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Hiromi the next day marched me down to City Center. Practically buzzing with excitement, as she guided me towards a specific building into its garage, using an access code she supplied, to enter into the building's garage.

“Must be exciting. To be doing like a real business deal.” I offered to her, as we slipped into the elevator.

“I’ve done business deals before.” She replied semi distracted, but I could see her cheeks flushing.

“Yeah but that was on the street, this is like the real deal. Bet no one in your class has ever gotten even close to this sort of thing.” I whispered teasingly at the end.

“Definitely not. Those losers and over inflated egotists!” She chirped, pleased, and then focused up as the elevator ride ended, the doors opened onto a fancy upscale reception, carpeted and warmly lit. At the end of the hallway was a woman with tasteful cyberware, elegant and attractive sitting behind a desk.

The big company icon above her head was rather telling.

I followed along after Hiromi, who had shifted her face into a mask of confident arrogance.

Neither woman spoke up at first. Hiromi’s eyes flashing, and the womans did as well, before her cement-like smile broke.

“You are right on time Ms. Mitsunashi. Keiko will guide you to the conference room.” She replied and another woman dressed in the same way stepped out of a side door throwing a fake smile and bowing.

We both followed Hiromi staying confident and cool, but I could see the tension in how she walked from knowing her.

I was basically uninterested in the pageantry. I wouldn’t even be here if not for Hiromi asking me to.

I just didn’t need the eddies, or the fame, but if I could help out Hiromi’s dream by giving her access to the rich and powerful, I wasn’t going to deny her.

We were guided down the hall, Keiko smiling fakely, her voice chipper and happy as she talked up her company.

Blah blah blah. It all went in one ear and out the other.

I've heard enough corpo jargon in my life. I didn’t need more.

Finally the door was held open for us, and we walked into a brightly lit conference room. An entire side of the wall were open windows showing the towers of City Central.

But I was more interested in the other end of the table. The one man sitting. Expensive suit, and more expensive smile.

But it was the two standing behind him that caught my eye.

They looked like accountants. Standing behind him with tablets, and even some actual papers in their arms.

But I recognized the stance, the way they held their arms.

They were armed. Bodyguards?

I stopped behind Hiromi as she took a seat across from the man, earning a confused look from her as there was a chair beside her for me, but I was fully in bodyguard mode myself now.

“Ms. Mitsunashi. I am Sam Henson. It is a pleasure to see you face to face. Rarely do I get such riveting back and forth for something so simple as a small music deal.”

“Small or large, hardly matters. Not when it comes to who is asking for this deal.” Hiromi seemingly reposted, bringing up Denny in her first line.

Ah, if Hiromi had been getting back and forth, then likely the company was trying to screw me?

Heh.

“Our contract is welcomed by many up and coming artists.” He replied back, but Hiromi laughed fakely.

“Artists, am I right? They never know what they want. Or what they need.” She shrugged, and I actually almost looked at her myself, because that almost sounded like a bit of a dig towards me.

I’m sorry Hiromi, I just don’t like all the attention!

“Well, we’ve run your contract edits through legal, and they were denied of course.” He offered casually. “I’ve taken the liberty of going through the edits you desired and altering them into something that will work for us.”

Hiromi didn’t frown, she didn’t smile either. Simply waited, as the man's eyes went blue as he sent over a file to Hiromi.

I could practically see the file transfer over, but before Hiromi could open it I attacked.

Slipping into the network transfer to Hiromi, I popped up a small text file on her agent into her sight.

*Motoko: Give me a second. Checking the file.*

*Hiromi: Okay.*

“A moment then to look it over.” She replied verbally, and I checked over the file searching through it before deciding it was clean. Yoko was right, checking file transfers first was a good idea.

Hiromi nodded, popping it open, and I pulled out of her system leaving her to check it over.

The room was quiet as Hiromi’s eyes continued to glow telling everyone she was reading through a document.

I kept an eye on the other guards, but neither seemed to register me as an actual threat.

Which was kinda hilarious, but I just took it as a good thing and continued to stand guard as Hiromi browsed, finally she slapped a hand onto the table.

“Ridiculous.” She said instantly. “We are selling a song to Master-Space Records. Not selling the musicians rights. You want to be able to sell the song without giving attention to its songwriter. That doesn’t work for my client.”

“It's a standard part of our contracts Ms. Mitsunashi, we need to be able to sell the song without any issues from a musician's public stunts. The contract will make ‘Tank’ a full and complete ownership to Master-Space.”

