Dirty Old Man vs. Hot Wife Ritsuko Chapter 1 pages 20-28 (Patreon)

I initially thought the first chapter of DOM will be around 30 pages, but it seems it will easily reach around 50 (based on my estimates of the content in the remaining pages). The next chapters will be shorter (more episodic and to the point), but I wanted this first chapter to set the foundation of the story and the characters' relationships, while at the same time leaving some unanswered questions floating around (for future chapters).

About the old man's slang:

I don't really read/play western adult media (hentai). I'm much more familiar with Japanese manga/VN/CG, and I read them in Japanese. My Japanese is not the best, but in other similar mangas, I noticed the elder using some old slang for some words. I tried to make the old man do this, but it's hard to convey the feeling in the same way similar characters do in Japanese manga. So, I'm unsure if to continue to do this or change it to something more standard.

Whang: It's the term the old man is using instead of Cock. I saw elders use the terms Mara (まら) or even Musuko (むすこ - means "son") instead of the most common Chinpo (チンポ - Cock/Penis).

Snatch: It's the term the old man is using instead of Pussy (おまんこ).

Umu: This is some kind of filler/pet word. A word the old man uses often (like a habit). It means: "Hmm; I see". The old man mostly uses it to assert himself/his own words. The Japanese word for it is Fumu (ふむ), but it doesn't sound right in English, so I made up a word combining that with "Mmmh" (that sounds more natural)... Hence: Umu!

I'll probably make an afterward page explaining all this, but what do you think? Do you think I should continue to use that kind of slang for the genitalia or should I change it for something more standard? (I'm keeping the "Umu" though).

I'll be posting the textless version in some moments (for the above Tiers).

Now I'll get back to work on TDK 2.0 for the next 2 weeks or so... Enjoy!!

Download Links:

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https://drive.google.com/file/d/1dcvTmhBwhqENudKoNsvNReoSDpSC4fK2/view?usp=sharing