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Chapter 98: Beneath the Surface (Patreon)

Published:
2019-04-17 00:58:32
Imported:
2022-02

Content

https://www.fictionpress.com/s/2961893/98/Mother-of-Learning

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/21220/mother-of-learning/chapter/353454/98-beneath-the-surface

Well, here it is my dear patrons. Very late, but the new chapter is here. As I said in the delay announcement, the chapters are getting very hard to write. We're very close to the end and I don't want to bungle that.

Anyway... hopefully it's fun to read. Enjoy.

Comments

Anonymous

It’s here!!!

Anonymous

Great chapter, I love this story so much, and that has not changed since I started.

Kilo181

yay novelty <3

Anonymous

Yes! This chapter was fantastic.

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter

wanderer117

Yay, more Novelty screen time! Great chapter, well worth the wait. I did notice a few typos, original text then my suggested correction. Even though this was just calm before the storm, Even though this was just the calm before the storm, Of course, he couldn’t really justify wasting a time right now, Of course, he couldn’t really justify wasting any time right now, And the aranea had been his only friend And the aranea had been his only friends Zorian let her to her exploration. Zorian left her to her exploration. The metal plate in front of his was The metal plate in front of him was Extended his arm between them and let it and willed it to unravel Extended his arm between them and willed it to unravel // or let it unravel but not both Ilsa was Imaya’s best friend, so she would probably trust her if she said Imaya had accompany them and hide for a few days. Ilsa was Imaya’s best friend, so she would probably trust her if she said Imaya had to accompany them and hide for a few days. // Additionally this is implying that Ilsa will be convincing Imaya which is contradicted by That way, when he and Imaya came knocking to people and told them that they had to evacuate out of the city for a few days because an attack was imminent, they would hopefully be more open to the idea. That way, when he and Imaya came knocking and told them that they had to evacuate out of the city for a few days because an attack was imminent, they would hopefully be more open to the idea. // Which implies that Xvim and Imaya will be doing the persuading. Attend our institution far more easily in the past Attend our institution far more easily than in the past Kirielle had already painted face on it Kirielle had already painted a face on it his experiences as public as possible as he wanted to make them. his experiences as public as he wanted to make them. It would be probably very convenient It would probably be very convenient Even with them, he was definitely not looking forward for that conversation … Even with them, he was definitely not looking forward to that conversation …

Anonymous

I'm not sure why, but this chapter was incredibly satisfying. Maybe it was simply very process and character oriented?

nobody103
>>21849455

I always feel kind of uncertain when writing and publishing chapters like this, since they aren't really revealing much new information, there is no action, etc... but I do think they're important in showing character relations, pacing, and various other details, so I keep putting them in. I'm glad there are people who like them.

Brent

Well worth the wait. Thanks for the chapter. I can't imagine how hard it is to juggle this much foreshadowing without letting too much slip.

Matthew M
>>21849455

Chapter was great; anything to do with magic creation ranks highly in terms of satisfaction, personally, even if it isn’t loading the story with new points. Also, Novelty. I think you’re spot on about the pacing and characters

Andrew

Thank you!

Anonymous

If Novelty dies (again), I'm gonna cry

Anonymous

Simulacrum Zoriana dispelled his hand and again called her. I wonder, is this advantage only a simulacrum? I suppose an ordinary magician, having lost his hand, could not replace it with ectoplasm. Although, rather, he could, but he will have to be managed with the help of unstructured magic, and not in the old manner, by means of nerves. And this is much more complicated, right?

nobody103
>>22141032

Yes, it's much easier for a simulacrum to restore lost limbs and other damage, since they have no real internal structure and are just a mass of ectoplasm. A real person could replace their lost hand with an ectoplasmic one, but as you say... it would not be controlled by nerves. Additionally, if the mage is trying to replace the hand immediately after losing it, there are problems with blood loss, pain, etc. None of which would be solved by their brand new ectoplasmic hand.

Anonymous

This was a great read! Thanks so much for all the great writing.

Adrien Matricon

Hello, I just read the chapter (thanks a lot, it was great!), and I have spotted quite a few typos to add to your list: "he couldn’t really justify wasting a time right now" [wasting time] "when he opened his eyes again the metal plate in front of his was densely covered in spell formula markings" [him] "A conspiracy this grant and far-reaching should be impossible to pull off" [grand] "she would probably trust her if she said Imaya had accompany them and hide for a few days" had [to] "That way, when he and Imaya came knocking" [Ilsa] (I think) "could attend our institution far more easily in the past" [than] in the past "Kirielle had already painted face on it" [a] face "I think your sister’s friends are going to very jealous of her" to [be] very jealous "The contract strong suggested" [strongly] "he was definitely not looking forward for that conversation" looking forward [to] Have a nice day!