“You want to have someone else ‘create’ the song and sell it as theirs.” Hiromi argued, and I was just following along not really seeing the issue.

Wasn’t that what selling the song to them meant? Hiromi, stop getting fiery!

“Correct. That is a standard in our business Ms. Mitsunashi, we understand that you are new to the music industry, and not properly licensed to deal in contract law, so we are being understanding of your limitations.”

Wow, what a great way to belittle someone. I was really starting to not like this guy.

“I have enough experience to see when my client is being taken advantage of. We are here at the request of your company, as you wish to purchase my client's work. If this is the best you can offer. I can reach out to other agencies. It honestly isn’t an issue for us.” Hiromi states plainly.

But Sam wasn’t seemingly intimidated.

“The door is behind you Ms. Mitsunashi.”

“Then I’ll leave explaining the situation to Denny to you.” Hiromi added, rising up, and there was a tension in the room, the two guards behind Sam shifted.

I didn’t move. Better to let them think I’m nothing in case I needed to move. If either of them reached for a weapon they would be dead before their hand touched it.

“Hold on Ms. Mitsunashi.” Sam demanded and Hiromi calmly finished rising to her feet.

“Do we have any further business Mr. Henson?”

“Allow me a few moments to make a call. It would be a shame to lose your client out of such a profitable enterprise.” He explained with a smile that was as fake as his attempted kindness.

“I can wait a few minutes.” Hiromi replied back drily, confidence in every inch of her. She had definitely won that exchange.

“Enjoy some snacks while we wait.” Sam offered. Pointing to a table that had…

I guess they were snacks? I don’t really get it. Hiromi nodded, and actually walked over. Grabbing a soda out of a mini fridge I hadn’t even realized was a fridge and then taking some of the weird… Wafers?

Rich people food was fucking weird.

She grabbed one and bit into it, and looked to me, but I just shook my head and remained standing in place.

I still didn't like the look of the guards.

Time stretched on and eventually Hiromi got sick of standing so she retook her seat.

And then Mr. Henson’s eyes finished glowing.

“We will acquiesce on the matter of copyright, Ms. Kusanagi’s name will be attached to the song. In regards to your second alteration which I know you will harp on. We will allow a royalty payment into the contract. Although the gross will drop significantly.” He replied with an unhappy smile.

“I will be happy to look over the contract again.”

Sam nodded and instantly Hiromi received another file. After checking it again, I allowed Hiromi access to it.

She looked it over for a good five minutes. Much longer than she had the first time.

“One minor alteration to line 140b.” She demanded, and the two played back and forth file sharing for a minute before Sam nodded.

“Master-Space records agrees to the alteration.” And then to my surprise an actual paper document was put forward by one of the guards onto the table and Hiromi, took it, looked it over and nodded.

“Sign here.” She told me, and I hesitated, looking it over for myself.

It was basically a paper sign of ‘You agree to the terms of the digital agreement.’ Seemed sort of extraneous to me, but I shrugged. Looking to Hiromi she nodded, looking pleased.

Alright.

I signed my name.

“Thank you ladies.” Sam said as he stood. “The deposit will be made promptly, Ms. Mitsunashi, the Royalty processing system will be opened to you and your client. Master-Space Records welcomes you both to a fruitful partnership.

There was a lot of back and forth between Hiromi and Sam after. They both made snide remarks hidden in flattery thing, but Hiromi was happy, and I didn’t think Denny was trying to play me.

And really in the end? If they did play me, I would either shrug and go on with my life because who cares, or decide to bomb their offices or something.

It’s kinda funny how little things like being stabbed in the back hardly mattered when you knew without a doubt you could murder everyone in the room without breaking a sweat.

In the end Hiromi accepted the lack of a congratulatory party as was the norm for these types of meetings. And we left the tower the same way we came in.

Hiromi was quiet all the way down the elevator and then into the car.

Only when the doors shut did she instantly start squealing and bouncing around.

“I did it! I did it! Motoko! We just made a huge deal! Oh my god! I have to tell my parents! I have to tell the school! I did it!” She cried out bouncing around all the tension in her leaving her a mess of over excited feelings.

I grinned and gunned it. Time to get out of here, and party. Section 9 style.

—--

“Whoa.” Malcolm offered, looking surprised. We were all at my apartment. Having called the boys on the way home, they were surprised at the sudden party until Hiromi had shyly explained what she had done.

“Damn.” Ichi exclaimed. “That’s big times for sure. Was it a lot of eddies?”

