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So I truly started my writing adventure with my story, 'My Upgrades are invincible' Due to a number issues like it being my first story and myself having zero idea how to write, it had a great number of issues with the story itself to say nothing of the grammar and other issues. That and for whatever reason a lot of other online novel sites stole the story and reposted it under their name and you can literally buy it in Turkish on Amazon lol

Anyway I was thinking about rewriting it and wanted to get your guys opinion on it as I have grown a lot as a writer since then. 

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