Astray3 Chapter 2: Reception Pg22 (Patreon)

I like the color blending in the background on the first two panels. Kudos to me. Not crazy about Emily's face on the third panel. I think her face gets the acting across, but the dimension could be better. I do regret at times making Xaun's skin that shade of pink. A little too saturated for my tastes. For continuity reasons I've maintained it though. I usually wait till major scene changes to introduce variations or new techniques to the coloring. So, sometime in the future look for that to be toned down. 

And yes, Xaun's line in panel four is meant to sound like it comes from a dating profile. I thought it sounded funnier than what I previously had planned...which was very bland. 

Next comic: I do love old shoot 'em up games!