The Secret Intruder Chapter 2 of 4 (Patreon)

Chapter 2.

Jeremy returned to Susan's home. He ate dinner with the family. He sat across from Maxine. He couldn't keep his eyes off her chest. He realized he would share a room with Maxine. Maybe he would be able to see her naked or at least close to naked. That is what he was waiting for.

Grace was said before dinner. Everyone said AMEN!

After dinner, mamma took Jeremy aside for some private prayer.

“Repeat after me,” mamma dictated.

“Yes, momma.”

“Dear Lord, I promise to always be a good Christian girl. I promise to be a lady at all times...”

Jeremy repeated what he heard. He didn't mind saying that. He wasn't going to be here long. One peek at Maxine naked and he would be out of here.

“Dear Lord, I promise to always be a good Christian girl. I promise to be a lady at all times.”

Continuing mamma dictated, “I will never do anything that boys typically do.”

“I will never do anything that boys typically do,” he repeated.

Finally, mamma dictated, “I will always look, think and act like a lady at all times.”

“I will always look, think and act like a lady at all times.”

“AMEN!”

“AMEN!”

Jeremy walked to the room Susan shared with Maxine. Maxine didn't disappoint, she got undressed right in front of Jeremy. If Jeremy had a dick, it would be as hard as possible. It was something he would want to remember forever.

Then Jeremy realized, he had Susan's iPhone. He took it out and took a picture of Maxine. It was a great shot. She didn't even notice.

Jeremy forwarded the picture to his own email and then erased the original for his own protection.

It was time to go home.

Jeremy tried to back out of Susan's body, but something was blocking his way. The 'door' behind him had been closed somehow. He couldn't get through it. He was stuck.

Maxine was finally dressed when she looked over. There was a look of horror on Jeremy's face.

“What are you doing?” Maxine asked.

“Umm, nothing.”

“I thought you were taking pictures.”

“Yeah, I'm sorry,” Jeremy told her. He had been caught taking pictures of Maxine while she wasn't fully dressed. But Maxine didn't mind. Susan had seen her naked countless times before.

“If you are going to take pictures, take proper ones.” Maxine posed for her sister. She had a big smile on her face and posed her body in a suggestive, but playful way.

Jeremy didn't do anything.

“Don't you want to take my picture?” Maxine said without breaking her smile.

“Yeah, sure.”

Jeremy took another picture.

“How about one like this?” Maxine posed in a different way. Her chest was thrust out this time.

Jeremy didn't want to take any more pictures. He had other concerns. He couldn't back out of Susan's body.

“Girls it's time for bed. Get ready and don't forget to say your prayers,” Mother called out.

“OK!” Maxine replied.

Maxine proceeded into the bathroom to finish up.

Jeremy knew he would have to play the part until he return to his own body. He walked over to what he assumed was the bureau that belonged to Susan and looked through the drawers for some nightwear.

He started at the top and worked his way down. In the fourth drawer, he found what he was looking for. There were several nightgowns as well as hosiery in this drawer. He picked out the first nightgown he saw. It was yellow and long enough to descend to his calves.

In the bottom drawer were panties, training bras, and other lingerie. He selected a pair of panties at random.

Jeremy could see Maxine in the bathroom. The door was opened. She was brushing her hair.

Jeremy felt embarrassed. He didn't want to change when Maxine could see him. But he didn't have any alternative. He pulled off his top and then stepped out of his skirt. He sat on the bed and pulled off his socks. His bra was next. He pulled his bra off like a t-shirt. He was naked except for his panties.

“Do I have to change my panties?” he mused. He wasn't sure.

He pulled his panties off quickly and put the clean pair on just as fast. He didn't want to be seen naked. Then he stood up and pulled the nightgown over his head.

Once it was on his body, Jeremy took a longer look at it. The nightgown was yellow but two-toned with horizontal stripes. A sleepy kitty print was displayed throughout. The neck was round. The trim was ruffled, and it descended to his upper calf.

“All done,” Maxine said.

“Yeah, sure.”

“Don't you want to brush your teeth?”

“Yeah, right. One second.”

Jeremy walked towards the bathroom.

“Hey, put your clothes in the hamper!” Maxine called out.

Jeremy fetched Susan's soiled apparel and took them with him to the bathroom. He closed the bathroom door.

When Jeremy turned on the water to brush his teeth, he realized he had to pee. He didn't think about that before. He would have to pee like a girl. He didn't have any choice. He was going to wait until after he finished brushing his teeth, but the sound of the running water made his need more urgent.

