WIP: My Crush!! (The concept for...) and Tomoe's Room... (Patreon)

I wanted to post this before, but I wasn’t 100% sure of it… To be honest, I’m still not 100% sure, this idea will be hard to make, but, I can’t beat around the bush forever. I need to start my next project as soon as possible.

I was actually gonna discard MY CRUSH altogether since I couldn’t come up with anything past a certain point. The story was all around the place anyway. I liked the concept, but I didn’t really like the way the story was unfolding.

But then I had this other story about a Senpai in the athletic club and also a neighbor of the MC that was all around the place. Mainly the character of Sora (Tomboy-chan) was all around the place for the story to work… So at some point, I thought: What if I add Sophie as the neighbor instead of making Sora a character that doesn’t make sense… And suddenly everything started to fit into place. That’s how this version of My Crush came to be: A mix between those two stories.

Take into account that all the images are still a work in progress, so they might have some imperfections. Also, I used premade characters for the males. I often create a base CG before writing the scenes to have a feel for the story and also to see if what I'm picturing can actually be done (sometimes I'm forced to change it because I can't make the renders for it). Consider the images as references, that might or might not change a little or a lot.

Without further ado, I present you the idea for: My Crush!! – First Love Sora Senpai vs. Slutty Neighbor Sophie (tentative title).

MY CRUSH

The main idea is a love triangle between these three characters:

MC (namable)

A brand new college student with hopes and dreams, and the promise of romance and life-long lasting experiences in this new stage of his life. He doesn’t want to repeat the same mistakes from his uneventful high-school life. To that end, his main goal is to get himself a cute girlfriend. This time, he wants to seize the opportunities he let go before (because of a lack of courage or fear). This is a new beginning for him! In his mind, the spring of his youth is just about to start!!

Sora (Tomboy-chan):

(By the way, this is the tanned version of Sora... It makes sense she's tanned if she's training in the Athletic Club... but I'm still not liking the result. I'll make a few more attempts and if I'm not convinced, I might disregard the tan.)

She’s an energetic and cheerful girl. She was the MC’s first love when he was in elementary school. He joined the athletic club back then encouraged by her. They got separated when they entered middle school, but unexpectedly after so many years, they are now meeting again in college, and suddenly, those long-forgotten feelings of childhood pure love started to bloom once again in the MC’s heart.

MC: “This is fate, it has to be fate!! I mean, what are the chances?!... This was meant to be!!”

Sophie:

A half-Japanese/half-English girl who lives in the same apartment complex as the MC. She’s always wearing revealing clothes and seems to have taken a liking to teasing the MC at every chance she gets. In the MC’s eyes, she’s trouble!! The kind of girl that flirts with him only to ask for some kind of favor. But at the same time, he can’t help to feel a special chemistry between them.

MC: “Don’t fall for a slutty girl!!... She will only break my heart and make me suffer!!”.

THE CONCEPT

I want to create a story in which the player feels torn between these two girls… Making it hard to choose between one or the other. There's something endearing about love triangles in rom-coms, especially in anime ones. I want you to experience the love triangle through the MC’s POV. A story of youth, romance, and illusion… but of course, also NTR… and the more endearing I can make the story, the harder the NTR will hit.

Near the beginning, the MC will find out by mere chance that the coach is having an affair with one of the club members. With whom?!... In his heart, he can’t conceive the idea of her being Sora… but in his mind, there is doubt. He needs to make sure.

So he starts to hide in that storage room, which seems to be the love nest of the peculiar couple, in an attempt to find out… but his visibility is very poor from the spot he hides… It’s hard to tell… If he could just catch a glimpse of the girl’s face!!...

On the other hand, there is Sophie. The MC is convinced she’s the kind of girl who sleeps around, but he can’t be a hundred percent sure. If her words and actions are taken at face value, then she might be the 'slut' the MC thinks she is... but that would also mean she might harbor genuine feelings for him. Sophie is a mystery to the MC, which only serves to fuel his interest in her.

Through the game, the player (you) will have to choose at different parts of the story between one or the other heroine. These choices won’t change the main story. At most, they will lead you to brief branches. The idea is for the MC to decide between one of the heroines. Who of them is his perfect dream girl?

I won’t make any promises, but depending on the player’s choices and who the MC picks at the end there will be different endings (again, that’s the idea, but I’m not making any promises… it all depends if I can pull that off).

This will be Mystery NTR (I think… or rather, that’s the idea), but I don’t want the player to have to wait till the end of the MC’s POV to watch the sex scenes. So I came up with something in between. I don’t know if it will work. I know that showing the sex in the MC’s POV betrays the point of mystery NTR… but maybe it can still be effective if shown in a way that still makes you wonder…

I think you'll understand better once I start to publish the builds, but I want to flirt with the concept of hidden sex in plain view, along with the MC's imagination. Meaning, that either the MC will see the sex but not the girl's face, or he will see the girl's face but not the sex (at least in Sora's case). And since he can't see the sex, he can't be 100% certain. His mind might be playing tricks on him... He might be filling the blanks with things that are not really happening... Is it all in his mind?... If I can make you doubt a little or a lot, then I'll fulfill my goal with this story. In the end, things might be different from what the MC is imagining.

In Sophie's case... to be honest, I'm still unsure, but might be a completely different story. Like Sophie openly admitting her sexual affairs (this is just tentative, but I'll have to decide soon). I think it might fit Sophie telling the MC progressively in a teasing way... Not trying to hide it but not going out of her way to show it either. But what she's telling him is the truth or is she just teasing him to see his reaction?... You can never tell with Sophie... She's a mystery after all...

I'm conscious that this story will be really hard to make. To be honest, I don't want to complicate myself with a too complex story, especially with monthly builds, but at the same time, I can't get motivated if the story and the characters are not interesting enough to write about. I guess I'll just try my best and see how it goes.

TOMOE'S ROOM

In regard to the loser of my last poll... (Fansonly Tomoe) I'll make it into some short slice-of-life kind of CGs. It will be just Tomoe having fun with hot MILFS and girlfriends in his Fansonly channel. Short and sweet chapters, straight to the point and to the raunchy sex!

Here are some renders for ideas I had for the series (still a W.I:P:):

Sorry for the long post, but you already know me... once I start rambling... well...

I'm interested in your opinions. What do you think about it? Hit me with your thoughts.