“It wasn’t as much as it could have been.” Hiromi responded. “But I got a royalty agreement, and they have to acknowledge Motoko as the original creator.” She looked pleased at this.

Honestly I didn’t care much. I still wasn’t sure if I even wanted to have my name out in the music sphere.

Seemed like a good way to get the wrong sort of attention, but I shrugged, it was good for Hiromi.

“Damn.” Ichi repeated, and I laughed at his shocked look.

“Here choom, have a drink, this is a party for Hiromi after all! Doing such a great job with her business deal!”

“What? No, Motoko you gonk, this is your party! You made a song and sold it to a major label! You, you!” She said, poking me in the cheek with an outstretched finger.

“Eh.” I responded with a shrug. “I think going through a contract and forcing a major label to accept the changes is more impressive.” I said, meeting her eyes and smiling. “So proud of you!”

“Hiromi flushed at the praise and looked away.

“That’s crazy. I mean, I know Motoko picked up the whole music thing. She’s played her songs for us a few times, but wow.” Malcolm added looking at me, and this time it was my turn to be a little shy. “Guess I know a future Rockerboy.”

“Not.” I denied crossing my arms in an X. “I just do songs sometimes. Being all famous and stuff would be awful. It would be so hard to go around and kill people for a living like that.” I offered, and Ichi instantly broke into a laugh, and then louder.

“Jesus Motoko, only you would turn down a nice gig making music being famous and everything so you can keep being a merc. You know some Rockerboys still act as mercs and stuff right?”

“Rarely, and that’s not what I mean… I just don’t like the idea of being famous.”

Ichi just shrugged. “You do you. But it’s preem regardless.”

“Thanks.” I said, happy that Ichi at least wasn’t going to keep poking.

We ended up partying all afternoon, and then Jun walked in, he came inside to the sight of us laughing hilariously at the stupid show that was on.

Well the others were laughing. I was mostly just groaning in horror at how terrible the jokes were.

“Jun!”

“What’s going on… You guys have another gig?” He asked as he pulled himself slowly out of his jacket and threw it on a table.

“We are celebrating. Tired?”

“Just a bit. Sensei called me in for slacking.” He replied and I nodded at that. Good. Jun needed the exercise.

“He said you should go in soon.” Jun said, and I slumped.

“I guess I can go in tomorrow…”

“So what are you celebrating? Oh, pass me those?” Jun asked as he slumped onto the couch and Malcolm handed over the carton of fried rice to Jun.

Well they called it fried rice anyways.

“Motoko sold a song to a record label today.”

“What?” Jun asked, looking up from the food, Rice falling from his chin in surprise.

“It’s not that big Jun. Remember when I met Denny at the recording place? You already knew I sold her the song, we just finalized it today. Hiromi helped me deal with all the contracts and corpo stuff. So we are celebrating her work.”

“You had to do like a contract and stuff? Why didn’t you just get the eddies?” He asked and Hiromi groaned.

“Jun! Business is more than just eddies swapping hands!”

He just shrugged. “I guess.”

“Don’t bother trying to argue with him Hiromi. Jun is a dummy.” I offered, knowing that I would get a reaction as Jun glared at me.

“Motoko.”

“Yes Jun-nii?” I chirped teasing and he glared before scoffing.

“Well it’s good. You going to try and write more songs to sell, or play? You should. Hiromi, get Motoko to put on a show or something.”

“Jun! Stop trying to make me a Rockerboy! I’m a mercenary!”

“Got it Hiromi?” Jun asked, ignoring me. I threw a pillow at him, but he just grinned ignoring my refusal.

“I’ll do my best Jun!”

“Hiromi!”

—--

The next morning as the sun rose, I changed into workout clothes and headed out for a jog. I had enjoyed the party with my chooms, but it was nice to have the whole selling the song thing not hanging over my head anymore.

Even if Hiromi refused to stop bugging me about it.

I jogged all the way down to the Sakura market, enjoying the early morning sounds of Night City. Once there I stopped for some breakfast, and then jogged back. Warmup complete. I hit the Gym area.

“Haven’t seen you in a while.” John found me an hour in, as I was using some free weights and squats.

“Been busy.”

“I see that. New chrome.”

“Yeah. Got. A. Sandy.” I told him in between squats.

“Heh. The kid’ll be happy to see that. Or she’ll be annoyed. You talked to Hayato recently?”

“Not. For. A. Bit.”

