Choose Your Own Adventure (Unfinished) (Patreon)

I need to test to see if this works anyway, but I figured you guys could help me out with the CYOA Story. I'm just having the hardest time getting anything done on it, and I don't know why. 

Let me know if you can view it, that's the most important thing currently, and if so let me know what you think of the choices and story so far.