Jeremy finished up his teeth and moved to the toilet. He pulled his nightgown up from his waist. He had to pull it a second time to get it passed his crotch. Then while holding his nightgown up with one hand, he pulled his panties down with the other. He sat on the bowl.

“Was he sitting on his nightgown?” He wasn't sure. He pulled it up again to double check. He didn't want to pee on it by mistake.

He flexed his urinary muscles and forced the pee out. It splashed loudly into the toilet. The sound worried him. He didn't want Maxine to hear him pee. Maxine didn't care though.

Soon it was over. Jeremy vaguely knew that girls wiped after peeing. He grabbed some toilet paper from the roll. It was a goodly amount, as much as when he would wipe his own ass. Jeremy balled it up and placed the tissue between his legs and wiped himself, pulling the tissue forward. He let it fall into the bowl.

“Should I wipe again?”

“Naa once is enough.”

He stood up and reached down to pull his panties up. Then he let his gown fall into place.

Jeremy looked at himself in the bathroom mirror. He could see the pretty girl who was Susan looking back at him. She had a worried look on her face. Jeremy was very worried. He didn't know what to do or what was to become of himself.

“I shouldn't have climbed the stairs! I shouldn't have entered the door! I should have left immediately and never done it again once I found out what was happening! I should have...I should have...I should have!!!”

Jeremy finally exited the bathroom. Maxine was kneeling by her bed. It was clear she was praying.

Jeremy did the same. This was the first time in his life he prayed at night.

“Dear God,” he began. Susan would have started with 'Dear Jesus,' not that he had any way of knowing this fact.

“If you let me out of this and return me to my own body, I will be good in every way. I swear to God. I mean to you. I mean. You know what I mean!”

Jeremy got into bed. He and Maxine slept on twin-size beds that were parallel to each other which were separated by a night table. On the night table was a lamp on a doily. The overhead light had been turned off. The lamp was the only light in the room beside the illumination from outside. Maxine turned off the light when Jeremy got under the covers.

“Susan?” Maxine asked.

“Yeah.”

“Mom gave you the it's time to be a lady talk?”

“I guess she did.”

“She did that when I was your age too.”

“You swore to Jesus?”

“Yes.”

“Me too.”

“OK.”

“Your life is going to change. But it'll be for the better. You'll learn so many things. Mom will teach you how-to put-on makeup. I'll help too. Pretty soon you will have your first period. I know it's a little scary. You'll get used to it...”

Jeremy listened. Maxine wanted to calm her sister, but Jeremy was getting more and more anxious.

“...Once you know your place and god's plan everything will just work out.”

“It will?”

“Yeah, you know I'm getting married?”

“Married? I thought you were only sixteen.”

“Yeah, when I'm eighteen. I'm marrying a boy named John.”

“Do you love him?”

“I've never met him. Dad arranged it. As soon as I turn eighteen, I'm marrying John. I hope to have my first baby by the time I'm nineteen. I'm going to have ten children at least.”

“Ten?”

“Yeah, it's god's plan. I'm going to have as many children as possible. You know mom had difficulty getting pregnant. That's why there is such a big gap in our ages. She tried and tried and couldn't. Until one joyous day, she had you.”

“I don't think God's plan is for me to have lots of children.”

“Before you are born God makes a plan for you, there is no way around it.”

“I'm just saying that his plan for me couldn't have been for me to have children. I don't think I want that.”

“You're very young. You don't know what you want. It's all for the best, believe me.”

“I'm not as young as you think I am. I really can't imagine myself having children.”

“You'll see. It'll be wonderful. Can I tell you something?”

“What?”

“I saw it in a dream. You and me, we are going to have lots and lots of children. Our children will all be friends and love each other.”

“That was just a dream.”

“No, it was a premonition. I saw it. You climbed the stairs one by one until you saw the light. Then your whole life changed. You were afraid at first, but you pressed forward. You gave up trying to be like a boy and accepted your true self. You became the girl you were supposed to be. The one that would become a lady. You weren't always a girl, not really, but God gave you the path and now you are. You are on God's path now. There isn't any turning back. Praise the Lord.”

“Maybe I'll be different when I'm older,” Jeremy said. He meant that he would get out of this life. Then the real Susan will be back, and she can have many children. But what did Maxine mean when she said that he would climb stairs and see the light? That is sort of what happened. That is how he ended up here.

Maxine was joyful explaining her life and what was to become of Jeremy's. Jeremy didn't like to hear what was going to happen. He didn't have any choice in the matter. Would he have to get married and start having children at eighteen? If he didn't find a way out, he thought he would. Jeremy was going to be taught. 'Taught' wasn't the proper word. He was going to be 'trained' to be a good Christian wife and mother and he didn't have any say in it.

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