“You should call her up and set up another spar or something. She’d appreciate it.”

I heard what the real words were behind John's offer.

“I’ll. Text her. Now.” I offered and John smiled, nodding and moving away, letting me refocus.

A spar did sound nice.

*Motoko: You want to meet up for a spar?* I sent out, and nearly instantly got a response back.

*Hayato: That would be acceptable.*

I chuffed out a laugh. Hayato and her Keren were kinda funny to deal with.

*Motoko: Working out now, but I can head to the Dojo anytime.*

*Hayato: I’m already here for my morning workout. Do not keep me waiting.*

Nodding at that, I racked the weights, rose up and stretched. TIme to go play.


A/N
So I'm back! Full disclosure, stuff is pretty rough at the moment, I am getting back into the groove of writing, but I'm still a bit behind on everything. I SHOULD be good to post the next updates chapter on schedule, but if I miss it, then just know I'm taking a bit more time to get everything straightened out, so updates will hopefully resume like normal.

Thank you, for all being really cool about giving me some time, you all have no idea what has been going on in my life, and I truly appreciate it.

Comments

Hangwind

Hah! Beat the alert!

runedead56

* ERROR sandevistan activation failed* * Critical cyberware Error* * Please contact Y̴̦̤̜̎o̵̘̮͋̆̑́g̷̻̼̊͆̐͝-̷̟͊͆Ș̴͌̑͐͝ơ̵̹̥̑ͅẗ̵̨́̂h̷͙̪̼̿̓͗o̸̡̡͉̍t̵̨̥̲̰̅͝h̵͍̅͊ for additional tech support* REDACTED:" since when does Eldritch cyberware of time and space have a tech support line!?" Oh well. It's good to be back in Night City with Makoto making some musical waves.

Omni Slime

Thanks for the chapter! And no need to thank us for giving you time. Its YOUR time and I'm thankful that you're spending it by writing some amazing stories! Good luck with getting things sorted, and hope to see you again soon!

heh

Welcome back Seras! :))))

heh

Also don’t push yourself, you could take a few months off and a lot of us would still be here 💛

A Bellator

I'm glad your back, but please remember to focus on you time. You are more important than our addiction to your story. If you need a vacation or hiatus we will understand.

Webfactor8

Please don't stress. You're writing not stamping license plates. Creativity takes however much time it takes. We all can't be Brandon Sanderson accidentally writing entire* books. Thanks for the chapter!

MikeL

2 for 1. She visits Sensei and gets a nice fight.

Isley

good chappie

Homeless One

Feel free to take your time! I love your writing and, if I had the patience to wait for PTV to update during that hiatus, I can def wait for you to be in a good mental space for writing. It's clear you enjoy writing these stories and it shows in your work. That's part of why I like them so much. Wouldn't wanna change anything in that regard. Thanks for the update! Man, Vicky really doesn't wanna be a rocker. Too bad, I'm cheering for Hiromi to bully her into doing more of the same stuff!

Gessen

Thanks for the release while you’re working through the rough patch!

Jens Mortensen

Im happy you aren't dead, that would be bad.

Wednesday's Jest

100% behind you taking care of your business as a priority. Please take as much time as you need/want and if that means missing update, then the updates get missed.

vaizard27

welcome back. Thanks for the chapter and take your time. Better slow and steady than rushed and possibly causing even more stress or something

SpankMyBeef

Thank the lord for this chapter! It was great, such a nice intermediary chapter where nothing too exciting happens, but enough happens that I’m bouncing in my seat reading. Aside from that, take all the breaks you need! You are by far the most consistent author I’ve seen in a long time, and I prefer work that takes longer to make than have you churn out chapters at the cost of quality. I hope everything in life steadies out soon

JTP

Love it. Thanks for the chapter!

Duggey

Take all time you need. No ways am I going to shit talk the man writing my favourite story right now. Its why I am here to support the author of my favourite story

Bored Goddess

Life is hard. Thank you so much for the chapter and I hope life gets better soon.

Eric Hicks

Thank you for the chapter, I enjoyed it as always. And sometimes sucker punches you... only out is through. Best of luck with that.

Just A Dude

Oh no, Hitomi is dragging Motoko kicking and screaming (well, more bitching and moaning) into a life of fortune and fame, how horrible. I also can't wait to see Hayato's face when she no longer has the speed advantage as a crutch for her lower level of skill.

