DayZ Critique - Part 9 draft finished (still working on part 8) (Patreon)

I'm nearly done with these two chapters. But it appears that I was able to finish part 9 before part 8. And part 9 is available here in early-access for you.  As always, thank you very much for your patronage during my pet-project.

So this is the chapter wedged between part 8/10 - Tone and Atmosphere. And part 10/10 - Development. And it talks about the role that Vehicles have in a survival game like DayZ.

Please let me know what you think. All feedback is useful. Not just errors, but any parts of the argument you find unconvincing. It'll let me go back and assess which parts of the script are weak and might need rewording.

I'm hoping to have part 8 ready for you by the end of tomorrow. Fingers crossed.