I like making these one-page outlines so I can visualize the timeline better.  Also, I just like writing things down.

Some thoughts when I look at this:

* I didn't write this with other people's eyes in mind - sorry!

* Space Bees was the working title, then Alone in the Universe, before I finally settled on Star-Crossed.

* If you look at Chapter 1, ISA was originally going to be called Star Force!  I can't remember why I changed it...Star Force sounds cool.

* I did really well sticking to the original outline until Chapter 11, then the wheels fell off (or I kept shoving more chapters into the story - same difference!).  

* In particular, Zimon/Sun/Blake and Yang's first kiss were all originally going to happen within just a couple chapters.  Can you imagine?  That's too much good stuff!  So, ultimately, we basked in it for six chapters.

That's about it, I think!  Just wanted to share before we start our next story...next weekend! :D

Until then, 

Miko