Dominyx Black

Always take care of yourself first Seras! Please! Much love for you but we want to keep supporting you for years! Out of enlightened self interest that is :D Now the question is, will she warn Hayato that she has a Sandy or just "spring" it on her in the Spar?

TheMartinalfa

Wohooo thanks for chap! :)

Hangwind

Eh, don't worry. I'm too lazy to do what I did this time all the time.

Paratus

Hiromi seemingly reposted = riposted? past tense: riposted; past participle: riposted 1. make a quick, clever reply to an insult or criticism.

Lukas

Take your time. Always happy when i get a mail for a new chapter. Does not matter if its after three or ten days. Could always read all 172 chapters again and not be bored.

SunyLaw1

Be well and keep your own pace.

JP

The frequent updates are great, but if you feel you need a break thats totally fine!

TyrTheFallen

I wonder if anybody will make a joke that Motoko is a female Johnny lol. She has the arms , music and is a merc don't know if johnny had anything else distinctive.

TheOne320

You take as much time as you want. The quality of your stories is miles beyond what most other people post.

FrostyDaHomeboy

I hope things smooth over for you soon. As for the chapter another nice read. I was curious what most of the deal stipulations were, but when it comes to life, especially fiction, no one wants to read an actual contract. Good to see Hiromi wheel and deal. I'm curious what the song gaining popularity will do. Will it make others hunt for more of her songs, only to find the songs from her BD's as the only other works? Will it make gigs more difficult from the next level of attention she will have now or will it open more doors to unique quests? All the same, I can't wait for the next chapter! (And more song "writing".)

SDCard

Thanks for the chapter! Welcome back, but don't stress too much about being on time. Will be fun to see the fight now that Motoko has speedware as well, since last time her skills were already superior.

Laharl365

Ooooh reading that business meeting was pretty fun! I'm curious to see how Tank will come back around for Motoko and the gang. Like... That song is iconic. I'm sure she's gonna get press for it haha. Cool stuff! Thanks for the chapter!

Arcane

Thanks for the chapter!

David Sleep

Thanks for the chapter! Small correction, something went a bit wrong with the first paragraph. First sentence seems like it should be "the next day, hiromi..." And the sentence following sort of runs on, with garage being repeated.

Hazel D

I love this chapter! I am kinda excited for Motoko to become famous. I also can't wait for Motoko to create new songs or even music bds

Dangit889

He has his iconic gun. Motoko just needs her own custom gun that will be iconic for her. And finally a drink named after her at the Afterlife.

Giperman

I've been consuming a lot of cyberpunk content lately (thanks to GitC) and I am steadily becoming more and more worried about Night City flavored fate for main characters. Is fame a good thing for Motoko? Is it bad? Last time Motoko made questionable decision, she was attacked in her home, but that resulted in a lot of positive changes afterwards. I can't really decide, should I worry or should I anticipate? Though I do believe that my concerns are misplaced, since after so long of fucking around Motoko and her chooms are still kicking. It doesn't mean that nothing will happen to them, but that just the story moving forward. Can't do this without the conflict.

Olivier Pascal

Either "Tank" will be a hit with a sub-comunity of people who enjoy really old stuff, be so old that it becomes classified as a new genre of modern music and be praised as a pioneer in the field or it will sink back to obscurity in the data stream. Either way, whatever happens I still love the chapters and hope things start to get simpler for you. Have a wonderful day and TFTC.

Giperman

Actually Ghost producing thematic music BDs like her "Inner Universe" and "The only thing they fear" with her LICENSED music is so fucking cool. This can be her 'theme'. Nobody would question you, if this is a setup. Damn.

Bat

Glad to see you back! Great chapter!

Ty

I'm just waiting for rocker girls bass player too call in sick or something so Motoko has an excuse to play. It'd have to be something like that to get her up there.

runedead56

To reveal my secret with early posting, it comes down to the fact that once seras's gets into a rhythm posts become pretty consistent in the timing only off by a few minutes every 3 days. Knowing that all I have to do is stay on the app constantly refresh it for a few minutes and then I'll see the update before the alert goes out. From there only have to post my canned response that I made before the update and voila You can get the first post most of the time.

Zeroingdark

I’d rather you take it slow than not at all, so even if you decide you want to go to 4/5 days between posts, you do you. Stay healthy and happy!

Suls87

Thanks for the new chapter!

Konner Morris

I'm expecting blowback from either NUSA shit (she assisted Arisaka with the listening post that wasn't even mentioned in 2077), or Biotech (Someone part of the edgerunner team, for example Kiwi still gets picked up as a result of Sophia's cyberware/psychosis, leads to her leaking Motoko's direct involvement.) She's going to piss of more people, like MS, so it isn't weird that she's going to make more people angry as a result of her success.

