Dirty Old Man vs. Hot Wife Ritsuko Chapter 1 pages 1-16 (Patreon)

I'm really sorry for making you wait till the last day... This will be the last time I promise!! I really wanted to finish till page 21 but I couldn't finish the base starting pose for the next page (17)... I was working on it till the last minute to see if I could at least add one more page!!... I was finally getting it right!!... but it still needs more work!! + adding blurring effects + plus the whole editing job in CSP + corrections... etc... I just had to face reality and realize I wasn't gonna make it... So I'll have to keep working on it next month. Here is the raw by the way:

I'm aware I need to get much much faster if I want to make manga... but even though it's not always easy I'm getting the hang of it. More on that in the post I'll make in a few more minutes about my plans for next month (with a few W.I.P. concept images I was working on in the past... just like 3 or 4).

I'm also posting the textless version of the manga (thus far) for the Antagonist Tier ($5) and above in a few more minutes. I'm also including a few unused/uncropped images in there (as a bonus... just a few, a handful of them).

Keep in mind this is still a work in progress, so there might be some corrections to make in the future (like the clipping hair in the last panel of page 13). Also, I'm still not totally convinced by the Old Man speech, so I might change some of it for the final version: Just the "unimportant" stuff (the not story-related stuff... like how much he's enjoying Ritsuko's body)... I'll leave the "important" stuff pretty much untouched (like the conversation they're having).

Also... in case you're wondering: "Satan" is a dog! That's something it was gonna be explained on the next page... but since I couldn't include that page in this release, I'm making the clarification here...

Maybe the name (Satan) is a little bit "strong"... I still can change it before the final release... What do you think?!... I came out with that name right away, it just sounded right to me: "I need a dog for this story... and I need a name for that dog... Mmmh... given the kind of dog he is then... Stan will be perfect for him!!" (something like that). What do you think?!

As you know, I'm always open to suggestions and critics, so feel free to share your thoughts.

DOWNLOAD LINKS:

https://mega.nz/file/0I82XQyA#hAysHomRyAD5HkkAwHaW7MYBJB6x7VCwR7qKfD3Kay0

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1o-A9OkhaQl2SfkFI8voi7UnMLuvhG5dz/view?usp=sharing