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So as for this page I could use some feedback because I tried some things with the writing I'm not experienced with. I've heard that when writing a movie script, you don't want to spell out everything in the plot, as it's far more entertaining to give the audience a chance to put the pieces together themselves. Now, I'm not going to give you the chance if you're reading this in this case because I want feedback to know if what I was going for worked here. But based on what I hear back from you I'm sure I'll learn enough so that I don't have to ask next time.
So case in point: we've had a time skip between chapters, presenting a great chance to let readers piece together what happened in the missing time through conversation with the characters. So here, it's shown that Royce knows all about Switch, even though I never had a scene of Casey telling him.
To me, it seems natural enough to deduce that she told him during the missing time between chapters. She's already alluded to having an imaginary friend to him, as well as spelled out that she can tell him things she can't tell anyone else. Also last we left them it was clear that (whether she wanted to admit it or not) the two of them were becoming closer, so to me it makes sense that she would eventually have no secrets from him and a full scene of her explaining Switch to Royce wasn't necessary to show.
But the question is, am I right? Or am I going to see a dozen comments from readers wondering if pages are missing on the sites where I'm not the poster and this little blog space doesn't exist? Either way I'm sure this will make me a better writer and thanks for following along this far! :D