Konner Morris

Suggesting a tragic ending is hurtful and ill have you know I'll riot if that happens.

Halycon404

I'm kinda more interested to find out what happens when they hear Nirvana. It is almost literally the song of a generation and Motoko already has it. I'm of the age I got sick of it, but still. Even I recognize it for what it is.

Skierus Amisit

Thanks for the chapter! Take it at your own pace. We all know and curse the dreaded IRL. Fight on, comrade!

White Neko Knight

Gotta love when a capitalist runs into someone who really doesn't care about money.

Duke of Coffee

Hiromi doing her absolute best to get Motoko name out there. 😉 Rematch between Sandy user vs Keren user, who would win? 😜 Also Welcome Back we have missed you and your writing.

Caerold

Welcome back! The new chapter is very welcome as always (although this is probably from your small backlog from earlier). You don’t need to share specifics, just know that your fans support you and empathize with you. Life gets hard sometimes

Mark

Dude I haven’t released my next chapter to tellabug in like 6 years. You are one of the most prolific and regular writers I have ever seen. Don’t sweat it. Great chapter!

Straven

Hiromi's reaction once settled into the car was bloody adorable! Love the chapter, love the story, glad and LOVE to have another chapter to read but also still happily ready to continue waiting so you can have the time to recover and reacquire ground in this battleground.

Serina Tsukaya

Huzzah! And yeah, this guy has no idea what Motoko is capable of doing. I think she'll want to remain a songwriter though. Her musician skills might get her into places but if she becomes an outright celeb then sneaky social engineering will be much harder.

Z H

Well there is that omake about Budget Arms wanting to sponsor her for the Cut-o-Matic after "The Only Thing They Fear Is You" BD came out so I say she's got the iconic weapon checked off. Just need to have Hiromi get them to officially sponsor Motoko and make her a custom version. It's posted over of Spacebattles is anyone missed it.

Z H

I do love some nostalgic Nirvana, but I want to see her branch out into something like "Lawyers, Guns, and Money" by Warren Zevon. That or maybe "Bales of Cocaine" by Reverend Horton Heat. Both I think would get a hugely positive reception in Night City with a few tweaks to update them to current time period.

Z H

I think you both are trying way to hard to force bad canonical things into the story out of a morbid obsession with "conflict". Probably from years of reading terrible stories and thinking that's how things are supposed to go. Are either of you THOSE people that drop into slice of life stories asking "But where's the conflict? When is the story going to actually start?" Because that's cringe.

Z H

Subaru is totally listening to it while being driven around in his aircar.

Seras

Thank you. I do see all of your messages even if I don't respond every time.

Nathan Casteel

Motoko needs to play a live gig with a DaftPunk/Deadmau5/BucketHead stick to hide her identity. Maybe at cat eared motorcycle helmet with an anime version of her projected onto the visor... Her stage name could be "The Major" or "Queen Kong".

Giperman

Holy shit, rude. For starters, this is cyberpunk story, literally about creating conflict. Second, not every conflict is about confrontation of two man. Third, we already saw a lot of different conflict in the story: Man vs Man( Motoko against anyone really)Man vs. Self (Motoko against her chrome), and whatever you call Motoko against societal norms of NC, where she refuses to be morphed by their standards. (She lost, partially) In the end Conflict is driving force of the story, even in some slice of lifes. My original comment was about fearing the repercussions of her rising fame and not about the conflict itself.

Seras

You just made me look it up... Daft Punk wasn't created until 1993. I CAN USE DAFT PUNK!

Ryan

Given Motoko’s 14, and that Dogtown gig about chipping kids to be sports stars, is there an issue with Motoko chroming up so heavily so young? I can’t remember the cutoff age from the mission, but I’m wondering if she’ll always be a short queen now that she’s gotten a lot of chrome

Seras

Yes and no. Motoko is young enough there is some concern. (Also some benefits thanks to her youth.) But Motoko isn't really worried. She has rapid healing, and she plans on moving into a Full Body Conversion eventually, so it's rather moot.

Giperman

There better be some meat left on our short queen or she will be a bad hugger. Edit: is there a point where you chrome the fuck out at which you stop being you? Edit 2: I think my main problem there is the difference in the perception between flesh and chrome. Take for example BtDEM, Elaine Biomanced the fuck out of herself, where the only original piece of flesh she has is her brain. It seems you have the same plans for Motoko. But flesh is constantly changing and living and chrome is static. There some creepy factors in that.

