W.I.P. Info: Do you like dominant futas?? + Some more images from TDK 2.0 + Planes for next month! (Patreon)

I had a shitty month. Real Life issues interfered with my work and I couldn't finish the at least 10 pages I wanted for DOM vs. HWR to release this month. Next month I'll work harder to bring you more content!

I also had to deal with a problem in the story continuity... You see, the three pages that show Shigeru in his workplace weren't originally planned. Shigeru wasn't going to appear again till almost the end of the first chapter. However, while I was working on the renders, I realize the whole info-dumping of Ritsuko explaining everything to the old man was ruining the pacing of the story. In the end, I realized showing Shigeru's inner thoughts in more depth will contribute to the story in the long run (while avoiding that info-dumping)... but as a result, I had to discard some of the work I have already done and work on a scene I wasn't planning (those 3 pages). I'm satisfied with the final result though. I guess this is all part of a learning process (making manga)... but let's go in-depth with the images I'm posting...

The first image is the draft for the cover of the first chapter of DOM vs. HWR. Since we are reaching the end of the first chapter I thought it was a good idea to start working on it. It's not ready yet. I need to adjust the pose and also work on the position (the old man's left foot is out of the bed) and the camera angle, but I thought you might like to have a first glance at it.

TDK 2.0

The next batch of images is from TDK 2.0. The first image is an alternative pose for the bathroom scene (I don't think it's a spoiler because you all know they are having sex in the bathroom, right!?). I originally thought of a standing doggy, having Kanon pressed against the bathroom door, but I wanted to experiment with some alternative pose, a pose in which Yukihiro and Kanon are facing each other. I wanted to see how it looked, but I think it lacks impact (especially because the bathroom scene is hardcore!). Maybe if Yukihiro is lifting her and pressing her against the door... I'll try that, see how it looks and decide later.

As I said in a prior post I'm not only working on finishing the changing room scene but also working on other scenes in the game. That way when the changing room scene is finished, I can just sweep through the rest of the scenes since I have the base CG ready (I'll just need to work on the variations and expressions). I have another sex scene ready... but I can't show you that because it will be a major spoiler! You'll need to wait till release.

The next batch of images is everything I can show you from the changing room scene without spoilers. There are a lot more of course, already more than 50 in the changing room alone. Most of them are already programmed into the game. The problem with the changing room scene is that I have to change pose and expressions every few lines for the scene to come alive! I can just skip all that work with some generic CGs, but the scene will lose a lot if I did. I already took the trouble of making Kanon come alive in the first part of the game (Hiro's POV) by taking care of changing her expression/pose accordingly, so I think I should do the same in Kanon's POV. I might skip that in my next visual novel, so you can get a release much faster!

I'm also taking all the trouble because I want to show you what Yukihiro and Kanon's relationship is, but especially what kind of character Yukihiro is. I think I already told you but I hate the typical playboy/yarichin characters in NTR. I'm trying to flesh out Yukihiro into an interesting character! He's a playboy, alright?... but not your shallow playboy that appears in pretty much every NTR story. He has motivations, problems, desires, etc... just like everyone else (not your boring playboy who only thinks about having sex with the heroine). I think it will pay off in the long run, especially in the sequel, Trip... I think it will be much more interesting if you can figure out the characters (to some degree) by then. I'm trying to give you a high-quality VN regarding storytelling. I hope you understand and forgive me for taking so long. You won't be disappointed with the final result!

There are also some images for the changing room scene that are tricky to make. Like this one:

I needed 2 Kanons (one invisible) to make that render. Some swimsuits have half-nude stages, some don't... That particular swimsuit doesn't, so I needed to mix two swimsuits to create the effect of her taking that swimsuit off. I want you to be able to watch Kanon changing swimsuits along the scene, but there are some instances I'm having trouble with (one in particular in which Kanon is taking the bottom off)... it's getting quite problematic to overlap the 2 Kanons, so if I can't make it right in the next few days I'll skip that particular image.

Enter Suzuka!! (Dominant/Wife Stealling/Futanari Queen!!)

I always wanted to make a NTR story with a dominant futanari. I planned on it from the very start: Suzuka (the hidden character from TDK) was always meant to be a Futanari. Her name (Itami Suzuka) is a homage to a character with the same name from Kagerou1991 (she appears in the Misty Moon Metropolis magazines and the Spermatank manga). The problem was I wasn't sure what kind of story to make... until last month's short CG with Sophie. I wondered what if instead of the old man I used Suzuka... and suddenly the story I wanted to make became clear!

The first 4 images with Suzuka and Sophie were for a short manga (4 pages) based on last month's CG with Sophie, to introduce Suzuka to you, but then I thought it will be a waste to make that kind of story with Suzuka, so I discarded that scenario (for now). A futanari is perfect to pass under the husband's radar, so it will be a waste to show the husband how much she is owning his wife (at least from the beginning).

The last two images from this post are a quick draft I made. Keep in mind they are just "rough sketches" (they need a lot of work), but doing that allows me to envision more clearly what I want to make (and sometimes if it's possible). I think a locked camera angle with both POVs (husband's and wife's) with lots of stealth/hidden sex situations will be perfect for that kind of story, though I'm still unsure if to make it into a manga, CG, or Visual Novel.

So I might be working on that story in the future, but don't worry, it won't be until I finish Kanon's Valentine first! (since I already have a lot of unfinished stories to work on).

Next months plans

I'll keep working on TDK 2.0 and DOM vs. HWR next month. The latter is in the final stretch. I'm calculating around 60 pages, so if I can complete at least 10 more pages next month, the first chapter will be finished by January. Whether I can complete it by then or not, I'll be working on Kanon's Valentine in February because I think it will be neat to release the remaining two chapters in February and March respectively (The White Day chapter in March will fit the timing perfectly!!). I'll use all the experience I gained this year in making manga to do my best for that to happen!... And if I can complete TDK 2.0 by then (or before) I'll probably orgasm by sheer feeling of accomplishment!!... Ahem... S-sorry for that... I got too excited in my delusions/hopes...

So that's it for another long-ass W.I.P. info post. I hope you didn't get too bored with it. I'm always eager to hear your thoughts, so hit me with them. Do you like futa NTR? Should I use Sophie or maybe another character for that? (Ririka is another option, but maybe I should create a new character)... Which kind of pose would you like for the bathroom scene? What do you think about DOM vs. HWR cover? Who do you think will win the World Cup?... 

Thanks a lot for your support and stay healthy!!