Halycon404

In cannon Zevon's song already exists. The timeline split in the mid 80s, there's no exact date. Somewhere around '83-87. Some of the real world events happened that late as the initial split wasn't world changing big. Gorbachev and the fall of the Soviet Union more or less happened as is even though it happened after, the big change with that is the man who succeeded him didn't allow the member states to completely break off and instead turned it into a sort of quasi EU type zone for a few years till that blew up in their faces. The changes got more pronounced as it progressed. Zevon is already there and Horton Heat is a coin flip... though he probably wouldn't have hit it big in Cyberpunk's timeline. To be safe we're really talking the 90s for music divergence. Truth be told, even Nirvana is pushing it as they formed in '87-88.

SpankMyBeef

Just a quick question, where can you find that on space battles? That website is so confusing I barely can even navigate through it

Caerold

I love how excited she is by this in here and in the SB thread

Nathan Casteel

You have White Stripes - '7 nation army' (best rampage/riot), NIN/Cash - 'Hurt' (best low point), and Mazzy Star - 'Fade Into You' (best love song ever). Pretty much Rage Against the Machine's whole catalog... The rockerboy thing is fun, nicely done. GitC the movie that can never be made due to song rights alone. p.s. 'Gunsmith Cats: Bulletproof' or 'The Cruel Angel's Thesis', would be a funny follow ups if Denny wants more anime openings.

Giperman

Btw did Motoko used her real name for the song? Not the 'Ghost' pseudonym? Wouldn't it be much safer that way?

Hangwind

I use the fact that RRs internal clocks are slightly faster than Patreon's.

Samuel Andersen

This series is like crack I love it the wait has been killing me, thank you so much.

Duke of Coffee

Ah yes Elaine the living biomancer healer, stop reading when it got boring. Anyway Motoko will eventually become what the Major from Ghost in the Shell became, a full cyborg capable of switching bodies if needed.

obsidianrandom .

I love your post speed but if you went to 1 a month I'd still support these wonderful stories. Take your time and put your life first. We're rooting for you!

Giperman

Regardless the blowback on her, neither NUSA nor Biotech are likely. She didn't left any traces at the outpost, not even fixers knows about it. And raffen think it was an army. And she is entirely unrelated to Biotech gig, so there's that.

Giperman

Haven't seen Ghost in the Shell (very tempted to watch it after binge reading GiTC). How does one deal with the lack of humanity in full cyborg body? Food, sex, other whims, all of the small things living body has to deal with, small things Motoko has trouble dealing with after they are gone (stiff neck or shoulders, which are entirely phantom feelings)? If you are a fully cybernetic would you be even left with any true desires? Or would her brain be left as the only thing intact? Would it be like a V with her hormonal implants regulating her mood? I know most of the time it doesn't show in Cyberpunk but I am pretty sure even most chromed out dudes have a lot of flesh in their body left. Except for the most extreme cases, such as obviously Adam Smasher, who is extremely creepy because of it.

Giperman

Also one last thing, how would full body conversion interact with her sleep regeneration? She can't repair dents and leaks in her cyberware with it, isn't she? Damn, it looks like I am complaining a lot, but this is just an array of questions that I've collected after reading the novel and comments to it, and not a complains of criticism. I hope it doesn't come off as extremely annoying. Edit: Maybe body 11, or combination of every stat in 11 would allow her to heal her chrome(non critical) after the sleep?

Halycon404

GiTS really isn't about that and doesn't explore it too much. GiTS is a weird IP. The manga isn't actually that long. It spawned more movies, games, and anime by far than the original manga should account for with it's length. What GiTS turned into is a setting for other people to tell stories about whatever they wanted. The Major is a strong enough character and the purpose Section 9 fills inside the world gives the authors who came after a lot of latitude in where they could take it. The two movies are philosophical explorations of what it means to be yourself and how to grow in a world with this type of technology(fair warning, the second one is really weird). The games are all over the place. The anime is probably closest in tone to the original manga but they are more about societal changes than Cyberpunk is, the anime is probably the most care free and fun of them all too.

Fortunis

Hahaha, Hiromi does Hiromi things, and Eddies begin to flow. I love it. Jun is right, though. It'd be fucking HILARIOUS if Hiromi got Motoko to put on a full show for family and friends and then secretly recorded it and used it as bait for the labels to turn her in to a real Rockerboy. Gotta admit I like the whole slice of life aspect to Motoko's downtime. I'd especially love seeing the look on their neighbors face when she finds out Motoko's got a song sale 😆 🤣

Duke of Coffee

Heh Giperman I understand your pain of trying to get all those questions answered, but too much realism gripes stories like Seras, the author aims to be kinda slice of life as a resident/Solo Merc of Night City. 😉 Although look at Smasher, he is nothing more than a brain in jar borg whose job is to be a attack dog of Arasaka.

Giperman

Just hope my heap of overly serious questions doesn't annoy anyone. I think just the long wait caused me to over analyze the plot. I think I need to be less serious about it. It just sometimes hard for me to focus on positive things (which there are plenty and would be hard to recount) an much easier to focus on something more serious.

Giperman

There is so much I love about this fiction. The sibling energy is so realistic. I myself have a sibling, and while we are not the cuddly type like Motoko and Jun we also change from sibling affection to an annoying gremlin mode in a flip of a switch all the time. I love Motoko infinite well of confidence. It is quite refreshing to have a protagonist so confident in their abilities throughout the chapters. Even at the very beginning Motoko was absolutely sure that she would be a total death machine later on and just need to grind. Love it. I also love how despite this being a fanfiction you wrote absolutely unique story and not just an extension of existing storyline (Edgerunners ending doesn't count). Motoko and her friends are facing and creating their own problems, not just butting in on original Cyberpunk plot all the time. The slice of life part is absolutely great. It is what was lacking in the game (which is fair) and somewhat represented in the anime. The little details of their lives are feeling right in place and not just fillers. The balance between occasional battles and their normal lives is well done. I still have some gripes with full body conversion plans or other minor things, but I am not an author and you know better what do YOU want from YOUR novel. Since you've come so far with such an amazing novel there's no one that should dictate to you how to write your stuff.

EnderScroll

Can’t wait until she hears her music on the radio and is forced to accept her fate.

Seras

Thank you! I really appreciate your comment here. Hopefully when I get to the full body conversion it ends up being something you like anyways!

Giperman

There are more of the things that I love about this novel. Like your chatacters being dynamic and changing. But that would take another four paragraph comment. About full body conversion. I think my problem stems from the conventional media where robots are evil and cyborgs are very close to said robots. (Terminator, Matrix and the main contender for first place of cause of my childhood nightmares: Dr. Who.) But I've already talked about my problems with this in other comments under this post, so I won't rant.

Memory Dump

Saras! I need you to answer this very, very, very important question! The fate of the Universe is depends on your prompt response! Does Motoko still have the nose hole for the nose ring from the first chapter?!

Seras

Funnily enough I read through the first chapter a few days ago and remembered I mentioned that and had a laugh. No, it's been over a year since Motoko had anything in there, and it's healed up by now. There is probably a small bit there where it used to be, but it's likely unnoticeable unless you are close to her.

Konner Morris

Kinda weird, but okay. At the end of the day, this is Seras' story. What she writes, how she writes it, it's all up to her. When I leave a comment theorizing the path of a story, for example this one, I do it from a place of 'this would be cool of this happened.' I have no actual personal stakes of it actually being written, nor will I actually be negatively impacted if it doesn't. I am purely commenting and taking any measure of my words beyond face value is honestly ridiculous.

Giperman

Regardless the happening. I am very often morally invest in various fictional characters, because this investment makes story much more entertaining. And oftentimes is unconscious decision based on character appeal to me. I feel sad when something bad happening to long-standing character and feel good when something good happened. Same thing as watching e-sports. You are rooting for your favorite person, even if you know you have zero impact on their success. As for comments, well, that one is easy and pretty similar to the first one. Words hurt. Constructive criticism is hard and being impartial is even harder.

Giperman

I like Hayato and her instant replies thanks to keren. Very funny. She could be a god gamer. I dare to assume Motoko would spend next few chapters adapting to her chrome. When would she adapt to her optics? Edit: my bad her optics at least has 1 level in adaptation. Has she considered an upgrade then? Also it's curious how Motoko haven't attempted to heavily modify any of her guns. Make an iconic one so to say. Would bring shit ton of exp.

TheDudeAbides

She's learning tech, and will have tachikomas around, she'll be able to repair damage, probably even faster than sleeping for 8 hours. The problem is that she won't be able to use maxdocs during a fight. She will be so much more resilient so it's a trade off.